College entrance examination composition and examination view: returning to the original point

Read a joke about Xiaolin in Ming Dynasty and write an article of no less than 800 words. Angle selection; Self-determination; The topic is self-drawn; In addition to poetry, style is optional.

Che Yin capsule firefly reading, Sun Kangying snow reading. One day, Kang went to visit Yin. Without seeing him, he asked where to go. The doorman said, "He went out to catch fireflies." Just as he was answering, he saw Kang standing idle in the courtyard and asked, "Why don't you study? Kang Yue: I don't think it looks like a snowy day today. "

Discuss this topic

"Blister fireflies reflecting snow" has always been synonymous with overcoming the hardships of material conditions and studying hard. The jokes in Laughing Forest belong to New Stories. Traditional allusions add new elements, thus bringing forth the new. Jokes vividly show the ridiculous behavior of blindly pursuing external forms, thus ignoring the essential meaning, and the emotional tendency has also changed from traditional positive affirmation to ironic negation.

This is an ideal composition material with the characteristics of reality, openness and speculation.

Unlike fables, which often reveal meaning, "joke" is a pure narrative discourse, which pursues meaning and interest outside the text. The "jokes" provided are obviously negative materials and can be used as targets for readers to examine, criticize and reflect. The "ridiculousness" of the two people in the "joke" became the basis of composition review:

1. Pursue the form blindly and ignore the essential meaning;

2. Sticking to the habit of becoming a law and not knowing how to be flexible;

3. deliberately put on a show and lose the truth.

In order to facilitate marking, the above ideas can be refined and grasped by several key words: content (reality) and form (name), restraint and flexibility, truth-seeking and distortion. There are two points to explain. First, no matter what kind of idea, it must come from matter (natural growth) and can return to matter (circle confirmation). For example, it is ok to talk about "don't stick to the rules, learn to be flexible" and "change the sky and change the road", but it is not possible to talk about "finding another way and boldly innovating". Second, there must be other ideas, which cannot be listed one by one, but a material always has its core theme, and the connotation of this material is to satirize the ridiculous behavior of putting the cart before the horse, which should be the object of judging the cut, combination, deviation and separation of a composition.

Excellent composition

Back to square one

Ji Bolun wrote in Sand and Foam: "Some people go further and further on the road of life because they forget the starting point."

Che Yin studied and Sun Kangying studied, which praised their diligence in reading. Now Che Yin spends a lot of time catching fireflies to study, while Sun Kang waits until it snows. Is it putting the cart before the horse? Where did this "surface engineering" come from? I think we have lost our original heart on the road of life.

So, go back to the original point and pick up your original heart.

However, what made Che Yin and Sun Kang lose their initial heart? I think the reasons are divided into external factors and internal factors.