Modern ci writing composition

1. Write a modern composition of autumn in 6 words

Autumn, a makeup artist, makes the world extraordinarily charming; In autumn, he was a magician who dyed the field golden. Autumn is a gentle woman, and the oncoming autumn wind is so light and soft. In autumn, all the delicate flowers have withered, so who is the protagonist in autumn? That is the leaves.

Walking on the path with trees on both sides, my eyes are full of fallen leaves. I picked up a leaf and observed it carefully. It turned out to be maple leaves. Look, how beautiful she is! The leaves that stretch around are mostly like the palm of my hand with five fingers open, and the edges are slightly serrated. The veins on them are clearly visible and connected in series. Her color is even more beautiful, just like the burning fire, so bright and dazzling. Sad people will be inspired to cheer up after reading it. I know that maple leaves are not only dazzling red, but also a series of charming colors such as yellow and green. I can't help but have a question: Why is only the maple leaf red among all the yellow leaves? Is it because of the influence of the autumn sun, or is it because I left my mother tree and thought about her gently in my hand? 2. The writing technique of modern words is

Tian Tian-overlapping words vividly describe the scene in front of me, and at the same time, there is a kind of rhythmic beauty that renders an elegant but not vulgar language atmosphere.

the skirt of lotus-* * *-the graceful skirt is used to compare leaves, which has a kind of stretching and rotating beauty. Lotus leaf is static, and the author imagines that it is moving, which is to write static by moving and realistic by virtual.

Shyly blooming-using the word "Shyly" to describe a woman's charming manner to write lotus flowers, endowing lotus flowers with vitality and feelings, and personifying the modal beauty of lotus flowers.

Like a pearl, like a star in a blue sky, or like a beauty who just came out of the bath, I wrote various gestures of the lotus in the moonlight with metaphors (using two or more vehicles to repeatedly describe the same ontology from different angles).

using "singing" as a metaphor for "fragrance" and "famous songs" as a metaphor for "light and shadow" is a special metaphor-synaesthesia (meaning that one feeling transcends its own limitations and understands the impression that it belongs to another feeling, that is, "the communication and transfer of feelings"), and this feeling can only be felt under a quiet moonlit night, which highlights the quiet atmosphere. When the breeze passed by, it sent wisps of fragrance, like a faint song on a tall building in the distance. (Smell turns to hearing) The moonlight in the pond is uneven; But light and shadow have a harmonious melody, such as a famous song played on Van Gogh Ling. 3. composition with catchwords as topics

I think the catchwords of middle school students are "Holy shit, such a scum topic!" My first reaction when I received the paper was such a sentence. Suddenly found that the so-called buzzwords, few words of health, everyone is suffering from it.

Walking on campus, those catchwords keep pouring into innocent ears, such as "day", "shit", "grandma" and "get out" ... If I were an unreasonable child or an old man who couldn't keep up with the times, I would definitely think that two people were quarreling, and they belonged to the extremely fierce category. But I am not. I am a middle school student who is shrouded in such words every day and influenced by them every day. So I understand, the fiercer you scold, the thicker your feelings are, and the moon has scolded you into a lump of shit. Congratulations, you are definitely the best friend of the other side, and the relationship is solid.

It's really weird, but this law that sounds like a fable really exists in our lives, and makes us used to it. Until I wrote it today, someone finally found out the absurdity, but after a while of shock, they would say with a smile, "You are really awesome!"

You see, it's so ingrained that those ugly buzzwords are gradually accepted by people in the process of circulation, and even many students are very proud that they can insert a sentence or two just right.

It's a pity that I'm incompetent, and I haven't been able to understand how these dirty proverbs became popular in an elegant place like school, and how those rude words emerged from such a clean group as students.

I only know that when those buzzwords popped out of my own mouth, my sadness immediately went out of sight, and then I realized that the legendary exposure was not just a legend. So I began to feel my lost innocence in my diary for a long time.

I'm thinking, how wonderful it would be if words like "thank you", "sorry" and "don't mention it" is like a spring gale, come up in the night quietly bloomed beautiful flowers around us.

