Write a composition with anaphora.

1. Please write an essay about maternal love in a transitional and caring way.

In this world, everything will disappear or even be destroyed with the passage of time. But only maternal love, it will always be so great and selfless and will not disappear with the passage of time.

When I was a child, I always liked to be held by my mother before I learned to walk. That feeling is so warm that I can't forget it for a long time. And my mother often carries me for a walk. Mom, you know what? In those days, whenever I was held carefully by you, I would have a great pride and happiness. Through the eyes of other children, I know that they also envy me having such a mother. So my mother's arm became my second cradle at that time.

After primary school, I can't let my mother hug me anymore, and my mother can't hug me anymore. Mom started holding my hand in and out. She expressed her love for me in the vicissitudes of life. After school, my mother always shook my hand and asked me about my performance at school that day. Naughty, I shook your hand viciously and "reported" my performance to my mother in a naughty tone. Day after day, year after year, this has become the biggest tacit understanding between my mother and me in primary school.

By going up one flight of stairs-after junior high school. I have no such leisure to hold hands with my mother anymore. Every time I see my mother, I just shake her hand in a hurry. Mom didn't force me to do this, she changed the way of expressing love. Every night, when I am doing homework that seems to be endless, my mother always walks into the study quietly. Or bring me a cup of sweet milk; Or bring me a sweet apple; Or pass me a cup of espresso ... let me deeply appreciate my mother's maternal love in that busy study.

"The thread in the hands of a kind-hearted mother makes clothes for her wayward son." The love of mothers all over the world actually lies in such a small matter as a stitch and a thread. Motherly love is a warm coat that always protects your body; Motherly love is a thick dress on your body, which surrounds you all the time. No matter how far you are from Qian Shan, no matter where you are at the ends of the earth, maternal love is tightly wrapped around you.

Ah, mom, I will definitely remember your love!

2. Write an article with the writing technique of beginning and end coordination 1 Grateful parents' love is like an evergreen tree, which is an indelible landscape in my heart.

Five years ago, my parents set foot on the southbound train to work in Guangdong, leaving me at home to take care of my grandmother. At that time, I thought they didn't love me and didn't want me. I blame them and hate them.

How many times did my grandmother ask me to answer the phone? I ran away and ignored it. Two years later, during the Spring Festival, my parents finally came back. As soon as my mother came into the room and saw me, she held me in her arms and cried, so excited and sour. I began to cry, too-because I felt wronged, I lived without my parents' care for two whole years! But have I ever wondered who my parents are? Have you ever experienced the affection of the calf? Cheer for others. Cheer for others. There is a big stage in life. Everyone is both a performer and an audience. Everyone hopes to get praise and applause from others at the end of the song, because we are all looking for and expecting recognition from others and society.

This kind of recognition can also be regarded as the performance of bosom friends in a narrow sense. After all, the encouragement and praise of good friends will keep us going in a difficult and difficult environment. But applause from opponents and enemies is more valuable.

In this competitive modern society, opponents are everywhere. Some people deliberately wait for their opponents to fail, disdain the success of others, resent them, and never give them generous applause and sincere admiration. However, we should appreciate life. While appreciating yourself, we should also appreciate our friends, colleagues and opponents.

People who don't know how to appreciate will not experience a pleasant happiness. A person who cheers for others should have a broad mind and not be stingy with his sincere efforts.

What they harvest is friends, and what they harvest is touching. People's wisdom and self-cultivation are reflected at this time, and nobility shines at this time. When Zhou Yu confronted Zhuge Liang, they were two heroes of the same era, equally outstanding and extraordinary, but the sentence "How can you be bright when you are born with Yu?" Breaking the fast knot that those talented people who are constantly striving for self-improvement and all despicable people have been holding in their hearts in recent years. They can't tolerate people who are happier than themselves and turn their inferiority and pain into hatred for society and others. They are unfair to themselves, deceiving themselves and looking down on those who have worked hard.

After jealous heartburn, it was Zhou Yu who died of depression. In modern times, many people have lost the opportunity to grasp happiness because of their dark psychology. I can't help but sigh, the mutual appreciation between Yu Boya and Zhong Ziqi, Xiao He dedicated his life to Han Xin, while Bao Shu and Guan Zhong let bygones be bygones.

