How to write a good skeleton of composition

1. Write a composition about trees, and write about the branches, stems, values or uses of hawthorn.

"Sugar-coated haws-"Every time we hear this kind of hawking, we greedy kittens will gather together in unison. Do you know what candied haws are made of? Let me tell you-hawthorn. Tall hawthorn trees grow everywhere in the hillside, river valley and courtyard of our hometown. Hawthorn tree has strong vitality, which can not only grow in wet places, but also resist drought. Hawthorn trees germinate slowly and bloom late. In spring, flowers bloom and fall, and the branches sway. When I came to a hawthorn forest, there was a sweet taste mixed with the fragrance of earth. Soon, the branches were covered with green hawthorn fruits. At this time, hawthorn grows very fast, from green to red, and then from red to purple. As the color changes, its taste changes, from sour to sweet and sour. Mature hawthorn has good color and fragrance, and is deeply loved by people. Sour taste is sweet. A string of purple hawthorn hangs on the branches like a small red light. At this time, we greedy kittens couldn't bear it any longer. We found a long bamboo pole and walked under the hawthorn tree. A pole was knocked down, and hawthorn fell like a broken bead, hitting our heads and bodies. Soon, two bags were filled. After removing the core, it is processed into candied haws, or sold to the provincial capital for canning. The processing plants transported to the provincial capital can make hawthorn slices, hawthorn cakes and hawthorn cakes, all of which are popular snacks. At the same time, hawthorn is also one of the traditional Chinese medicines. It can be made into hawthorn cake for children to eat, and it can strengthen the spleen and promote digestion. In recent years, many countries have studied the medicinal functions of hawthorn. It is believed that hawthorn has the functions of lowering blood pressure, reducing blood fat, strengthening heart and inhibiting bacteria. Various preparations made of hawthorn at home and abroad have achieved remarkable results in treating hypertension, senile heart weakness, coronary heart disease and hyperlipidemia. It seems that hawthorn is a veritable "cash cow" in Northeast China! Red hawthorn not only brought economic income to the villagers, but also created a better life. It is also a rich material wealth. At the same time, it is also a tribute to dedication, because it does not need fertile soil, abundant rain, fear of drought and waterlogging, and does not require people to pay much sweat. No matter how difficult the conditions are, it grows silently and makes selfless contributions.

2. Write a composition about plants and write the characteristics of branches, leaves, flowers and fruits. My favorite fruit is fruit, including yellow banana, red apple, purple grape, orange orange, light yellow cantaloupe ... among all the fruits, I like apple best.

Apples and pears belong to the same category, and there are about 7500 varieties in the world. They are sweet, sour and nutritious, and are one of the fruits suitable for all ages. There are many kinds of apples, including Red Fuji, Huang Xiangjiao, Red Banana, Guoguang and Marshal Huang ... It is said that there are tens of thousands of varieties all over the world.

Different species have different colors, most of which are red, yellow and light green with red stripes; There are also different shapes, such as round, round prism, egg shape and so on. Apples can be eaten directly together, or can be made into canned food, applesauce and apple salad. I like to eat them piece by piece, because you can enjoy the sweet taste while doing other things, which makes people taste a refreshing feeling.

Look carefully when buying apples. Fresh apples should be firm, crisp and beautiful in color. Mature apples have certain fragrance, compact texture and easy storage; Immature apples have bad color and no fragrance, and may shrink after storage; Overripe apples droop easily when pressed lightly on the surface. Apples are rich in nutrition. Rich in carbohydrates, vitamins A, C and E, protein, fat, citric acid and trace elements such as phosphorus, calcium, zinc and sodium.

Apples are flat in nature, and have the effects of nourishing the heart and moistening the lungs, promoting fluid production and detoxifying, benefiting qi and regulating the stomach, sobering up and calming the liver. If you are hungry now, eating an apple is no good, because malic acid and citric acid in apples can improve gastric secretion and promote digestion.

Chewing slowly when eating apples is not only conducive to digestion, but also conducive to reducing human diseases. How's it going? My mouth is watering. Apples are so good, don't you want to eat them? ———————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— Plum petals are small, and the branches are thin and strong, light pink.

This is a flower that blooms proudly in winter. This is a flower that looks whiter in the snow. It is a flower that cannot be crushed by snowflakes. Yes, it is plum blossom.

