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The beauty of framed life photos

-Students' composition quality scanning (1)

Xu Jingde of Sichuan Pengshan Qinglong Junior High School

Silver

Many students are worried about writing badly. "What they haven't written" is their common mantra. In fact, the composition material is everywhere, self is the composition material, friendship is the composition material, family is the composition material, really pure composition material; Childish interest is the material of composition, naughty is the material of composition, learning is the material of composition, labor is the material of composition, play is the material of composition ... people are the material of composition, animals are the material of composition, scenery is the material of composition, craft is the material of composition, curiosity is the material of composition ... these are all in your life. As long as you find it with your heart and choose it with your heart, you won't be without writing. Read the following composition. They may inspire you to find writing materials.

Second, children's interesting products

Catch eels

Sheng Haitao

On Sunday, I waited for my brother and children to catch eels at home. After a while, someone outside was shouting "Brother, brother." As soon as I heard it, I knew it was my brother Xiao Tong, and immediately walked out of the house with his pocket.

When we came to the edge of the field, we rolled up our sleeves and pants, and then took action. I raised the first grass, which is a good sign. There is an upside-down loach. I proudly shouted, "Little boy, come and watch your brother catch loach. Without some skill, we can't catch it! Look carefully and learn from your brother. " When Xiao Tong came over, I held my hand high and pressed it to the loach. The loach was pushed into the hard mud and couldn't get in, so I caught it. Although the loach was caught, I was forced to eat shit. My face and body are covered with mud. Even so, my mouth was not soft and I said, "How's it going? Is your brother highly skilled? " Xiao Tong said with a smile: "It's really high, it's really high, especially the sentence' dogs eat shit' just now. How about another one? " "Foreign" didn't show up, but was ridiculed by him. I was really depressed.

After a while, he found an eel. Learn my accent and say, "Brother, come here. Listen, brother, you can't catch eels without technology! Come and see clearly and learn from your brother. " Seeing me approaching, he stretched out his right hand and easily caught the eel in his pocket. He also proudly said: "I would rather take it lightly than repeat the same mistakes!"

Suddenly, I blushed. Being a brother is worse than being a younger brother. It's embarrassing. I secretly made up my mind to show him what I can do today. So I turned the grass faster. After lifting a grass, I "wow": a super fat loach! It's time to show yourself. I called my brother to my side and said, "I have gentle hands, too." As he spoke, he held the loach carefully and muttered something, saying, "Loach Loach will fall asleep soon, and I will bake it for you." I picked up this loach.

I was so happy that I was about to put it in my pocket, but it slipped out of my hand and immediately got into another grass. I was very discouraged, but I immediately became happy and said, "Xiao Tong, look down and I'll give you an injection." Say that finish, he gently walked to the grass. When I gently uncovered the grass, wow, I saw not only the loach, but also a slender tail. Ha, and an eel! I said excitedly, "Look, little boy, your brother is really a blessing in disguise." I looked back at Xiao Tong proudly as I spoke. However, he panicked and pointed to the grass and said, "No, it's not ..." I turned my head and looked, ah, it's not an eel, it's a snake! I immediately got goose bumps, threw away my pocket and ran quickly to Tian Kan.

People were scared to death, and all the loaches and eels they caught were gone. It' s really "losing the wife and folding the soldiers". My brother and I went home empty-handed.

(selected from Pengshan Literature and Art)

Comments and suggestions This composition is about childlike interest. In the composition, children's innocent, lively, expressive and indomitable characters abound, full of happiness, freedom, kindness and friendliness. A little naughty, a little cute. Two children are reading a composition right in front of our eyes, which really feels like watching a small TV series.

Who won't have an innocent childhood? Whose childhood is not interesting? Pick up your pen

Fourth, trouble boutique.

That time, I was really angry.

Zhang Yanmei

It's time for lunch As soon as the school bell rang, I hurried downstairs, returned to the dormitory, picked up my lunch box and went straight to the canteen. However, it was still late, and in front of the canteen, it was already crowded. I have no choice but to walk slowly with a long queue.

After more than half an hour, I was hungry before I got the food. I really want to take a few bites at once, but I can't. I have to wait in line to cook from the beginning.

