Composition: Travel around the beautiful flower planet.

Planet X is a beautiful planet, where many people live. Their lifestyle is completely different from ours, because most of their daily necessities are instructed by computers, let's say the doors and cars of the house. The door of the house can't be opened with a key, because it is a password lock, so you have to enter the password! There is also a small camera on the door to see if you are the owner. If not, the information will be sent to the owner through the computer. Let's talk about cars! Just tell the car where you want to go before driving, get on the bus, and the car will find the place through the computer and then take you there automatically. Isn't Planet X great? Actually, I want to look like the future of the earth. O(∩_∩)O~ Hehe

Teacher's comment: This article is a typical fictional article. The little author described the planet in his mind to us through bold and novel imagination, which was very wonderful and made the teacher yearn for such a living environment. It is not easy for a junior writer to write such an article. No matter from the perspective of language or theme, this article is remarkable. Finally, the teacher hopes that you can practice writing more and make persistent efforts to write better works!

(Special teacher of Happy School: Teacher Zhou) 2011-8-1715: 24:19

Topic: Write a composition about a beautiful planet.

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Letters to mom, etc. 17.

Write a composition on the beautiful planet | 2016-01-2211:03.

Chatting with Teacher Jin of the New Bud Literature Society of Caoqiao Primary School in Wujin District Zhang Yu Dear Teacher Jin: I love you! If I am the star in the sky, then you are the moonlight that illuminates my way forward; If I am a flower in the garden, then you are the gardener who waters me; If I am a student under the wax light, you are burning your own candle ... Teacher Jin, I love you because you are like your mother. Do you remember? That was the first time I was able to publish my article online. Because it's the first time, I don't know anything. After you found out, you took the initiative to come to my side and patiently taught me in that kind voice: "The title font is small three, the middle font is bold, and the text font is small four ..." Your patient and gentle teaching, as gentle as mother and as warm as spring breeze, made me burst into tears in a kind whisper. Teacher Jin, I love you because you love your job. Let's not talk about how you try your best to stimulate our interest in learning Chinese and make us like Chinese classes. Let's say this summer vacation. You give up your rest time, help us write, guide us to revise our composition carefully, and recommend our exercises to Wujin Education Online. I know our composition is not very good. This is your encouragement and confidence. But you didn't stop there. You also edited our articles published on the Internet into a collection of Xin Wei's excellent compositions. Send it to us as soon as you come to school after school starts, so that we can have a copy so that we can learn excellent compositions at any time. I know, your intentions are good, and I hope to set an example for us to learn! You know, ordinary teachers can't be so persistent, let alone you who are sick. Teacher Jin, I love you because you are strong. You have a chronic disease. The doctor said you can't bask in the sun, but you'd rather wear a sun hat than run with us all the time every day. Back in the classroom, your hands and feet are weak. However, you still give us classes and teach us knowledge as usual. I know, you are setting an example. However, what a strong will it takes! Once, after a student left school, you almost walked around the campus in the scorching sun and watched it outside for a long time. When you took that student back, you weren't angry with her or worried about your health, but you wanted us to make friends with her as before ... I know you have students in your heart, except yourself. Teacher Jin, you are our gardener, candle and escalator when we grow up. I would like to make a poem praising your life! Teacher Jin, I love you! Teacher Jin, do you know? How I missed you when you were at home on sick leave. I will miss you every time I encounter difficulties; Every time I see naughty eggs making trouble in class, I will miss you; I will miss you every day in Chinese class; I dreamed of you several times ... I beg you to take care of your health, okay? No matter how many students there are, take care! I wish you a speedy recovery! Your student: Zhang Yu 201111-9 (instructor: Jin) I chatted with the moon. In Sister Moon, the New Bud Literature Society of Caoqiao Primary School in Wujin District, whenever night falls, you look at us silently in the sky, looking so lonely. Do you want to talk to someone, too Sister Moon, you are really like a curved boat. I really want to play in the sky with you. Sister Moon, you are so mysterious. Every night, you