Write composition class records with the method of seeing the big from the small.

1. To write two 600-word compositions, we must first determine the characteristics of this person and what to write about him.

For example. For example, you want to write about a good friend of yours.

Write that he is very enthusiastic and loves to help others, so think of some examples first, such as how to help the children next door, how to help you and your classmates, how to help the old man who is about to cross the road on the way, and so on. Remember! Examples are a good way, which can not only enrich your articles, but also give people an empty feeling and increase the number of words instantly.

Write in detail, write one thing in detail, and then write a few things briefly. Just use the most pleasing structure-the total score.

Grasp the composition of primary school students in general. First, improve the ability to understand and express things. Mr. Ye Shengtao, a famous educator in China, pointed out: "Writing anything depends on knowledge and experience. What kind of knowledge and experience can make you write something.

On the other hand, if you have no ability to express your understanding, you can't write a good composition. "Second, take the cognitive structure as the core of the composition, including learning knowledge, observing accumulation, memory storage, training thinking, enriching imagination, cultivating emotion and exercising will; From talking about writing, scrutinizing and revising, reading more books and writing more.

Third, establish the concept of big composition and combine listening, speaking, reading and writing organically. The second is to make clear the purpose of writing and be innovative; Third, the selection of materials should be based on evidence; Fourth, we should pay attention to writing skills and arrange the structure of the text; Fifth, we should pay attention to the segmentation of the article and list the subheadings and composition outlines in advance; Sixth, we should pay attention to the writing and usage of the article; Seventh, we should use language skillfully and use thought to schedule language. Learn five ways to conceive: praise people with things, express their feelings directly, reason with things, touch the scene and express their feelings with things.

Fourth, the composition goal is decomposed year by year: first-level words, second-level sentences, third-level fragments, fourth-level chapters, fifth-level synthesis and sixth-level improvement. V. Implementing Five Trainings According to the principle that cognition is the core of composition, around the core of developing students' psychological mechanism, five trainings have been carried out in a down-to-earth manner: (1) Word training.

Learn to master many words. Master the golden key to using words: contact with things you are familiar with; Contact your own life reality; Contact your knowledge of language and writing.

Use the method of "ten quotations" to combine word learning with oral training. The "Top Ten Quotations" are: 1, analyzing glyphs; 2. Use teaching AIDS; 3. Look at the pictures and learn words; 4. Word formation and expansion; 5. Choose words to fill in the blanks; 6. collocation of words; 7. Adjust the word order; 8. Words used to move the scene; 9. Word classification; 10, conjunctions into sentences.

Enrich the content of oral training, so that I can accumulate a large number of words that I can speak and use, and lay a solid foundation for writing. (2) Sentence training.

As long as it is a sentence, it includes two aspects: one is about people, things, things and scenery, and the other is about purpose. However, some teachers do not use pictures and things to seriously teach students the methods of observation, understanding, analysis and expression when instructing students to say a sentence. They just take out a picture or something for students to say and write a sentence. Students don't know why to say and write a sentence, how to say and write a sentence, and what sentence patterns to say and write, which leads to a single, dull and lifeless composition tone.

Students can be taught to speak and write a sentence with four complete elements, four sentence patterns and nine sentence patterns, according to pictures, things, dialogues and exercises. Students will use different sentence patterns and sentence patterns to express different thoughts, feelings, attitudes and purposes in their compositions.

(3) Paragraph training. Combination of eight segments: the development of things is a sequential segment, time is a sequential segment, and spatial transformation is a sequential segment, a general and substructure segment, a causal segment, a turning segment, a progressive segment, and a parallel segment.

In order to understand the law of occurrence and development of objective things. No matter what kind of paragraph, it describes the development of things and people's understanding of things, that is, the content and the center of the paragraph.

Like a sentence, it is also a description of people, things, things and scenery, and it also expresses a meaning. Just to make a sentence clearer and deeper.

(4) Text training. A chapter consists of paragraphs.

Through the knowledge and methods of examining topics, making ideas, selecting materials, planning articles, defining methods and terms, through the four expression methods of narration, description, lyricism and discussion, the methods of beginning and end of articles, transition and echo, and the knowledge and methods of various article genres. Learn to write narrative and practical articles with clear center, complete meaning and appropriate details.