When I was waiting in line for dinner, a classmate in my class stood side by side with me. Maybe he's hungry. He is waiting in line to eat vegetables, and he has almost finished eating them. I can't help saying, "I haven't finished a meal." What to eat later? " Hearing this, he threw away the bone he had just chewed. Speaking of which, I'm unlucky, too. The bones were neither biased nor inclined, and they fell into my lunch box at once. I'm sure all the students present are staring at me, and my face is red with embarrassment. In desperation, I poured out the rice, rinsed the lunch box, walked back to the dormitory in three steps and fell on the bed. It began to rain.

My "rain" is getting bigger and bigger, and I keep sobbing. Actually, I don't want to do this either, but I really can't control my emotions.

At this moment, that classmate came and apologized to me with our monitor Zhang. That classmate still has one yuan in his hand ... I was so angry that I completely lost my self-control and blurted out dirty words: "You bastard! You are scum! You are not human! I hate you, you roll for me far away ... "

But instead of rolling away, he walked into our dormitory and stood there, waiting for me to forgive him. Outside our dormitory is a place where people come and go, which makes many people look strange. A girl in the crowd saw the boy standing in the girl's dormitory and the girl was crying, so she said, "Oh, love!" " "I was so angry that I really wanted to tear her mouth off! And the "silly child" said, "What are we talking about? You haven't talked? "It drives me crazy. ...

When the female classmate in the same dormitory heard him say this, she got angry and said, "Get out! Get out now! If you don't roll, splash it with boiling water and burn you to death! " Say, push and pull the "broom" out of the door. ...

I was really angry at that time. Today, when I think about this, my anger still echoes in my heart.

(Excerpted from Fun)

Comments and suggestions This composition is about troubles. To tell the truth, the things in the composition are really annoying. Hungry "I" just bumped into a food box and was thrown into the bone I just chewed ... I was so angry that it rained on the bed, but I was mistaken for "falling in love". The boy who lost his bone said, "What about that?" You haven't talked? "that' I' is going crazy. ...

Some people say that teenagers don't know the taste of sadness. In fact, teenagers also have many sad days. Friendship breaks down, people doubt, fail, and have bad luck ... Worry haunts you like spider silk ... Let the balloon of worry fly away, and your heart may feel better.

Five, friendship boutique

We will be together forever.

Ma Huilin

I came to Dongdong's grave, packed my things and lit paper money silently. Dongdong, I came to see you. Think about the past, I'm really sorry, I was always so overbearing, and eating and playing was always the first. Dongdong, I regret fighting with you and robbing you! Today, all eat and no play! Look, here are your favorite chocolates and butterscotch, as well as robot cat and sister Bobby. ...

Dongdong, do you remember? That spring, in the warm sunshine, we sat on the grass and said happily, "We will be together forever." But, Dongdong, it's only been a year since you said this. How did you go to that faraway place and never come back? How could you leave me and your good friend cruelly? Have you forgotten our wish? Dongdong, I bought Barbie's sister for you specially today. Let her represent me and be with you forever.

Ah, it's a whirlwind. Paper scraps are spinning in the air, floating and floating. Dongdong, are you there? Did you hear me? Are you here to see me? You must stay a little longer. ...

Old people say that people have souls. When people die, they become ghosts and appear at night. It's terrible. But I really hope so. At least your soul can come to me at night, right? We can be together again. Although I am timid, I won't be afraid, really not.

Oh, by the way, did you come to see me the night before yesterday? I saw you. I'm glad that we are together again. You told me that you missed me, too, but it's a pity that we didn't realize our wish. We all cried. But after a while, you gradually disappeared. I was in a hurry, crying and shouting, "Dongdong, don't go …" The crying woke my mother, who said I was dreaming. Is this a dream? This is not a dream. You came to see me, didn't you? I am sure it is.

How time flies! It's spring again, and everything is new. Dongdong, what about you? Buddhism says that people will be reincarnated after death. Where have you been? Tell me, I will come to you, even if I go through all kinds of hardships.

I want to be with you forever.

