Teacher's critical composition

In our daily life, many people have written comments. Notes refer to words used for explanation or explanation. So, how to write a review? The following are eight teacher's comment compositions that I have compiled. Welcome to read the collection.

The teacher's comment on the composition article 1 1 has a concise and concentrated theme, profound and powerful exposition, and is shocking.

2. The words used in this article are accurate and rigorous, the language is plain and natural, and the use of rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification makes the article even more icing on the cake.

3. The main features of this composition are concrete narration, true details, vivid description and true feelings, and rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification are used to make it very vivid and express my love for it. The full-text narrative is concentrated, without branches and vines, with concise and smooth language and sincere and touching feelings.

4. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the ideological quality of the characters is set off. The article is reasonable in imagination, natural and vivid in narration, compact in structure, coherent in connection with nature and prominent in center.

5. The language is concise, the center is clear, the idea is reasonable, and the writing level is clear.

6. It is really commendable to be able to write the inner activities of the characters very vividly and leave a deep impression on people. The article is consistent from beginning to end, with clear center and complete structure.

7. The article is well-founded and convincing, highlighting the personality of the characters, natural context, clear organization, coordination from beginning to end, and finally pointing to the theme and highlighting the central idea.

8. The author is meticulous in observation, delicate in description, vivid in language and novel in expression. The full-text language is concise and natural in structure. The article is well-structured and echoes from beginning to end.

9. The language is humorous and interesting, the plot arrangement is tortuous and vivid, and the first and last echoes are clever. Although the length of this article is short, the content is vivid and concrete, the paragraphs are clear and the language is easy to understand.

10, a series of verbs expressing the actions of characters are used accurately and well.

1 1. This paper adopts the first-person writing method, which has great advantages, plays a good role in characterization and expression center, and is friendly and natural to read. Clear thinking and lively rhythm.

12. The process of this paper is concrete, clear and coherent. At the same time, the author added appropriate psychological description to the narrative, which fully expressed it.

13, the article is narrated in children's language, natural and simple, like a clear spring. The finish line played the role of finishing touch.

14, the article is vivid and sincere, especially the article about the right to use is very infectious and thought-provoking. Make things clear, use verbs correctly, and use metaphors appropriately and vividly. Make suggestions and get education from them after reading them.

15, simple and natural childlike innocence is reflected in the article, which makes the article exude a fresh and lively atmosphere.

16. This article expresses sincere praise for the beautiful mind with concrete examples, vivid and beautiful language and novel and unique writing style.

17, the main advantages of this paper are three: this paper can closely follow the topic requirements and complete the writing process. Rigorous structure, focused. The language is concise and fluent, and the beginning and end are natural and accurate. The beginning is concise and natural, the structure is clear, and the psychological description is true, which reflects the author's good language control ability. The characteristics of this article can be summarized as cordial, warm and meaningful.

18, the description in the article is fresh and lively, cheerful and clear. The childlike innocence between the lines makes the article have it.

19. It is a major feature of this article to describe the characters' language, demeanor and movements in detail. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm, and the words are still unfinished.

20, the article will be written in detail, revealing the warmth of the sun between the lines, so that the theme of the article naturally sublimates to a higher level.

When you step into the school gate and meet the challenge of knowledge, who will teach you how to study? Who patted you on the shoulder and praised you when you got good grades? Who will touch your hair and point out your shortcomings when your grades are not satisfactory? It's the teacher

The teacher has a pair of unique hands.

The math teacher's hand is as magical as a magician, and it can be like magic. With the four symbols of+,-,× and \ and 10 Arabic numerals, countless formulas are combined to create infinite charm, and we naive children are introduced into the ever-changing knowledge hall. The math teacher cultivated our thinking ability with these hands.

Chinese teacher's hand can write neat pinyin letters, let us know new words; Can write beautiful Chinese characters, let's imitate and practice; Can write vivid and fluent sentences, so that we can read aloud and learn ... Chinese teachers provide us with rich spiritual food with hard-working hands and cultivate our reading ability, composition ability and language ability.

The art teacher's hands are amazing. You can "pick" spring flowers in winter; In summer, you can "pick" the fruits of autumn; The beautiful scenery in the distance can also be "moved" to a piece of white paper at any time ... The art teacher cultivated our aesthetic interest with dexterous and magical hands.