If this club one day, everyone is wary of others, there is no sincere applause, only false deception, what kind of world will this be? Cheering for others is a kind of spiritual relief and comfort. If you really pay, you will feel gratified by others. Personally, I think the second one is good. On the sixth day of the first month, people were still immersed in the celebration of the Spring Festival, but my parents told me that they would go to Guangdong to work and leave that day.

I begged my mother to say, "Mom, I don't want to give pocket money every day. Why don't you go out to work? " My mother said to me earnestly, "Our family has no money. Think about it. It costs a lot of money to buy a house. You will spend a lot of money in high school and college in the future. How can you not go out to earn money? " Looking at my mother's face, I found that she was much darker, much thinner and seemed to be much older. I don't know how to discourage it, but I have a hundred regrets in my heart.

In the evening, my mother let go of my hand and followed my father on the train with tears in her eyes. When the train started, my mother leaned out of the window, crying, waving and talking.

Ruthless wheels sent my parents away, leaving me a long wait. After mom and dad left, I couldn't eat for several days, and I couldn't calm down when I did my homework.

Seeing this, grandma enlightened me and said, "Shang Feng, you are a sensible child. You should know that mom and dad work very hard, working for more than ten hours a day, and sometimes working overtime all night can't sleep. You should eat well, study hard and win glory for them. "

After listening to grandma's words, I realized that it was not easy for my parents to work outside the home, but I didn't understand them. I was wrong! I shed tears with regret. One night, the telephone rang. I picked up the receiver and heard my mother's voice: "Shang Feng, are you not sick?" ? ..... How is your study? ..... listen to grandma's words ... "Every Saturday, I can always hear greetings and exhortations from my parents thousands of miles away on the phone.

I feel from the bottom of my heart that parents' love for their children is meticulous, selfless and great. According to grandma, my mother gave birth to me during childbirth. My mother suffered in her hospital bed for three days and nights. At the last critical moment, the doctor asked whether to protect children or adults. Mother said without hesitation: "protect the children and leave a root for the Zhao family!" " "Dad signed the letter of guarantee with tears in his eyes.

Fortunately, I was born, and twelve hours later my mother passed through the gate of hell. Hearing this, my throat hardened, and there are thousands of words that are difficult to express. I can only thank my mother and father for giving birth to me.

But how much love has an inch of grass, and I got three spring rays. How can we repay the kindness of our parents? I often tell myself to be self-disciplined and self-reliant, and not to let my parents worry and worry about my study and life.

I study hard and get excellent grades. Nevertheless, grandma always nags me, and I never contradict her, because I know grandma is good for me.

Grandma loves me, and I love grandma. Once, my grandmother suffered from high blood pressure and fainted. I'm so scared that I don't know what to do. I immediately calmed down and thought that I was a little man at home and my parents were not at home. I should take care of my grandmother for them.

So, I invited my neighbors and sent my grandmother to the hospital. Go to school during the day and sit by the bed at night to take care of grandma. Five days later, grandma was discharged from the hospital. She was so happy that everyone praised me. Her wrinkled face often laughs like a blooming peony flower.

Later, when my mother knew this, she praised me for growing up and said that I would be grateful. My heart is sweeter than eating honey. A father loves a mountain, and a mother's love is as deep as the sea.

Let us always remember the kindness of our parents and learn.

I have a dear class teacher. She is of medium height, with an oval face and a pair of tall glasses on her nose. Her eyes sparkle behind her glasses and always look at others kindly. Sometimes smile, there is no serious shelf at all, and everyone feels kind and comfortable. But sometimes, some students angrily denounce her face, just like the weather in October, which changes as soon as it changes, and turns sunny to cloudy. Although she is sometimes serious, she is very concerned about her classmates at heart.

I remember one time when the test paper was handed out and the results were not satisfactory. At this time, the teacher happened to pass by and saw it, but he was not angry. She just patted me on the shoulder with one hand and pointed at the test paper with the other to answer my wrong questions, saying to me, "Don't give up, come on!" " I feel much more comfortable after listening to it. Teacher Zhuang also comforted other students and calmed their hearts.

Many times, the poor students in the class can't do their homework or always make mistakes, but Mr. Zhuang never loses confidence in some poor students, but takes them to the office, explains them one by one and teaches them to write one by one. She is patient and never gets bored. The students are also making progress bit by bit with the help and encouragement of Teacher Zhuang. Teacher Zhuang saw it. Don't mention how happy she was.