(5), life on-site training. Use on-site training to better understand writing from the content.

Through various composition teaching activities such as "centering", "selecting materials", "composition consultation meeting", "Xiao Zhuge grade examination meeting" and "wonderful word competition meeting", we can learn composition knowledge and writing methods vividly and concretely from the activities. In addition, you can also carry out various activities inside and outside the school, such as skipping rope, tug-of-war, kicking shuttlecock, ball games, endorsement competitions, etc., and learn how to write competition compositions; Carry out voluntary labor inside and outside the school and learn how to write labor scenes; Hold poetry recitals and lectures to learn how to write conference scenes and experiences; Learn how to write travel notes and travel notes by visiting and browsing places of interest.

Learn to observe methods and pay attention to things around you. "Pay attention to everything and you will learn. The cultivation of human feelings is the article." Through on-site life composition, I further realized that life is fertile ground for composition.

So as to learn something, express the true feelings, cultivate the sentiments of truth, goodness and beauty, and cultivate a good style of writing. Implement "mutual evaluation and mutual reform" to cultivate students' thinking independence and creativity.

After students write their compositions, organize group comments. Learn the advantages of other people's compositions first, and then point out the shortcomings in their own compositions with critical eyes and suggestions for improvement.

Rewrite on this basis, so that students can learn something from each article they write. Writing an honest self "writing an honest self" is what the old educator Mr. Ye Shengtao said.

It aims to create a colorful "independent" composition world. The so-called "autonomy" means that students are free to think and write without being restricted by rules and regulations.

"Independent" composition means "speaking from the heart", acting spontaneously, showing self-style, and embodying distinctive personality. We should break away from the old composition teaching method, let students write in an "independent" state, get rid of affectation and imitation, and give them fresh imagination and rich creativity.

2. How to emphasize, select and condense the image in writing by using the method of seeing the big from the small, and grasp a point or a part with unique imagination for key description or extension, thus fully expressing the theme.

This kind of artistic treatment from small to large, never generalizing, brings great flexibility and infinite expressive force to the writer, and also provides a broad imagination space for the receiver, and obtains vivid interest and rich associations. Seeing the "small" in the big is the focus of description. It is not only the concentration and growth of writing creativity, but also the writer's unique arrangement, because it is not "small" in the general sense, but the product of small and highly refined, and it is a concise and deliberate pursuit.

The way to express the big theme with the small theme in life. Some things in life seem ordinary, but they contain profound meanings.

A drop of water can also reflect the brilliance of the sun. As long as you are good at discovering the essence through phenomena, small materials can also reflect profound themes.

3. Write a composition on a small scale, about 400 words. My uncle I have a very good uncle. He loves me the most, and I like him very much.

He collects taxes, and he usually wears a big hat, which is very powerful. Sometimes, he puts a big hat on my head, and I go forward to make everyone laugh.

But something happened recently, which gave me a new view of my uncle. It was Saturday night, and my mother took me to my uncle's house to play.

As soon as I entered the door, I found a stranger talking to my uncle. Seeing us come in, the stranger grabbed his uncle's big hat, covered a pile of things on the coffee table in a panic, and got up to leave.

I only heard my uncle say, "OK, I'm sure I can do it well!" " As he spoke, he walked the man out. When my uncle went to see Fujian, I curiously lifted the big cap and looked, ah! I was shocked at once, a thick stack of "great unification"! Hum, what a surprise that uncle can do such a shameful thing! I thought angrily.

After a while, my uncle came to talk to me. I pretended not to hear him and just ignored him. The next day, my uncle came to my house and asked me what happened yesterday. Do I feel sick?

I gave him a white look and said nothing, feeling that my uncle was not pleasing to the eye. In order to tease me, he put a big hat on my head, and I got rid of it violently.

In the evening, my mother asked me to send fish to grandma. Grandma lives in my uncle's house. Although I am not happy to see my uncle, I can't say no, so I have to go.

I came to my uncle's house, but fortunately I didn't meet my uncle. Thank god. I handed the fish to grandma, turned around and walked out.