Ah, the teacher has a pair of selfless hands! Winter: The teacher's hands are red with cold, and he corrects our homework. It's so serious. Midsummer: In the scorching sun, the teacher came to the classroom without wiping the sweat from his face, and still worked on the blackboard with his hardworking hands. ...

Teacher's hand! Like a superb sculptor, he is smart, magical and full of wisdom. I praised the teacher's hand.

Comment: This article mainly introduces The Teacher's Hand to readers. In the process of writing, the author can grasp the teaching characteristics of teachers in various subjects and describe them, which is the success of this paper. The article is coherent, with appropriate details, and the end is straightforward, expressing praise for the teacher's hand.

The teacher's comments on composition 3 at the beginning of the composition:

1, the language is concise and standardized, and the opening is attractive.

2, … begins with …, which is more innovative.

3. The opening is concise, refined and orderly; Pay attention to description ... leave a deep impression.

It was quite original at first. Flashback the beginning and render the artistic conception.

5. It is also a way of writing to go straight to the subject at the beginning. The language of the article is vivid and rich, and it is readable.

6, the beginning is very lively. The use of personification makes the beginning look lively.

7. Ask questions at the beginning to attract readers.

8. Go straight to the subject at the beginning, which makes people clear at a glance. It plays a leading role in the full text.

9. At the beginning of the topic, the text is very attractive. The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and meticulous.

10, the article is novel at the beginning, which has the effect of pulling one hair and moving the whole body. Let readers have the impression of … as soon as they meet.

1 1, the beginning touches people's hearts and has real feelings.

12, the article is novel in material selection, which arouses readers' desire to read.

Synthesis process:

1, full of passion, describing ...

2, focused, detailed and appropriate, specific content.

3. The metaphor is appropriate and the words are vivid.

4. The language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life and friendly to read.

5 ... tell us in a relaxed and happy tone, which is unforgettable.

6. The narrative is natural and vivid, with compact structure, coherent connection with nature and prominent center.

7. For the description of the scenery, the language is concise and accurate, while the association is touching the scene, and the scene is naturally integrated.

8. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the ideological quality of the characters is set off.

9. This article is lyrical in narration.

10, make full use of the combination of static and dynamic writing, supplemented by metaphor, personification and other techniques.

1 1. The author observes carefully and narrates orderly.

12, the use of some subtle words invisibly adds a lot of interest to the article.

13, the article is elegant, fluent and coherent, especially the characters' language is humorous.

14, the article is reasonable.

15, through vivid language description, let readers feel like they are in a dream.

16, the article has clear clues and prominent themes, closely surrounding …

17, the details are quite clever. Extremely rich in skills.

18. It is a major feature of this article to describe the characters' language, demeanor and movements in detail.

19, delicate description, strong life breath, accurate and vivid words and sentences.

20. The language is accurate, vivid and vivid, and the content is extremely rich and specific.

2 1. The story is vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their identity characteristics.

22. The article comes from life, so although the language is not so beautiful, it is really interesting and well written.

23. The article writes in detail that ...

24. The language is lively and interesting.

25. A lot of spoken English in life makes the article more natural and friendly.

26. The metaphor is very accurate. Add ancient poetry to associate, full of charm. The metaphor of ... is skillfully used.

27, the use of a variety of senses, description is very detailed. Play a wonderful imagination and use subtle metaphors.

28. personification and metaphor full of childlike interest make the article shine. This description is very touching to read.

29. The psychological description is exquisite, the metaphor sentence is used properly, the interest is attractive and the artistic conception is far-reaching.

30. The metaphor is appropriate, the words are vivid ... Tell us in a relaxed and happy tone, which is very memorable.

End of synthesis:

1, the ending is just right, the center is clear, the language is concise and profound, and it is thought-provoking.

2, use the feeling switch, ending with feeling. In this way, the article is coordinated from beginning to end, and the theme of the article is repeated, which is very infectious.

3. The praise for the characters at the end is sincere and touching.

4. The implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing.

5. Focus on the end to express emotions, give consideration to the beginning, and summarize the full text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go.

6. The vivid description of details reveals the inner world of the characters in a beneficial way, which is the success of this paper.

7. The article ends with …, which is concise and full of charm.

8. At the end of the article, the central sentence is really clear, and the conclusion is short and powerful.

9. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm. Words are done, meaning is still unfinished.