(selected from Pengshan Literature and Art)

Comments and Suggestions This composition is an ode to friendship, full of "I" deep affection for winter and winter. Without this kind of affection, there would be no memorial service and whirlwind meeting in front of the tomb; Without this kind of affection, there will be no hope that "people will become ghosts when they die ... your soul can come to me at night", and there will be no dream that "you must come to me". Without this kind of affection, there would be no Buddhism. People will be reincarnated after death. Where have you been? Tell me, I will come to you, even if I go through all kinds of hardships. "My wish ... it is these" remembrance ","association ","hope ","dream "and" wish "that make my deep affection for Dongdong real and concrete, and make the voice of" I want to be with you forever "reverberate in readers' hearts for a long time.

Who has no friendship in his life? The innocent and sincere friendship of teenagers is the most worthy of a special book.

Sixth, family products.

Shit, affectionate

Zhang Hui

I stood at the door of the kitchen and looked at my mother affectionately. She is wiping the pot of medicine hard, and then washing it with water, over and over again. I know, my mother is going to cook medicine for me. Mom didn't see me, just busy herself. Looking at my mother's busy figure, I burst into tears.

Last semester, during the busy farming season, I was unfortunately hit by a car and hurt my foot. Dad said to his mother, "I'll take Huier to the hospital. Will you stay at home? " But mom still went to the hospital. She secretly shed tears when I cried and cried in pain. After half a month's treatment, my foot is still not well. My father said, "I have run enough." I am not cured! " Mom didn't speak, but she took me to see a doctor. Afraid of delaying my study, she sent me to school and asked me to take medicine on time. I promised, but my mother was still a little uneasy. No matter how busy she is, she will come to see me at school. Ask me if I have taken any medicine and what happened to my life. On Friday afternoon, my mother rushed to the school gate to pick me up early, fearing that I could not bear the pain of not walking.

I lost more than 30 yuan in living expenses last week. Let's go home and talk about it. Dad was very angry. He said, "What's missing? You dropped it when you said it? Did you take it to eat spicy food? " My mother took a look at my father and said to me, "Be careful in the future and take the money with you."

When I went home that time, my parents asked me how I was studying. I replied, "Science is so annoying!" Dad said, "Forget it, it's hopeless. What high school did you take in this grade? Come back here and stop reading. " Mom said to dad, "I didn't even pass the exam." How do you know my daughter can't pass the exam? " I know, in fact, my mother didn't have much hope for me to enter high school. But he won't give up, even if this hope is dashed one day later. I hate myself for failing to live up to expectations. If I get excellent grades, it would be great to keep my mother's hope alive!

Mom loves me the most, and I love mom the most!

(Excerpted from Fun)

Comments and Inspiration This composition is about love. Choosing touching details to express mother's deep feelings is the most outstanding advantage of this composition. It is this detail that cleans the pot that cooks medicine for me over and over again; My father sent me to the hospital and asked my mother to stay at home, but my mother followed me to the hospital. This is the detail. My father severely scolded me for losing my money. My mother took a look at my father and said to me, "Be careful in the future and take the money with you." Still this detail; I don't have much hope of getting into high school. But she won't give up, even if this hope is dashed a day later, especially this detail.

Is this touching detail unique to my mother? No, it's hidden in our lives. If only we could find them like "I" and write them in our own compositions! Let's find more details and use more details!

Seven, really pure boutique

birthday

Zeng yangang

Today is my birthday. In the morning, the air is particularly fresh. I get up and clean my house. Mom and dad are out to do farm work, so I cook my own lunch.

I went to the field to get some side dishes, picked them and washed them. When I was cooking, I cooked an egg for myself. The meal is ready, and my parents haven't come home yet. I locked the door and called my parents out of town.

After my parents came back, our family ate happily around the table.

At dinner, my parents talked about me on my birthday. And told me to peel the eggshell and then throw it out of the wall with my backhand. I know this is the custom of "molting" in rural areas. If you throw the eggshell outside the wall with your backhand, you can get rid of the bad luck for a year. Well, of course I won't believe it. But I couldn't refuse my parents' affection, so I did as my parents said.