shine the silver moonlight in the sky and on the earth. Do you want to talk to Mother Earth too? Do you want to come to this world and see the beauty of this world? Do you know people are constantly exploring you? You are constantly changing from a round yellow balloon to a curved banana. When can you untie your beautiful veil? Sister Moon, you always bring us bright light at night, illuminate the dark night for us, and make us feel no longer afraid and lonely, but you seem so lonely and sad alone. Sister Moon, when can you come to this world to play and sing with us and leave your troubles and loneliness behind? Whenever I go out for a walk with my parents at night, you always follow us closely. Do you have anything to say to me? Sister Moon, if I visit you, can you ask Sister Chang 'e to be my Osmanthus Jelly? Can you tell me all the stories that happened in the Heavenly Palace? Let me know if the Monkey King can somersault. Let me know the seventy-two changes in the Monkey King. Let me know if Pig Bajie is really Marshal Tian Peng. Let me know if eating flat peaches will really live forever ... Sister Moon, I look forward to your visit to the earth! (Instructor: Kim) Chatting with aliens has passed a busy day. In the evening, I lie in bed and watch TV. I don't like watching the last channel. I think the next channel may be more exciting. So, it seems that I have to change channels one by one. Looking at it, my eyelids are a little uncoordinated, always drooping and dizzy ... Suddenly, a light flashed through my eyes, and then I came to a puzzling place. People here look very strange: two big eyes, developed limbs, two arms to the knees, golden red body, long and pointed nails. Just when I was wondering where I was, a man came up to me enthusiastically. He said, "Welcome to the planet Zfur. I'm a tour guide on this planet. We have many scenic spots worth visiting here. Welcome to visit! " It turns out that he is an alien tour guide. He took me to the forest surrounded by mountains, where there are many flowers and colorful flowers all over Shan Ye. Suddenly, something glowing with red light appeared in front of me, and it also gave off a charming fragrance. I immediately ran to pick one and took a bite. Wow, my mouth is numb. Think about it, it's a little sweet, and then it's sour. It's like eating three flavors at once. He said: "Because this fruit has many flavors, we all call it Weiguo." I asked him again, "Is there any fruit here?" He said, "We have many things here, such as oranges, banana awns and tsaoko ..." I can't help but drool. When I was about to taste it, suddenly a voice came: "Haoran, Haoran, it's time to get up." Why didn't you even turn off the TV last night? " I opened my eyes and found that I had just had a dream. If my mother hadn't called me, I might have tasted more delicious food! (Instructor: Jin) Chatting with Chang 'e's sister Su Chang 'e: Hello, I am a child of 2 1 century. You haven't been to the earth for a long time, have you? Now our life is much better than before. We are well-fed and colorful ... I am a little boy who likes to dream. One day, I dreamed that I was in 2060. When I woke up, I saw the robot planting trees. I came to the stream and saw fish and shrimp swimming. With the flow of people, I came to the railway station again. It's too big there. Why is there no ticket office? The person next to me told me that you don't need to buy a ticket, just click where you want to go. After a long time, I wonder why the train hasn't come yet. Others reassured me and told me, "We are going to Beijing soon. Because this is a high-tech train, I can't feel the train station when driving in the car. " I lean back, wow! Much more comfortable than a massage chair. I slowly closed my eyes ... When I opened my eyes, I found myself still in bed. Sister Chang 'e, did you have a good time on the moon? Be sure to come back sometime. I wish you happiness every day and health forever. Little boy who loves fantasy: Su 20 1 1 year1/month 8 (instructor: Kim) A letter to his mother Dear mother: Hello, I've been trying to tell you something from the heart, but you haven't listened to me. This time, please calm down and listen to my heart carefully. Mom, every time you are happy, you are obedient to me and love me in every possible way. But when you are unhappy, I become your vent bucket. You took all your anger out on me and yelled at me. Mom, children are not vent barrels or pets. She is a human being, a living person! Mom, I remember a book that said that Yang, a children's writer, thought her daughter was an angel sent to her by heaven. On the other hand, Zhenzi Du's mother thinks that Zhenzi Du is a debt collector, which puts great pressure on Zhenzi Du, saying that Zhenzi Du is all her hope. Mom, I really don't understand why children must be the hope of all mothers. If all mothers were like Aunt Yang, how happy children all over the world would be. Mom, children are not happy as long as they have food and clothing. What children lack is that their