Sanxia Chinese Language Garden 2 composition (People's Education Press Edition) 250~400 words, urgent~

Example 1

An old photo

Xinhai Primary School in Taiping District

Wang Xiukun

When it comes to old photos, Many people recall happy moments from their childhood. However, the old photo I am going to show you today will remind you of the inhumane war 60 years ago.

On August 28, 1937, Japanese invaders bombed the Shanghai Railway Station. This photo was taken by a reporter at the time.

On this day, Shanghai South Railway Station was as usual, with a constant flow of people. At this moment, the sound of "Weng Weng" enemy planes suddenly came from the sky. Before people could wake up, " "Boom, boom!" There were several loud noises. Suddenly, smoke filled the train station and half of the building collapsed. "The Japanese plane is coming," "Run, run," "Dad, mom..." The cries and shouts suddenly became one, and people were panicked and at a loss. But the enemy's bombing continued, the overpass collapsed, and the train station turned into ruins. People stopped flowing, and corpses fell into a pool of blood. The South Station, which was noisy just now, was now deathly silent, except for a few low moans that could be heard occasionally.

"Mom, are you there." "Dad, I'm afraid..." In this moment of silence, a little boy's cry suddenly came. He was sitting in the middle of the tracks, covered in blood, shouting with his mouth open. He looked at his parents who were covered in blood in front of him. He didn't know what happened. He didn't know why his parents were motionless. He didn't know that he would become an orphan from now on. He didn't know how to survive in the future...

Aren’t the ruins in front of us and the orphans in front of us the heinous crimes left by Japan’s war of aggression against China? Do the lonely children prove that your "East Asian prosperity" in China is a lie?

This old photo makes it impossible for us to erase the shock in the hearts of every Chinese. The heinous crimes of Japan’s invasion of China are still vivid in our minds.

Brief comment: The article starts with old photos and leads to the heinous crime of the Japanese invasion of China. The author captures the description of the little boy's appearance through careful observation. The words are full of hatred for the Japanese army, which highlights the center and reflects the author's thoughts and feelings.

Example 2

Children in the ruins

Xinhai Primary School in Taiping District

Xun Hongcui

This photo is On August 28, 1937, the Japanese invaders bombed the Shanghai South Railway Station in my country. Crying babies and collapsed houses make us feel like we have returned to the humiliating era when our Chinese nation was bullied.

It is a sunny morning, when students should go to school, workers go to work, and the elderly and children take a nap and play in front of and behind the house. However, due to the indiscriminate bombing by the Japanese army, many schools and factories in Shanghai have been bombed, and people can no longer go to work and school normally.

At this time, Shanghai Railway Station, because the North Station had become a war zone, traffic was cut off, and the South Station became the only exit for traffic, so the Shanghai South Railway Station was overcrowded. Suddenly there was the roar of airplanes in the air, and Japanese enemy planes flew in and dropped a large number of bombs. The Shanghai Railway Station turned into ruins in an instant. The station, overpass platform and railway tracks were blown to pieces. There were countless casualties among the people in the station, and the ground was covered with corpses. In the firelight, parents anxiously called for their children, and the children cried out looking for their relatives. The injured people groaned in pain, and the tragic cries of young children in the ruins were even more heartbreaking. A few minutes ago, this baby might have been acting coquettishly in his mother's warm embrace, playing with toys that his father had made for him. A few minutes later, the invaders' bombs destroyed everything beautiful in an instant. The moment the enemy plane dropped the bomb, the child's mother tried to use her body to shield the child from the flying rubble and shrapnel. The child's mother was killed by the bomb. The child who was lucky enough to survive could no longer recognize his mother, who was bloody and bloody, and he cried loudly. But there was no mother's kind smiling face in front of him, and there was no father's usual strong hands to hold him.

The child's immature cry seemed to be asking the invaders: Why are you so cruel to take away the lives of my parents and my happy childhood? I am so young, how will I live in the future!

Yes, it is the war that turned the originally bustling streets into ruins, it was the war that destroyed people's originally happy homes, and it was the war that shattered the children's childhood dreams. I hope that such historical tragedies will never happen again, so that children all over the world can have a happy and beautiful childhood, and that the world will always be filled with happiness and laughter.

Brief comment: The article introduces readers into the war-torn era through the description of the picture content. The article focuses on describing the tragic scene at Shanghai South Railway Station after the bombing by enemy planes. It fully expresses the theme of advocating peace and opposing war. The language is simple and expresses true feelings.

Example 3

Keep history in mind and never forget the national humiliation

Xinhai Primary School in Taiping District

Wang Xiukun

1937 August On March 28, as usual at Shanghai South Railway Station, many passengers were waiting for the train in the waiting room. At this time, the Japanese invaders dropped countless bombs on the station. Suddenly, the train station became a wasteland, the overpass was broken, the rails were twisted, dilapidated houses, bricks and tiles on the ground were in a mess. At this time, the cry of a little boy came. His parents and relatives were all killed by the bomb with a "bang". Now that he has become an orphan, his future destiny and life are unimaginable. Maybe in those war-torn times, no one would care about him, and he would live on the streets, even on the verge of death, without any chance to avenge his dead parents. Maybe he will meet a kind person, take him home, and raise him to grow up. No matter what his life is like, for him, he is an innocent victim, and the entire Chinese people are innocent victims.

