How to write the composition of "self-introduction" in the third grade of primary school students

Sheruixuan

I have black hair, thick and neat eyebrow pencil and a pair of black eyes.

I like crying. I don't know why I can't stop crying whenever I meet unhappy things. I cry when the teacher criticizes me. If mom and dad talk about me, I will cry, too. Usually, I am their darling. Why have I suddenly become so heartless?

By the way, I can also draw. I drew a picture that the robot doesn't charge. I'll tell you what it looks like when I draw a percentage diagram. Robots on the screen help fruit farmers pick fruits. If the robot has no electricity, it will eat the fruit falling from the tree and convert the sugar in the fruit into electricity. How about my rich imagination! The teacher said that this painting should be sent to Beijing for the competition! I have painted "Gong Jiawa welcomes the Olympics" before and won the first prize of Kaili Children's Painting and Calligraphy Competition!

This is me-a little girl who loves to cry and paint. Come and make friends with me!

[Teacher's comment: The language is vivid and focused. ]

Real me

My name is Tang, and I am 9 years old this year.

I am the tallest girl in our class. My face is oval, my eyes are double eyelids, and the strangest thing is that my double eyelids are only on one corner. My skin is yellow and my figure is not fat.

I'm a little timid. I remember one time my mother was watching a ghost film, and I watched it with her. Not afraid of the front. After a while, I began to get a little scared. Watching TV is so dark that I close my eyes and hug my mother. Then, a gloomy voice sounded. I screamed with fear and squeezed my mother's hand. Watching, I was so scared that I quickly went to bed.

I'm still a little sentimental. Sometimes I watch TV plays with my parents. As long as it is a little touching and there are touching pictures, I will jump on the sofa and cry. I once saw Simba lose his father in The Lion King. I cried my nose as red as a lantern and used up a pack of paper towels!

I have a wide range of hobbies, such as singing, dancing, skipping and drawing.

You see, this is me, this is the real me, a timid and sentimental little girl.

[Teacher's comment: I caught my two characteristics of timidity and sentimentality, and wrote them in detail. The others were written slightly and the details were appropriate. ]

I

Wu

I'm a girl and I'm 9 years old. My skin is black, and my mother says my skin is like a black pearl.

People will definitely notice my black hair when they see me. Black hair and short hair. I don't like short hair at all. There is another story to tell.

My hair used to be long. One day, my father said, "Hair is too long, it will absorb nutrition." This is why you will never grow tall. Let's cut your hair! "I agreed.

The lady in the barber shop began to cut her hair. Three times five divided by two, she cut off her long hair. When I opened my eyes, I found that I had become a boy. It turns out that the lady in the barber shop cut a man's head for me. I cried sadly. Cut my hair. Dad took me home. But I was laughed at by my sister. I was laughed at by my classmates when I came to school.

I envy girls with long hair, so I decided to stay again.

This is me, with short hair.

[Teacher's comment: Write by grasping the characteristics of your short hair, and describe the one-sided story in detail with outstanding features.

this is me

My name is Gu Tingting. I am a lively and lovely little girl.

I have a face of Zhang Yuanyuan, and my eyes are round and bright. The teacher said that my eyes are very beautiful. Eyelashes are long and warped, like dolls. There are two dimples on my face. As long as you talk, you will see two round dimples. Round face, round eyes, round dimples, this is the beautiful me.

My shortcoming is that I don't want to hand in my homework when it is due, and I should be in a hurry if I shouldn't. Let's talk about today's Chinese homework. I've been playing while the team leader is collecting homework, and I don't want to take my homework out of my schoolbag. The team leader called my name and I had a good time! I turned my head and said, "Wait a minute." The group leader took other students' homework to the teacher and wrote down my name. I was anxious at this moment, so I quickly rummaged through my schoolbag. This is procrastination. I know this is a bad problem, but I can't get rid of it. Hey, change it slowly!

My hobbies are singing, dancing, painting and writing. People say I sing like a Korean. I am not a very good dancer, but I still like dancing. Every time I finish dancing, everyone gives me warm applause. I know everyone is encouraging me.

Please remember me-the lovely girl Gu Tingting.

[Teacher's comment: The article focuses on its own appearance characteristics and shortcomings, and the details are appropriate. Can grasp their own appearance characteristics to write, learn to use summative language. ]

Real me

Ronanxin

I am a girl in Class Two, Grade Three-Luo Nanxin.

I was once a girl with long hair. Hair braided into two braids, tied with beautiful flowers, flying up and down around the shoulders like butterflies. But one day it was cut off by the aunt of the barber shop with a click of scissors. That's why I was sad for a long time.

I have a big shortcoming, which is forgetfulness. I almost left my schoolbag at school once after school.

Despite my shortcomings, I still have many hobbies! For example, playing badminton, drawing, skipping rope, dancing, doing handicrafts, skating and so on.

Guess what my personality is like, hehe, you know, I am very timid. Let me give you an example. Once, I was walking on the road. I'm looking at small toys sold by the roadside. Suddenly there was a "wow" and someone gave me a push. I jumped with fear. It turned out that my good friend She Ruixuan greeted me! She looked at me in horror and bent down with laughter.

Anyway, this is the real me.

[Teacher's comment: Grasp the characteristics of short hair and timid personality, pay attention to detail description and give examples. This is the way of writing. ]

self-introduction

Don

I'm eight and a half years old. My name is Tang.

I am short, but I am not angry. Because people always grow taller! My hair is too curly, I can't comb it straight. Some students gave me an ugly nickname. So I was sad for a long time.

I also have shortcomings, that is, carelessness. I remember once my mother asked me to take a Chinese test. I took the test paper, looked at it and said, "It's so easy! What the teacher said in class. " I picked up the brush and started the examination paper. It was finished without any effort. I handed the paper to my mother confidently and said confidently, "Mom, I'm sure I can get a hundred points." Mom said, "Aren't you going to check?" "No, that's right." Mom said, "Look at you, you can't get 90 points." When my mother finished correcting the paper, I was dumbfounded at once. Only 85 points. It turned out that I didn't read the topic carefully, and I wrote all the antonyms as synonyms, which made a lot of mistakes. I was so careless.

I don't have many hobbies, such as painting, reading and defending plasticine. My favorite thing is reading, especially as a document. I finished reading a thick book in two and a half weeks.

Do you know what kind of person I am after listening to my self-introduction?

[Teacher's comment: Give an example to illustrate your carelessness and highlight the key points. ]