10, the poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read, love to read, and can't bear to let go.

1 1. Although it is a trivial matter, it is vividly described by the author, and the indispensable ending highlights the theme of the article.

12. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching.

13, the end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.

14, ending in …, clear and meaningful.

Teacher's comments on composition 4 1. Your composition is really great! Make the teacher feel ashamed of himself. In the article, you not only described several kinds of flowers in the Spring Garden in detail: Jasminum nudiflorum, Magnolia grandiflora and Prunus mume, but also grasped the characteristics of Jasminum nudiflorum, focusing on its shape, color, fragrance and emotion. Metaphor and personification rhetoric can add a lot of color to the article. Many wonderful sentences are refreshing after reading them, all because of your careful observation and unique way of thinking. I hope I can read more of your "beautiful essays" in the future.

Your handwriting is standard, beautiful, generous and enviable. I wish you to write better and more attractive articles in your future writing and become a writer when you grow up. I wish you like Sesame Blossoms Are Rising.

3, rich in content, beautiful sentences, highlighting the center of the article, expressing the thoughts and feelings of loving the campus, your success further illustrates the importance of reading, but you must stick to it!

4. You have a wide range of reading and knowledge. You have achieved excellent results in this assignment, especially the quotation of beautiful sentences, which adds a lot of color. You have to keep working hard!

5. Your metaphor is apt. Comparing the moon to a sickle, image and concreteness show that you are very creative.

6. "Flashback" can firmly grasp the reader's heart and cause * * * sound. You used this writing method in this composition. You are really a good student who has applied what he has learned.

7, your "Morning Campus", in the structure, in chronological order, seize the morning reading, morning exercises, early sun and other attractions, written in detail, clean and neat.

8. The content of your picture composition jumps from one picture to another, but the most important feature is the consistency of the content, which shows that you are meticulous in observation, excellent in performance and complete in conception, which is worthy of being a masterpiece.

9. You have reproduced the vitality and beauty of the forest with poetic language, various wonderful sounds of the forest, rich imagination and vivid language.

10, this composition, you set suspense everywhere, it is very interesting to read. Learning this writing method more will make your composition "icing on the cake".

1 1. You carefully observed the flowers in A bouquet of red flowers, grasped the characteristics, and described the colors of the stems, leaves and flowers in a bouquet of red flowers with figurative sentences and anthropomorphic sentences, which shows how much you like this kind of flowers!

12, you have accumulated so many beautiful words that you used a lot in this composition. Your handwriting is really beautiful. No wonder your classmates call you a calligrapher.

13, how apt your metaphor is and how vivid your parallelism is. Wouldn't it be an excellent composition if the ending was written in detail?

14, you wrote the shape of jasmine, let the beautiful rose show in front of people, how much you like jasmine, let us see and fall in love with jasmine.

15, your writing level is really fast! Writing flowers, grass, trees and so on in such a concrete way shows us the beauty of a vibrant spring.

Teacher's comment on composition 5 Please ask the player who won the first prize to take the stage to receive the prize. In the majestic March of the athletes and warm applause, I happily boarded the podium and proudly received the golden trophy and the red certificate from the judges and teachers. Ah, I finally won the first place in our county-level speech contest. Looking at the trophy in front of me, I couldn't help crying and remembered the past. I want to thank my teacher. His comments inspired me to stand on the platform and regain my confidence and passion for life.

Cicadas sing in dense trees, green and fat, red and thin. I remember I took part in the school speech contest for the first time last summer. At that time, I carefully prepared to practice hard and confidently went to the podium to show my skills. However, after all, it is the first time for me to attend a speech by so many people. I can't help being flustered under the eyes of the public. I was so sweaty that I forgot my speech. As you can imagine, I entered the competition with confidence, but failed. My self-confidence suddenly dropped to freezing point, and I became depressed and even listless in class. The teacher seemed to see my difference, so he arranged a weekly diary for us to write down our recent unhappiness.

So I expressed my resentment in my weekly diary. Unexpectedly, the day after Zhou Ji was handed in, the teacher called me to the office and said, I see you are absent-minded recently. You really said it in Zhou Ji. The failure of the game affected your mood. Today, I want to tell you cautiously that there will be another speech contest at school next year. I decided to recommend you to attend again. I hope you will remember my comments and don't let me down.