Flowers standing proudly in the winter snow. May, spring and summer seasons.

The sun is shining and colorful. Just after the defeat of Jasminum nudiflorum and Magnolia grandiflora, small buds, strings of pink peach blossoms and lush green grass appeared in the Chinese rose. All this is just as people say, yes, I agree, spring is indeed the season when everything recovers.

She gives people the feeling of light green, faint green, endless green, and the green in summer is deeper, that is green, green is deeper. However, winter, the most lifeless season of the four seasons, gives people the feeling that it is a vast expanse of whiteness, and the snow is overwhelming and sweeping, which can only add a little pine and cypress to this withered winter, and at this time it is covered with thick snow.

Those flowers in summer are just dead branches and rotten leaves at this time. There is no longer the charm, wealth and air of the past, and their only twigs are too tired to breathe under the weight of snow, so they can only wait for death sadly.

At this time, in the snow all over the sky, in the lament of everything, plum blossoms appeared and stood proudly in the snow. Her tall and thin branches are not affected by the snow at all.

Snow proud first frost. In full bloom in the snow, full of pride, standing upright, standing upright, regardless of the wind and snow blowing ... this is why I love plum blossoms, strong and unyielding.

Although it is too cold to go out in winter, plum blossoms bloom in the snow. The spirit symbolized by this small flower is far more noble than the colorful roses, Chinese rose and peony in that summer. Look at that plum blossom. Seemingly pure white snow, only a pool of stains is left after the snow melts, which is flashy. And plum blossom, she is really pure white, sometimes with a little pink, she left a fragrance that seems to be absent.

Her simplicity and elegance are beyond the reach of ordinary people. Look at the plum blossoms standing proudly and blooming in the snow. Don't you feel her beauty at all? Didn't you suddenly see a plum blossom standing in front of you in the vast snow, and you wouldn't be infected by her indomitable spirit of not being afraid of cold and frost? Have you ever thought that she is somewhat similar to the indomitable spirit of the Red Army soldiers? Don't you think this notice covered with heavy snow really symbolizes our revolutionary soldiers, their indomitable spirit, their courage to fight and their will quality? The fate of white chrysanthemums got up at five in the morning and went for a walk by the river.

The smell in the morning is so beautiful that I like to take a quiet walk. At this time, my mind is free.

I just look at the calm river with my eyes full, and occasionally look down at the pebbles under my feet. It was quiet all around, so I sat on the shore, thinking like wings, flying, flying, roaming ... feeling a little numb, I got up and walked on.

Suddenly I saw a small flower cluster, which was the world of white chrysanthemums. I looked at them in surprise, petite bodies and strange faces.

I broke one, so I went to Huahai again. There is one in the middle, the tallest and most gorgeous. I held out my hand, but it suddenly occurred to me that I should not choose her. She reminds me of something, which makes me sad.

I don't know when, but a young man passed by here. He looked at the flowers and uprooted the tallest and most beautiful white chrysanthemums without hesitation. Played on the palm of your hand for a while and then left.

I ran to pick up white chrysanthemums. She was spoiled and badly rubbed.

Petals are broken, stamens are scattered and roots are broken. I held her in the palm of my hand, gently smoothed her petals bit by bit, and then slowly moved her disc to make them close together.

I held her for a long time. Why? Why did she become like this? This reminds me of her charm and beauty.

3. How to write abbreviations in the composition of Unit 5, Volume 2, Grade 5 Chinese is simple and does not damage the theme.

Be faithful to the framework of the original text. In other words, the original text is narrative and has a story, and the basic framework of the original story should be maintained.

However, the original must be shortened. After shrinking, the article still has a beginning and an end, with distinct levels and clear organization.

The first is to leave the trunk and go to the branches and leaves. We often compare an article to a big tree.

A big tree has stems, branches and leaves. When the tree grows normally, we can see that its trunk and crown become a whole, occupying a lot of space.

Let's look at the tree again when the gardener prunes and cuts leaves for the tree as needed. It is obviously much smaller, but the tree is still full of features, including trunk and branches and leaves. Abbreviations are like pruning trees and cutting off leaves.

If we leave the trunk and thick branches of the article and remove other parts, the article will be shorter. The second is to leave the main sentence and give an example.