When I passed my uncle's room, I suddenly heard something moving inside, so I crept open the door and looked inside. Shit, that stranger was at his uncle's house again yesterday.

What's he doing here? I pricked up my ears to listen. "My fine ..." This is a stranger's voice.

There was a silence in the room for a while, and my uncle said, "Last time, you should be fined 5000 yuan to 10000 yuan according to the regulations, but considering that this is your first tax evasion, I decided to punish you 5000 yuan. I paid you 2000 yuan yesterday, so you can pay another 3000 yuan tomorrow! Remember in the future, pay taxes consciously, don't do that ... "Uncle is educating him about tax law.

When I heard this, I felt guilty and uneasy. I was wrong about you, my good uncle. I'm sorry

4. Write a composition entitled "My Most Unforgettable Composition" in a small way. About 500 words in my heart. The past is like the stars in the sky, countless.

In the meantime, there is the brightest star, which is dazzling in beauty and I will never forget it. It started in physical education class last Friday.

During the break, the teacher announced: "In this class, we passed the hoop pushing exam." As soon as I heard this, my head swelled and I thought, "Ah! What a tragedy! Why do I have to take an exam in a project that I am not good at? " I finished the preparatory activities in fear and trembling.

After setting the route and announcing the rules, the teacher said, "If anyone thinks it's ok, let's try." There are brave students to try, but I have been standing there, watching the happy faces of students after passing the customs. I didn't dare to try, for fear that others would laugh at me, so I survived a class.

In the second class, several students who passed the exam went to play, but most of them still failed. The teacher asked us to continue practicing. I thought to myself: anyway, "all are dead", go and try! After repeated failures, I was finally knocked down.

I threw the hoop on the ground angrily and was about to leave when Li came over and saw me like this and said, "Don't be angry! I'll teach you! " I nodded happily and thought: this time is great! With expert guidance, you will succeed! He immediately taught me the posture hand in hand. He told me the way to push and turn around, and let me try again. I gave it a push, which was much easier, but I didn't look back at the corner. It happened several times in a row. Lee saw my weakness-turning, so he showed me once and told me how to move my hand when turning.

I tried again and found that the operation was much more flexible when turning. Li also praised me: "Great!" My confidence doubled. In the third class, I practiced repeatedly.

Finally, for once, the circle was at my mercy. I passed! I went to Li Shuxiang to thank him, but he smiled and said, "Nothing, you will do the same!" " "Hearing this, my eyes couldn't help getting wet ... How warm the cold hoop is at this time! It will be treasured in my memory forever.

There is one thing that I can't forget for a long time. I'll be angry if I don't think about it. This thing is like this ... one day, I was walking leisurely on campus, and suddenly a scene in the corner of the campus attracted me. When I saw two tall classmates around a little classmate, I knew it was not good at first sight.

I was lost in thought, and I thought, "What will those two tall classmates do to that little classmate? Have to do some wicked things ... "Return to absolute being, see little classmates crying. Those two tall classmates must have scared him and bullied him.

I was thinking. Thinking of this, I think how can I stand by and watch? But I thought about it. Those two tall students are so tall that I believe they won't listen. Scold them? You should scold him, too Not to mention a taxi.

So I can only watch and do nothing. Later, I couldn't stand it. I really can't stand it.

I decided to reason with them, but who knew that they wouldn't bully the little classmate just as they were about to go there. And that little classmate ran away in a mess. So the teacher came, I think.

So I left, too On the way, I kept thinking: "Now that the society has been reforming and opening up, how can there be such scum?" Like those two tall students just now. Look, they look good, but how can they bully their classmates? Don't they know to respect the old and love the young? ..... "Thought of here, I thought:" If only there were less scum like this in society! Giving up is a kind of wisdom, and defect is a kind of grace.

The most unforgettable sentence: when you have six apples, don't eat them all, because if you eat all six apples, you only get six apples, and you only get one taste, that is, the taste of apples. If you take out five of the six apples for others to eat, it seems that you have lost five apples, but in fact you have gained the friendship and goodwill of the other five people.

You can get more later. When others have other fruits, they will definitely share them with you. You will get an orange from this person and a pear from that person. In the end, you may get six kinds of fruits, six different flavors, six different colors and six people's friendship. People must learn to exchange what you have for something more important and richer for you.