My birthday passed like this, and it looked very pale. But it is full of warmth and happiness in lightness. I used to spend almost all my birthdays like this. No birthday cake, no delicious food like fish. No birthday, rain, noisy. However, I am satisfied. As long as my parents are around, I feel very happy even if I have a normal side dish meal.

I think, no matter whether I am rich or poor in the future, I hope to have a dull but meaningful birthday. This may be because my family is a poor but warm one! I hope I can spend all my birthdays with my parents.

(selected from junior high school students' compositions)

Comment and Inspiration This composition has no ups and downs and no gorgeous language, but why is it enlightening? Because this is a composition from the bottom of my heart, which is full of the most beautiful, true and pure feelings in the world. "My" birthday, no birthday cake, no fish and other delicious food, no drizzly excitement. "I" didn't make noise, didn't complain, just respected and considerate my parents. Isn't this the true pure feeling that "I" love my parents? Working hard in the field, don't forget to give your son an egg, say a few words of concern and send a sincere blessing. Isn't this the true purity of my parents' love for me? "I will become rich or poor in the future ... I hope I can spend my birthday with my parents in the future." Isn't it true pure love?

The ancients said, "Wen Gui Qing Zhen" means that the most precious thing in an article is true feelings. This is a fact. Read the words of the ancients backwards: true feelings are precious. It means that when writing an article, true feelings can be precious. This is also a fact. The success of this composition is due to "true feelings" and "true feelings"!

Pure and beautiful feelings in the world are the ultimate beauty. The person who owns him is a beautiful person; It is a beautiful article to show people by writing. Is the soul of being a man; It is the soul of literature! It can be said that pure love is as expensive as gold! Students, this is pure love, right? Never smelled it? Didn't you find it? Cherish pure and beautiful feelings, cultivate pure and beautiful feelings, show them and praise them! In this way, you can strut on the road to a healthy life, and you can strut on the road to a successful composition.

Nine, landscape boutique

fog

Luo

Early in the morning, as soon as I opened the door, a mass of white moist gas came in. "It's foggy, it's foggy!" Standing in front of the door, I shouted.

Looking into the distance, there are no mountains in the distance, and the village is shrouded in fog, leaving only the outline; The trunk of the nearby tree is covered, but you can see the crown when you look up. Children are playing, chasing and laughing in the fog. They can hear voices, but they can't see people. Clouds are everywhere, just like fairyland.

At school, the fog is getting bigger and thicker. There is white fog in all directions. Blocking you, chasing you, pestering you and teasing you. Shake, change, crowd and run tirelessly in front of your eyes. When you stand, it shapes a dense cylinder around you. You go forward, it goes backwards, blocking you not far in front of you. Suddenly, I looked behind you and gave you a cold kiss. Unconsciously, I sprinkled a mist on your head ... I tried to catch it, but it avoided me like a naughty child.

When I got to school, I couldn't wait to climb to the top of the teaching building. Ah, what a foggy world. Fog floats on the head and rolls under the feet; Fog runs ahead and swims behind; People are on the fog, and the fog is on people; People are in fog, and fog is in people. Ah, fog, you are so charming!

At the beginning of class, the fog poked its head into the classroom from time to time, and ran away before you could see it clearly. During the break, the fog basically dispersed. At this time, the sun has appeared in the high sky, looking pale and powerless. Maybe it's because of that naughty boy!

(selected from Pengshan Daily)

Comments and Inspiration This is a composition about scenery. After reading it, we will all have such a feeling that Luo has just written "Fog City" vividly! Newborn fog, gradually thick fog; There is fog in the distance and fog in the vicinity; There is fog in front, fog in the back, fog on the head, fog under the feet and fog around; Overall fog, sporadic fog; Moving fog and static fog are written clearly and vividly. Among them, personification, metaphor, parallelism and other rhetorical methods have played a great role. However, the key to the success of this composition lies in clear observation. Only on the basis of clear observation can we produce rhetorical methods such as personification, metaphor and parallelism. We have all seen the fog, even many times, but we have not been able to write such a good composition. The most fundamental reason is that we don't look far, close, look up, look down and look around the fog at different times and places like Luo. Look around, look around; Looking at moving, looking at moving; In comparison, I look at comparative "observation", so that I can see clearly, carefully and clearly.

