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10 2008 Excellent Composition of Shanghai Senior High School Entrance Examination (Color in My Eyes)

First of all, the color in my eyes

Do you know what the panda's two wishes are? First, I don't want to have dark circles under my eyes forever. Second, I want to have a color photo.

This is a joke I saw recently. I'm afraid the panda's wish is hard to come true. Who made it black and white? But what can we do with what our ancestors gave us? Aren't pandas the only animals that don't love their ancestors' heritage? A five-year-old girl was envious when she saw a foreign girl's blonde hair on TV. She hated her black hair so much that she cut it off with small scissors. Oh, what a silly little girl. Why doesn't she think about it? Foreign girls may wish they had a mass of black hair, because there is no difference between good and bad colors, and each has its own beauty.

I always hear some middle school students say that red is the most vulgar and rustic. I really don't understand why the bride should wear red. Female students who say such things don't have to wear red when they get married, because white wedding dresses have been accepted by most people in China. However, during the Spring Festival, will she hang white or green lanterns at home? If she sees blue flowers hanging on the recruits' chests, can she hold back her laughter? In fact, red is also very beautiful. It is a flame of color and passion. When a child is born, the family always makes red eggs, because the simplicity of eggs is not enough to express the infinite joy of a family when they welcome a new life.

Corresponding to red is white, which can indicate solemnity or purity, and sometimes it also represents sadness and desolation. According to the custom in China, funeral utensils are all white. It is said that people in China pay great attention to taboos, but I wonder why so many poets write snow as a poem that has been told for ages, since white is a symbol of death. Cen Can's "Like spring breeze, night comes, blowing open the petals of ten thousand pear trees" contrasts spring scenery with winter scenery, making people forget the strange cold, feel joy and warmth in their hearts, and have a magnificent artistic conception; Han Yu's "It's too late for snow to spring, so it's too late to fly over the eaves and walk over the courtyard trees" describes how beautiful and spiritual Chun Xue is. The purity of white has made people unable to think about other unhappy things, because white is no longer sadness, but beauty. If life needs beauty, it needs white.

Not only red and white, but also yellow, green, blue and purple are natural colors. Have unique beauty. No one can say that they are not needed, because their beauty is equal. It is because of their perfect combination that the world is colorful.

No one can be left behind.

Authoritative interpretation

The article skillfully uses the title of the film as the title, which is very unique. The beginning is extraordinary, with a joke about a panda wishing as the introduction, which greatly aroused readers' interest in reading. The main part combines some phenomena in life and reasonably extends the analysis, thinking that every color is equal and beautiful. It is with rich colors that the world is colorful and no one can be less. Profound and unique.

High score enlightenment, reasonable extension and profound insight

Second, the color in my eyes.

What is the color of life?

Columbus said: It's blue. I have been with the sea all my life. Blue is inclusive and broad.

Yuan Longping said: It is green. For fifty years, I have been working in Longmu. Green is dedication and hope.

The nightingale said, it's white. I like the white life. White is love and responsibility.

Helen Keller said: Black, I live bravely in the dark. Black is unyielding and hard-working.

Lenin said: It is red. I have been fighting for the liberation of mankind all my life. Red is a battle and an ideal. .

In fact, everyone has their own different views on color, and everyone has their own color. From the moment we were born, we began to add color to our lives.

Nature is colorful, blue sky and white clouds, green mountains and green waters, and life is certainly colorful.

Give you a blank sheet of paper. What color will you paint it?

Give you one life, what color would you choose?

In the endless war, in the fear of the people, in the ruins of suffering, Rabin chose green and peace. He picked up an olive branch and handed it to Arafat. He described his life with strong colors for future generations to recall and admire.

Perhaps, at that time, this rich color was too far away from us; Perhaps, what belongs to us is only a sense of tranquility and serenity: then paint life with a faint color. You think that "if you are not indifferent, you can't be clear, and if you are not quiet, you can't be far away." Just like Mr. Wu Liu, you can also have the comfort of "seeing Nanshan leisurely" Painting life with a faint color can also interpret a beautiful life with a different flavor.

