In 2008, Guangzhou City, Guangdong Province, got full marks in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination.

Read the following text and write as required.

Spring returns to the earth. On the Yuan Ye, beside the road, in front of the house and behind the house, rows of trees, tall, short, straight, bent, standing and upside down ... Whether the branches are bare by the cold wind or countless branches with green leaves, they quietly spit out new buds, tender, green or pale yellow.

Please write an article on the topic of "seeing branches sprouting again".

Requirements: ① Style is not limited (except poetry); ② No less than 600 words; Candidates' names and school names cannot appear in the text.

Exhibition of outstanding works:

Also watch the branches shoot new buds (4)

When my mother woke me up from my sleep this morning, it was almost eight o'clock. I didn't have time to eat, so I grabbed my schoolbag and ran outside. Only when I came to the street did I find that it was raining heavily. There are people who are running hard on the road, and there are couples who are full of sweet words with umbrellas, but I have no time to enjoy the beautiful scenery in the rain. I ran like hell in the rain. Suddenly a bus stopped and the driver asked me if I wanted to take the bus. I thought it was raining so hard that I was soaked when I ran to school and got on the bus. There are so many people inside that there is not even an empty seat. The car is very quiet. Everyone is thinking about his own heart and has his own unknown story. They looked out in unison, watching the rain fall on the clean asphalt road from top to bottom, splashing. ...

"It smells good! Where did these flowers come from? " A smiling little girl, her eyes shining with hope, said in surprise. Those eager eyes searched everywhere, and she finally found the potted flower on the floor. This is a smiling flower. She stroked the petals of the smiling flower with her hand and could not help admiring: "What a beautiful flower! Like the face of a smiling doll. "

Just as I was immersed in this beautiful picture, suddenly a hand put on my shoulder and said, "Please buy a ticket!" " "oh! The funny thing is that I was too busy enjoying myself to buy a ticket, so I quickly untied my schoolbag and calmly took out my wallet ... Ah! Why is there not a penny left? I remember. I came out in a hurry in the morning and forgot to bring it. But what about now? I was so anxious that tears almost came out, and the passengers on the bus gave me surprised and suspicious eyes.

"Did you find it? Is there any money? " The conductor was very angry and asked with a straight face.

I'm so embarrassed that I can only glance into the car. Suddenly, I caught a smile! It's the little girl with a small nose and a smile on her face. She smiled at me, it was a kind and comforting smile, with a strange innocence in her mouth and eyes. The little girl has fine features, clear and pure. Slightly red lips and innocent, kind and quiet eyes calmed me down a lot.

The pot of smiling flowers on the car floor exudes a faint fragrance! Sure enough, she asked me, "Sister, how many stops will you take?" So casual and enthusiastic.

"Here you are." So she leaned down and gave me her hand with a shiny coin in her hand. The fragrance of laughing flowers is faint and refreshing!

"Take it, sister." She leaned forward again, cocked her head and smiled in her eyes.

"Thank you, thank you very much." I'm really touched.

At this time, there is another fragrance. I quickly looked down at the smiling flower, but I was surprised to find that several new buds had grown on its branches. Full score reason:

This full mark benchmarking composition is mainly to polish the eyes of the marking teacher through the following two points:

First, this paper grasps one point and makes in-depth exploration, thus writing a unique composition. We know that there are many articles about good deeds, and it is easy to get stuck in stereotypes, but this article is unique, extraordinary and refreshing. What is this? That's because this article is not greedy for perfection when writing, but it captures a touching "bright spot" that can reflect people's spiritual realm and tries its best to explain it; Make the article vivid and the full text brilliant.

Second, although this article only tells a story, it is straightforward, but the author uses metaphor and symbolism, and at the end of the article compares several new buds on smiling flowers to little girls, thus showing the beauty in the little girls' hearts and our hopes and revealing the profound meaning of the story.

Also watch the branches spit out new buds (5)

Life, a stream with its head held high, a bunch of colorful sunshine and an indelible calligraphy and painting constitute an eternal theme.

What is life like? Life is the white shoes left by Qu Yuan on the beach, the deer festival of herding sheep in Beihai, Su Wu in 19, Ma Niangs in Zhou Tao's works, vain violets in Ji Bolun's works, cold rain with nostalgia in Yu Guangzhong's works, the fragrant sound of lotus flowers in Mr. Ji Xianlin's pond, and the endless smiles of unknown girls on the banks of the Seine.