So giving up is a kind of wisdom. The greatest pleasure of being a man is to get what we want through struggle. Shortcomings mean that we can further improve, while shortcomings mean that we can make further efforts.

Some truths are incomprehensible without saying them, perhaps even if you are separated by a layer of paper. When personal thinking can't solve some problems or even continue to form a deadlock, quit quickly and seek outside help.

Without reference, human beings will stop making progress.

5. Seeking the Beauty of Fading The composition is very small (quite critical). Autumn is often regarded as the season of decline, so Qiu Jin sang the poem "Autumn wind and autumn rain make people sad".

Yes, autumn is indeed the season of withering, the leaves are yellow, the flowers are defeated, and the hearts of the relocated poets are filled with faint sadness. It's quite crucial. Perhaps leaves are a symbol of autumn, telling people that the inevitable withering will come with the wind in a year, but I think leaves have their own beauty of withering.

Perhaps it is the call of autumn wind that makes it reluctant to leave home, perhaps it is the invitation of the earth that makes it dusty and fall into the world, or it wants to explore the beauty of the world in the autumn wind, but these are not important. What is important is that it has achieved new growth with a little strength in life. Leaves leave their original position to the next generation.

The leaving of the leaves preserves the energy of the whole tree and makes it grow stronger in the coming year. This is the dying beauty. Cruel and helpless.

The society we live in now is an endless world, and no one can stay at one level without moving forward. Everyone is a leaf on the big tree of society. We must constantly absorb nutrients to achieve the continuation of life.

Like leaves, they absorb sunlight and rain to enrich themselves that may wither at any time. Leaves are inseparable from trees, people are inseparable from society, and we all depend on a big tree.

Just as leaves will leave trees one day, people will leave society one day, not because society has abandoned us, but because we can't keep up with the speed of society. So we quit helplessly and withered helplessly-we are old.

We should try to discover beauty. Leaving doesn't mean leaving nothing. Our efforts are still shaking in the crowd, inspiring people to never give up. Our bright smiles are still flashing, planting joy where we passed.

Although people are gone, the imprint that vividly exists in society is branded in history. Our departure also provides more places for those who are ready to leave, and the same work platform will be their brilliant stage.

Fading is irreplaceable, and the sadness of leaves leaving trees plays a beautiful plot in great loss.

6. Write a short composition and go to bed on a small scale.

Campus life is rich and colorful. Even the slightest thing sometimes makes everyone happy and sometimes arouses excitement among us. Take the fact that students who live on campus turn off the lights when they sleep. Although we can live in harmony on weekdays, when we go to bed, we will stage a farce of turning off the lights, and everyone will express their opinions and show their "cleverness."

At nine o'clock in the evening, with the sound of sleeping, some students released the last madness-sang a strong song: "I can't catch love ..." Someone will pick up something like "Who has an ear spoon?" Everyone should sleep in their own "embassy" at school. Turn off the lights when you sleep, otherwise it will be difficult to fall asleep. So, here's the question-who will turn off the lights? A battle of wits and wits began.

Glasses Liu said: "it is obligatory to turn off the lights, which is what our boss must do." The so-called king of a country loves the people first. " Do you think it makes sense? "Glasses are notoriously contradicting superiors, but they want to enjoy public service but not public servants.

A stone stirred up a thousand waves, and the head of the dormitory immediately objected: "Fairness and justice are principles. Officials pit people wrong, people pit officials. Equality and mutual understanding between the government and the people is the general trend. It is better to turn off the lights in turn in the future. " Thin Ayun asked, "Lei Feng spirit. We often say verbally, isn't there anyone in the dormitory willing to act and perform? " Obviously, this "we" does not include him. At this time, Xiao Pang expressed his high opinion: "Stop arguing. Since no one is willing to do good deeds, it is also a waste of manpower to take turns. I think it is better to choose a lantern. " Monkey A Xiang immediately echoed: "Well, what's the salary? What treatment? *** ! "The whole dormitory burst out laughing. After everyone laughed, Glasses Liu reiterated: "Water can carry a boat and also overturn it. It is not ordinary people who are brought up by officials. They should worry about the world before enjoying it. To get everyone's support, we must shoulder our due obligations. " This, of course, was more strongly opposed by the dormitory manager. ...

