The Composition of Piglet Rowing in Gourd Skin

On the first day of school, the pig ate its breakfast "watermelon" on the way. After eating, the pig threw the watermelon skin away at will, not into the trash can. On his way home, he saw Brother Elephant pick up a banana peel and throw it into the trash can. Brother elephant said, "Hello, piggy"! The pig said, "Hello, Brother Elephant"! The pig thought, "It seems that I made a mistake"! Later, he saw Brother Panda, and he tripped over watermelon skin. The pig said to Brother Panda, "I have something to do. I have to go first. Goodbye. " It hurried back there, picked up the watermelon skin and threw it into the trash can.

Comments by famous teachers:

In this paper, the anthropomorphic method is used to show the content of the story to the readers incisively and vividly. The full text is short but meaningful, highlighting the important theme of "caring for the environment". Piglets correct their mistakes, and elephants' behavior is worth learning. The teacher thinks your composition is excellent. Keep going!