What if we make the same observation?

X. Animal products

fat

Rao Yunyan

One night in July, my rhubarb dog gave a cry of pain-a puppy was born. The newborn puppy is fat and bright. Rhubarb dog licked it intimately, and it loved its baby. In the future, its baby has also become my baby.

The newborn puppy has a pair of big black watery eyes, a pair of fluffy drooping ears, the whole face is black, and a white hair mark passes through the middle of the nose, which is very cute.

A month after the puppy was born, we were confused about its name. Baby's mother calls it Xiaohua, because its back is mainly white, and there are two groups of gray hairs embedded in it. I object because it is old and unpleasant. But what should I call it? Xiaoxiao? Ding-ding? ..... Not good, finally, I thought of a good name-Xiao Pang, which was called "Xiao Pang" regardless of whether parents agreed or not.

Fat, cute and naughty.

Every day, when I go to school, Pangpang always walks me to the door. Sometimes, he runs out with me. I was afraid it would fall, so I turned around, gently picked it up and put it back on the threshold. It is very obedient, sitting on the threshold, cocked his head and looked at me. I smiled at it, shook my hand and said, "goodbye!" " "-although it doesn't understand. After school, I whistle far from home. Hearing this, Pangpang wagged his tail and ran out. It saw me, heard me call "Pangpang", wagged its tail, moved its four legs and ran towards me. Because I ran too fast, I couldn't stop running ahead, so I put my four legs flat on the ground and landed. Once, I "rolled over", hurting and loving. In this case, I always bend down and say, "fat-idiot!" " "Xiao pang? Often dawdle at my feet and then jump into the yard with me.

Chubby loves to pick things up. He picked up all the food bags, shoes and socks on the ground. Every day when my father gets off work and I come home from school, I almost say, "Where are my socks?" "Where's my handkerchief?" After a while, they almost said, "Pangpang, where did you take it for me?" No sooner had we finished than we couldn't help laughing together. Then, I was sweating all over. Where's chubby? I still follow you unhurriedly, as if I were looking for it with you. It's really ridiculous to look silly.

Once, I was lying in bed eating cake. It smelled the smell and ran to my room. My bed is very short. When its feet touch together, it seems to be "shared" with me on the bed. As soon as I drank it, it stopped, but its feet were still on the bed Looking at its appearance, I miss Doby and pass the cake and say, "Mmm, it smells good. Do you want to eat? " Who knows, when its neck stretches out and its mouth opens, my cake becomes its delicacy. I was angry, but I was soon amused by its appearance.

I love Xiao Pang, but of course I can't bear to hit him. Sometimes mom and dad want to hit it, and I will defend it and help it solve the problem. Pangpang likes to eat peanuts. He can chew open peanut shells and eat peanuts. Once, Pangpang trampled over the bamboo curtain full of peanuts because he was greedy for peanuts, leaving peanuts all over the floor. Mom and dad are angry and want to hit it. I said, "just once, just once, give it a break!" " I took it to my room to "educate". Come down, I'll peel peanuts for it.

Pangpang grows up slowly, and the longer he grows, the more obedient he is.

I like chubby. Fat boy! Honey, chubby!

(from "Ivy Flower")

Comments and inspirational compositions are about chubby puppies. Writing about Xiao Pang's birth, writing about Xiao Pang's name, writing about Xiao Pang's intimacy with me, writing about Xiao Pang's love for eating, writing about me eating cake with Xiao Pang, and writing about me defending Xiao Pang are all selected from my own life. It is these vivid materials from life that make Xiao Pang, the puppy, lively and lovely and naughty, and express my deep affection for Xiao Pang. The vividness of materials and the fullness of passion are the success of this work.

You also often deal with animals. There are many emotional stories, happy, painful, sad, sad, sad … Let's hear it!

Twelve, exotic products

I want to do something for my mother.

Wei wanjia

Today is March 8, International Women's Day. I decided to wake up many virtues such as diligence, thoughtfulness and filial piety that have been sleeping for a long time and help my mother do something to make her happy.

