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Some people say that one day when you are humming in the shower, you suddenly think of someone or something, and that is forgetting.

Forgetting is not obstinately scratched from the bottom of my heart, but inadvertently recalled.

This is a natural and inevitable process, and everyone understands it.

Laugh without understanding.

"... no matter the books you read, the people you met, or what you said, whenever you think of them, you can remember them vividly. It seems that after she was eight years old, the only thing she forgot was how to forget. "

Seeing this, someone was shocked-this angle is really wonderful.

Write about a person who is hard to forget.

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There are two emotions in the article, one is a smile to Yan Haotian, and the other is a smile to Shen Fei. Although the latter has a happy ending, they are all relatives.

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I want to forget my expression when I smile, because it is too painful to get that irreparable love.

I don't want to forget a smile, because I am still hopelessly expecting that his heart will be inclined to himself, even if it is only a little.

There are many contradictions.

She doesn't know how to forget, and she doesn't understand the magic of time, so she is thinking, wouldn't it be so painful if she could forget?

In fact, as long as one person can forget, there will be no pain for two people.

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Shen Fei loves to laugh, and finally he is willing to let go of his hatred.

Love her, not because she is beautiful, but because there are more beautiful people than her.

Not because of her wisdom, there are countless wise men in this world.

Just because she is her, she is simple and naive with a little good, a little bad and a little cute.

Unique.

I can't bear to see her sad alone. I don't want to see her cry. I want her to only look at herself.

She always appears when she needs it most, not by coincidence, but because her eyes never leave.

Laugh and fall in love with Shen Fei, because you have learned to forget.

Nine times out of ten, life is unsatisfactory; But there is such a person in the world, as long as you are by his side, you can only remember one thing or two and forget eight or nine.

Riding a horse on the snowy plain and looking at the stars side by side, whether you are frolicking in the Aegean Sea, facing the boulder standing not far away, or even just chatting about ordinary topics, or watching the sunrise in a strange street ... With him, it seems that you can always appreciate these beautiful things with gentle feelings, embrace the world and love it.

Forget the loneliness that used to go hand in hand, forget the love that used to be sad and heartbreaking.

You can't do it alone.

One person is missing and two people are complete.

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The copywriter says this is a story about "not forgetting", but some people think it is a story about "forgetting" to the letter (some people analyze the plot wrong? )。 Yan Haotian's "Never Forget". Decades later, he is still looking for a similar woman to quench his thirst by drinking poison. For him, love is a poison that permeates into his bones. Only death can completely bury the woman engraved in his heart. However, Yan finally lost her mind and her memory.

It slipped my mind.

Forgetting is not a bad thing. The road ahead is long and the load is limited. If you only know how to pick it up and don't know how far you can go.

Always look forward.

To paraphrase Lin, loving someone is like loving a mountain. You can see it, but you can't move it To move the mountain, you must walk over it yourself. However, when you can't have it, all you can do is turn it over.

Shopping is happiness.

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Someone spit out sour water. . . )

The words in this article give people the feeling of walking in the sunshine and rain scattered by the breeze. The rain is oblique and dense, the sun is gentle, and when you look up, there are clouds and shadows all over the sky.

To sum up-concise and elegant, full of appeal.

[Suddenly, she realized that she was a bit rude, hurriedly tucked mind, Shen Fei little smile:

"It's a pity that there seems to be no stars today."

But Shen Fei saw the stars.

Those are her eyes. ]

Short sentences, but "bang" (alas, there is no suitable onomatopoeia in Chinese. . . ) you can catch people's hearts. Words are not more expensive than essence. Look at the stars, the stars are eyes, and two sentences show the feeling and atmosphere of deep gaze at that time.

The same is true in the plot. Dark chocolate's' I hope I can forget you after eating' can best explain the mood of a smile at that time. There is also the following paragraph:

【 "What can I think? Shoot it quickly, so I can change money. " Answer with a smile.

"No, ... you're thinking,' How beautiful', ... and then you want to hear someone say,' Yes, it's really beautiful.' ..... Smile, you just need a simple response, you won't describe this beautiful scenery with heartbreak, ... Why don't you let yourself go? "

Shen Fei said this sentence word for word, and finally looked away from the painting and turned to her.

Outside the window, the night has completely fallen, and indoors, warm yellow lights pour down from the top of the head. ]

This is one of someone's favorite passages. Shen Fei's words echoed in the empty hall, during which there were not only understanding and shock, but also subtle feelings. Quite in place.

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However, the most obvious problem of writing is the language of writing.

As far as writing is concerned, only Shen Fei looks like a man in this article, and all the others are women.

Chpt22。

[Anson some chagrin, he bet Shen Fei listening, just don't respond, angrily said:

"I know you are worried about hurting her, so why don't you tell her her story? Maybe she will leave Yan then. If you don't go, I will go! " ]

Anson was born a man, but she sounded like a pouting woman.

The man is angry (well ... it's hard. . Try to change it, the level is limited. . Since you are worried about hurting her, let's tell her story. Maybe she will leave Yan Haotian by herself. I really don't know what you are hesitating about! If you don't go, I'll go instead!

Jia Ming will not give an example. This guy has been using female language from beginning to end.

Shen Fei, sometimes it doesn't feel right.

chpt 14。

【 "Smile, why is there a desperate desire in your eyes? What do you crave? Or-who do you want? " ]

It's not a problem, just because this sentence is in someone's favorite paragraph, so I'll take it out and say it.

It seems that men seldom use' why' (why? ), plus this special question has two qualifiers,' Yours' and' One Kind', which are very literary in themselves, so they feel subtly incongruous (only for over-sensitive people, not for the public).

Generally speaking, this paper can be divided into two parts, both plot and text, and the dividing point is about 20 chapters. The first half shows the emotional entanglement between characters; The second half revealed the conspiracy. As far as writing is concerned, the following text is not as fine as the last one. At first glance, it felt a little hasty, and many places were closed before they were launched. There are many events that need to be explained, but there are almost no narrative paragraphs, and most of them are driven by long dialogues and memories. What you said to me is not only monotonous, but also not refined and expressive.

Finally, three words, exclamation point. Just like a joke teller can't laugh, a story teller gets excited first, so how can he laugh? . .

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