parents are around, even if it is only 1 hour, they will feel extremely happy. Please don't force me to do something I don't want to do. I wish you good health and smooth work! Your daughter: Xiaoyao 201111-8 (instructor: Jin) A letter to Teacher Jin Dear Teacher Jin: Hello! In fact, I have a lot of heartfelt words to say to you. Has your health improved? Did you stay up late? Does your waist still hurt? ..... You treat us seriously and responsibly as if each of us were your own child. I don't know how many times you have worked overtime and stayed up late for us and worked tirelessly to correct our homework. As long as one classmate is uncomfortable, no matter where you are at school, you will fly to that classmate as fast as the wind. If you are not at school, you will definitely call other teachers to have a look. For the sake of our grades, you attend class sick. I completely ignored my body. Do you know that?/You know what? Seeing you endure the pain and run with us, we have unspeakable sadness in our hearts. So we repay your efforts with practical actions: preview carefully before class, speak actively in class, review in time after class, and strive for excellent results; Always remind yourself to be a civilized person, speak civilized words, take a civilized road and do civilized things ... Mr. Jin, you are not only serious and responsible for our study, but also educate us to love labor. I remember a cleaning, and you personally taught us how to clean, how to mop the floor, how to sweep the floor ... At first, most of us ignored it. Then, you said to us earnestly, "I like smart children and appreciate diligent children more." Your teachings have greatly shocked me, and I am determined to be a diligent child. Teacher Jin, you are a candle, illuminating our way forward with your own life. Thank you for your selfless dedication. But we are worried that your health will be too much. Please take care of yourself! I wish you a speedy recovery and happiness every day! Your student: Ma Yitong 20 1 1 year 1 1.5 (instructor: Jin) chats with Grandpa Sun. Grandpa Sun came out from the New Bud Literature Society of Caoqiao Primary School in Wujin District. Everything in nature is so beautiful. Grandpa Sun came to the river, and his brother said to him, "Sun, Sun, what do you get up early for every day?" Grandpa Sun said, "I didn't do it for anything, but for my duty. It's a pity that human beings ..." "Yes, now the trees along the river are gradually decreasing, the river is getting more and more mixed, and the dam is slowly collapsing. What a dangerous thing! " Grandpa Sun nodded regretfully. When Grandpa Sun came to the forest, he was surprised to find that a thousand-year-old tree had been cut down. What a nice tree! How did it break? "Is a group of workers cut down, say what to do disposable chopsticks. I really don't understand what humans really want! " The little tree next to it said. Hearing this, Father Sun shed angry tears and left sadly. Grandpa Sun came to the mountain again. He said to Dashan, "Brother Dashan, how have you been these years?" Dashan sighed and said, "In recent years, due to human deforestation and indiscriminate bombing, many mountains are bald or even gone. Many birds have left me, and now I am alone. Too lonely! " Grandpa Sun didn't make any noise and left with his head down. How he wished that mankind could repent. ..... Let's protect nature! (Instructor: Jin) Chatting with the Director of Environmental Protection Bureau: Yu Han, New Bud Literature Society, Caoqiao Primary School, Wujin District Dear Director of Environmental Protection Bureau: Hello! I am an ordinary sixth-grade pupil. Can you spare two minutes? I want to talk to you about the current environmental protection work. Compared with before, the present environment has obviously improved, but I feel that it is still not in place in some aspects. For example, residents' environmental awareness! Nowadays, there are many trash cans on the roadside, which can be seen almost everywhere, but there are more garbage on the road and beside the trash cans than in the trash cans. Some people are just lazy and unwilling to take one more step, so littering can be seen everywhere. If you stand next to him, he may throw it, too. This kind of person is not the most irritating. The people who hate most are those who put rubbish next to the trash can. Although it is only one step away from the trash can, they just don't want to take another step and throw the garbage into the trash can. Therefore, I think that to protect the environment, we must first enhance people's awareness of environmental protection. In order to enhance people's awareness of environmental protection, I suggest distributing more environmental protection leaflets in the future to publicize the importance of environmental protection; Call on everyone to watch movies that protect the environment regularly, so that everyone can witness the disadvantages of destroying the environment; Of course, you should also formulate