As soon as I stepped into the house, I saw my mother washing vegetables and preparing to cook dinner. I immediately smiled and called out sweetly, "Mom."

"Well, I'm back." Mom didn't look up and went on washing dishes.

I suddenly felt a pang of resentment. I forced myself to take a few deep breaths and called "Mom" sweetly.

"Well, dinner will be ready soon. Wash your hands first! "

"Yes!" I stamped my feet and took out the greeting cards prepared in advance. "Here you are, Mom. Happy holidays!" "

My mother looked at me doubtfully and took the card. After a long time, my mother finally spoke: "daughter"-"hey" I immediately raised my smiling face and looked forward to her praise.

"Trouble?" Mom asked.

Oh! Oh, my God, I can't find it anywhere! I walked out of the room angrily. "Don't be angry, don't be angry-we agreed to make mom happy today." I took a few more breaths and walked out of the room. "Mom, can I help you cook dinner?" The room was quiet for half a minute. My father, mother and brother all stopped what they were doing and stared at me in surprise. My younger brother reacted first, only to see him biting his lip, pinching his arms and legs, muttering, "Pain! It's not a dream, it must be an illusion! Hallucinations! Otherwise, how could my sister, who is most afraid of entering the kitchen, suddenly say such a thing! " Dad even said, "Is this my daughter doing a housework?" I suddenly feel helpless. I just want to do something for my mother. Do they have to show that expression when they see pigs flying in the sky?

"What are you doing, guys? I just want to help! "

"Help?" My brother gave me a contemptuous look from head to toe, and he looked down on me. "It doesn't help!"

"You-"I want to scream with anger. That's rude. Is he talking to her sister?

"You won't forget the last time you cooked, the griddle you cooked. If it weren't for the vitality of our rice cooker, I'm afraid I would have died long ago! " The younger brother scolded: "It wastes the blood and sweat of the working people to feed the fried vegetables to the chickens."

I hung down my shoulders in despair, with no reason to refute. My brother is telling the truth. I swear, I really want to help my mother do something. Now it seems that not helping my mother is the greatest help.

At that time, my mother spoke:

"Daughter, what did you do wrong? Tell me quickly! "

At that moment, I almost fainted.

(selected from junior high school students' compositions)

The sketches are full of interesting things that make people laugh and cry. On March 8, International Women's Day, "I" decided to wake up many virtues such as diligence, thoughtfulness and filial piety that have been sleeping for a long time and help my mother do something that makes her happy. However, what I got when I sent the greeting card was that my mother asked, "Are you in trouble?" Say, "Mom, can I help you cook dinner?" What I got was the surprised expression of my parents and brother. My father doubted me and my brother scolded me. My mother said meaningfully, "Daughter, what did you do wrong? Tell me quickly! " No wonder "at that moment, I almost fainted." Explain clearly, the plot is reasonable, the narrative is vivid and full of life. After reading it, we could not help laughing.

There are always some strange things in our life, such as strange people, strange things, interesting things, interesting scenery ... Write them in the composition, and strange things are the most attractive. It will bring success to your composition.

Reveal inside information

The above twelve excellent compositions are vivid pictures of life and all come from real life. They are produced by living life; Their success is still due to living. From life, fresh and lively, even if it is just a green leaf with dew, it is lovely! It tells us that life is a huge treasure house of composition materials and an inexhaustible source of composition. Which classmate doesn't have a similar life? Many students don't go to their own life garden to collect their compositions, but turn over other people's articles. Composition is a record of your life, feelings and thoughts. How can it be in someone else's article? There is no composition that is neither bitter nor tired nor fails. A composition with life and true feelings is at least a jade blank that can be polished; A composition without life and true feelings can only be a rotten piece of wood. No matter how many adjectives, idioms and allusions are used to decorate and carve, they can only be thrown into the garbage.

The key to composition is material. It can be said that if you find good materials for your composition, your composition will be more than half successful. Where does the good material for composition come from? If you can't buy or rent, you hide in your own life. You have to find it yourself, find it, choose it, and show it. In this sense, we can say that the key to finding composition materials lies entirely in ourselves. Let's take colorful life as a lesson and sincere and deep feelings as a weft to weave the success of the composition!