How to write a good Qi Jue poem?

First get familiar with the rhythm. Du Fu’s ancient poems are more neat and readable

The following is my personal rough experience on how to write good poems

1. Cultivate interest and increase Hobbies

Our Chinese nation is a country with a splendid culture spanning thousands of years, and poetry occupies a very important position in the history of Chinese culture. From the Book of Songs to contemporary poetry, our predecessors have accumulated a very rich collection of works, which is the pride of our nation and the spiritual wealth of all mankind. Our motherland is a kingdom of poetry and an ocean of poetry.

Come to eulogize the great era and praise the great mountains and rivers of the motherland.

2. Learn to appreciate and lay a solid foundation

Writing poetry is difficult, and appreciating poetry is equally difficult. Appreciating poetry is the first threshold for writing good poetry. Appreciating and writing poetry can express emotions, communicate emotions, enrich spiritual life, and is conducive to promoting the construction of spiritual civilization.

Appreciating classical poetry is a kind of artistic enjoyment and a kind of cultural accomplishment. How to appreciate a piece of work? First of all, recite it repeatedly and chew it slowly

Four. Observe diligently and accumulate materials

When we write poems and a work, what materials should we choose? It is to write about events and scenes. , or write about people and things. All must be carefully conceived and observed by the author. For example, "The little lotus has just revealed its sharp corners, and a dragonfly has already stood on its head." Judging from these two lines of poetry, the author observed the lotus just out of the water very carefully, which is completely in line with the objective laws of things and has become a famous line through the ages. Another example is "There are three feet of snow on the Pearl River, and the moon is shining with cold light." On the surface, these two poems are quite poetic, but if you think about it carefully, something is wrong. The Pearl River is in Guangdong, southern my country. Where does its snow come from? This is an oversight by the author. It is seriously out of touch with reality, just like our Xingzi opera singing went off the rails, and the result was nothing, it was a joke. In 2000, I responded to two poems and seven unique poems written in a magazine's "Experts on Poetry" column and gave a concise answer. The first is "I want to write poems that open up the artistic conception, but I have been wandering around for a long time in search of a manuscript. It is difficult to come up with beautiful sentences behind closed doors, and all the wise words come from practice." Secondly, "If you are familiar with poetry and books, you will open the iron lock, and you will accumulate less wandering in daily life. Observe carefully and observe the true feelings carefully, and you will have a magical writing foundation."

5. Never tire of revisions and improve them

How to improve the quality of poetry, the ancients said: "Revise a good poem a hundred times." As the saying goes: "Good children are coaxed out, and good poems are made by correcting them." It can be seen that correcting poems is particularly important to the quality of poetry. Every piece of work should be carefully considered first, and then asked to be improved by others. Don’t be afraid of others pointing out shortcomings, and don’t be afraid of being ugly. In this regard, I have had a profound experience. I remember that in the 1990s, I wrote a song called "Qi Jue. Early Summer." "The apricots are unloading the remaining lotus roots and the leaves are green, and the westerly wind is thin and the willows are singing at night. The peach blossoms and flowing water go together with the spring, and listen to the new cicadas announcing the summer." After writing, Feeling good about myself, I later showed it to a person named Jingye Shiyu on the Internet. After not speaking for a long time, I became impatient and asked her how she was doing. She shook her head and said, "The sentences are beautiful and the poetry is full of flavor. Overall, it's not good." Passed”. Then he pointed out the fatal flaw of this poem, because the red apricots bloom in February, the apricots are undressed and the lotus leaves have not yet grown, which is seriously out of touch with real life. This change will make it objective, and the whole poem will come alive. What a master of one word, I will never forget it!

As for the issue of improvement, poetry is an art of language, with profound thoughts, abundant emotions, and novel ideas. It needs to be good at using beautiful, concise, vivid, and vivid language to express, so the author chooses words and sentences. It must be thought over and over again. The story of Jia Dao's "examination" is still a favorite story. It is worth learning from. Du Fu once said: "If words don't surprise people, they will die without stopping." Su Shi said, "Poems and poems can be judged by one word," and Lu Yanrang said, "Reciting one word correctly requires twisting several stems." It can be seen how much the ancients attached great importance to the elaboration of each word, that is, "refining the words". If the words are refined well, each word conveys the spirit, and the realm is fully expressed, the poem will come alive.

6. Complement each other, and the merit is beyond poetry

First of all, we must enrich our lives and learn to be a good person.

After people reach middle age, the era of hard work is basically over, and they have relatively more spare time. Some people spend their time playing cards and drinking alcohol, playing around all day long, and are at a loss. I advise these comrades to write some poems as a kind of adjustment and enjoyment. , a kind of rest and relief, treating various problems encountered in family and society with a calm mind.

Secondly, poetry creation can regulate emotions and cultivate one's moral character. When a satisfactory poem is created, it often makes people feel relaxed and happy, excited, and immersed in the feeling of beauty for a long time. Hippocrates, the father of medicine, once said that "people's emotions are the best doctors for their own diseases." In the process of writing poetry, it is undoubtedly a kind of spiritual enjoyment for us to concentrate, concentrate and forget our worries and sorrows. A friend of mine from Nanchang said something intriguing, saying that every poem he wrote records a story. Every time I read it, the scene at that time emerges in front of my eyes, which makes people sigh with emotion. Those irritable emotions suddenly disappear. The smoke disappears, making people feel calm. This is indeed the case, and I feel the same way.

Writing poetry again can strengthen the brain and body, and prolong life. There has been a saying in our country since ancient times that "life comes from the pen". Why is the memory of older people not as strong as that of young people? The main changes are that the number of brain cells is 15% less than that of young people in their twenties, the weight of the brain is reduced by 8-9%, and the nerve conduction speed is slowed down by about 10%. From a medical point of view, it can prevent aging and prevent "senile dementia". If the disease occurs, the elderly must use their brains more and more frequently to activate the brain cells with potential to replace the brain cells that have lost their function. When we compose poems and write lyrics, we mainly use our brains. At the same time, when writing, muscles and joints can be exercised, thereby making the heart rate even, blood pressure stable, breathing smooth, and the functions of various internal organs also adjusted, making metabolism strong, responsive, and resistant, which can often cure certain diseases. It is beneficial to people's physical and mental health that drugs cannot do.