Three-year junior high school composition Feng Toupian

Tang Bohu's birthday.

You may be no stranger to Tang Bohu, a scholar in the Ming Dynasty. On one occasion, Tang Bohu was invited to attend a rich woman's eightieth birthday party. When it was Tang Bohu's turn to deliver a birthday speech, he pointed to the host and said, "This woman is not human!" Everyone present was dumbfounded. So, he said, "Nine fairies came down to earth." The two sides immediately turned their worries into joy. Without waiting for emotional stability, Tang Bohu broke the third sentence: "Children and grandchildren are thieves!" Children, grandchildren and birthday people stared in surprise. Unexpectedly, the poet returned to heaven with a pun, "Eat flat peaches secretly and live a long life." Suddenly, everyone burst into laughter and applause. From the first sentence, the poet set a suspense and attracted people's attention. Until the last sentence, the suspense was completely solved.

Can you get some useful enlightenment from it?

[password explanation]

It is said that the great Russian writer Lev? Tolstoy is writing Anna? Karenina, I can't believe he revised the beginning of the book twelve times. Even a great man like Tuo Weng will take great pains for the beginning, which shows how difficult it is to give an article a good beginning.

Our forefathers also attached importance to the beginning of the article. Qiao Yuanmeng's house once put forward the article standard of "crested pig belly and leopard tail". The so-called "phoenix head" is to make the beginning of the article as beautiful and exquisite as phoenix head, which produces attractive charm and makes readers fondle it from the beginning. I think "Phoenix Head" is particularly important for senior high school entrance examination composition.

The beginning of the article is the face of an article. Whether this face looks good or not is directly related to the reader's interest in reading the whole article. So, how can we write a beautiful "phoenix head"? There is no fixed method for writing, and there is no fixed format at the beginning. There is only one standard to measure the quality, that is, whether it is an organic part of the article, whether it can serve the content and center of the article, and whether it can attract readers to read. Looking at the colorful beginning, we can find some rules.

First of all, cut to the chase

This method can also be called "direct point method". This method is to come straight to the point, or explain the reasons for writing, or put forward the main idea of the full text, or go straight to the story, which is very concise. For example, the "part-time job" at the beginning of the article:

It was a hot summer. After failing in the senior high school entrance examination, I resolutely packed my bags and quietly embarked on the arduous journey of working in the south. The clouds in my hometown gradually faded, and the sight of relatives and friends gradually lengthened. I'm glad that I finally chose my own path.

You see, the beginning is very concise, straight to the point and telling the story directly. How beautiful! I think if we have difficulty at the beginning of our composition, it may be the best choice to come straight to the point.

Second, the lyrical method of landscape writing

The article melts into the author's thoughts and feelings, describes the natural scenery and environment at the beginning, or expresses his feelings directly or indirectly, which is called the lyric method of scenery description. Please look at the students' works:

The warm wind blows gently, the setting sun hangs on the horizon, shining with gentle orange light, and the smoke from the kitchen is curling up and dancing slowly. The grass and the girl are sitting on the hill, enjoying the beautiful scenery of the world, and the girl's brow hides longing and helplessness.

This beginning is like a colorful oil painting, with a hint of melancholy in the bright picture, which brings people into an atmosphere and makes the narrative behind more touching.

Third, the famous saying creates the law

Refined quotes, fresh lyrics and popular sayings naturally have an attractive charm. At the beginning of the article, the proverbs, wise sayings or beautiful sentences of ancient poets, such as philosophers, famous artists and so on, are quoted as the general leader of the whole article. Such a beginning often makes the article have a vibrant flavor, a kind of courage and confidence, which can enhance the persuasiveness of the article. Please look at the following example:

A philosopher said well, if you can't be a big tree, you should be a grass; If you can't be the sun, be a star. After several ups and downs, I finally understood the meaning of this sentence.

Quoting vivid and philosophical quotes at the beginning makes readers taste wise and profound, and makes people anxious to know the twists and turns below.

Fourthly, the first suppression method is popularized.

If you want to promote the rule of restraining before promoting, that is, to retreat for progress, to restrain someone or something before promoting, and then to establish your own views or themes to achieve outstanding goals. This method is widely used. In narrative style, it often receives unexpected effects. For example, Cheng Naishan's article "My family has a daughter who has grown up" begins by saying that writing an article does not write about her daughter, because "she has neither outstanding talent nor natural beauty, nor even went to college-in short, it is not typical enough." This is "suppression". It forms a kind of hanging difference with the "Yang" in the following article, and the theme is more prominent.

Fifth, rhetoric coloring method.