The Japanese invaders burned, killed, looted and committed all kinds of evil, killing more than 35 million of our compatriots. The crimes committed by the Japanese invaders are countless and heinous, and there are countless scenes like this.

We can never forget the inhumane massacre by the Japanese invaders and the backbone of our nation who stood up to fight in the massacre.

A female writer said it well: "Forgetting the Holocaust is the second Holocaust."

Lenin warned us: "Forgetting the past means betraying the verdict."

Let us ring the warning bell louder and louder, let the bell always arouse our national spirit, inspire young people to grow into a new generation that realizes the great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation, and let the bell float across the ocean Crossing the sea, deafening and deafening, we learn from history and call for peace. Evil will be defeated and justice will prevail. The Chinese people, the people of Asia and the people of the world will never allow the tragedy of being invaded and killed to happen again!

Brief comment: Through a simple description of the photo, it elicits thoughts about the photo and expresses emotion. The language is sharp and thought-provoking, leaving people thinking!

Example 4

A painful lesson

Xun Hongcui

Xinhai Primary School in Taiping District

This is a photo shoot Photo taken in 1937. On this day, the Japanese invaders dropped a large number of bombs at the Shanghai South Railway Station. In an instant, the bustling Shanghai Railway Station turned into ruins. The child in the picture is crying loudly due to severe pain and fear. His relatives may have lost their precious lives to the enemy's evil bombs. The Shanghai Railway Station is full of horrific scenes. The ruins, blown-up railway tracks, collapsed overpasses, and helpless orphans all tell the story of the brutality of the invaders.

Seeing this picture will make every person with conscience feel heartache. What has war brought to mankind? A large number of hungry refugees, children who are out of school, collapsed houses, children who have lost their parents, homeless poor people, and disabled bodies.

What will the life of the child in the picture be like in the future? Perhaps because of the war, this baby who had just come into the world would die prematurely. He had not had time to see many beautiful things in this world, and left this world in a hurry with fear and helplessness. If he is lucky, he may be adopted by a kind person, but the pain of losing a loved one will be an indelible pain deep in the heart of the child.

It is also possible that his parents were only injured by the bomb. In the future life, they would drag their disabled bodies and lead this poor child along the street to beg. On the child’s outstretched begging arm, shrapnel scratches could be vaguely seen. scar.

Yes, this is a scene of humiliation for the Chinese nation. It was precisely because our national strength was not strong enough at that time that the invaders dared to be so arrogant on our land. When young people are strong, China is strong. Yes, the strength of the motherland must be built by the hard-working hands of our young generation. Never let such a historical tragedy happen again.

Brief comment: The article takes the child crying loudly due to severe pain and fright in the picture as the main description object, and makes various assumptions about the impact that the war may have on the child's future destiny. Through such assumptions, we will illustrate the disasters that war brings to mankind. He denounced the brutality of the invaders and expressed his best wishes for eternal peace in the world.

Knowledge link

Writing about people through their language

Human language is roughly divided into two forms: monologue and dialogue. In daily life, people cannot exchange information, exchange feelings, or express ideas without language, so writing about people cannot be separated from language description. Language description expresses the character's inner world through the description of the character's speech content and tone of voice, so that readers can understand the character's thoughts, feelings and personality characteristics.

When describing the character’s language, you should pay attention to the following points:

(1) The language description must be accurate and consistent with the character’s age, identity, occupation, and education level.

(2) The language description must be able to reflect the character’s ideological quality, personality characteristics and emotions.

"Speech is the voice of the heart", the character's language can help readers understand the character's inner world and understand the character's ideological quality.

(3) The language should be concise.

In order to fully reflect the character's thoughts and personality, some people do not hesitate to spend a lot of pen and ink describing the character's language. The result is counterproductive and makes readers bored.

In fact, language description should not be recorded in detail or sloppy, but should focus on selecting those characters' language that best reflects the character's ideological quality and personality characteristics.

(4) Language description should pay attention to the occasion.

Occasion is an external factor that affects the character’s language expression. The same sentence can be said on certain occasions, but cannot be said on other occasions. For example, when discussing the dangers of a certain disease, it cannot be said in front of the public. face of people suffering from this disease. Another example is that jokes also depend on the occasion. In some very serious occasions, such as memorial services, jokes cannot be told. We must take this into full consideration when describing language.

(5) When describing the character's language, it can be accompanied by expression description, psychological description, and action description, so as to make the character's personality more vivid and vivid, and the character's image more contagious.