Excellent handwritten composition daquan

1. Writing a handwritten newspaper Our little reporter has an important task-writing a handwritten newspaper.

I am very happy. I also got the paper for handwritten newspaper. I discussed it with my mother for a long time before deciding what to do. My mother and I made a draft on the computer, called Health News.

I searched the Internet for health tips, exercise tips, the name and source of influenza A (H 1N 1), and then copied it down. Mom always feels something is wrong when she sees it.

She said, "There are still a few vivid paintings missing!" I patted my head, reflected, opened the drawer, tore up some stickers and put them on, not to mention how beautiful. I saw, alas, there is no lace, so ugly! I carefully drew strips of lace on the edge of the paper with a green pen. It is green, healthy and beautiful.

Title-Health News can be difficult to write, but it should be beautifully written. I can't write artistic words, so I'll write regular script.

I wrote carefully one by one, and finally I wrote beautifully. For the sake of beauty, I also "sacrificed" a plastic flower and stuck it on it, which was as refreshing and beautiful as clip art.

what do you think? Is it beautiful? .

2. Pupils look at pictures, bring pictures and chat with pupils. Xin Guangcun, a pupil of Jinhua Central School, entered the second grade, and the composition class increased accordingly.

Some children are beginners in writing and want to write a long and excellent composition at once. Seeing their brothers and sisters taking a composition class, they can organize their own materials and write a composition according to the composition topic given by the teacher, which makes them feel envious. These ideas are all about writing a good composition.

However, the propositional composition of the senior year begins with the initial training of the junior year, such as looking at pictures and speaking, making words and sentences, connecting sentences into paragraphs and writing observation diaries. Only by laying a good foundation for writing in lower grades can we gradually improve our writing ability.

Now I will sort out the problems that students often encounter in the teaching of composition by looking at pictures and talk about my own views for children to refer to when reading composition by looking at pictures. There are generally three steps in looking at pictures: reading, speaking and writing.

Look is to observe the picture carefully and experience the content displayed on the picture; Say, that is, according to the content provided by the picture, tell the story on the picture through your own imagination and conception; Writing is to look at pictures and write a composition. Tell eight stories, express them in words and write an article. First, we should look at the pictures carefully.

In the composition of looking at pictures, because "text" is written on the basis of "looking", looking at pictures is the basis. How to look at the picture? Look in an orderly way.

Also grasp the details of key parts in the picture and look carefully. At first, I couldn't grasp the key points and observe the details, so it was very difficult to write. If we can't write a few words, we can't write

Therefore, when we observe a painting, we should not only see the general meaning of the picture, but also carefully observe the subtle details that are difficult to perceive at the moment. Only when we look at this painting carefully and deeply can we understand its meaning well and have something to say.

Second, we should develop reasonable association and imagination. Speaking of this question, there is such a riddle: "Look at the color from a distance and listen to the sound of water silently."

Spring has passed, but there are still many flowers and flowers. People go nearby, but the birds are still not disturbed. "This riddle is about a landscape painting.

There are mountains, water, flowers, birds and various colors in the picture, but there is no sound and it is still. Writing while looking at pictures requires us to change the picture on the screen from "static" to "dynamic" and from "silent" to "sound"; From "plane" to "three-dimensional", that is to say, we should re-create with the help of the image provided by the picture, contact our own life reality, write the characters on the picture vividly, and explain the ins and outs of things clearly.

If we want to change "stillness" into "movement", "silence" into "sound" and "plane" into "three-dimensional", and make people and things lifelike, we should link the things on the screen with the familiar things in life according to the contents provided on the screen, and combine our own life thoughts and reality, expand associations and skillfully set metaphors. Relate the situation before and after the incident to the situation on the screen.

Third, we should write the article vividly, concretely, vividly and completely. On the basis of optimistic picture and reasonable imagination, the steps of "writing" can be carried out.

Before writing, we might as well have an exercise of talking or telling stories by looking at pictures. It is to express the story orally first, tell the story on the picture, see what is incomplete, not specific, not vivid and not connected, then go back and check what is not detailed and not perfect, add it, and then write it down in words when you are satisfied with the story.

The picture composition formed in this way is often more complete and vivid. You can pay attention to the following questions when writing: 1. Explore the psychological activities of characters through their demeanor.

People and events written in this way are often more specific. 2, extending back and forth, the story is complete.