The light has been on for a long time. Who will turn it off? -People are still arguing.

The teacher on duty knocked at the door: "Why don't you turn off the lights?" "I'm talking about who will close it!" "This still use to discuss? Next to the switch, of course ... "While speaking, the voice has gone.

But the bed has two floors. Is it closed upstairs or downstairs? The argument continues.

Of course, the light was finally turned off. Who turned it off? I won't tell you!

7. Write a short essay from a small point of view. Facing the family, everyone has his own unique understanding. In my opinion, affection is a delicious home-cooked dish, and my father is a fire and full of enthusiasm; Mother is oil, delicate and soft; I, on the other hand, am the dish to be cooked, which is gradually maturing under the care of my parents.

Affection is like a bowl of white rice. The white color of rice shows the ordinary affection, while the fragrance of rice shows the purity and freshness of affection. It seems bland to taste it, but after chewing it carefully, a little sweetness slowly lingers between your teeth. This bowl of rice has been tasted for more than ten years, just like the affection given by my parents, which made me enjoy it for more than ten years. That unknown unrequited love nourished me.

Affection is more like a plate of fragrant braised pork, which is full of ruddy heat after being cooked with soy sauce. Pick it up and put it in your mouth, bite it down, the toughness of lean meat, the smoothness of fat inside, and the tendons of shaking skin make people really taste the taste of family. Whenever I do something wrong, the toughness of lean meat is immediately shown, and I feel the warmth of my family from the loving blame of my parents. After biting lean meat, the smoothness of fat meat immediately appeared. When I made success and progress, my satisfaction was completely revealed. Through the fat, the muscle trembling of the skin has been held together with your tooth age. When I am hesitant, my parents' firm will and strong belief naturally penetrate into my blood. A bowl of fragrant braised pork is full of parents' deep love.

After a hearty meal, a cup of green tea is perfect, and the fragrance brings me to the teahouse of memory. Take a sip and your whole body and mind will feel relaxed and full of energy. But I am always so careless, always so careless, a little careless, and let it slip away. Just like caressing your parents, you don't care if you have it, you need it to understand its value.

Now, let me seize the afterheat of this cup of family tea and dedicate the family tea I am grateful for in my life to my parents, so that they can also indulge in the ripples of affection and love and stretch and relax.

8. Write an article in the way of "seeing the big from the small". Daoshu Elf Village has a rare species commonly known as Daoshu.

It protects the village like a god, has been on TV, and is like an extraordinary tree. But I'm not talking about its "fame", but its extraordinary spirit.

In an ordinary corner of the village, there is a very old tree-the guide tree. A strange and beautiful name, ordinary green branches and leaves strange? Is it strange that the branches are five or six tall? Is it strange that the trunk is thinner than banyan? It's weird.

In fact, it is characterized by hollow trunk; Anti-seasonal growth-growth in winter and defoliation in summer; Have you ever heard that a tree can grow as old after falling down several times? It is such a tree. During that time, Bill? Gates has just become the richest man, and the upset things have followed. Major companies are developing new technologies, and the era is also eliminating Windows systems.

Sales began to decline, but the greater the blow to Gates, the greater the challenge. He chose the survival strategy of the times: "Eat your little son!" He gave employees the freedom to develop new technologies and abandoned the old Windows system.

This is very similar to the unique characteristics of giving up efforts. Spread its nutrition on the branches and leaves to make it grow faster. When it falls, it is actually growing rapidly.

That's it, it broke through itself and surpassed others. Claremont? Si Tong is the chairman of United Insurance Company.

When I was a child, my family was poor, so I sold newspapers to subsidize my family. One day, he went to a restaurant to sell newspapers.

The boss kicked him out as soon as he came in, but he didn't give up. He slipped in when the boss wasn't looking. The boss found him and kicked him out. The small stone grazed and went in again. The guests were moved by the boy's bravery and begged the boss to buy his newspaper. When people reached middle age, Shi founded an insurance company, which was considered silly and gained an amazing sales burden.

