Chai Mi You Yan 94—— "Appearance Description" written in literature

The first half of the article lev tolstoy by Austrian biographer Zweig is necessary. As written in the article:

He was born with a hairy face and more vegetation than a clearing. The thick moustache makes it difficult to see his inner world clearly. The long moustache covered his cheeks, his lips, and his dark face wrinkled like bark, fluttering in the wind one by one, quite like an elder. His eyebrows are about a finger wide and stand upright like tangled roots. A wisp of gray.

? The forehead above the small eyes looks like a tree that was chopped at will with a knife. Skin hides evil and practices evil, and lacks luster, just like the outer wall of a hut made of branches. In the middle of the square face, we saw a large lion's nose, with two holes facing the sky, as if it had been hit by a fist. You can't hide those ugly ears behind your messy hair. There are two thick lips in the middle of the sunken cheek. ..

The use of metaphor vividly shows lev tolstoy's rough skin, wrinkles like bark, messy eyebrows, thick hair and plain appearance, even ugly and vulgar in the author's view.

In addition to metaphor and exaggerated rhetoric, the author Zweig also used the method of comparison and elaboration to pursue changeable sentence patterns and write lev tolstoy as if he were in front of him.

Students imitate the author Zweig's method of describing the appearance of characters, and also begin to write about the most distinctive children in the class. Excerpts from excellent writing exercises are as follows. ?

? Ah, how beautiful!

He was born with a dark face, flat eyebrows and bright eyes, but his tall nose is not very good-looking, because there is a pimple above his nose. His sausage-like mouth sets off his five senses. His hair is short and pointed, much like his style of doing things: vigorous and vigorous. He is tall, but thin. Although he is not very beautiful, his kind heart makes people feel beautiful.

He is a humorous and narcissistic person. He always says he is handsome, but we are not qualified audience, and no one agrees with him. It embarrassed him, but it made us laugh. This reminds me of a person in a TV series-beauty. She always said she was beautiful, but no one agreed with her. His views are really beautiful.

Ah, how beautiful!

? (8 15 shifts)

She is of medium height, with a dark round face, and her nose seems to have been broken by a punch, but it was actually because she wore a pair of glasses that she crushed it. Small mouth, articulate. Her soft hair is sometimes tied up and sometimes draped, which always covers her beautiful ears.

She always smiles, and she can always find that kind of energetic spirit in her face. Although there is no unique face, the sunshine of her youth has been infecting people around her.

? (8) /kloc-class 0/5 Wang Xiaoyu)

She was born with hair as thick as a tropical forest, black and short, curly and dense. Dark skin, prominent cheekbones and short eyebrows. Her face has a pair of childish eyes, decorated with long eyelashes, like two small black pearls. Whenever the teacher talks to her, she looks at the teacher with black pearl eyes, which reveal a strong thirst for knowledge. He is so cute, but he wears a pair of glasses with 100 degrees. Below the eyes is a nose with a short nose and a large nose wing, which can even be reminiscent of "rolling hills". Under the nose is a mouth that can tell jokes. It looks particularly sunny when you smile.

(8 15? Wang Siqing)

She is thin, but she is tall. She has a pair of small eyes embedded in her face like two small black beans. "Little black bean" has a talking cherry mouth under her nose, and she often wears a short ponytail. She has a lively personality. When she opened her mouth and smiled, she showed a row of teeth as white as peeled almonds, and her eyes were narrowed into a crack. Sometimes what comes out of her mouth makes people angry, but sometimes it makes people laugh. Sometimes she is a lady, and sometimes she looks like a woman. She is a girl with strong affinity, so she has many friends. She is in our class. Guess who she is?

(class 8 16? Fu Yanzi)

She is tall, with long legs and a thin waist. A bright black hair falls like a waterfall, and a wave of bangs covers the thick eyebrows. There is a world behind her thick glasses. Big eyes don't lose their luster at all because of wearing glasses, but they look more intense. As long as the red lips rise slightly, there are deep dimples. Her laughter was sharp and thin, like a dolphin sound.