The content in the picture is the central meaning of writing a composition. This requires us to grasp the theme and main story, but also analyze the ins and outs of the picture, find out its cause and effect, and guide the exhibition forward and backward with the picture as the center.

3. The written article should meet the preliminary requirements of the composition, such as the article should be centered, the language should be fluent, the level should be clear, and the words and punctuation should be correct. Of course, to write a good-looking composition, we must think more, read more and practice more, and cultivate our ability to observe things.

As long as we are good at thinking, learn more good examples of composition and practice hard, we will certainly do a good job in composition training.

3. Check your handwriting. A composition is good. There is a reward ~ when I got up in the morning, my mother made me wear a down jacket and said it was very cold today. I dismissed it. I am a young man, and I am not afraid of the cold. After getting up, I brush my teeth and wash my face with tap water as usual. I just took a sip of water and said, "Wow!" My teeth are freezing. Go and get some hot water. Mom is right. It's really cold today.

After breakfast, I went out with my parents. As soon as I went out, a gust of wind blew me cold. I strode to the car, but my father's car wouldn't catch fire. I only heard my father say, "I usually fight as soon as I hit it." Maybe it's too cold today and the water tanks are frozen. " After listening to my father, I really regret not wearing a down jacket. Think about it, even the water is frozen, and the temperature must be below zero. It seems really cold today.

Finally arrived at my destination, just as I got off the bus and closed the door, "Bang!" Bang, a gold star flashed, and my hand was like a needle. Mom said it was static electricity, because the weather was cold and dry, and some metals and chemical fibers would generate static electricity. I thought to myself, this static electricity really hurts.

My mother and I waited for my father to stop at the roadside, and the wind was whistling. After a while, my face turned into a red apple, shivering with cold. I quickly put on my hat, zipped my clothes over my head and put my hand in my sleeve. Mom saw it and told me not to just stand there, just jump and run back and forth, so it would be warmer. While doing what my mother said, I thought: if I don't listen to the old man's eyes, I will suffer. It's really cold today!

4. Writing jokes Dad handwritten the map. Speaking of this, I really should thank the author of the joke story! If it weren't for him, I wouldn't know dad's jokes!

Dad is very conservative. He never tells the secret of his heart, even to his mother! Sometimes, I ask him, or what he saw.

For example, in the afternoon, I am used to reading the newly published composition about Xiao He while doing my math homework. Suddenly, I clicked "Joke Story", and my father was beside me, so I watched it with him. Dad looked at it, smiled for a long time and said, "I want you to tell me something." You must have laughed a lot! " "I said confidently," hey, I don't believe you! I won't laugh! " Hearing this, my father was anxious and repeatedly assured me, "You must laugh! "Anyway, listen to it first!" I have to say yes. So, my father said, "Tell you what! That's right. I have a patient who came to the hospital to cut hemorrhoids. When he went to register, the person in the registration room asked,' Name!' Because it is rural people who come to cut hemorrhoids, they are old and illiterate. He thought he was asking him what he was doing, so he replied,' Cut hemorrhoids!' (Because in our dialect, the pronunciations of' Qie' and' Ge' are the same) So, everyone in the registration room is called' Ge Cang'. The old man, with a medical record, came to me excitedly. When I first arrived, I saw the man standing and called him in. I looked at his registration card and said,' Ge Zhicang, what's wrong with you? As expected, the man said,' Doctor, I'm going to cut hemorrhoids! I heard it very strangely (because I speak a dialect! ) and asked,' So, what are you doing here? Uncle! "Come and sit down first!" Uncle said,' Doctor, I won't sit. Please help me cut hemorrhoids quickly. I'm still waiting to go home and collect cabbage! "The more I listen to, the more I feel strange. It took me a long time to understand that the old man came to treat hemorrhoids! "I smiled and said," Dad, why didn't you ever tell me! " Dad said, "You didn't ask me! "

Hehe, do you think it's funny? If you don't think it's funny, it must be because you didn't listen to my father. Dad's jokes are really funny! But ... it seems necessary to learn Mandarin well!

How to write a handwritten composition well, you must practice more. At first, I must have felt that I had nothing to write, or I didn't know how to write. It doesn't matter. Even if it is a dull day, it is best for children to record it. Practice more, and you will feel it naturally. It is necessary to cultivate children's habit of keeping a diary and recording "inspiration notes"-take a notebook with you, record what you think, and record the beautiful descriptions you see as data accumulation.