some reward and punishment measures. For example, for those who take the initiative to protect the environment, in addition to praise in the media, they should also give material rewards, so that everyone can feel that protecting the environment is glorious and everyone is working hard to do it. Only when everyone takes environmental protection as their own business can we really make our surrounding environment better. I wasted your precious time. I wish you good health and smooth work! Environmental angel: a letter from Yu Han 20 1 1 year 1 1.5 (instructor: Jin) to the headmaster of the New Bud Literature Society of Caoqiao Primary School in Wujin District. Dear headmaster, hello! How have you been recently? How's your job? Have a good time? Today, I want to take this opportunity to talk to you. Recently, I often hear my mother say that her original primary school is like an old house, unlike ours, with high teaching buildings and beautiful learning environment, just like in heaven ... I feel very lucky to be born in this beautiful world and receive such an excellent education, all of which is given to us by the school. I remember in the first grade, I had a teacher who was like a candle. Her stories are always fascinating and make us feel immersive. Moreover, she is also very strict with us and meticulously checks our homework. Once, we came to school as usual. It was a cold day. Some people say that the teacher has a cold. I'm a little worried. The teacher caught a cold. How can I teach? I'm waiting for class with this question. The bell rang, and I kept staring at the door, thinking: The teacher has a cold, so he should rest at home and won't come to give us a class! Suddenly, a familiar footsteps came, ah, it's the teacher! The teacher walked to the front of the platform and said apologetically, "Sorry, classmates, I'm late." After that, she picked up a book and gave a lecture as usual. From the tone of the lecture, we can hear how much pain the teacher has endured. However, she didn't say it. She just wants to give us a complete lesson, which is full of teachers' hard work! It is the teacher who leads us to the right path, keeps us away from "evil ways", understands civilization and learns knowledge. Everything we have now is given to us by our teacher. If there were no teachers, there would be no us now. Teachers care about and love us just like our parents. I also want your credit here. I wish the headmaster good health and smooth work. Your student: A letter from Tian Tian 20111-5 to Sun Shengda, dear the Monkey King, and the New Bud Literature Society of Caoqiao Primary School in Wujin District! Do you know that?/You know what? There are many children and even adults who like you very much now. They are all your fans, including me of course! My brother likes you very much. He took a plastic stick as his golden hoop. He imitates the way you beat monsters all day and dances around this golden hoop. I am often beaten into a monster by him. Back in those days, when you were in Monkey King Thrice Defeats the Skeleton Demon, you were obviously fighting monsters, but your master misjudged you and turned you into a teacher. I think you must have been very upset! I understand how you felt at that time, because I had the same experience: I remember doing a topic during a unit test. Suddenly, a small piece of paper was thrown out of nowhere. I looked around and found my classmate behind me. I opened it and it read: How to do the second question? I thought to myself: you can't cheat in the exam. If I tell her the answer, it will hurt her. I just picked up a pen to write the words "Don't cheat in the exam", and the teacher was already standing in front of me. Before I could explain, the teacher said sternly, "Come to my office after class!" " "I immediately felt the feeling of being wronged. However, at last your master learned the truth and forgave you. And that day I went to the teacher's office and told the teacher the truth, and the teacher forgave me. By the way, you four met so many monsters on your way to learn from the scriptures. Which monster do you think impressed you the most? How do you feel when those monsters scold you and give you nicknames? How did you endure the fire when you ate the elixir and were locked in the blast furnace by the old gentleman? ..... I really hope you can come to my house! I wish Sun a happy day. Your fans: 20 1 1 year 65438+February 5 (instructor: Jin) and Sister Xinru chat with Lu Xinyi of Caoqiao Primary School. Dear Sister Lin: Hello! Why? Every one of your plays is so lifelike? Take Princess Pearl as an example! Did you play "Xia Ziwei", a gentle and amiable girl who is proficient in piano, chess, calligraphy and painting, so vividly? As far as I know, you in real life are completely different from Wei Zi in the play! Why? Are you so young and beautiful? It is reported that you are a middle-aged man in his thirties. However, you still look as young as a teenage girl. Take the eyes for example! So how can a middle-aged