So-and-so teacher, you are an excellent teacher and the best in our hearts! Thank you for your concern and love for us; Thank you for giving us a wealth of knowledge; Thank you for not giving up on us and believing in us. We have a thousand words to say to you, but we want to say to you most: "Thank you, Teacher XXX!

4. Write a composition by using clues, carefulness and structural skills. Before I formed a good habit, I especially didn't like reading extracurricular books.

Because there are many new words in the book that I don't know. I can't read what is written in the book.

Too tired, too tired. After finishing my homework, I just want to watch cartoons. Sometimes I go downstairs at night, skate, ride a bike and play badminton in the community ... Dad says I look like a "little tramp".

I said to my father, "I don't want to be a' little bum'." Dad said seriously, "Then you have to change."

I reluctantly said to my father, "I have to take my time." "Yes, yes.

Rome wasn't built in a day, "Dad told me with a smile.

I don't understand. "What do you mean?" I stared at my father. Dad said strangely, "That's right.

You should read more books. Read more books and you will understand. "Then, my father told me the method of reading and arranged the task of reading.

Dad went to the city library specially, got me a library card and lent me a children's book with pinyin. I am often moved by the stories of the characters in the book, hiding in my room and crying quietly.

Sometimes the stories in books are funny, and I often laugh. My mother smiled and said to me, "Crazy!" "Now, I like reading extracurricular books best.

Sometimes, I read books during recess. Sometimes I don't want to sleep at night, so I hide in the bathroom and sit on the toilet to read.

Dad often says, "It's so late, go to bed early. Don't break your eyes. "

My mother said sadly, "I am nearsighted, but I still don't pay attention." Ah! " After reading too many books, I finally know what "Rome was not built in a day" means: knowledge is accumulated slowly.

I have a good habit of reading books now. I read a lot of books and learned a lot.

Extracurricular books are my best friends.

5. Write the composition "Deep in Memory" in a positive and negative way. In my memory, too many people come alive in my mind. But what impressed me the most was my grandmother.

One day in the fifth grade, it suddenly rained cats and dogs after school. Raindrops are as big as soybeans and fall to the ground like shells. The students splashed water, and all of them bravely rushed into the intensive "artillery fire" with their own "shields"-umbrellas. I'm the only one standing in the classroom, so I can't help it. Who told me to go out too carelessly?

The wind is blowing, and the "artillery fire" comes more violently. I tried to rush out several times, but every time I rushed out, I was stopped by ruthless "shells". I can't help it. Fighting is like deserting from the battlefield. I have no choice but to wait for my mother to pick me up.

Suddenly, I saw a figure in the distance, struggling towards me. Several times, the man's umbrella was almost blown down by the wind. At this moment, she suddenly stepped on the pond and almost fell down, but he still walked towards me step by step against the biting cold wind and rain. Suddenly I felt that this figure was familiar, but I couldn't remember it at the moment, thinking about it. I'm sure I came up with this figure myself. She was soaked to the skin and tired. I can't control my emotions anymore. I shouted "Grandma" and then threw myself into her arms. ...

Along the way, the familiar scenery on the street was blurred in my eyes and I couldn't see it clearly. Only the sweat and rain on grandma's face are very clear in my sight. I couldn't bear it any longer, and tears ran down my chin. ...

Grandma, my good grandma, you are my favorite person, and your weather-beaten face will be engraved in my heart forever!

6. Use clues, carefulness and structural skills to write a composition. Before I formed a good habit, I especially didn't like reading extracurricular books.

Because there are many new words in the book that I don't know. I can't read what is written in the book.

Too tired, too tired. After finishing my homework, I just want to watch cartoons. Sometimes I go downstairs at night, skate, ride a bike and play badminton in the community ... Dad says I look like a "little tramp".

I said to my father, "I don't want to be a' little bum'." Dad said seriously, "Then you have to change."

I reluctantly said to my father, "I have to take my time." "Yes, yes.

Rome wasn't built in a day, "Dad told me with a smile.

I don't understand. "What do you mean?" I stared at my father. Dad said strangely, "That's right.

You should read more books. Read more books and you will understand. "Then, my father told me the method of reading and arranged the task of reading.

Dad went to the city library specially, got me a library card and lent me a children's book with pinyin. I am often moved by the stories of the characters in the book, hiding in my room and crying quietly.

Sometimes the stories in books are funny, and I often laugh. My mother smiled and said to me, "Crazy!" "Now, I like reading extracurricular books best.