Then there is the need to cultivate children's observation. For example, the first day of school, although the book is being distributed, what happened in the process of distributing the book, the feeling of seeing an unknown friend during the holiday, the mood of starting a new school, what the teacher said at the beginning of school, who was helping the teacher distribute the book, and what he saw and heard on campus at the beginning of school are all highlights that can be written. But obviously, because there is no good observation, in the end, your child can only think of publishing a book, and nothing else is touched.

Third, parents must guide their children to write. It is very limited to rely on teachers to teach at school, because teachers can't spend a lot of time on each child, so they usually need parents' guidance and help. Parents can guide their children to think about things they can't think of. For example, on the first day of school, children feel that there is nothing to write. As parents, they can help to ask: "What friends did you meet at school, has the school changed, are you happy at school, etc." Let the children gradually find out what to write in the dialogue.

Fourth, it is suggested that children read more excellent compositions and then imitate them, which is also an exercise method. Imitate first, then create. There are many children's books, including novels, which can open children's minds and broaden their writing space. Especially when I was in the college entrance examination, I wrote a diary novel, and as a result, I got high marks in my composition.

Finally, tips on writing. First, the characters should be clear. Second, the story should be complete. Third, the environment sets off the article. The fourth is to prioritize and highlight key points. Fifth, write purposefully, in order to explain something, explain something and express some opinions. Sixth, pay attention to the coherence between paragraphs, pay attention to the logical relationship, and be consistent.

As for the guidance of writing, a guidebook is enough. Reading more than this, it is useless to turn it into your own skill without practice.

Basically, that's all I can think of now, because I'm not a teacher who teaches elementary school, junior high school and senior high school, so I can't give more opinions. After all, there are some differences between writing a thesis and writing a composition.

6. Where there are excellent compositions, there must be pictures of excellent compositions of junior high school students. Cui Rixin's Childhood Without Tears There are some gray dust suspended in the sky, and the sunshine looks so pale because it can't pass through.

The cry to announce my arrival did not tear the gray sky. It didn't cry, but it was sadder. It's gray.

The picture in my memory is always this tone, full of emptiness that can never be described, and I am hiding in the corner with a cold shiver that no one can ever understand. Counting the passing cars over and over again every day, saying some comforting words to myself over and over again, praying for dreams to come true over and over again, looking forward to rain, hanging rainbows over and over again, and looking forward to seeing a little bit of beauty.

In a trance, I seem to see the candlelight waking up in the middle of the night swaying me, and the new words hanging on the wall generally surround me. My dad yelled at me, "What is this?" Why is it so simple that you can't do it? Why? "Just because I don't understand why abstract concepts are like * * *, I am silent, in exchange for increased reprimand and corporal punishment. I slowly fell asleep in my own crying, but there were no tears on the pillow in my memory. I forgot the January of the year when my grandmother left me before I grew up. My relatives were almost in tears, but I called "grandma" several times in a daze and I was never sad again. A few years later, grandma also left. I have been spoiled by her since I was a child. I didn't cry. An invisible line gently separates us, so I can't cry.

Therefore, some people say that I am heartless. Just because I don't cry.

I think, I have no tears, at least, in that childish age, but who can really have no tears all my life? Later, I went to school and ended my carefree life. One day, because of a little thing, I was scolded by my teacher. At that moment, I tasted the bitter taste.

Suddenly, I understood that this is something caused by injury-tears. So, I learned the ability to cry silently, and I learned to vent my emotions silently. At that moment, my childhood left me.

A day without rain is not necessarily sunny, and a childhood without tears is not necessarily happy. The picture of memory gradually shrinks, and finally it is fixed in a gray sky.

That kind of gray is depressing me, depressing my childhood that I don't want to recall. My childhood life, Kirin Na River, is no longer magnificent in my memory; That tree is no longer a towering tree in my eyes.

My wonderful childhood is gone forever ... the accumulation of years has precipitated a lot of dust, but they have the most beautiful colors and long-simmering sweetness. No one knows whether it is a paradise in fairy tales.

The river, the tree, the man. My wonderful childhood ... behind my grandmother's house, there is a forest with extremely strong trees, where there is a large grassland, lush and orderly.

When I can come out to play, I will take my sister's hand. We dig wild vegetables, catch butterflies and water ant holes. We will always laugh when we see ants running around.

We watered the young trees we planted with the remaining water. We swore in front of the small tree: "We will always be best friends and never part." Tired of playing, we will go to the river.