person have watery and sparkling eyes? Not everyone can perform a play well. Not everyone can play the leading role well. You on TV, even if you play a supporting role, go all out to play her well. I think it is your spirit that makes you go higher and more practical step by step. After a long journey, persistence, hard work, courage and perseverance, you finally knocked on the door of the performing arts hall. You are simply a great legend! My heart is like a sister, and my admiration for you is like a torrent of water ... Please be sure to teach me your unique skills, ok? Because I also like acting very much. Finally, I wish you younger and more beautiful; Teeth bask in the sun every day! Your fans: 201111-09 (instructor: Jin) chatted with Grandpa Sun in the New Bud Literature Society of Caoqiao Primary School. Whenever dawn comes, you always look at us silently in the sky, how lonely you look. You must want to talk to someone. Grandpa Sun, at the turn of spring and summer, you always appear when we need help most. Whenever you do morning exercises, you always look at us in the high sky, giving us warmth and making us happy. Let's fight the wind and rain, give us warmth and strengthen our bodies. In autumn, you brought rich fruits to the earth, and we are all very grateful to you. But, you know what? In summer, that is, the hottest time, you release all your strength and make us sweat. If at that time, you can recover some strength, it would be great! This way, we won't have to suffer such torture and sweat. Grandpa Sun, I really hope you can reduce your strength in summer, ok? Oh, by the way, Grandpa Sun, every time you look at us in the sky, do you want to see us play on the earth? Sing with us? Put aside all your troubles? However, I haven't seen you recently. Are you sick? Oh, look how forgetful my brain is. So you should be ready for beginning of winter! However, I still welcome you to visit and have been a guest on the earth! (Instructor: Jin) A Letter to the Monkey: Qiao Primary School New Bud Literature Society He Tian the Monkey King: Hello! For a long time, I have been looking forward to the opportunity to write to you. I have a lot to say to you. Are you in good health? Do you have any apprentices? Can I be your apprentice? ..... Learn seventy-two changes from you, somersault cloud ... Master the Monkey King, although you haven't accepted me as an apprentice, I believe you will accept me as an apprentice after listening to the following words. After learning seventy-two changes, I will definitely do more good deeds. First, I want the flowers and plants in the green belt of our village to grow luxuriantly and quickly. Because there are many people trampling on it, nothing grows in some places now. Second, I will create a trash can that I can eat when I see it, and the garbage I eat can be turned into an environmentally friendly trash can. Then you can't see the garbage in the streets and villages. Third, I will turn useless waste paper into a large paper plane with no emissions. It can carry people without operation. Just say the location, and it will take you where you want to go, and it is very safe. In this way, it is convenient for the elderly to go there. Master the Monkey King, after listening to what I said above, can you accept me as an apprentice? Give me skills and I can help more people. Besides, aren't you lonely in heaven? I can also come to accompany you! Or, you can come to the earth to teach me and feel the beautiful scenery and people's kindness. Master the Monkey King, I believe you want to help others more, so do I, but my heart is willing, but I can't! If you teach me skills, I can help more people. I wish you good health and all the best! Your future apprentice: He Chao 20 1 1 year1/month 9 (instructor: Jin) wrote a letter to my mother: Caoqiao Primary School New Bud Literature Club Park Dear mother: Hello! In fact, I have a lot of heartfelt words to say to you. When you praise me, I will be very happy; I feel sad when you criticize me; When you misunderstand me, I will feel sad ... I remember that time, your money disappeared, and as soon as you came back, you scolded me angrily and slapped me indiscriminately. I was in a daze, but you said let me take out the money. You made me kneel on the ground for more than an hour and wouldn't let me get up. Do you know that?/You know what? Do you know that?