Composition of the second grade of primary school

In the usual study, work and life, many people have had the experience of writing compositions and are familiar with them. Writing is a narrative method to express a theme through words. So how to write a general composition? The following are six compositions I carefully arranged for the second grade of primary school. Welcome everyone to refer to it, I hope I can help you.

1 Xiaoguang used to have the best eyesight in the class. He likes reading very much, but his reading posture is wrong. You see, he reads comic books on his way to and from school, jokes when he eats, and even bedtime story books when he sleeps. Time passed day by day. One day, the school gave students a physical examination. When Xiaoguang checked his eyesight, the largest letters could still be seen. He couldn't see clearly when he was young, so he could only guess. Xiaoguang changed from the best eyesight in the class to the worst eyesight, and his eyesight declined.

This incident tells us that we should take good care of our eyesight, have a correct posture when reading, and we should not walk, eat or read in bed, otherwise, even the best eyesight will deteriorate like Xiaoguang.

The annual New Year's Eve blessing party of Shenzhen Metropolitan Channel is about to begin. It's a great honor to be chosen as a blessing doll in Hongfa Temple by TV station. My friend and I went to Huxian Hongfa Temple by bus. On the way there, it was getting dark. Our bus soon arrived at Hongfa Temple. The teacher shouted ...

The annual New Year's Eve blessing party of Shenzhen Metropolitan Channel is about to begin.

It's a great honor to be chosen as a blessing doll in Hongfa Temple by TV station. My friend and I went to Huxian Hongfa Temple by bus. On the way there, it was getting dark.

Our bus soon arrived at Hongfa Temple. The teacher shouted, "Have a good meal!" My friends and I ran to the fast-paced dining hall, only to find that the table was full of delicious blessing meals.

There are shredded potatoes, fungus and Chinese cabbage Huimian Noodles strips in our lunch box. Although they are all vegetarian dishes, I like them very much. Because today I finally tasted vegetarian food! Also, because I heard that eating a blessing meal will bring you blessings!

Our blessing party doesn't officially start until 0: 00. My friends and I played games in the waiting area and recited the three-character sutra. I was very excited.

The blessing party is about to start. We are going to enter the venue, but there are too many people in the bell tower at the scene of the blessing meeting to describe.

I was dumbfounded when I first entered the arena! Because the lights there are really beautiful! Colorful lights are like magical starlight sprinkled by fairies, and little starlight illuminates the whole night sky and shines on our faces. We felt warm at once.

How time flies! The Spring Festival is coming in a blink of an eye. In order to welcome the New Year, Yin Shun, a monk from Hongfa Temple, personally came to ring the bell to pray, only to see their hands touching the big clock. The big clock immediately made a pleasant sound. "Knock ... knock ..." Knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock "

At this time, the host, Uncle Dong Chao, said, "Let's welcome the New Year's wish balloon!" My friend and I released the balloon in our hands together. Sparkling balloons filled the charming starry sky.

At this point, I quietly made a wish in my heart, but I won't tell you!

We went on stage again and sang loudly, "You inspired me."

The New Year's Day blessing party ended with our songs.

Happy new year to you all!

One windy afternoon, three children came home from school. The wind messed up their hair and it was difficult to walk.

At this time, they suddenly found a small tree on the side of the road, which was staggered and crooked by the wind and was about to break. The swaying little tree seems to say to them, "Come and help me!" " Come and help me! "The children were worried and decided to take risks to save the young tree. They worked together in Qi Xin, and the two children found a wooden stick and tied it to the trunk of the young tree with a rope to support the young tree and prevent it from being blown down again. Another child made a "care for trees" sign to remind everyone to protect young trees. After a while, they will be finished.

The children looked at the vibrant young trees, smiled happily and went home happily.

You read widely and accumulated a lot of words. Therefore, when describing the movements and expressions of characters, we can express them vividly with appropriate words. The teacher is glad to have a student like you. As long as you keep working hard, your dream as a writer will come true.

2. The article is narrated in children's language, which is natural and simple, like a clear spring. The finish line plays the role of finishing touch.

3. The implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing. The beginning of the article is fascinating, attracting readers ... the combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and detailed.

4, it is really "writing like a god." It seems that you must have read a lot of literary works. The content is so rich that it shows your literary skills. Only by adjusting the materials in a certain logical order will this article be more exciting.

5. The article ends with …, which is concise and full of charm.

6. This article takes … as a clue, which is coherent, smooth and natural. At the same time, through the comparison of specific cases before and after, it criticizes …, and the language of the article is vivid and rich, and it is readable.

7. There are many wonderful sentences in the full text, which add some literary interest to the article.

8. The author observes … carefully, describes it delicately, and has vivid language and novel expression. The full-text language is concise and the structure is natural ... The article is rigorous in structure and echoes from beginning to end.

9. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can grasp the main features of things, and the length is short and pithy, which is worth reading.

10, from this little diary, I can see that you are a careful student, who can capture a little thing in daily life in detail and write your inner feelings in plain language. Short and pithy, plain language can arouse the soul.

1 1. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the ideological quality of the characters is set off. The article is reasonable in conception, natural and vivid in narration, compact in structure, coherent in connection with nature and prominent in center.