Sometimes, I read books during recess. Sometimes I don't want to sleep at night, so I hide in the bathroom and sit on the toilet to read.

Dad often says, "It's so late, go to bed early. Don't break your eyes. "

My mother said sadly, "I am nearsighted, but I still don't pay attention." Ah! " After reading too many books, I finally know what "Rome was not built in a day" means: knowledge is accumulated slowly.

I have a good habit of reading books now. I read a lot of books and learned a lot.

Extracurricular books are my best friends.

7. Five ways to manage the composition 1, from the beginning to the end. The beginning-end reference refers to the cross-reference between the beginning and the end of an article. For example, explain the background, describe the scenery, express feelings and explain the truth at the beginning of the article. At the end of the article, it is emphasized again that it corresponds to the beginning, which makes the article seamless.

You should take a group photo. That is, the first and last contents are rounded to two. For example, "This is who I am":

Beginning: My personality is not as gentle as that of ordinary girls. Born with heavy eyebrows and loud voice, he always does things rudely, a bit like Zhang Fei, so he got the nickname "Zhang Fei".

Conclusion: Well, my self-introduction is over. By the way, I also want to declare that my classmates don't call me "Zhang Fei" now, but call me "Little Master". I am well trained and worthy of the name.

3. Repeat nursing. In other words, the end repeats the beginning again. For example, I love the scenery of my hometown;

Beginning: My hometown is located in a small mountain village in Miyun, northeast of Beijing. The scenery there is charming!

Ending: I love the charming scenery of my hometown.

4. Causality nursing. That is, explain the cause or result of things at the beginning and point out the result or reason at the end. For example, My hometown has changed:

Beginning: In the past, my hometown was a famous poor mountain village in Fiona Fang for dozens of miles. Over the years, great changes have taken place in my hometown.

Conclusion: Thanks to * *, it is the party's policy of enriching the people that has changed my hometown.

5. Ask and answer questions. That is, ask questions at the beginning and summarize the answers at the end. For example, "introduce me to everyone":

Beginning: I am a girl, in the sixth grade this year, and I will graduate from primary school when I speak. Do you want to see me? Want to know some of my "secrets"?

Conclusion: This is me, a little girl who loves beauty and falls in love with "Golden Bean" when something happens.

8. Writing techniques based on landscape writing techniques refer to artistic expression techniques that make works better in writing, including expression techniques, rhetoric techniques and expression techniques.

Expression is the way to reflect social life, express thoughts and feelings, and introduce things when writing articles. There are five common expressions, namely: narration (narration), discussion, lyricism, description and explanation.

Writing methods, also known as expressive techniques, refer to various specific methods and techniques used to shape images and reflect life in literary creation. Including: contrast, symbolism, supporting objects to express meaning (supporting objects to express meaning), first restraining and then promoting, setting off (setting off), exaggerating and satirizing, using scenery to express feelings, and taking care of before and after. For example, the article "Praise of Poplar" praises the farmers in the north by praising the tall and straight spirit of Poplar, and adopts a symbolic writing method.

Rhetoric, also known as rhetoric method, refers to the method of modifying, processing and polishing the language used in writing to improve the effect of language expression. Including: metaphor, parallelism, personification, contrast, exaggeration, metonymy, rhetorical questions, duality, repetition and so on.

Writing skills are divided into:

First person narrative method

Because the content of the article is conveyed to the reader through "I", it means that what is written in the article is what the narrator saw with his own eyes, heard with his own ears, or experienced by the narrator himself, which makes the reader feel cordial and true. Use the first person, because the narrator is the party, the people and things described can only be those within the scope of "I" activities. People and things outside the scope of activities can be left out and analyzed in detail.

Third-person narrative method

Using the third-person narrative method, the narrator is not limited by space or time, nor by physiology or psychology. He can directly show the people and things in the article to the readers and reflect the social life freely and flexibly. But the third-person narrative is often not as intimate and natural as the first-person narrative.

According to the narrative method:

cut and try method

Sequential narration is to describe things in chronological order, which is consistent with the actual situation of the occurrence and development of things, so it is easy to write articles clearly. When using chronological order, we should pay attention to proper tailoring and highlight key points. Otherwise, it is easy to list, easy to be straightforward, and like a running account, it is boring to read.