When I heard the poet Haizi chanting "Facing the sea, spring blossoms", I understood that only when the ship faces the sea can we reach the other side of victory; Fish can only find their final destination if they face the sea; Only when life faces the sea will there be magnificent scenery.

When the morning light quietly opened the cloud window, when the sunset glow reflected the red pond, I once again realized the eternal theme of life and life.

Looking out of the window, the bald branches in winter were blown pale green by the cold wind.

Oh! Watch the branches spit out new buds.

When the cuckoo sings freely in the forest in spring, when the valleys and streams are cool in summer, when the autumn wind whistles on the broad plane leaves, and when the snowflake floats on the earth with the softest sound in winter morning, I will sincerely feel the sunshine: the catkins of life are flying, and I seem to see the true colors of nature's life and feel the pulse of my own life.

There are many bumps in the journey of life. Perhaps there is Li Qingzhao's "cold and lonely, sad and miserable", perhaps there is Li Bai's "the road is as wide as the sky, and there is no way out at present", and perhaps there is Lu You's "rustling white hair lying in a boat". Friends, don't be sad, don't be sad, pat the dirt on your body and steer your life. Tomorrow is another glorious day! The catkins of life keep flying, flying out of Cao Mengde's heroism of "singing for wine, geometry of life", also flying out of Pushkin's confidence of "believing that happy days will come", and even flying out of the North Island "telling you the truth/the world/I don't believe it/even if there are 1000 challengers under your feet/then count me as the 101st."

"Throw a wooden boat/into the boundless agitation/raise a flag/into the windy sky/throw yourself into the torrent of life as a rough mine." Life quietly turns into a little song with a breeze, chasing rainbows, running water and dancing sleeves flying.

"I smiled at the sky with a horizontal knife, and I went to save my courage." Tan sitong's fresh blood dripping on the ground may be a witness to life. Is life like this?

Can you witness the majestic Kunlun Mountain, the Great Wall and the bright moon?

Full score reason:

There are new buds on the branches. After the severe winter, the "new shoots" of life reappear and the tree of life glows again. The article sings the ode of life in poetic language, "At the helm of life, tomorrow is another brilliant day!" A high-spirited life melody makes people excited and forge ahead.

Focus on the overall situation and think about the Millennium; Write down the details and express your true feelings. Indeed, scholars and philosophers at all times and all over the world are not short of famous sentences that praise and think about life, but the author does not forget to put pen to paper from the subtleties around him when quoting "Winning the Law". The morning glow, the sunset glow, the cough of cuckoo, the sound of stream, the whistling of autumn wind and the falling of snowflakes all make the careful author realize the true meaning of life and give birth to his love for life.

See also the sprouting of branches (6)

Spring returns to the earth, and everything revives.

When the first sunshine of spring rose from the horizon and shone on the earth, the ice and snow frozen on the mountains and rivers and covered on the branches began to melt slowly, and the hard ice condensed on the top of the school began to turn into water and quietly withdrew from people's field of vision along the branches. The breeze blew, the drizzle moistened, the original bare school head began to look up, and the earth that loved beauty quietly put on new clothes. You see, on the Yuan Ye, on the roadside, in front of and behind the house, rows of trees are quietly spitting light green, or light green, or light yellow, or slightly pink. ......

Even those bald branches bent, crushed and crushed by the once-in-a-century snowstorm are not to be outdone. They all spit out the buds, and everything seems so eager and full of vitality.

Although ice and snow can bend, break and crush trees, although cold wind can blow off every leaf on the trees, it is irresistible for schools to spit out new buds, because ice and snow will melt one day.

The snowstorm has passed, and with the joint efforts of the people of the whole country, we have achieved a comprehensive victory in "snow resistance and disaster relief". The new buds on the branches indicate a new life, new hopes and new goals to us.

Earthquake relief has not yet won the final victory, and it is being carried out nervously and orderly. The earthquake disaster came so suddenly, so violently and so cruelly that it took so many innocent lives. The disaster has once again United the strength of the Chinese nation. In the face of the power of the earthquake, it looks so burly, so majestic and so indestructible. It is like a beam of sunlight, where glaciers melt; It is like a spring breeze, and the dead trees are full of vitality; It is like a high mountain, which has established the belief of winning for us.

Is there any ice and snow that won't melt when you see the branches sprouting? Have you ever had a disaster that you can't get past?

Don't! But ice and snow are always afraid of sunshine, and disasters are always afraid of cohesion.

In fact, disasters are like ice and snow, which will melt at the sight of sunshine. As long as there is sunshine and hope in our hearts, no disaster is terrible.

