Postgraduate Entrance Examination Composition Recommended Movies Please help me see if there are any mistakes in my writing. Can I improve it?

The following are my personal suggestions, for reference only~

First of all, I think this article is a little too simple, there is nothing particularly outstanding, it is a bit like a CET-4 exam composition~< /p>

Then there are some places where I think the grammar is wrong and the writing is a bit Chinese English

The first sentence: I am writing to you to recommend a movie for you which shows an Chinese assassin in Qin Dynasty .

The name of the movie is hero, you may be confuse about why an assassin is a hero.

but they do not use it unlimited Here unlimited should be changed to unlimitedly~ adverb Modify verbs.

Because they know, with great power comes great responsibility.

Can be changed to: the more power they use, the more resposibility they shuold pay.

The chief actor of this movie is acted by Li Jet, this sentence actor should be changed to role.

In this movie, you would know a truth that a greet knight,for the country and for the people,it is the essence of the Chinese Xia culture. In this sentence it is the essence and is should be removed, otherwise there will be two subjects in one sentence.

he has kung fu, I don’t think you should use has for this, but I don’t know what to use.

That’s all for now, I hope it helps you~