Then he gave me a weekly diary. When I opened it, I wrote an exciting sentence. Bamboo shoots become bamboo when they fall, and fish become dragons when they run around. I excitedly wrote the teacher's comments on the title page of my diary, and secretly vowed that I must be on the podium.

In this way, I was moved and looked forward to another speech contest at school. In the competition, I learned the last lesson, calmly plunged into the competition, and finally won the first place in the whole school. The teacher talked to me again, and I was recommended to the county to participate in the finals. Today, I finally completed my mission and achieved success. Can I not get excited A good word, a thousand dollars is not easy. Thanks for the teacher's comments, which made me feel lifeless.

Teacher's Comments Composition 6 The teacher's comments are praise, criticism, encouragement and hope-the teacher's comments are warm spring breeze, which melts the ice in the hearts of classmates; The teacher's comments are magical fairy grass, which can change a person's attitude and even his life. Everyone has the most unforgettable comments, and I am no exception.

"You are a sensible child." This seemingly ordinary sentence is one of my most unforgettable comments, which was written to me by Mr. Zhang, the fourth-grade class teacher. To tell the truth, I used to be a good student but a little naughty, but I might get into trouble every semester. I stepped on someone else's stool today, knocked over someone else's pencil box tomorrow, and was left behind by the teacher that day. So many students call me "tomboy" behind my back. But then, I did something that can't be wrong, and now I think my face is still burning badly. From then on, I bit myself and said, "Don't be crazy in everything, otherwise it will only lead to sadness!" " "I deeply understand what' joy brings sorrow'. In the future, I will think carefully before doing everything and think about the result. If what you are doing is dangerous and wrong, correct it quickly or enough is enough. My brother and grandmother laughed at me and said, "Yo, the tomboy has become a lady! "The teacher's comments made me more obedient when I entered the fifth grade, and also made my life smoother." I hope you can be more tolerant of your classmates. "I blush at the mention of this. In my junior year, although I was very popular with my classmates, it was easy to fall out with them. First, because I was outspoken when I was a child, others made mistakes or saw things that were not pleasing to the eye, which offended many students. Second, others point out their own key points, and they don't listen at all. Sometimes they say a few words to others and don't know how to cherish friendship. Now, however, I have many close friends and have a very deep friendship with them. Because once, Teacher Zhang told me that we should learn from Jingya and Linzi to be tolerant of others, listen attentively to the shortcomings pointed out by others, and strive to make ourselves more perfect. The teacher's comments are really amazing!

Teacher's Comments on Composition 7 Every time you send out a test paper, the first thing you want to see is the teacher's comments. The handwriting embedded in the corner of the striking score may be a little scrawled. Occasionally, I will see the handwriting in different shades after the pen is refilled with water, but it feels warm and full-it was written by the teacher himself, and I will naturally cherish it. Looking at the comments and savoring them carefully, you will always be intoxicated, just like enjoying a small poem. Look at the elegant handwriting in the comments, how beautiful it is! Especially the language of praise appears on my test paper, how rare it is!

Look at those changeable words, sometimes serious, sometimes humorous and cheerful, sometimes approachable and sometimes thought-provoking. Whether it is easy to understand or profound twists and turns, it makes my heart beat like a drum. Sometimes we don't criticize or praise directly, but leave a short and enlightening sentence for ourselves to experience. ...

Success and failure coexist, not every exam can be smooth sailing.

It may be that I got carried away because I did better in the previous exam, or maybe I was addicted to surfing the Internet the night before the exam and did surprisingly poorly in the math exam. Until now, the pain of falling out with Sun Shan is still deeply imprinted on my mind. I am no longer eager to hand out test papers, to see comments written by teachers, or even to be afraid of reading them. I know that my behavior has failed the trust of the teacher, and I am ashamed of the comments on the test paper that contain the teacher's painstaking efforts.

The test papers are still being handed out, and I clearly see the students who handed them out smiling contemptuously at me. Facing the test paper, I dare not even read the comments below the score. I don't want to see the cold and critical comments on the test paper, and I don't want to know that the teacher has given up hope on me. I glanced at the test paper helplessly, and what I saw actually relaxed my mood a lot: "No matter how smart a person is, he sometimes thinks long and sometimes loses." Not to mention you? Don't lose hope, the teacher expects your next good grades. "A few short words touched me very much. The teacher didn't despise me because of a slip of the tongue. The teacher understands me.