The school is a place to teach people to be knowledgeable. Let's replace those catchwords that don't know when they are popular and welcome a beautiful catchword with our freshness. 4. Describe interesting modern poems

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Spring

is a smiling face with fresh grass

blooming flowers

symbolizing

exuberance of vitality

Summer

arousing lotus flowers with lotus fragrance

symbolizing

the heat in the middle of the day

Autumn

P > symbolizes

the calm after harvest

Winter

is full of ice and snow, which has dyed the whole world white

symbolizes

the coldness after calm

spring

full of vitality

summer

full of fire

autumn

full of peace < P > but in my heart,

autumn

is eternal

with the blue sky

with the fragrance of chrysanthemums

and

with falling leaves

calm and beautiful

comfortable and happy

that is

my own autumn. 5. Write an article in modern online red language. In this modern information society, computers have also entered thousands of households, and chatting online has become a hobby of primary and secondary school students. This common phenomenon has also promoted the proliferation of online languages ... "DD" (younger brother), "GF" (girlfriend), "PMP" (flattery), "sauce purple" (like this), "I" and "KPP" (I don't know what you mean) "Take these words for parents to recognize. I believe that many people will be confused when they read them, but these words are very popular among children.

when we walk into schools, we can hear such online languages as "dinosaur", "frog", "irrigation", "BF" and "mm" everywhere. Without annotations, I really don't know what it means. A Chinese teacher said that online language has penetrated into students' language communication. Some students use a considerable amount of "online language" in their compositions or diaries, with similar sentence patterns and vague meanings. Some of them are simply inexplicable, simply to show their "fashion personality". Individual students with good compositions can be slightly flexible.

But on the whole, she doesn't approve of students putting the cart before the horse, seeking novelty and novelty, while ignoring the charm and expressive force of traditional characters. Another primary school teacher said that it is confusing for students to talk "wow" and shut up "cool MAN".

What is even more frightening is that some students' compositions, especially diaries and weekly diaries, are full of similar languages. It is understood that students all learn from the Internet.

The teacher appealed that students are surfing the Internet more and more now, and students are laying a foundation. If the online language is not controlled, it will probably have a negative impact on the learning of traditional formal languages. 6. Help-seeking composition Write a composition of about 6 words on the topic of "My buzzwords of the year"

In recent years, with the popularization of computers, the network has a greater and greater impact on our lives, and the ingenious "network buzzwords (words)" appear with the network. The buzzwords "886", "Cup set, washing set", "shocking people", "scarf" and "weaving scarf" are rapidly popular because of their unique language style. With the network buzzwords (words) on the Internet, there are also "buzzwords (words)" that we relish in school, in class and at home. Some of them are slogans for inspiration, some come from life and books, and some are small in popularity, but they are very interesting. They are concise, sunny and interesting, or express intelligence, or embody a rule, or fly a happy mood ... This year, words such as "God horse", "floating clouds", "tragedy" and "shocking people" are popular on TV and Internet. But from this point of view, is it good or bad?

Internet experts quoted Zhang Yiwu, a famous scholar and professor of Chinese Department in Peking University, as saying, "You don't know words (popular language on the Internet) and you can't live on the Internet." As the beginning, the Internet has become an indispensable part of our life now. With the Internet, we can know everything about the world without leaving home. As a product of the Internet, online buzzwords make conversations more interesting, accurate and refined, and also make conversations faster and more convenient, which also conforms to the simple and quick lifestyle of modern people. Just as modern people have widely accepted KFC, McDonald's and Pizza Hut, buzzwords-

However, some teachers say that China culture has a long history, and China language has a history of several thousand years, so it can't be changed at will in our generation. There is no lack of vulgar taste in online language, which makes modern people forget the tradition and abuse the writing, which can only make the language and writing retrogress, let alone carry it forward and leave it to future generations!

what a different point of view! There are both positive and negative aspects, but I think buzzwords should be a double-edged sword, with both good and dark sides, and we can't completely deny any point of view. It just depends on how we use it. If used properly, it will have unexpected good results and surprise you. But if used improperly, it may have negative effects. If you don't believe me, let me tell you a few examples.

