Narrative composition childhood interesting stories

I remember such an incident happened when I was in second grade.

At noon that day, I was holding the new book "One Hundred Thousand Whys" that my father bought for me in my room, reading it over and over again. Mom is busy in the kitchen cooking.

Suddenly, I heard my mother shout: "Son, there is no more MSG! Can you help me go to the small supermarket at the entrance of the park to buy a pack of MSG and bring it back?" I was reading a book, and I was reading enthusiastically, thinking Without thinking, I blurted out: "Okay. Mom put 20 yuan into my hand. I was still immersed in the book, holding the book in one hand and the money in the other. I put on my shoes and walked to the entrance of the canteen while reading. "

I followed my mother's instructions and said to the aunt in the canteen in a high-pitched childish voice: "Auntie, I want a scarf."

The aunt inside was very strange. : "What kind of scarf should I buy in this hot weather now?"

I said: "I don't know, my mother asked me to buy it."

The aunt gave me a cheap 17 yuan scarf. After getting my 3 yuan back, I read the book and returned home.

As soon as I entered the house, my mother cheered happily: "Oh, MSG is here, MSG is here."

I said: "Mom, why are you buying a scarf on a hot day? ?"

My mother said: "It is necessary to use MSG in cooking! The taste will be much worse without MSG!"

I thought to myself: If I can cook in the future, Be sure to give a scarf every time... I handed that scarf to my mother.

When my mother got the scarf, she was dumbfounded: "I want the MSG you bought. Why did you buy the scarf?"

I was confused: "You want me I came back from buying a scarf!”

At this moment, I suddenly remembered that when my mother told me, my head was full of books, so of course I would get it wrong. Then he said: "...I'm sorry...I was reading too seriously...I heard wrong..." His face turned red.

Mom smiled happily and hugged me into her arms...

Thinking back on this incident, it still makes me laugh... ..

Comments:

1. The article tells about a silly thing I did in my childhood: "I" went out to help my mother buy things, and mistakenly heard "monosodium glutamate" as "monosodium glutamate". Scarf", made a joke. The narrative of the entire story is specific and complete, with a clear structure and clear center.

2. Although the mistakes in the story are a bit outrageous, they are basically in line with the actual situation at the time. Because "I" was absorbed in the book, I didn't even have the most basic common sense of life. react. The descriptions are vivid, and the dialogues between the characters are real and interesting. Especially the psychological activities of "I" remembering that "scarves can be seasoned" are even more hilarious.

3. The language is vivid and vivid, the organization is clear, the events develop naturally and smoothly, and the article is full of wit and humor.