As long as I walk with her, I can always hear her shrill laughter. She looks carefree, carefree, innocent and pure. I think this is her beauty: she is positive and can pass on happiness to people around her.

Write here, have you guessed? She is Huang Siqiao in our class, a pure girl who loves to laugh.

? (class 8 16? Yan Chubing)

This special person

He was born with dark skin, and the healthy wheat color made him very sunny. When he laughs, his eyebrows bend like broadswords. There are a pair of "smiling eyes" hidden behind gold-rimmed glasses. Those small, focused eyes are always smiling. Originally, the eyes were not big, but they looked even smaller when they smiled. At first glance, it looks like a crack. But his nose is as straight as a mountain and looks like a right triangle from the side. Thick and pale lips laughed, and the corners of the mouth seemed to reach the ears, revealing eight neat and white teeth. The corner of his mouth is his iconic "pear vortex", which is not obvious when he doesn't laugh, but as long as he smiles, the pear vortex hangs on his lips like two black holes. He stood in the crowd and everyone could see it at a glance. Do you know who I wrote?

? (8 15 ban Xie)

In our class, there is such a classmate. Tall and thin, like a monkey. Personality is like a monkey, Mao Mao is manic. Dark skin with two small eyes like black pearls. It is so inconspicuous in such a crowd, but there are a pair of "charming" dimples that attract attention. When he smiles, his eyes will narrow into a small crack, and the dimples will be particularly "dazzling" on his face. If others smile with sunshine and handsome, but his body is only funny, then he has become a "happy fruit" in our class with his personality and magical laughter.

Have you guessed who he is?

(8 15? Xu Jiayi)

She used to have fair skin, but due to the reward of the sun, her fair skin turned into sunshine. A broad and flat nose. On the big round face, the most special thing is her eyes. Her eyes are very small, like two small black beans embedded on the bridge of her nose. They are really small. Anyone who doesn't admit this is not telling the truth.

I can't find big eyes like jewels on her face, nor can I find a straight nose. Say she is ordinary, she is ordinary, say she is special, she is special. She will be remembered for a second, because she is always the most active in answering questions in class and always has the most sand sculptures among girls in the class when playing.

Although she is plain-looking, she is not only willing to answer our questions, but also our best confidante. Although she is ordinary, she is the brightest star in the night sky in my eyes.

? (Yan, class 8 15)

? There is such a tenor in our class. He has a Chinese face and wears black-rimmed glasses. Somehow, he seems to be covered in the word "failure". His hair is so short that he pricks his hand when he looks at it. His personality is not too cheerful, nor too man show, but everyone laughs when he speaks, as if he has inexplicable attraction. He looks unremarkable, but he looks funny.

He is the best boy who sings in our class. Whenever he is lit by the music teacher and sings in his seat, his mouth will unconsciously Zhang Kaicheng "O" shape and make a sound that can break through the sky. Because of his voice, his fame spread all over the class.

15 ban Wen

He was born with a dark face and a sunny complexion, and people thought he had immigrated from Africa. There are bright eyes under a thick short black hair, but they are covered by a pair of brown glasses. Eyebrows are about a finger wide, like two insects with black hair, sometimes they are wrinkled tightly, forming a question mark between their eyebrows; Sometimes it stretches happily, like an exclamation point. His lips sometimes look particularly rosy, just like hanging two sausages. It is precisely because of these characteristics that he looks darker.

His personality is more distinctive. Sometimes in class, he doesn't listen carefully and is criticized by the teacher. If it is another child, he will definitely be unhappy and his face will hang down. But he's different. After being criticized by the teacher, his mouth swelled up and showed a funny look.

In our class, no one has more characteristics than him. Whoever can't guess who he is won't know our class.

Ba 15 Bannie David