Full score reason:

Dead branches and new buds show the tenacity of life; National cohesion and strong belief, like omnipotent sunshine, guide people to overcome disasters and return happiness, joy, vitality and prosperity to China. As long as the sun is still there, our hope is there; As long as there is hope, happiness will not leave. Let's unite? With one heart and one mind, we can resolve the losses caused by the disaster. Believe: disaster is not terrible, tomorrow will be better!

The article links life with current politics, describes snowstorm and earthquake resistance, links personal "branches" with the country and the nation, compares the great cohesion and strong belief of the nation to sunshine, and compares happiness, joy, vitality and prosperity to new shoots. The full-text language is unpretentious, the level is clear and clear, and it feels fresh and smooth to read; Reasoning comes naturally, and there is no trace of carving. The natural expression shows the examinee's temper of language at ordinary times.

See also the branches spitting new buds (7)

A's mother died very early.

A is in the third grade, and has always been excellent at school. She scored 700 points in a bottom-up exam, ranking first in the school. The teachers all said that he could go to C Middle School in the whole city.

In order to take care of A's diet, Dad decided to find him a stepmother. Soon, he brought a woman home.

A stammered, "Hello, Aunt." The woman smiled lightly and said, "You can call me Aunt B in the future, or …" Aunt B paused, "You can call me by my name." A thinks this woman can create a subtle atmosphere, plain and quiet.

However, after all, she is a stepmother, and it is not so easy for A to call out what she calls "Aunt B". For this strange woman, he only uses three simple modal particles "hmm", "oh" and "ah" to communicate.

One day, at the dinner table, B asked A, "A, what do you like to eat? Is it kelp, chicken, fish or ... "A didn't answer her, just bowed their heads and ate silently. B thought he couldn't hear clearly and asked again. A still didn't speak, just took a sip of the soup and said, "This soup is delicious."

Father threw the bowl of soup at A and scolded, "What soup to drink! Aunt asked you something! " A said, "Is there a third person at this table?" He turned to look at his father's red eyes. When his father raised his hand to fan, B grabbed his hand and said, "The child is still young ..." "I want you to take care of it!" An idea at that moment, women came to provoke their families.

This relationship has always existed between B.A.' s father. The gap between them is getting deeper and deeper, just like a dry and rough school, which cannot regenerate new buds.

On this day, A came home from school after nine o'clock.

When I got home, I found Dad and B packing. The food on the table is steaming.

B stepped forward, helped him put down his schoolbag, and said, "I'll wait for you, and your father and I won't eat until nine o'clock ..." "Oh." A replied lukewarm, burying his head in eating.

A I feel that today's food is a little slippery.

A was about to go back to her dormitory to review when she saw B reading alone in her room. By the dim light, he saw the title of the book: ~ nutritious meal for the senior high school entrance examination ~. B read aloud while watching: ~; A likes … chicken …? Beef ..... "A turned away without saying a word, raising her hand to wipe away the wetness in the corner of her eyes.

The next day, A saw the same scene: under the lamp, B, and the book.

The night before the entrance examination. A came back early, and the hot dishes prepared by B were delicious. Halfway through the meal, B suddenly left the table and turned to the kitchen to get a stew. He said, "First, drinking this stew is good for your brain."

A drank slowly, feeling the hot air in the soup like a warm current flowing through the ditch mat separating him from B, warming the dry school in my heart.

In the evening, B came to A's room and said, "Good night. A, come on for the exam tomorrow. " A turned her head and said, "Oh, ok, good night, Aunt B."

At this time, there was a warm wind blowing in my heart. See the warm pink bud hug on the colonel's head again.

Full score reason:

Stepmother, in many stories, is the embodiment of malice and meanness. So for children, stepmother is the source of contradiction and the destroyer of love. Stepmothers often cause children to resist when they enter the door. This is exactly what happened to the hero A in the article. Fortunately, the stepmother's tolerance and care made A feel the warmth of the family. This paper examines family and interpersonal relationships from a social perspective, showing that love is the foundation of harmony and understanding is the regulator of harmony.

The article tells the subtle changes of the relationship between stepmother and stepson through stories, and reveals the difficult relationship between stepmother and stepson in the family. Judging from the development of the plot, we can find that the author has good intentions and wants to tell you that the harmony of interpersonal relationships requires the efforts of both sides, tolerance and understanding are regulators, and love can touch a cold heart. The dialogue description is concise, and there is no superfluous pen and ink. Every language description lays the foundation for the development of the plot and lays the groundwork.