In order to prove some points, some articles often cite many examples to illustrate. When you abbreviate, you should leave the main sentence and reduce the example sentences, and the article will naturally become shorter.

4. Write a composition about grapefruit trees. Write about the scenery of my hometown with 500 words of branches and leaves. The most striking thing is the grapefruit tree in front of grandma's house. In spring, summer, autumn and winter, there is always laughter coming into your ears.

The girl in spring came with warmth in the breeze. She spread her arms, waved her slender hands, sprinkled green on the earth and put flowers in the branches. The warm rain is like a string of pearls and a whip of a spring girl, whipping the shadow of winter and driving away the chilly chill.

The grapefruit tree seems to be awake, too. It draws out new green and feels refreshing. When the wind blows, the little new life flashing among the green leaves is even more dazzling. Grapefruit trees in spring are pleasant green. In May and June, the pomelo trees blossomed, and the small yellow flowers bloomed with their own brilliance, decorating the pomelo trees, adding a bit of aestheticism to the originally barren trees. Even if it is small, it makes people feel beautiful and simple.

A gust of wind blew, small flowers flew all over the ground, and a fragrance wrapped around my nose immediately intoxicated people in this fragrant world. At this time, tear off some ivy vines, make a swing, hang it on the grapefruit tree and sit on it, not to mention how poetic it is! Whenever this flower is in full bloom, sit on it and let the breeze blow. Yellow and white flowers will jump up and "ballet" and fall on the body and the ground.

How happy I am! In midsummer, everyone is still sitting in pear chairs eating melon seeds. Chatting and joking.

The grapefruit tree in summer is a lively and youthful girl. In autumn, the golden "face" hangs on the treetops like a small lantern, as if it were jingled by the wind.

When you are tired of playing and thirsty, call your parents, then take a big laundry basket and a long bamboo pole, throw it while playing, and pick it up and laugh. Countless pomelos are shot down every time. If you can't finish it, give it away. You know, our grapefruit is the best! That tastes much better than soda! There is sweetness in acid, and there is acid in sweetness. Bite down, sweet and refreshing juice moistens the heart, making people want to eat! In winter, when the number of words is the cutest, the snowflakes all over the sky fall one after another, like naughty snow children, putting on new white clothes for grapefruit trees. My sister and I had a snowball fight and made a snowman there, let alone how happy we were! It seems that the grapefruit tree is also grinning! Tired, I sat under the grapefruit tree and rested against it, immersed in the snow-white world.

The pomelo trees in my hometown constitute a beautiful and unique landscape, which is full of colorful colors in spring, summer, autumn and winter. I love the pomelo trees in my hometown.

5. The composition fragment describing the branches describes the plant fragment-the phoenix tree pulls out new teeth in spring.

That bud is so fragrant, so fresh and so lovely. It silently conveys the message of spring to us. Under the nourishment of the sweet spring rain, the buds gradually grow into green leaves, as green as flying green. A spring breeze blows, and the small leaves all over the tree move, which is very beautiful.

At this time, the plane tree wore a beautiful green crown. In summer, the green leaves on the trees will grow into green leaves bigger than the palms of adults. Dense branches and leaves are like a giant umbrella, which covers the scorching sun and brings a cool environment.

We played under the tree and didn't feel the heat of summer at all. When autumn comes, the yellow-green leaves turn golden. After several autumn rains, the leaves were washed brightly by the rain.

A gust of autumn wind blew, and the leaves fell one after another, like "little paratroopers". People step on it and click.

It can be said that the autumn wind sweeps away the fallen leaves, and the uncles and aunts of sanitation are very busy. In winter, the leaves of the tree are all gone. Before long, the buttonwood tree becomes a bare branch, but it still stands in the cold wind.

After a winter snow, the branches were covered with a thick layer of white snowflakes, which seemed to put winter clothes on the trees. At this time, the plane tree began to brew the beauty of spring and was ready to give it to people again.

6. Peach blossom composition, write branches, leaves, flowers and fruits into the gate of the yard. Looking up, a fig tree more than 7 meters high stands in the corner. It is thick and strong. In my good impression, it has been with me since childhood. I looked at its tall figure by the window with a steaming glass of milk, which reminded me of every summer: cool shade, palm-shaped leaves, very lush, and a small head exposed between the leaves. This is fig. At this time, the fig tree, although weathered, is still lush and vibrant. It will have a bunch of green and vibrant branches leaning over, as if to say with a smile, "Harvest, come and taste my sweet fruit!" " On the table, a fragrance came to my face.