A son of Mr. Chen is in Grade One this year. His word "tragedy" is used in this sentence: "Life is like tea, which is soaked in tragedy all day." When Mr. Chen saw this sentence, he subconsciously paused. Although he has seen this word and this sentence, knowing that "tragedy" is a homonym of "tragedy", Mr. Chen was still somewhat shocked when he saw it in his son's composition.

"This word and this sentence have a negative taste. I don't know if my son really feels this way, or because this sentence is more popular, so let's use it." Mr. Chen said. In addition, he is not clear whether this kind of word is appropriate in the composition. He asked his son, "Can the composition be written like this?" The son replied disapprovingly, "Everyone says this all day. What are you afraid of?"? ！”

A reporter's investigation found that from primary school to high school, children's acceptance of online vocabulary is very fast, especially high school students. "Geili", "Miserable", "Shenma" and "Floating Clouds" are highly sought after, and almost everyone knows them. Xiaoling, a senior one student, said that when online vocabulary became popular, students would immediately follow up. When chatting, everyone talked about it. "It feels fashionable, interesting and vivid." Xiaoling said. In their view, students who don't know these popular words will be laughed at by everyone.

From the above examples, it is obvious that this is children's blind pursuit of "wind", which is somewhat naive and blind. This is the bad side, because they just follow others and think that knowing buzzwords is "the trend" and have no understanding of themselves at all. So we still need to use buzzwords appropriately. Different from them, some teachers have achieved unexpected teaching results with buzzwords, which greatly improved their classmates' grades.

A teacher Li said the online buzzwords like this: "God horse, floating clouds, awesome, these words are all known to our teachers. Sometimes, I am' humorous', and students' eyes will light up immediately, which can enliven the classroom atmosphere. "

However, after all, if these online words are used in composition, teachers are not very encouraging. "From the past experience, in the formal exam, if you use online words in your composition, I am afraid you will be deducted." Teacher Li said that even in a composition with a positive theme, if you don't grasp the online words properly, it is easy to lose points. In other schools, teachers don't encourage students to use online language in their compositions. "After all, it is a new thing. Many students can't use online language properly. It is risky to use it in the big exam."

these examples are summarized, and I believe everyone understands them. Catchwords can be used, but they must be appropriate. I believe that if you use it properly, it will make others feel refreshed. 7. how to write a modern poem

where is the poem? Poetry is in life, but not in life. The reason why we are in life is that everything in life is full of poetry. Obviously, this poetry comes from the encounter between people and foreign things. Poetry is easy to get, but having poetry does not mean having a complete poem. Poetry can be divided into single poetry and main poetry. Single poetry can be called image, and the addition of all single poems is only a quantitative change, not a qualitative change, not to mention that many poems can't be added at all. Even with the main poetry, it is still a long way from the completion of a poem. Therefore, from this perspective, poetry is not in life. A poet's creation is to combine some poetic or poetic things into a complete poem. A poet must work hard to complete such a poem. It can be said that it is no easier to create a good poem than a physicist to study a complex physical problem. I am afraid that only Einstein can calculate the energy contained in a good poem. I remember Horace made a very witty remark. Horace said that Dashan was pregnant and hoped to give birth to a red sun the next morning, but what she raised was a ridiculous little mouse. This statement really shows the difficulty of poetry creation. Otherwise, Qu Yuan and Tao Yuanming have more than just a few works. Bai Juyi said that the good poems of Li Bai and Du Fu are only thirty or forty pieces each. This is not to belittle Li Bai and Du Fu, and we can believe it. Ancient poetry was written in the form of singing and singing, and it was relatively easier to complete a poem. When modernism was born, because the times were more complicated, the solid knowledge of science and technology debunked the traditional magic, the advanced science and technology destroyed the metaphysical poetry in the past, and the profound philosophical thought required people to grasp the essence through phenomena. The diversity and richness of the world forced simplicity and flatness to withdraw from the historical stage, and poetry, while expressing emotion, was largely cut in from life and advanced in the direction of thinking, so it was almost impossible to be a poet, such as Mara.