Does the imaginary composition need to explain a truth?

Students, in your beautiful spiritual world, you must be full of good wishes. When you see the Monkey King's extraordinary ability to change endlessly, you may think, if only I could change seventy-two times; When you are tired of studying, you may think, if only I were a free cloud in the sky; When you see a disease taking a person's life, maybe you will think, if only I were an excellent doctor ... it is certainly impossible to realize my wish at once. However, you can completely realize your wishes in your composition through your own imagination and fantasy. This is a hypothesis, that is, the hypothetical composition we are going to study today.

Anyone's imagination and fantasy reflect his own ideals, wishes, longings and pursuits. If this bold idea is written, it will inspire people, arouse others' thinking and resonate with others, which should be a very meaningful thing. However, many students report that such a composition is not easy to write. It is true that it is easy to write an imaginary composition, but it is really difficult to write an imaginary composition well. Because, it is not the real life we have had, but the real life we have experienced with plots, experiences and feelings. Imaginative composition, as the name implies, is imaginary, not the life that has happened and seen.

Imagination is indispensable in writing, but it doesn't mean imagination in writing is imaginary writing. Therefore, it is incorrect to say that imagination in composition is imagination in composition. After reading the following example, everyone will understand.

In the spring of March, it rained several times in Mao Mao, and the Chinese rose grew flowers and bones. The flower bone is tightly wrapped by several layers of calyx, so it can't move at all.

A few days later, the flowers were bright, pink, crimson and red ... colorful and beautiful. Look, there are flowers here. They stick out chubby little faces from the leaves. Looking around, they seem to see something new, and they seem to nod and smile at us! Sometimes, when the flowers wither and droop, just like a naughty child doing something wrong, it makes people feel embarrassed to lower their heads.

(In the above paragraphs, the author vividly depicts the blooming scene of Chinese rose flowers in March with rich imagination, such as "chubby face", "look east and west", "nod and smile" and "like a naughty child". There are indeed many fictional descriptions in this exercise, but this article can't be regarded as a fictional composition. We can know that imaginary composition is different from "imagination" in ordinary composition. Imaginary composition refers not to the imagination of details and plots, but to the imagination of the whole composition. For example, the imagination of the layout of Guilin mountains and rivers in textbooks; The last paragraph of the article "Spring"; The imagination of brothers and sisters listening to the piano in moonlight music is also the imagination of details or plots. )

We often come into contact with many fictional elements. In order to help students understand them, we divide them into several categories. Now, look at the screen:

1, see picture composition:

The picture is the epitome of real life, but the picture can only reflect the plane and posture. If you want to write the picture "alive", you must use your imagination to expand the story, and turn static into motion and static into sound. For example, "Rabbit Carrying Pumpkin" that we learned before, and the writing method of comic books at the back of the tenth textbook are all examples in this respect. To complete this kind of exercise, it is the key to observe the picture carefully, understand that the meaning in the picture is the foundation, and come up with and write new ideas.

2, material reorganization composition:

That is, according to the various materials and conditions provided, use your imagination and connect with the story.

(1) Imagine the composition according to the given figure. Give you a circle, you can add a few strokes to it, imagine it as different objects and write a composition. )

(2) Play (or directly give) several sounds for you to choose from, imagine and create stories. Write a short story according to the train whistle, bird calls, coughs and firecrackers. )

(3) According to the given words and scope, it is required to create stories.

Title: Secret

Words: No one knows-hesitation-friends-tears-heavy rain-rainbow-smile.

Requirements: the topic is to imagine the scope of the composition, and the specified words must appear in the story, which can disturb the order of the words.

(4) According to the given items, imagine things related to the items and write a composition. There is a little ink stain on a snow-white skirt. Please imagine and create a story that happened between classmates according to this skirt stained with ink.

I have prepared an example for you here.

Topic requirements: Choose a group from the following words, imagine what might happen between them and make up a short story. (1, panda, cat, oak, fire pit. 2, streams, dead leaves, the sea. 3. Peony, North Wind, Plum Blossom, Little Girl)

The little author of the following article chose the first group of words and wrote a short story.

The story of cats and pandas

Once upon a time, cats and pandas were very small and were often bullied by big men such as tigers and wolves. According to the elders, the mountain gods will help the weak to become strong, so they decided to go to the mountain gods.