Rhetoric is an indispensable part of language use, and the use of clever and appropriate rhetorical devices can often add a lot of elegance to the language. In the exam composition, if candidates can skillfully use rhetoric to dress up their own language, they will get good results. Please look at the following example:

If I were a bird, I would remember the nest when I was born; If I were a sapling, I would never forget the land that nourished me. If I were a river, the snowy plateau would be a brand in my memory; If ... no matter what I am, no matter how I exist, I can forget everything around me and even abandon myself, but one thing is indelible-that is, reward. (from explaining returns)

This kind of opening uses personification and parallelism to express one's sincere wishes. The language is bright and colorful, which is refreshing to read. This kind of opening will naturally be loved by the questionnaire teacher.

Seeing this, you should know a little about the starting skills of composition, but there are methods for composition, but there is no fixed method, and the same is true for the beginning. As for how to start an article, we should also comprehensively consider factors such as genre, content and style, and strive for harmony and perfection between the beginning and the back. Only in this way can we create a beautiful peak.

[Teach you a trick]

Start a sentence like setting off firecrackers

Xie Zhen's "Four-character Poems" in Ming Dynasty pointed out: "A word begins like firecrackers." Here are some ways to get started:

First of all, cut to the chase and get straight to the point. As soon as the article was written, the topic was quickly deducted, which was almost the main content of the article. Only by using the most concise language, the most ingenious technique, the richest emotion and the most appropriate atmosphere, can we firmly grasp the main idea of the article and effectively avoid making the mistake of digressing from Wan Li. A senior high school entrance examination candidate wrote a question in the article "The Feeling of Growing up": "The feeling of growing up is really good!" A heartfelt word is refreshing.

Second, from the scene to the situation, create the situation. This kind of opening brushwork has always been delicate, which can not only vividly describe the scenery, but also grasp the trigger point of emotion well. It is natural to build a bridge from scenery to emotion. With the scenery as the background and emotion as the trigger, readers are immersed in it, immersed in it, affectionate, intentional, thoughtful and free to be fascinated.

Third, cleverly set suspense and doubt attraction. According to the needs of the article expression, set suspense, or plot, or emotion, or character at the beginning, and the reader will go on with the psychology of inquiry. The burden in the article will be shaken off layer by layer, and the context in the article will become clearer and clearer. Under the guidance of this suspense, readers will accept doubts and surprises again and again, and enjoy charming scenery and touching scenes one after another.

Fourth, express your chest and praise it. At the beginning, the article is passionate, grasping the breakthrough of emotional generation with deep brushwork, such as the sudden surge of spring water, intense and deep, quiet and sweet. Readers are infected by it when they unconsciously drink, and they can express their minds and let go of their minds in the process of bathing, which is smooth and clear.

Five, clever quotation, increase literary talent. Quoting famous sayings, proverbs, aphorisms, lyrics and poems at the beginning not only enhances the weight of the article, but also shows your erudition. Why not?

Of course, there are various methods at the beginning of the composition, and you need to ponder carefully to realize the three flavors.

[Link to Senior High School Entrance Examination]

1, exam presentation

Composition of Guangxi Senior High School Entrance Examination in 2004

Composition (optional topic)

(1) Feeling _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _.

Tips and requirements:

(1) You can fill in (friendship, affection, troubles, life ...) on the horizontal line.

(2) About 600 words.

(2) In American writer Disney's Courage, American paratroopers have courage because of wisdom, while French women have courage because of faith. In real life, eating raw fish is a kind of courage; It is a kind of courage to show your different views boldly; It is a kind of courage to expose the scars of others or yourself; Dare to fight gangsters is a kind of courage ... courage often shines in all aspects of your casual. Please write on the topic of "Courage".

Tips and requirements:

(1) You can choose a style that you are best at. Write what you know best and express your true feelings.

(2) Choose your own angle and do the topic yourself.

(3) Not less than 500 words.

2. Test analysis

This is a semi-propositional composition. You can fill in the contents given in the test questions or other contents on the horizontal line of the test questions. Candidates can fill in what they are most familiar with and easy to write. However, we should also pay attention to the selection of materials to be a little distinctive and delicious.

Being the first to eat crabs is a kind of courage; It is a kind of courage for Shennong to taste a hundred herbs; Dare to take responsibility is a kind of courage; Giving up voluntarily is a kind of courage ... courage is needed everywhere in life. With courage, the obstacles in life will no longer be insurmountable obstacles, and the sky of life will be sunny and full of vitality. Choosing the events that you have experienced personally and writing your true feelings will definitely make the marking teacher shine.