In a colorful world, every color is indispensable. Colorful life also needs colorful life forms.

If you like the sanctity of ice, then paint life white; If you like fire-like enthusiasm, paint your life red; If you like pine-like green, you might as well paint your life green; If you have a soft spot for Daoxiang, you will paint your life golden. ...

Authoritative interpretation

At the beginning of the article, the life of Columbus and others is described in the form of parallelism, which is "wide in meaning and strong in momentum" and reflects rich knowledge accumulation. The author further points out that everyone has his own personality, different pursuits and different choices. You can choose colorful and vigorous, or you can choose quiet and stay away from the hubbub. In short, choose a life that suits your personality and your own development. As the article says, "colorful life also needs colorful life forms." The full text has clear thinking, dialectical reasoning and proper use of whole sentences in language, which greatly enhances the sense of rhythm and rhythmic beauty of the article.

Nine, the color in my eyes

A candidate in Shanghai

Bright red makes people respect, because it is the foundation of life and the spirit handed down from generation to generation by the Chinese nation; Gold is exciting and outstanding, because it is a symbol of farmers' bumper harvest and the highest medal of victory; Green is full of hope, because it is the joy of green and the bright dawn on the edge of despair; Pure white makes people feel very comfortable, because it is an infinite expansion of vision and the simplest composition of life.

Living in a colorful world, our eye mask seems to be stuck by layers of lights, which may make our eyes shine, but can the thin eye mask bear it? Perhaps we have been extremely disgusted with the neon lights in the city, but I feel sad about red and green.

In those years of burning passion, I finally completely succumbed to the powerful power of China Red. For the first time, I realized the sanctity of the Olympic flame, the solemnity and beauty of the five-star red flag and the bright red cohesion of the Chinese nation. Red, the color that makes me awe and proud all my life, is my root, my motivation, my dream and dream. I love you, beautiful red.

Green is always the hope and joy of victory. After the earth was completely shocked, the creatures of the equipment were strangled in the ruins. In those gloomy days, it was thousands of people's soldiers in Qian Qian who brought the hope of life and created the miracle of life. Green is the color I have been waiting for and pursuing all my life. You are my soul, my strength and my direction. I love you, new green.

Life is a blank sheet of paper. Starting with the simplest structure, you can make colorful rainbows, or just the simplest sketches. I, on the other hand, will smear it with fiery red, decorate it with elegant light green, and finally leave a blank to live in. Everyone's vision and choices are biased. In my eyes, red and green are the mainstream of life.

Authoritative interpretation

This article scored 57 points. Red is a symbol of burning passion. This year is the Olympic year, and red is also the main color. The teacher at the scene said that students wrote the most in red. Red is also a symbol of passion, and the world of middle school students is also red. In addition, the colors chosen by the author are red, yellow, green and white, which show the author's colorful world at multiple levels. The biggest feature of this paper is that it is full of philosophy in the description of color, and it has a unique understanding combined with its own experience when describing color. The language of the article is fluent and full of charm.

High scores inspire colorful charm.

Ten, the color in my eyes

A candidate in Shanghai

A person is walking in a noisy street, and the traffic lights are flashing alternately. Both sides of the sidewalk are green. I want to "my road twists and turns through a sheltered valley" and feel the colors of nature. I was in a hurry, but I could get a panoramic view of its beauty and fiasco.

I long for nature to be white. Because pure white gives everything a living space, free to look up and breathe sweet air, I think it's right. They will thank the earth for its care. As the saying goes, "Everything is ready except the east wind". I am willing to create this pure land and bury it, so that they can race against time with tenacious vitality, and the winner is king.

Our life is not like this. Competition is everywhere, but as long as you have a good attitude and fearless courage to face the challenge, victory is around you.