They walked, walked and went through hardships, and finally came to the corner of the foot of the mountain and found the mountain god. The man said to the mountain god, "dear mountain god, we are all small people and are often bullied by big people." Many of our partners were hurt. Please have mercy and let us become tall and big. Let's take revenge! " The mountain god said, "I understand how you feel." I can help you, but whether you succeed or not will ultimately depend on yourself. " You must find a thousand-year-old elephant tree. There is a big fire pit there. If you dare to jump, you will grow tall and big. "They bid farewell to the mountain god and went to look for the old oak tree.

They walked and walked for 7749 days, and finally found the old oak tree and the big fire pit under it. Looking at the blazing flame, the cat recoiled. He thought, how could the mountain god let us jump into the fire pit? He must be playing a trick on us. Okay, I won't jump! Let the panda jump, maybe it will burn to death.

The panda jumped up bravely, while the cat stood by and watched with glee.

It was a long time before the panda climbed up from the fire pit. When the cat saw it, the panda had become tall and big. At this time, the cat also wanted to jump into the fire pit, but it was too late. The mysterious and terrible fire pit has been closed.

Since then, we have seen cats and pandas, which are quite different in size.

Students, the author's imagination in the above exercise is extremely rich, which not only completes the requirements of the exercise, but also has a complete content, clear thinking and a certain truth in the short story. At the same time, it can also grasp the psychological description and be vivid. But think about it, such a good composition can't be separated from the rich reading and accumulation of small authors! )

3. Expand the text composition: Most of these exercises require us to expand our reasonable imagination and process and transform the text content on the basis of reading the text. Such as: addition, supplement, expansion, continuation, rewriting and so on.

For example, after learning "The Poor", continue to write the text with the title "After Sang Na opened the curtain"; After learning My Uncle Lu Xun, fill in the driver's appearance according to the word "weather-beaten"; After learning the text "Little Match Girl", I wrote exercise questions, the topics are "Sir, please buy a match", "Come back, Dad won't hit you", "Grandma is alive", "Little Match Girl comes among us" and so on.

Many imaginary compositions mentioned above are common types in composition competitions, so in our textbook exercises, the most common forms are as follows:

4. Fairy tale composition: Let us imagine according to our favorite animals, plants and objects, give them life, let them talk and think, and let interesting stories happen between them. For example, some students have written Flowers Than Beauty, Pencil Sharpener Storm, The Adventures of Duckling, etc. In our textbooks, such as "Good Horse", "Ugly Duckling" and "Whispers in the Yard", these articles are all of this type.

5, imaginary composition: that is, according to a certain situation, combined with their own life experience to imagine and associate. There are two kinds of such compositions: one is realistic, such as me ten years later and my future school; The other one doesn't exist at all, and it can also be called fantasy composition, such as "If I were a cat" and "New Residents on the Moon".

We have learned a lot about imaginary composition above, so how can we write it well? Let's take a closer look at the example of Me Ten Years Later. The content of this article belongs to the imagination of reality.

Fan Wen commented:

Me in ten years

Time flies, and in a blink of an eye it is the year 2022.

One morning, I heard the urging sound of the multifunctional pillow: "Beijing time is seven o'clock sharp, please get up, please get up." So I stretched myself and a gentleman sat up. When I get up, the sensor on the opposite wall automatically plays my favorite music. I went to a chair and sat down. You may ask, "Why don't you wear shoes?" Because there are three white, red and green buttons on this universal chair, these three buttons have different functions. I press the white button, and the robot automatically helps me put on my shoes and tie my shoelaces. Then I pressed the red button and a toothbrush flew over to help me brush my teeth. Finally, I pressed the green button again, and the robot hand reached out a hot towel to help me wash my face successfully. Everything is ready. I picked up the microphone in the universal chair and said, "Fried eggs with milk, hamburgers." Say that finish, the microphone shrank back. The manipulator immediately found the corresponding materials, and a minute later, breakfast was served to me. After breakfast, it was time to go to school. I pointed the direction button of the universal chair to the direction of the school, and then pressed "Start". I saw the opposite window slowly open, and the universal chair carried me to "Tsinghua University". When I arrived at the university, I didn't read the textbook. It turns out that these have been replaced by computers and "big screens". I found a seat to sit down, turned on the computer, and saw the knowledge and homework I want to learn today on the screen, so I went online to look up relevant information and learn relevant knowledge. An hour later, my homework was finished. Then, I played chess, chatted and played games online with my classmates from famous foreign universities. Sometimes I go to the White House reference room to see their information; Sometimes when you see something you like, you buy it online. Sometimes I also speculate on stocks and horse races online ... look how convenient it is! How carefree and convenient it is to stay at home and fix everything!