/You know what? How uncomfortable I am at this time! But when dad came back, you told him about it, and he scolded me. Later, when you think about it carefully, it turns out that you went shopping by yourself. I am so wronged! Do you know how happy I am when you praise me? That's when you came back from work very late. I have nothing to do after finishing my homework at home, so I just want to cook well. As soon as you got home, you smelled delicious food, touched my forehead and said I was sensible. Do you know how happy I am? At this moment, my heart is sweeter than eating honey Mom, you work from morning till night every day. Even if you are ill, you still keep working and have no day off. I have to do a lot of housework when I come back from work every day. Besides, you have to worry about my study. You are the most hardworking mother in the world. . I wish you good health and happiness every day. Give yourself some space and a relaxing moment, so that you may feel tired and happy. Your daughter: Garden 20 1 1 year 1 1.9 (Instructor: Kim and Helen Keller chat with Yan of the New Bud Literature Society of Caoqiao Primary School. Before going to bed, I read Helen Keller's book "If Give Me Three Days of Light" and admired Helen Keller very much. When dreaming at night, I dreamed that I came to a big house and took a closer look. A beautiful girl is writing something. Look carefully, isn't that deaf and blind Helen Keller? Miss Helen, do you know that I have a lot to say to you? Although you can't see the beautiful world and hear the beautiful voice, you are not pessimistic, but persist, persist and persist. You haven't given up literature, and your thirst for knowledge far exceeds your sorrow for illness. Sister Helen, you have inspired me a lot. Once, I was doing a math problem. Suddenly, my pen stopped. I think hard, but I can't think of it. I lost confidence and thought: forget it, isn't it a problem? The teacher will also talk about it tomorrow. Besides, you can ask mom and dad! But after knowing your deeds, I was infected by your indomitable spirit. When I opened my exercise book, I was full of confidence in solving this problem. In order to solve difficult problems, I often use arithmetic to solve them first, and then use equations to solve them ... until the solution comes out, and I no longer satisfy a method. Because of this, I got excellent results in this mid-term exam. My classmates envy me, my parents are very happy, and my teacher is very pleased. I want to thank Sister Helen for you. Nothing is difficult in the world, as long as you are willing to climb. "ah! Sister Helen, I have a lot to say to you. I really hope you can come to my house! (Instructor: Kim) I chat with aliens. Do you really want to appear in the night sky whenever night falls to explore the beauty of the world? If you feel lonely, do you want to talk to someone? Brother alien, do you really exist? Once upon a time, I thought aliens didn't exist at all. One day, my deskmate was reading a book with relish! I wanted to know what was inside, so I leaned in to have a look. It turned out to be all scientific experiments. No wonder my "science fan" deskmate is so fascinated! I turned over a few pages, all telling the story of aliens! I'm fascinated, too. Since then, I like watching books or TV about aliens, and I have changed from doubt to conviction about the existence of aliens. That whenever night falls, everything I do feels cold, as if something is staring at me. But this does not prevent me from being curious about you at all. Where is your home? What do you look like? Can you speak human language? Are your skills developed? I still have a lot to say to you and a lot of questions to ask you. When can you be my guest? I am looking forward to it! (Instructor: Jin) Create a green campus and start from the side. Lu Xinyi, Bud Literature Society of Caoqiao Primary School in Wujin District, holds her head high. The towering trees are like handfuls of green umbrellas, and a little sunshine falls from the cracks in the leaves. In the morning, I breathe fresh air and listen to students read aloud ... This is my ideal green campus. However, if you look around from Yanggenlou, you will find that in a garden and Lanting Garden, there are often some plastic garbage belts and waste paper ... There are many withered leaves on the lawn, and even "disabled" branches and "sick" flowers are lying weakly on the ground; Uncle grandpa has a small scar ... "The campus is my home, and cleaning depends on everyone. "The campus is like our second home. Only a warm campus with flowers and birds can make us feel the taste of "home". Protecting the beautiful campus is the unshirkable responsibility of every student. Recently, our school is striving for "Changzhou Green Campus". When the students saw the scraps of paper on the ground, they all moved, bent down and sent the garbage home. Some students also bring their own potted plants to school and put them on the cupboard behind the class, which can bring us fresh air. Many "unconscious people" have also changed their faces and participated in this activity. Of course, among these unconscious people, my deskmate Mimi is indispensable. No, I just stepped into the school gate today and saw a packing bag on the school avenue. I was about to pick it up when Mimi beat me to it. I said, "What's wrong with you today?" She smiled at me and said nothing. All the teachers and students in the school took part in this activity. As long as we persist in our efforts and start from the small things around us, "Changzhou Green Campus" will certainly succeed. Let's act together and pick up a piece of waste paper!