An 800-word suspense composition

In a thatched cottage halfway up the mountain, dim lights flashed. There are two brothers sitting in the room. My younger brother is a senior three in the county this year, with excellent grades, and will be admitted to the university next year; My brother is in the second grade of junior high school. My father died of illness three years ago. Mother works alone at home and outside. Overworked for a long time, my mother is ill in bed, and no one works at home. The two brothers decided to stay at home, while the other went on to school.

For a long time, there was no sound in the room A strong wind blew, the curtains on the door chattered and the flames kept beating.

"Elder brother, you go to school and I stay at home." The younger brother said to the younger brother. Brother didn't answer. It pains me to look at my sallow and emaciated brother. Do you go to school by yourself and let your weak brother work at home? Brother walked over and caressed his head. "Listen to my brother. You are still young. It's time to study. My brother stays at home and you can study with peace of mind. " "No, brother, you are going to school soon. You go to school and I will work slowly at home."

"Brother" and "Brother", the two brothers hugged each other tightly and heard each other's heartbeat. Tears flow silently. ...

Neither of the brothers could convince anyone, so they had to draw lots to decide.

The younger brother found paper and pen and wrote on the table, while the older brother stared at the dark night outside.

"Brother, you catch it first." My brother turned around, paused for a moment, and grabbed a paper ball from the table, which read: "Go to school".

The younger brother looked at his older brother and said, "Brother, your lottery ticket belongs to the school, and I work at home. Go and study. " ……

My brother stared at the piece of paper in his hand, and his heart was full of ups and downs. My brother is still very young, and working at home will make him very tired. No, you should let your brother go to school. He turned around and saw that his brother had disappeared in the room.

My brother looked down for a while and seemed to suddenly understand something. He found his brother's paper from the wastebasket and unfolded it. It also says "Go to school". In an instant, my brother understood everything. In order to let my brother catch it first, I ...

Looking at a crumpled piece of paper in his hand, my brother's eyes were shining with tears and his hands were shaking. Suddenly, my brother turned around and shouted "Brother …" and rushed out into the thick night.

Comment: This is a sad and tearful article. The author first writes about the family background, paving the way for the development of the plot. Then, through vivid language and action description, it depicts my brother's "cheating" behavior in the lottery, and finally solves the mystery. Understandably, unexpectedly. The expression of true feelings has achieved good results.

Brother, with dark skin and thick arms like a strong cow; Brother, gruff and unkempt, like a hardworking horse; Brother, be silent, get up early and get in the dark, and grind like a donkey. It is said that I picked it up because I am a person who only needs food.

He can work as hard as an animal. He is the only labor force in the family.

The wind passed gently, and my brother's panting voice came. My brother's sweat is dancing in the wheat waves. In the sunshine, I fly like a pearl and sink into the boundless wheat waves.

Did I really find it? In the endless night, I asked the stars that were still shining, maybe they knew if I came out of my mother's stomach. Hey! Think of my mother, think of me asking her brother if she picked it up, she secretly wiped her tears, think of her heartache and helplessness when she looked at my brother, think of … I don't think my brother picked it up! The stars are speechless, only endless thoughts melt in endless darkness.

However, one day, a car came to pick me up ... not my brother, but me. ...

The whole village was startled. My mother's thin body leaned against the threshold like a piece of white paper that could not stand rubbing, and a few yellow hairs in her silver hair were blowing wildly.

Elder brother, I thought of elder brother. I desperately broke away from the warm hands of my biological parents and ran to the wheat field. Are tears rolling on my dark face in the sun? Still sweating? I stood on the ridge of the field and let the tears flood in my eyes, but I was unable to shout out the heavy "brother!" " "

My brother looked at me with a sly smile and said, "Come back and spend more time with my mother. She sacrificed a lot for you. "

Mom, mom sacrificed a lot for me. Yes, the mother sacrificed her son. For me, for the baby I picked up, for me to sit in the spacious classroom today, my mother turned my brother into a domestic animal.

Countless days, my mother brought me a bowl of delicious rice, but I stuffed my brother with a hard wowotou. I said to my mother, "It's not fair!" "Mom just smiled and said," school should be nutritious. "

Now I understand that my mother arranged my brother's fate. Why did my mother do it, my brother or me? At this moment, we understand that there is something greater than maternal love in this world.

It is like spring in Ding Dong, nourishing my heart, like warm sunshine, giving me the strength to move forward. How I want to ask my mother, am I more important than her son? Maybe not, because mother thinks so. This is the kindest person's cognition of things.

Comments: As a topic, interrogative sentences set suspense at the beginning, which aroused people's concern about the fate of "brother". With the development of the plot, "Finally one day, a car came to pick me up ... not my brother, but me ...", a long-term misunderstanding gave the answer. It turned out that "something greater than maternal love" arranged all this. The extraordinary sacrifice of our mother deeply shocked us.