Today, ten years later, the development of science and technology has opened your eyes and left you at a loss. Students, study hard now, otherwise how can you keep up with the times?

This exercise is a typical hypothetical composition, which describes the content of real life in the future. When you see the topic, you will think "What will I be like in ten years". First of all, the little author points out the time at the beginning of the article, and then expands the full text in the order of development.

Here we should get such a revelation. Although the fictional elements are fictional, they should be "real" in writing, with time, place and characters, and the whole story should be complete. That is to say, writing the real life in the future with the method of real life narration makes people feel that it is a real thing and a real person.

In this article, the author gave full play to his rich imagination. Such as: multifunctional pillows, wall sensors, universal chairs, robot hands, etc. These contents tell us to imagine boldly in our imaginary composition, because we are in an era of rapid development of science and technology, and we should dare to think about the future world and design a future society that meets our wishes and ideals. Our future career, work and achievements should also conform to the characteristics of the future society, but we should pay attention to the following points: It is unreasonable for many students to move science fiction plots and even myths into "future real life". The imaginary component of real life in the future is an ideal imagination rather than an unattainable fantasy imagination, let alone a myth.

Finally, the author summarizes the above and points out that we must study hard to keep pace with the times. It can be seen that writing imaginary composition is to concretize our ideals, and ultimately to write about our beautiful life.

The following article belongs to the fantasy category. Please listen carefully and compare with the above example.

Special trial

Overnight, many similar notices were posted around the world:

Changsha court will hold a public hearing on the case at 9: 00 am on July 5, 2003. People from all walks of life are invited to attend on time.

That morning, people attended the trial, and the whole court was packed.

At 9 o'clock in the morning, I went to the position of the presiding judge and solemnly announced: "Call the defendant Sass." The TV turned on, and there stood the big bad guy SARS, bared his teeth and did all kinds of evil. He was accompanied by two burly guards in protective clothing.

I said to the defendant seriously, "Do you know the crime of the defendant SARS?" SARS looked at me as if nothing had happened and shook his head arrogantly.

I took out an indictment and read aloud: "The defendant SARS is a rare coronavirus. You spread the virus to people through close air droplets and respiratory secretions. Sars patients can't afford to have a high fever, ache all over, dry cough with little phlegm, and in severe cases, they have difficulty breathing and even lose their lives. At present, 8439 people around the world have been infected with SARS, and 842 people have died of SARS. Because of you, factories can't work normally, shops can't be full of customers, and schools can't have classes normally ... "

"I want to prove that my father is a doctor. He died of SARS while saving a patient. I hate SARS, it cost me my dear father! " "I also want to testify ..." People said angrily, and angry eyes shot at SARS from all directions.

"SARS, I sentence you to death and burn you to death with a raging fire." I can't control my feelings anymore, I said angrily.

"But it can't be entirely my fault!" Sarah won't defend herself. "People constantly destroy the environment and even eat their friends and animals. In fact, the virus is hidden in animals. Moreover, if you spit everywhere, there are 100,000 viruses in one bite! "

People in the audience are talking about it. I pondered for a while and said, "Everyone here, I was sentenced to death for SARS today, but I hope that when we go back, we can think about this question: how should we treat the environment ..."

Students, according to the above study and two examples, do you know how to write an imaginary composition? Let's sum up:

1. Bold and imaginative. 2. Be reasonable. 3. Be real. 4. Clear the center.

To write an imaginary composition, we must first relax our imagination. Novel and rich imagination will bring wonderful colors to the composition. In this space, you are the master of the whole world, because everything in this world exists because of your imagination. The more you think, the more colorful the world will be. On the contrary, if your imagination is poor, your world will be bleak.

Of course, all imagination is a reflection of real life from a certain angle and cannot be separated from real life. Novelty does not mean strangeness. Only imagination with a certain real life foundation is an understandable world that can be accepted by most people. So when we spread our wings and soar, don't forget that real life depends on the air we take off. To write a good imaginary composition, we must pay attention to observing the details of life and absorb scientific knowledge in daily life. Based on these contents, you can build a dreamy and beautiful world of your own.