Fig is a berry tree species and a flowering plant, which mainly grows in some tropical and temperate places. It has a thin seedless skin, soft meat, sweet taste and high nutritional value. It is rich in sugar. Protein. Amino acids. Vitamins and mineral elements.

Figs are not only delicious, but also have extremely high medicinal value. It contains a lot of pectin and vitamins. After absorbing water and swelling, fruits can absorb many harmful substances. Therefore, after eating figs, all kinds of harmful substances in the intestines are absorbed and excreted, which can purify the intestines, promote the proliferation of beneficial bacteria, inhibit the rise of blood sugar, maintain normal cholesterol content and quickly discharge toxic substances.

As the saying goes: predecessors planted trees, and later generations enjoyed the cool. Grateful grandma planted this fig tree, grateful for the sweet fig, I hide a grateful heart.

7. How to write a good composition "dragon head", "pig belly" and "phoenix tail" Nowadays, composition has become an indispensable tool for people, but how to write a good composition?

I. Title

As the saying goes, "a good title is half the story", a good title is the beginning of a good composition, and the title must be novel and unique to attract attention!

Second, the beginning and the end

The article begins with a dragon head and ends with a phoenix tail. There are all kinds of beginnings. Once you have a good beginning, the written ideas will flow out. The common beginning is as follows: 1, get to the point. 2. Ask questions to attract people's attention. 3. Summarize and reveal. 4. Describe the environment. 5. Flashback and create suspense. Only in this way can we create a good start.

The end of the article is also the essence of the article. Some endings are thought-provoking, some endings are natural, some endings are intriguing, some endings should be written in a more appropriate way, and the pen is also beautiful and generous.

Third, proper words and correct rhetoric.

Proper use of words will make the article more full and specific. If an article is plain, a few modifiers will add to the icing on the cake. At the same time, we should pay attention to inventory, print good words and sentences in our minds and use them vividly. You can also add some reasonable imagination to make the article receive the finishing touch effect.

Fourth, clear and logical.

In an article, we must pay attention to organization. The article can't be irrelevant and disorganized. The best way is to make an outline. With such an outline, we will describe it carefully. In the process of description, we should seek truth from facts, and we can't write things like "the rooster lay eggs", otherwise it will make a joke. Also pay attention to punctuation, which also has the law of punctuation. Pause when it is time to pause, and omit when it is time to omit.

5. Clever layout and proper details.

If you get an article and want to make a layout, how to write it? This layout is like a pork belly, many of which are big, but there are also details. If there are no details, the article will look dry, only a skeleton, like a running account, you can't make this mistake.

These are the five main points of the composition. I have outlined them. I don't think it is difficult to do these five points.

8. The composition of osmanthus trees is written from branches, leaves, flowers, fruits and functions. Whenever I walk home and come to a corner, I can always see osmanthus in full bloom. It will only touch a little space on the branches of osmanthus. From a distance, you can only see most of the dark green leaves, which are deep and steady; It never flaunts itself too much, unlike roses with bright red, epiphyllum with unforgettable appearance, and lily with charming floral fragrance. It only has its own white clothes against the green trees, only a faint fragrance, which makes people relaxed and happy. Its branches don't droop like wicker, but grow upward, which has a feeling of towering. Isn't this a kind of "aloof" that belongs to it? Branches never droop, and a few thin sticks are upward, which seems to indicate a spirit of growing straight in the sun without bowing their heads. Is it just a gorgeous appearance that never forgets anything? Of course, in retrospect, the fragrance seems to have floated into my nose and appeared in front of my eyes. Its small white flowers grow on the branches, but they are in full bloom, which has a clear and beautiful feeling. Although the branch is short, it is high above ... However, in summer, its fragrance is still in the air, and people can't help but see its source. As long as you are willing to discover it, it will always be more beautiful than you can imagine. When you want to ignore it, there is its killer-floral fragrance. It's really attractive, and that's all you like about it. Soon, Osmanthus fragrans will bloom, making people appreciate its unique beauty.