They sat on the concrete platform, took off their smelly socks that had not been washed for several days, put their little feet into the cool water and stepped on the soft water waves, causing ripples and sparkling. At that time, the sky was blue, the water was clear and the wind was warm.

We stayed together until noon when grandma called us home for dinner, and then we left. We'll give a wolf needle when we leave. I put one on my sister's clothes, and my sister checked one for me and flew home. Behind us are endless rivers, green Woods and small trees we planted ... After lunch, we sometimes feed the chickens together.

Chickens are afraid of us, so we will pick them up and feed them in the nest. Once, I put my sister in the henhouse, and she cried and said that she would never play with me again.

I ran to the river and found some small animals like shells for her. She gave me a happy kiss and said, "Next time … don't put me in a henhouse …" This happy day lasted until I went to primary school, and then time carefully restrained me. The river was dyed black.

There are few trees. That man, far apart.

My wonderful childhood is gone forever ... my simple little happiness is infinite ... music complex Du Yu Can can't remember when he fell in love with music. It should have been a long time ago. I know I am destined to live with music, so I can give up everything outside for it.

In the dark and quiet night, I listen to my own music. Only in this way can I really blend in.

I like guqin best. I love guqin too much. Love the dusty vicissitudes on its strings; Love its whisper under your fingers; Love its heartbreaking melody, love its poetic connotation.

My personality determines that I am destined to be crazy about it and be changed by it. The low-key of the silent cello makes my impetuous heart calm and peaceful, and I meditate with it.

Then, be quiet and grow old slowly. Xiao (surname) ................................................................................................................................................................................

....................................................................................................................................................... It is gratifying for ........................... that among these commercial music whose ultimate goal is to make money, few musicians stick to their ideals and make real music.

Ron is one of them. RONE's commercial music is like natural jade without any carving.

Simple, pure and true. There is no need for flashy packaging and pushing.

I can make a cup of milk tea, close my eyes and listen to him sing ... Xue Fei's music is more about expressing an emotion and a complex. His music is written for himself, so he doesn't care what others think.

The dim picture and faint singing belong to Xue Fei, who can read his mood. Serenade For western classical music, Schubert's serenade is the most dramatic one I have ever met.

Because there is an unusual acquaintance, it has an unusual meaning. Because there is an unusual meaning that makes my love doubly hard to let go. I often ask myself what music really means to me. I don't know.

Perhaps it is a flavoring agent; Maybe dessert after dinner; Maybe a cup of hot coffee.

I want to buy a composition book for junior high school students. Shakespeare once said, "Books are the nourishment of the whole world."

There is nothing wrong with this sentence. A book is like a friend of yours. Sometimes it helps you, sometimes it quarrels with you.

Oh, what a headache. Say "yes" first.

Once, the math teacher came up with a math problem, which puzzled all the students. I remember reading about this topic in the reference book yesterday. I thought about it and did it. I raised my hand and said the correct answer to this question. The teacher praised me.

Followed by "resentment." Once, my mother asked me to go out and buy some fruit.

I asked my mother, "Mom, can you read a book?" Mom said, "Of course! But you must remember to buy fruit! " "I remember." I replied.

I was absorbed in reading while walking, and it took me a long time to go home. My mother saw that I was empty-handed, and quickly asked me, "Where is the fruit?" "I-I forgot." I touched my head embarrassedly.

My mother was angry and scolded me severely, saying, "Let's see if you can remember it for a long time." Then "love".

I remember when I was in primary school, my mother bought me many books. At first, I didn't like watching it at all. Under the pressure of my mother, I barely read a story.

Who knows, I immediately became interested in books. Since then, I have read books with relish every day. My mother was afraid that my eyesight would decline, so she hid all my books and stipulated that I could only read for one hour every day.

But I didn't listen. When my mother was cooking, I sneaked out a book and ran to the bathroom to read it. After dinner, my mother called me and I said, "It'll be ready in a minute."

After a while, my mother urged me again: "How long will it take?" "Well, I'll be right out." I hid the book under my clothes and put it back after dinner.

Finally, it is "hatred". One day, my mother took me to check my eyesight and found that it was only 4.

5. My mother said to me, "Hey! Look at you. You've lost your eyesight when you read. From now on, you are only allowed to read for half an hour every day. "

I came home and said to myself in front of the book, "it's all your fault, so I can only read it for half an hour." I hate you! " "This is the story of me and the book, with kindness, resentment, affection and hate.