Because of this lesson and the teacher's profound comments, I got rid of my rashness, arrogance and impetuousness, and I remembered every knowledge. In the next exam, I answered questions with ease and got good grades.

The mood of reading teachers' comments has also become relaxed. Reading the connotation of comments always brings me thinking and reverie. "Where there is a will, there is a way." "Ninety-nine percent of genius depends on hard work", which looks very kind, encouraging and meaningful.

For these reasons, I prefer teachers' comments. Whether it is praise, encouragement, criticism or persuasion, I will carefully understand and keep it in mind, and I will continue to learn and grow from teachers' comments. ...

The teacher commented on the composition 8 1, everything is possible, and your efforts will be successful!

I did well this time. If I work harder, I will be better!

Step 3 relax the requirements ...

4, with your efforts, give me an encouragement, let's rush together!

5, a hard work, a harvest!

6. You work hard, you reap, you are diligent, and you succeed!

7. Encouragement is very important to you, I remember! Thank you!

8. I believe you can do better!

9, such a correct homework, must have made great efforts!

10, I couldn't help watching it twice, how beautiful it is!

1 1, you can't lower your demands on yourself! Because you can do better!

You should sum up more comprehensively! Come on!

13, this note made me understand the truth of life, thank you!

14, your sweat will not flow in vain, and your efforts will not be in vain!

15, I like your language so much, it's delicate, soft and resilient!

16, if you write like last homework, I will appreciate your resilience more!

17, the teacher believes in you, and you should also believe in yourself. You can write better!

18, failure is the mother of success, don't be discouraged!

19, the world is small, but people's hearts are big. I learned another sentence today.

20, the back is not as serious as the front, "persevere"!

2 1, I like your profound insights and your love of thinking!

22. Work harder!

23. Your friend is almost in front of you. Do not work hard!

24, pride goes before a fall!

25, the same size, neat lines.

26. Your efforts have given me strength!

27. Let everyone see a better you!

28. You didn't finish it seriously!

29, the details are not appropriate!

30. The true feelings between the lines touched me!

3 1, this is not your level!

32. I am in a good state of study these days!

33. Face failure calmly, and you will have the confidence to surpass yourself!

34, there is progress!

35. Come on! Come on! ! Come on! ! !

Try some popular science books, I think you need this knowledge!

37, study backwards, I will pay attention to you!

38. Your article inspired me a lot. Thank you!

39. Today, I saw your attentive expression when writing, and I was moved by you! You can see your progress by turning over the first page!

40. From you, I learned to struggle in obscurity!

4 1, yes, I hope you can concentrate more and set your goals higher!

42, how well written, a "peanut heart", a humble heart!

43. Don't disappoint the hopes of teachers and parents!

44. Fly your dreams and break through your desires!

45. I am very happy today, because I saw your composition!

I have read this book many times, so we can talk.

47. Give yourself a smiling face and you will find that life is completely different.

48. We can be more outstanding in composition innovation!

49.* * * Work together * * Make progress together!

50. Can you feel the teacher's expectation for you?

5 1, you are serious, keep working hard! You will do better!

You asked me to give him a smile, didn't you? Kid.

53, reading history can be wise, you write well!

54. I like your seriousness!

55. Hold your horses, read clearly and write accurately! You can do it!

56. I have a lot of homework, but I can still write so well. This is called persistence!

57, I like your focus on learning, it can affect me!

58, child, you have worked hard! I can feel it!

59. Try to express your feelings by scenery description and express your feelings by scenery. You are sure to learn!

60, children, know how to cherish you will have more!

6 1, like your language, simple and full of philosophy. Recommend it to everyone!

62. I believe my students. You have to believe in yourself. You can do it!

63. Homework is a necessary way to consolidate knowledge and must be done with heart!

64. Exchange homework with your classmates, and you will all gain something!

65. This is the harvest after hard work!

66. The character size is consistent and the font is standardized. You can do it. Come on!

67. Study hard and succeed. I'm glad you did it!

68. Write the words correctly, not out of line.

69. Learn from you!

70. Son, I like your progress and am happy for you!