I walked straight ahead, and a pine and cypress stood in the soil. I gently stroked its branches and leaves, and it was still smooth and gorgeous.

Do you remember that its existence has also experienced the baptism of wind, frost, snow and rain? What makes it unshakable, I think is persistence.

This so-called "persistence is victory".

Walking, I saw a small pavilion in front of me, so I decided to have a rest for a while.

What you see is a piece of blue, where there is a winding stream and gurgling water. Then I thought, "Blue gives people an imagination. Those of us with blue imagination dream every minute. One day, we have a pair of wings, soaring in a corner of the sky. Freedom!

White is an emotion, representing my expectation, green is my mood, representing my desire for strength and self-confidence, and hesitant blue tells me the importance of innovation to us.

On the road of life, setbacks are inevitable, ignorant children, please wake up as soon as possible, create a beautiful corner with your hands and turn our city into an endless bright sky!

The color in my eyes, the unique scenery all the way, and the ubiquitous color tell me that I should do it.

Interpretation by Wei

Looking for one's own color in the city and looking for one's own pastoral home in the competitive world is a fresh and beautiful idea, which constitutes the beautiful scenery of the full text while walking. When the marking teacher saw such an article, his eyes lit up and a breeze came to his face. He gave 60 points in the final reconsideration score. In fact, if the author can add some bright colors at the end, maybe this article will get full marks. This is the author's own inner feelings and cannot be forced. This is the author's personal experience, but the author has not found a better place. I believe the world will get better and better.

High marks stimulate fresh and beautiful thinking while walking.

Third, the color in my eyes.

Shanghai examinee

I have deeply rejected darkness, because it is not as gorgeous as light, and it only gives people endless grief and hope.

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Enjoy the darkness alone.

I fell in love with the darkness unconsciously. In my friend's photo album, I left a darkness. I said, take this quiet darkness as me.

I used to admire white persistently, but later I found that white was too pure and real to tolerate any noise, which made people feel false, just like I used to.

Although black does not have the enthusiasm and boldness of red, the freedom and hope of yellow, and the nobility and elegance of purple, it has its own unique beauty: massiness and simplicity.

When the tired sun hurried off work, I closed the curtains alone and enjoyed the peace.

In the opaque world, there is no meaning in my eyes except darkness, and I can't see my existence. But that's not important. The important thing is that my heart is going on and my mind is running at full speed.

It is best to make a pot of black coffee in the dark and smell the aroma of coffee, which can accompany you all night. You can remember the past without closing your eyes.

I can laugh when I see happiness and wantonness; I can cry when I see sadness.

Don't worry that others will spy on your true side. At this time, only darkness is with you, and heaven and earth are your only friends. Take out the most precious things in your heart, share them with the earth and enjoy them with the sky. Look up at the twinkling stars in the night sky. They all embraced their little secrets in the dark!

Darkness, let me learn to enjoy in the dark, and gain strength from enjoyment-tenacity and tenacity.

When the aroma of coffee in the room gradually dissipated, I opened the curtains, and the darkness in the distance quietly sent the little secret of dim light to your ears.

Enjoy the darkness alone, don't think that black is the keynote of sad losers, and darkness is the thoughtful eyes of smart and wise people.

Exclusive darkness, exclusive dark fun, exclusive dark spirit, exclusive dark freshness.

Authoritative interpretation

This is a masterpiece affirmed by many marking teachers. Different from many candidates, the author has found a new way to appreciate the word "darkness". "Enjoying the Darkness Alone" is really different, and the author's understanding is very distinctive: he can enjoy peace alone, keep thinking in the dark, laugh heartily, cry loudly and so on. This unique thinking reflects the maturity and calmness of candidates' thoughts and their distinctive personality, which is of course favored by marking teachers. So this composition was scored 62 points.

The perspective of high score enlightenment is unique and different.