Flashback technique

Flashback is not to tell the whole event in reverse, but to tell it in sequence except for a certain part in advance. There are generally three kinds of flashbacks: first, in order to express the central idea of the article, the part that can best express the central idea is mentioned in front and highlighted; The second is to make the structure of the article changeable and avoid straightforward narration; Third, in order to show the effect, the article twists and turns, causing suspense and fascinating. Explain the starting point clearly when flashback. There should be clear boundaries between flashback and sequence, necessary text transition and natural connection. Pay special attention not to toss and turn aimlessly, making the article unclear.

Insert text

Interpolation is to express the needs of the article center. Sometimes it is to help readers understand the narrative of the story; Sometimes it is to annotate and explain the plot of the characters that appear. The use of interpolation must obey the need to express the central idea, so as not to rock the boat and steal the host's attention. When inserting a narrative, we should also pay attention to the transition, care and cohesion of the article, and there should be no traces of fracture.

Supplementary narrative method

Supplementary narrative is mainly used to supplement the above narrative, which is generally fragmentary and short, and does not have a complete event. You can also put the explanation or explanation in front and cause the following. The function of supplementary narrative generally does not develop plots and events, but enriches and supplements the original narrative.

Classification method

The function of classification is to make complicated things clear and orderly. You can tell one thing first, then another, or you can cross-talk several things. When using classification, it is necessary to establish narrative clues according to the content of the article and the need to express the central idea, and also to explain clearly the time when each event occurred and developed.

Detailed description method

Detailed description is generally used to describe the development and change process of things. When describing details, we should grasp the characteristics of characters or the details of things and describe them in detail. When writing a composition, the part closely related to the central idea should be described in detail. It has little to do with the central idea, but it still needs to be explained with a few strokes. Otherwise, the article will appear non-center or multi-center, which is more complicated.

Brief narration

The function of brief narration is to explain what is necessary and what is not necessary in the process of event occurrence and development. It is combined with the detailed narrative, which makes the whole narrative fine and subtle, and forms the ups and downs of the narrative. Brief narration is generally used at the beginning and end of the article; The part generally related to the central idea; What people know.

From that moment on, I understood the meaning of spring between winter and summer. From that moment on, I realized the importance between failure and success. -inscription

When the sky is no longer gloomy, the wind is no longer whistling, and the grass quietly looks out, I understand-spring is coming.

Walking in the garden in spring, everything is so fresh. I feel so comfortable after being imprisoned for many days in the cold winter. Look, the careful grass, with a small head, tentatively looks around: "Is Miss Chun there?" ? Has winter passed? "Warm wind immediately caressed his head, with a little warmth, sunshine and the unique smell of spring, which is his answer! As a result, the grass is happy and grows like a staircase, and the sound of their growth can be heard in the whole yard. What I saw in front of me was no longer the white snow and ice a few months ago, but a little new green, which immediately turned into a thick green cotton blanket.

On the hillside, pieces of scattered residual snow are still struggling there, but the mountain flowers have already revealed their long-lost smiling faces, and the branches have already taken out new buds. The river began to run, dancing with a little green for the arrival of spring. Close your eyes, as if you can already smell the fragrance of peach blossoms and apricot blossoms; I seem to have seen the sun wandering in the green underworld, but I can't devote myself to the impatience of the earth.

Hard-working ants can be seen in the corner, busy on the earth, but they don't forget to praise spring. Between the flowers and plants, several small yellow and black insects are dancing. Oh, it's a bee I haven't seen you for half a year, and I'm still so popular. On the branches, cicadas have climbed here, cleared their throats and are ready to sing a song. Unconsciously, the scene of hundreds of ants racing to run has emerged in front of us; The taste of honey has been distinguished in the mouth; The sound of cicada has been echoing in my ears.

Walking in the spring garden, my mind suddenly remembered the childlike interest in finding spring in the cold winter and the lovely dream of finding summer in the continuous spring rain. Vaguely, I seem to realize the enlightenment that teacher Chun brought us: "In the midst of suffering, we should look for the fire of hope. When the fire of hope is found by you, will the brilliant tomorrow be far behind? "

Walking in the garden of spring, the suffering of winter has passed, the spring of hope has been found, and the glory of summer is coming soon. At this time, I felt like still water, because from that moment on, I understood the relationship between winter, spring and summer, the relationship between suffering, hope and glory, and the most important philosophy in life-"Looking for hope in suffering, hope contains glory".