Sloppy Me Sample Essay with Comments

Hello everyone! My name is Zhang Xinru, a sixth grade student. Do you want to know more about me? I'll give you three options. Do you want to understand me, understand me, or understand me? If you want, please read on. If you don’t want to, just look down!

I am 165cm tall and look very quiet, but I am still very lively! As the saying goes, "it's hidden but hidden". I also have long, shiny black hair. There is a pair of watery eyes on the face. Do you want to know what my face shape is? Haha, guess what! My face shape is - oval face! Did you guess it right?

Although I look quiet on the outside, I am actually a lively little careless person. My past sloppiness caused me some jokes and a bit of regret.

I remember one time when my mother was cooking and my younger brother was playing at the door. I didn’t know what happened. My younger brother cried. My mother hurriedly ran out and told me: "Put some salt in the vegetables!" Stir-fry and stir-fry, don't let it burn!" I followed my mother's instructions and put some "salt" into the dish. After frying for a while, the color of the dish changed. I felt that the dish was almost ready, so I put it on the plate. , it was brought to the table, everything was ready.

"Mom, it's time to eat!" I called my mother, and I saw my mother leading my brother in. The family sat around the table. My father took a bite of the food with chopsticks and said, "Huh? Why does the food taste different from usual today?" My mother and I also took a bite of the food and thought to ourselves: Today The taste of this dish is different from usual! ah? I hurried to the kitchen and saw the "salt" I put in the dishes. "Hahaha!" "What's wrong?" Mom ran over and asked. "Mom, I mistook sugar for salt. What I put in the dish was not salt, but sugar!"

There are many more jokes that have happened to me. For example: I put my brother's trousers on backwards, buttoned them in the wrong position, etc. These jokes bring a lot of fun to my life.

Of course my carelessness also caused me some regrets. (Wujiang City Zhenze Yilong Redwood-Yilong Literature www.sz-ylhm.com)

I remember that in the mid-term exam mathematics field in the fifth grade, because of my sloppiness, I looked at the wrong person. The decimal point, just one decimal point cost me precious points. There was also a mock exam for the sixth grade. In math, I also lost points on the fraction division calculation questions because of my sloppiness.

Look! This is me who is both humorous and careless. I want to be friends with you, do you want to be friends with me too?