Dad, I want to say 480 words about your composition.

We believe that most fathers love their children, but they often fall into a misunderstanding that it is the father's full responsibility to work hard and bring superior living conditions to their children. However, this is not the case. The greatest significance of a father to his children is not external material guarantee, but internal spiritual guidance. Here are two ways to answer your question.

First, about dad, I want to tell you about writing guidance.

Second, dad, I want to say model essay to you.

First, about dad, I want to tell you about writing guidance.

1.？ Readers-communicate with relatives and say anything. Readers are our elders, so we should respect and be humble in writing.

2.？ Writing content-heartfelt words written to relatives, bold writing, true feelings, true feelings. You can talk about a grateful heart; Tell the story of growing up; Advise parents ...

3.？ Writing requirements-I write my heart by hand and write my true feelings. Be sure to express your heart in appropriate language.

Second, dad, I want to say model essay to you.

Dad, I want to tell you a composition (1).

Dad, I grew up, you don't know how much effort you put into bringing me up to be such a big child. I am very grateful to you, but I am also a little dissatisfied with some things you have done.

Dad, in fact, there are many things I've always wanted to say to you, but every time I get to the tip of my tongue, I see you look tired and swallow it. Today, I will take this exercise to pour them all out.

First of all, I thank you very much. Whenever I do badly in the exam, you not only don't criticize me, but also encourage me. Especially that time, I got 74 points in the math test, and I was very sad, because this was the worst result I got. I imagine how you will criticize me when I get home. The more I think about it, the more I get scared.

On the way home, I was very sad. My feet are like lead, and it is hard to walk. The leaves seem to be laughing at me on purpose and rattling.

When I got home, I saw you waiting for me happily and asked me how much I got in the exam. When I handed you the test paper with a depressed face, your face immediately turned from sunny to cloudy. But instead of scolding me, you called me to the coffee table and explained the wrong questions on the test paper to me one by one, for fear that I wouldn't understand. I was boiling all over. At that moment, I felt how warm my father's love was!

But I also have some dissatisfaction with you. Dad, since you became the director of the company, you seldom go home for dinner. Sometimes I go home drunk and sleep in bed as soon as I get home. Dad, you know what? Your stomach is often upset, and we are all worried about you. Every time my mother cooks food and waits for you to come back to eat, you say you are going to socialize. We were so disappointed that we didn't even have time to accompany me on weekends. Recalling the days when a family of three climbed mountains and played around on weekends, I was really happy at that time.

Dad, I won't forget your love for me, but no matter how busy you are at work, you should pay attention to your health. Health is the capital of revolution!

Dad, I want to tell you the composition (2)

Dad, I want to tell you ......

I still remember when I was four years old, a happy day was taken away by a sudden phone call. I was still surrounded by happiness at that time. I only saw my father put on his shoes in a hurry and asked, "Dad, where are you going?" "I'm going out to do something and I'll be back soon." Dad left before I came to my senses. I waited and waited, until now, I 10 years old, six years. I didn't wait for my father to come back. I just wrote a letter occasionally. Dad, in these six years, my mother and I shed a lot of tears. Dad, I don't blame you, because I know: you are busy at work and have to run around all day. Although I'm sad, I know what you're thinking. It's all for my own good.

Dad, in the six years since you left, all the people in our family have been thinking about you all the time. We hope that one day you will suddenly appear and live in front of us. Our whole family is waiting for your reunion.

I still remember once, during the Mid-Autumn Festival, we were enjoying the moon and eating moon cakes. I said, "I miss my father so much." Grandma hid her face and wept, tears streaming down her face. ......

Dad, don't worry, my daughter will wait for you, always waiting for you, and when you come home, our family will be reunited.

Dad, I want to tell you the composition (3)

Dear dad, today I can finally tell you what I think-

Since childhood, when I was sick, you would worry about me and take care of me in every possible way. You will clean my room and give me a comfortable and clean home; You will also buy me a lot of snacks to satisfy my greedy stomach. But, you know what? The more you grow up, the more lonely you are, because you are getting busier and busier. Do you know how scared I am at home alone?

Today, you went out again. For me, I have to face another lonely day and myself. The day before yesterday, yesterday and today.

You always say that you will be late if you work overtime. But, have you considered my feelings? Do you know the scene of a little girl shivering in the quilt for fear of thunder? Now, I am not afraid of thunder, because I am used to it.

You have never cared about my study since you were a child. When I do well in the exam, you will say to me, "Why don't you take the exam 100?" Why is this question wrong? " Hearing these words, my good mood was drowned out at once. I had to go into the room and start to correct the wrong problem. When I didn't do well in the exam, you even pulled your face down and called names: "How did you do so badly in the exam? This paper is so simple that you gave me such a test. Where is all the knowledge the teacher taught you? " Dad, you know what? At that moment, I was very sad. Do I have no self-esteem? Although you are the elder and our shelter, our children still have to face it!

Dad, I always thought you didn't love me or like me. So I'm often out of spirits until-

It was a winter night and I suddenly had a high fever. You are in a hurry. You take me to the hospital to buy medicine at once. You also took my temperature and soaked my medicine. Seeing the back of you soaking medicine for me, my eyes immediately moistened. It's not that you don't love me, but you also blame yourself for being too busy at work to spend time with me.

Dad, I want to say to you: thank you for your concern and care, but I hope you can spend more time with me and not be so strict with me. Dad, thank you, I know, the love of parents is the greatest! Whether you can accept my point of view or not, I love you and mom deeply.