Appreciation of perfect composition of loofah, rattan and peas in college entrance examination

In the usual study, work or life, everyone has been exposed to writing. Writing a composition can exercise our habit of being alone, calm our mind and think about our future direction. What is the composition you have seen? The following is an appreciation of the perfect composition of loofah vine and bean beard that I helped you organize. Welcome everyone to learn from it, I hope it will help you.

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Read the following materials and write an article of not less than 800 words according to your own feelings and associations. (60 points)

There is a proverb in the countryside: "loofah vine, pig bean beard, can't tell the difference." It means that once the vines of towel gourd and leather rope are intertwined, it is difficult to tell them apart.

A child tried to tell the difference between the two, and as a result, all the stems and leaves of the loofah and peas in the yard were torn off.

Father looked funny and said, "They are planted to eat, not to distinguish!" " All you have to do is take care of them and pick melons and beans to eat. "

Requirements: (1) Choose a suitable angle and make your own decision; (2) self-made topics; (3) Except poetry, the style is not limited; (4) distinctive stylistic features.

Full score composition

Pay tribute to children

Shandong examinee

When you hear a well-known proverb, you will be curious and try to verify it yourself. In this world, only children will do this. I couldn't help laughing: look, how naive, how cute and precious!

In western fairy tales, children are all sent by cranes and gifts from God. I deeply agree with this. Children have many noble qualities that adults don't have. Wang Kailing wrote in the book: "Learn from children." Then, I also want to pay tribute to the children, their fearlessness, their questioning and seeking truth, and their free souls.

Children's hearts are always spotless, they are real and fearless. When the emperor paraded the streets in his nonexistent new clothes and was praised, wasn't he a child who kept his word and dared to tell the truth? They are innocent angels, never shocked by authority, never defiled by the secular, their hearts are clear from right and wrong, and their nature of pursuing truth has never been swallowed up by crowds. How can we not pay tribute to him when he illuminates the blind darkness like a shining star?

However, the reality is far from us singing for our children. When the child tries to distinguish the tangled stems from vines, this strong thirst for knowledge is regarded as ridiculous by his father. In his father's eyes, the so-called "theorem" can replace "truth". In his eyes, only melons and beans have edible value. In the face of material things, children's truth-seeking nature is insignificant. Who should we cry for?

Plato said, "I love my teacher, and I love truth more." When young Watt had doubts about jumping over the cover, we saw the bright spot of children's "ridiculous" from his future.

How can we make those lovely highlights disappear? Saint-Exupery's The Little Prince is called "the fairy tale of adults", and the author tells it through the mouth of the little prince: "The world of adults is really strange." Is this worth thinking about? When adults casually laugh at children's ridiculous behavior, they don't know how absurd the adult world in children's eyes is, and how strange it is for adults to betray their hearts for fame and fortune countless times! They have forgotten the innocence of their childhood, how sad it is. ...

What's more sad is that adults who have lost their aura have arbitrarily erased their children's bright spots. "Come on, children of the world, walk hand in hand with an elf through the wilderness and rivers. The world is crying too much, you don't understand. " When Ye Zhi lamented this point, we should also ask ourselves whether we should use the will of adults to lead the spirit of children, so that they can grow old quickly and reach the so-called "maturity".

When someone else's children pass by the vines of melon beans, we also lose our flawless nature, persistent pursuit of truth and free soul, and the short board of the spirit of the times is shortened again. ...

Please stop, please salute the children, please wake up the glory of freedom!

I am eighteen years old this year, and I have stepped into the ranks of adults, but I know that the innocence in my heart cannot be extinguished, because I still want to be a child!

Examination score

Content 20 points+expression 20 points+development 20 points =60 points. (first class)

Scoring key point

This article is a rare exposition.

In terms of conception, the article, with the title of "Salute to Children", expresses admiration for "precious and lovely childlike innocence" and is full of praise and praise for children, which is enough to arouse people's ears in the current reality of children's aging.

As for the selection of materials, the candidates quoted them widely in the discussion process, which was well-founded and showed a deep reserve of composition materials. At the same time, candidates have a strong ability to control the materials, and the use of propositional materials is flexible and intangible. This is also what our majority of candidates lack.

Structurally, the full text discusses step by step, interlocking and clear. The language is cordial and to the point, full of emotion, showing high language control ability.