Take The Little Match Girl as an example. The strange sight that the little girl saw when she struck a match five times was the author's imagination. These imaginations are strange and bold, but readers still feel reasonable. Why? Because the author witnessed the tragic experience of poor children with his own eyes and deeply understood their inner needs. In the article, imagination is similar to reality, that is, poor children's desire for a happy life. It is natural and reasonable for the author to imagine that the little girl saw a warm stove, a delicious roast goose, a beautiful Christmas tree and a kind grandmother when she was unconscious, and flew away with her grandmother.

Although the imaginary composition is only an unfulfilled ideal, it should be the most sincere ideal, expectation or wish in children's hearts. This type of imagination is most closely related to reality. When writing, you should carefully observe your life, pay attention to highlighting the key points, and choose materials around this key point. It's a no-no to cover all the subjects.

Here, we should focus on the sci-fi exercises in imaginary composition, which many students like, but they often write unsatisfactorily, blindly pursuing novelty, strangeness and strangeness, while ignoring the most basic requirements of accuracy, clarity, completeness and truth in language and plot. Another reason is that the author knows little about relevant scientific knowledge, so the content of the exercises is "four unlike", and some even come out. If you want to write this imaginary composition well, you must accumulate more scientific and technological knowledge!

Appreciation of excellent works

Bird's prayer

Zhang Sujuan, Grade 6, No.3 Primary School, Hanfeng Town, Kaixian County, Chongqing

I am a poor bird.

I once lived in a dense forest in the upper reaches of the Yellow River, where the scenery was beautiful and the air was fresh. The river there is clear and blue; There are abundant weeds and blooming flowers ... I live in a carefree home with my friends. All kinds of animals live in harmony. When the sun is shining and the spring breeze is warm, we often get together to hold a grand party. We are free and happy!

Our home is beautiful: Aunt Chun brings us bursts of spring breeze with cheerful dance; Xia Bobo brought us a pool of clear water and clear springs against the background of blue sky and white clouds; Uncle Qiu greeted the bleak cool breeze and presented us with a string of golden fruits; Grandpa Dong put on his white winter clothes and reported our hopes for the coming year.

We are proud and gratified to have a comfortable and warm home!

Time is like running water, gone forever. With the continuous expansion of human territory, our lovely home is gradually destroyed by human beings.

When I flew back to my hometown again. I was very surprised at this sight:

Spring has come, and Sister Cao has emerged from the soil and is no longer so green. The wild flowers opened her smiling face, but her smile was covered with a trace of melancholy; Brother Dahe took off his thick ice coat, but his body became thinner and thinner. Grandpa Dashu's condition is getting worse and worse, and the business of several new buds who just debuted is so lacking.

The long summer is really hard. The sun is exposed in the bare forest, and the song of the animal singer-cicada is so weak that it makes people upset.

Autumn has come, and the fruits on the trees are sparse, not as red or as big as before, so indifferent.

Winter has just arrived, and the animals in the forest are going to hibernate.

Not far away, the "rumble" of machines in factories, the "beep" of cars on highways and the "bang" of logging in the Woods are endless.

Ah, we lost our beautiful and charming home. Pieces of trees were cut down and the grass was yellow; Wild flowers hang their heads; The river is about to stop flowing. Tall buildings have risen from the ground, and the chimneys are constantly emitting smoke. The environment is destroyed, the blue sky is no longer blue, and the river is no longer clear. Our old home has become a dead zone. There are no more animal laughter in the forest; No more warm sunshine; No more gurgling springs; No more lullabies. ...

Dear friend-human, please help us! We long for blue sky and clear water, and we pray for a peaceful home.

[Brief Comment] The little author expressed his understanding of environmental protection in the form of fairy tales with the unique vision of children and from the standpoint of birds. The idea is novel and strange, the language is beautiful and vivid, and the feelings are sincere and touching. At the end of the article, the bird called on human beings to "save us!" We long for blue sky and clear water, and we pray for a peaceful home. "Mental health, central prominent.

Students, what do you feel through your study and appreciation just now? It is not difficult to imagine writing a composition. We must cultivate and adhere to good writing habits and establish confidence in writing well. Your writing level will definitely improve.