I feel so inferior that I am about to collapse. I asked the editor to save me.

I am not an editor, but a reader. My reading experience is definitely over 10 years, so I should be qualified to comment. To tell the truth, in the past ten years, online literature has developed really fast, and fast food culture has become a fashion. In my opinion, many excellent authors, or authors of many bestsellers, may be called "writers" instead of writers. I believe many writers may prefer this title. What does this mean? This shows that the seriousness and authority of literature are gradually declining, and literature is now more a product of the market and the public. And your problem may be that the story lacks readability that meets the public's interests, and the writing lacks a sense of the times. To tell the truth, it is more difficult to write ancient things in vernacular Chinese than modern things in ancient Chinese. If you insist on using ancient Chinese, you must have a degree to achieve "alternating words and texts." You can refer to Jin Yong or a dream of red mansions. Your article lacks charm. Therefore, when writing, in fact, if you want to be recognized by the public, you must do a survey to understand the taste of the public, not to say that you must "cater", but at least it should be suitable for the life and rhythm of the public. You said you were good at ancient Chinese. In fact, ancient Chinese has great potential now. The key is how to tell a story and how to arrange the structure, content and style of the story to attract people. In fact, now is the era of network literature. You might as well send writers to some well-known websites (such as Jinjiang and Wang Xian), and then experience the feeling of being an online writer, experience the so-called fast food literature step by step, and explore the tastes of some readers.

Give some warm tips:

1. Title. The vast majority of readers are title parties.

2. copywriting. A writer who is incompetent but still popular must have an excellent reputation, otherwise, you know.

3. Outline. Each chapter should have very eye-catching short sentences, which can not only summarize the main contents of this chapter, but also leave suspense.

The above three points are the first threshold for network writers. As long as these three points are achieved, readers can click in and enjoy your writing slowly. As for how to deal with words, content and language, these two points are the most important, or we should explore them slowly.