3. Wrong examples

Courage-a Bridge to Success

Guangxi examinee

What are the characteristics of successful people? They have wisdom, perseverance and courage! Courage is the bridge to success.

On one occasion, the school held a speech contest. Before that, the head teacher held a speech contest in the class to select the contestants. I am good at reading Mandarin, but I have one weakness, poor psychological quality and no on-the-spot experience. I have written the manuscript and tried it several times myself, but I am still not satisfied.

The class meeting has finally arrived. The teacher announced the beginning; The monitor stepped onto the platform and began his performance. The monitor spoke clearly and with great feelings. I saw that he was natural and graceful, not rude. At the end of the article, there was prolonged applause. Then several students came to the stage to give speeches, all of which were very distinctive. They not only speak fluently, but also have rich feelings.

An uneasy feeling lingers in my heart. Can I compete with them? Will my speech make my classmates laugh? My mood is beginning to get confused. Palm stretched tightly, sweat soaked the manuscript. It has been more than half an hour since the classmate on my right finished his speech. The teacher's voice rang again. Anything else? Come up boldly and summon up courage. I feel my heart pounding. My heart began to struggle. Let's go No, you will be laughed at by your classmates if you don't behave well. Don't! No, it's now or never. The manuscript has been written again. The teacher's voice is ringing in my ear again! Take courage, don't be afraid. Yes, I can only win by courage. Besides, what is failure? How can I tell myself if I don't try? So I took the manuscript soaked with sweat. Stride onto the platform. I started my speech in the surprised eyes of my classmates. I was a little nervous at first. But as time went on, my heart gradually calmed down and merged into the manuscript. I reflected all my feelings in my speech. When I said "thank you", the whole class broke into thunderous applause. I heard someone say to me, "You read so well!" "Really?" When the teacher pulled me with excitement and a bright smile and announced that I had won, I knew I had succeeded. An inexplicable impulse came to my mind, and I cried and cried with joy.

Later, the teacher asked me, "What made you overcome your inner fear and go to the podium to speak so well?"

I replied, "It's courage. Because I always believe that only courage can take me to the other side of success. Courage is the bridge to success. "

4. Upgrade Guide

A successful composition has a good beginning, which can be said to be half the battle. Coupled with reasonable structural arrangement, rich content and beautiful language, a masterpiece is freshly released. The language of the wrong composition is very miscellaneous, like a running account, and it is not nuanced. The upgraded excellent composition begins with a question, followed by a series of parallelism and a metaphor, which opens the whole article well, giving examples that are real and sensible, expressing the true feelings and receiving good expression results.

5. Upgrade your composition

Courage-a Bridge to Success

Guangxi examinee

What does the winner have? Successful people have wisdom, perseverance and courage! Courage is the bridge to success.

On one occasion, the school held a speech contest. Before that, the head teacher decided to hold a speech contest in the class first. I am all right except that I have never given a speech on the stage. The manuscript is finished. I read it again and again and tried to give a speech several times.

Finally, I waited for the class meeting. When the teacher announced the beginning, the monitor generously stepped onto the platform. He has a loud voice, articulate speech and very emotional speech. After the speech, the classroom burst into prolonged applause. Then, several students took the stage to give a speech. They can all speak fluent Mandarin and have rich feelings.

I'm starting to feel uneasy. What is my ability? Can I compete with them? Will my speech make my classmates laugh? I dare not think about it any more. The palms began to sweat, and the manuscript became tighter and tighter. It has been half an hour since the classmate on my right finished his speech. The teacher encouraged everyone: "Is there anything else? Don't be afraid, go up boldly and have courage! " I feel my heart pounding. I want to go up, but I'm afraid that a bad speech will make people laugh; If you don't go up, you will miss an opportunity. It's now or never! The manuscript is all written. Go up and make the students laugh. How bad it is. The teacher's words rang in my ear again: "Take courage, don't be afraid." Yes, even if it fails, what is it? How do you know you will fail if you don't try? Take courage and you will succeed. It is courage to talk to me. I finally stood up, holding a manuscript soaked with sweat in my hand, and strode onto the platform. My classmates looked at me in surprise. I took a deep breath to calm myself down, and then I got up the courage to make a speech. Slowly, I am no longer afraid, all my thoughts and feelings are integrated into the manuscript, and the pure feelings in my heart are naturally revealed in the text. "Wow-"burst into warm applause. "Great!" Someone said to me. When the teacher smiled and announced that I had won, I cried with joy. I made it!

"What made you speak so well on stage?" The teacher asked me.

I replied, "It's courage. Because I believe that it takes courage to succeed. Courage is the bridge to success. "