He said: If you fall, you must get up. Isn't that what happened to our fallen tree?

Once blown down by the raging negative, it did not give up the hope of survival, and continued to take root and sprout in situ with tenacious vitality. As long as you can stand up again, there is hope of success.

I don't care how badly you fall. Prove that you can do it with a strange lifestyle.

This is the lofty spirit of fallen petal tree.

9. Write a 400-word composition with the skill of seeing the big picture from the small. The power of family ties.

One Sunday morning, I finished my homework and felt bored, so I asked my brother to play computer games with me. At the beginning, he seriously suggested to me: "Let's play a game and don't cheat!" I readily agreed.

Then, after my brother played a game, it was my turn. I probably don't think I have the cells to play games. Seeing that I was bored, I went outside to play. As expected, he was defeated in a short time. I was just about to play another game when I remembered my agreement with my brother. I didn't think it was appropriate, so I shouted, "Brother, I played a game. Come in! " "There is no response. I called several times, but my brother didn't come in. " Hey, don't fight for nothing, let's play a few more games! "I said to myself. Just as I was having fun, my brother came in and saw that I was still playing. He said angrily, "why are you still playing?" Do you play much? " "yes! "I didn't notice that he was angry. Suddenly, he called me names and I called him back. Not long after we swore at each other, he swore an ugly sentence, "You …" I was so angry that I couldn't help but burst into tears: "How can I have a younger brother like you? "When he saw me crying, he felt guilty and dared not say anything. I turned and ran away.

I threw myself on the bed and kept crying. Isn't it just to play games? Do you need this? I called him, but he was playing outside and didn't come in! On second thought, I was also at fault. I won't do this after a game! Thought of here, I have some regrets.

When it was time for lunch, my mother asked me to go downstairs for dinner. I have to dry my tears. My mother is the only one in the kitchen. She saw me and inexplicably asked, "Why are you crying?" "Where is it?" Mom smiled. "Your face is full of tears. The most obvious thing is that it turns red when you cry. Isn't your nose red now What's wrong? " I didn't expect my mother to know me so well, and I didn't say anything. I told the truth under my mother's repeated questioning. Mother was not angry and said kindly, "It doesn't matter. Family harmony is most important. You and your brother must apologize to each other. Come on, let's go find my brother. " My brother is coming. He knew what was going on and cried. Mother said, "All right! You are quick to apologize to each other! " "Sorry, I shouldn't have stolen the game." "Brother, I'm sorry, I shouldn't scold you." "It doesn't matter!" In this way, a "family storm" subsided.

It was the strength of family that resolved the misunderstanding between my brother and me. Mom is right, family harmony is the most important thing. How painful it is to have no affection! We should cherish it.

10. For a small composition, Goethe told such a meaningful story in the ballad: Jesus took his disciple Peter on a long journey and found a broken horseshoe on the way. Jesus asked Peter to pick it up, but Peter didn't bother to bend down to pick it up and pretended not to hear it. Without saying anything, Jesus bent down to pick up the horseshoe, exchanged three coins from the blacksmith, and used the money to buy 18 cherries.

The two men walked on and crossed the vast wilderness. Jesus guessed that Peter was thirsty enough, so he let a cherry hidden in his sleeve fall out quietly. When Peter saw it, he quickly picked it up and ate it. Jesus was lost while walking. Peter bent 65,438+08 times in embarrassment, so Jesus smiled and said to him, "If you bend once, you won't bend endlessly in the future."

The enlightenment of this story is that we should be good at seeing the big from the small. If you don't do small things, you will work hard on smaller things in the future. In fact, there are many similar cases in our daily work. Some people are too lazy to do what seems small in front of them, even if they lift a finger, but in the end they still have to spend a lot of time and energy to fill the loopholes. As a result, what could have been done with half the effort has become twice the effort. Office work is trivial and complicated, basically trivial, but there is no trivial matter in office work, because every trivial matter is related to the overall situation, the image of the unit and the vital interests of the workers and the masses. Only by bending down honestly and doing the small things at present can we do the work of "three services"-serving the leaders, serving the grassroots and serving the masses.

Bend down and pick up some "little things" today, and tomorrow it may become a beautiful "cherry" in our hands.