12, Xu Pengfei, today, the teacher was so nervous and excited when enjoying your excellent works. She seems to be in fierce competition. You are very patriotic. Otherwise, how can you wake up from a sweet sleep at exactly 4 am to watch this live broadcast? After careful observation, you clearly showed the exciting scene in the text.

13, this article is full of passion. Between the lines, you can feel the little author's love for ….

14, the language is concise, the center is clear, the idea is reasonable, and the writing level is clear.

15. Writing is like being a man. From your life experience, you can see that you are an enterprising young man. You have your own unique insights and profound understanding of things, which is really commendable.

16, this article has chosen a brand-new angle, and let your thoughts run freely here, which is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that when dealing with the world, there are always some rules that we need to grasp, so that your thoughts will be more profound and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".

17, passionate, describing ..., concise at the beginning, focused, detailed and specific.

18, you are getting better and better! Your composition really opened my eyes. Your mother is more beautiful. She is passionate about patients, meticulous and extremely responsible. This spirit is worth learning! I am also proud that you have such a good mother!

19, with reasonable imagination and meaningful philosophy ... The writing is fluent and concise, which gives full play to one's imagination. This is a good article ... The article is elegant, fluent and coherent, especially the humor of the characters' language, plus the use of some subtle words, which invisibly adds a lot of interest to the article.

20. Abstract: The writing method of composition evaluation should generally make a pertinent evaluation from the center, material selection, structure, expression, language and writing style of students' works.

2 1. After reading your travel composition, I feel as if I were there. You have written a two-story giraffe vividly, and the naive giant panda, clever little monkey and cunning fox are vividly on the paper. Reading your article is my greatest enjoyment. Keep working hard, your article is our favorite.

22. The language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life, and it makes people feel cordial to read.

23. After reading your article, it seems that a stream flows in front of my eyes, pure and lovely. I hope you can keep this style of writing and express rich connotations in pure language.

With concrete examples, vivid and beautiful language and novel and unique writing style, this paper expresses sincere praise for the beautiful mind.

This article may not be particularly attractive in the storyline, but it is still a successful work. On the one hand, it depicts the characters well, and on the other hand, the language is vivid and rich, full of life breath, which plays a very good role in expressing ideas.

It can be said that your article is full of true feelings. People, failure is inevitable, and it is even more valuable to have the courage to face it. I believe it is gold, and there will always be flashes. I hope you can adjust your mind as soon as possible, and you will find that the sky is bluer.

27. Such beautiful handwriting and clear and neat structure can not help but give people a refreshing feeling. This teacher really should learn from you. Let's promote each other in the future Chinese study, shall we?

28. The corner of the campus you wrote is really beautiful. Flowers, grass, trees and corridors all contain unparalleled love. You are a person who can observe life. Teachers and classmates appreciate you very much!

29, make full use of dynamic and static writing, supplemented by metaphor, personification and other techniques, through vivid language description, so that readers seem to be in a dream. The praise of the characters at the end is sincere and touching.

30. The article is novel at the beginning, which has the effect of pulling one hair and moving the whole body, so that readers will have an impression on the characters as soon as they meet. The article is well organized and forms a complete image.

Today, I will tell you a secret: I have a "double-faced" father. Do you want to know why he is two-faced? Listen to me in detail

My father is very humorous, and I clearly remember what happened not long ago. At noon that day, I came home from school and opened the door. Then I saw my father watching TV intently. He found me back, immediately turned off the TV and said to me with a wry smile, "Son, I left you your favorite candy!" " "After listening to my father's words, I muttered: Really? Great! Wait a minute, usually dad can't be so kind. Dad saw me with a grain of salt. He rolled his eyes and walked around the room. Then he strolled out and winked at me and said, "If you don't believe me, I'll eat a piece of candy first. Look carefully! " Say that finish, dad picked up a piece of candy and put it in his mouth. He immediately beamed at me and shouted, "Wow! This candy is too sweet! Delicious! "As soon as I heard this, I happily took another piece of candy from my father. I peeled off the candy paper and bit it. Bang, my tongue is numb, so spit out the sugar in my mouth quickly. When I realized that I had been cheated, I flew into a rage and said to my runaway father, "You damn father, I must catch you!" " "Dad ran into the room and made faces at me. I'm really in distress situation.

Dad's funny personality makes our family full of joy every day. But my father has a character that I don't like very much-strictness. If my handwriting is not good, my father will tear up my homework and let me rewrite it. Sometimes he will let me write it until eleven o'clock in the evening. I didn't do well in the exam, so I ate "fried meat with bamboo shoots"

This is my dad, a humorous and strict two-faced dad! I wish dad could be gentle sometimes, so much the better!

In the morning, as soon as I opened my eyes, I got up and went to the window to look out. It's raining. I thought I couldn't go for an autumn outing today. I came to my desk, picked up my book and began to read. At this moment, my father's cell phone rang. It turned out that the teacher sent a text message saying that the autumn outing would go as usual.

I happily went back to my desk and began to do morning reading. Ten minutes later, grandpa took me to school, and my classmates and I waited in the classroom. After a while, the bus came and we all ran up. After we sat down, the car drove away.

A few minutes later, the bus stopped and the teacher said, "Here we are, let's get off!" " "We all ran off to have a look, ah! There are many oranges on the orange tree all over the mountain. The students came to the museum in twos and threes. We looked around and stood at the entrance. While eating, we talked sentence by sentence. Soon, we were called to get on the bus and we went home happily.