Can the whole people write a composition?

1. Recently, Hangzhou Library attracted the attention of countless netizens and some mainstream media. The chart is open to all readers free of charge, and "zero threshold" reading is implemented. Because of this, beggars, scavengers and migrant workers often come in to read books. The only requirement of the library is to wash your hands before reading.

Some readers cannot accept it. They went to the curator Shuqing Chu and said that it was disrespectful to other readers to allow beggars and scavengers to enter the library. Shuqing Chu replied: I have no right to refuse them to study in the library, but you have the right to choose to leave. After the news spread on the Internet, moved netizens called the chart "the warmest library in history".

In an interview with reporters, curator Shuqing Chu lamented that it is normal for public coffins to be opened at zero threshold. It has been done for many years, but it has attracted such great attention in an instant, which deserves reflection. Ask for the right angle, clear thinking, choose your own style and draw up your own title.

Don't deviate from the content and meaning of the material, don't copy it, and don't copy it. [Intention Prompt] The focus of this material is to emphasize the "reflection" on this matter, which is the "lament" of curator Shuqing Chu in an interview with reporters: the zero-threshold opening of public libraries was originally a "normal thing", but it was regarded as "abnormal", which aroused great concern. This phenomenon deserves reflection.

Intention angle: ① Focusing on the comparison between the reaction of netizens and the media and the attitude of curators just proves that we often live in a society lacking common sense and dignity. Only when the phenomenon that should be normal becomes the normal state of society can our society really mature.

We should learn to respect others and care more about the disadvantaged groups. (2) Focus on making some readers think, why do they have such a "sense of humiliation"? Where do their prejudices, their sense of nobility and superiority come from? Discuss this problem.

(3) Pay attention to the reading groups "beggars, scavengers, migrant workers" especially emphasized in the materials. This phenomenon shows that the bottom people also have a desire for spiritual life, pay attention to the vulnerable groups, and cannot ignore their cultural needs. ④ Focusing on the function of public library, if we want to maximize the social value of public service facilities, we must have "bottom meaning" and pay attention to and serve the bottom people.

Public service facilities should benefit the whole people. (5) Pay attention to Shuqing Chu's answer, everyone is equal before knowledge.

Defending everyone's equal rights is also defending everyone's rights. Reference concept: 1, everyone is equal before knowledge; 2. The rights of vulnerable groups also need to be respected; 3. * * Enjoy creating harmony; 4. Society calls for humanistic care; 5. Public services should benefit the whole people; 6. Paying attention to the disadvantaged groups is the crowning touch of social progress: let the flowers of respect bloom, let the flowers of equality bloom in harmonious branches, care for the disadvantaged groups, respect them equally before knowledge, and have an equal heart. Nothing is more important than respect. Let the glory of equality warm the world's right to seek knowledge, let everyone respect everyone around them equally, and let the flower of respect never fade. Pay attention to the disadvantaged groups and write a harmonious chapter. The flower of respect is full of respect and sails to the other side of harmony. Respect the beauty of knowledge, regain respect, let the fragrance of respect overflow the world because of respect, and respect has no threshold. Respect is a beautiful beginning under a blue sky: respect, like a touch of sunshine in winter, can warm the coldness of the body; Respect, like a spring breeze, can blow away the haze in my heart; Respect, like a beautiful music, can heal the wounds of the soul.

On the road of life, walk with respect and enjoy the flowers along the way. (Walking with Respect) (Respecting others is a noble accomplishment, an attitude towards life and a noble morality) Respect is a clear and sweet spring in the spring breeze, which moistens people's hearts; Respect is a breeze in the hot summer, which gently blows away people's troubles; Respect is a flower that never fades in the heart, always emitting a refreshing fragrance.

(Respect-a flower that never fades) Appreciation: Respect is as warm as spring. When the Declaration of Human Rights declared that all men are created equal, respect made the feudal hierarchy fall apart. When the disabled are elected as deputies to the National People's Congress, respect will melt the ice and snow of laughter and discrimination; When the chart allows beggars and scavengers to enter the library, respect makes the land of China warm as spring. Respect others, treat others equally, especially the disadvantaged groups, and our world will be better.

Comments: Cited materials, with clear views. Parallelism has momentum and language power.

We should respect people with low status. Low status does not mean small personality.

We should respect others regardless of their status. Sanmao, a famous female writer, once met a dumb slave in Sahara, Spain.

When the master of this dumb slave, the so-called high official, treats him like an animal, Sanmao's concern for his family makes people feel the greatness of human nature. People who are often discriminated against, such as slaves and criminals, have personality, although their status is low.

Respect people who are different from themselves, and the world will have more sunshine. Comment: Four links-demonstration, explanation, example and comment.

Clear-cut, concise, typical and accurate, comments in place. We should respect people with "defects".

Physical disability does not mean that the mind is gloomy, and disabled people can also write brilliant life movements. Tai Lihua's mother insisted that her daughter live with normal children. Although the young Tai Lihua is often talked about and laughed at by children, she struggled with perseverance and finally won people's respect with the gorgeous dance of Guanyin with a thousand hands.

Her disability and firm character deserve to be admired and studied by any healthy person. Respect people with "defects" and discover their beauty, and the world will be more rainbow.

Comments: The combination of narration and discussion, the discussion between narration and object on the subject, is not loose, and the reasoning is thorough, which is not only independent but also up and down. We should respect people of different occupations.

All occupations are equal, whether they are cleaners, scavengers, newspaper couriers or migrant workers. Everyone's sweat is priceless.

Air charts allow scavengers to enter the library because everyone is equal before knowledge. No matter what occupation you are engaged in, you have the right to study and read.

Just as the cowherd in ancient times can also study on the back of an ox, so can the doorman of Peking University. Knowledge will not refuse anyone because of different occupations. Respect people of different professions.

2. Help me write an English composition at Christmas.

Christmas is on December 25th. This is a very happy day for many boys and girls. In some schools, before the end of the semester, children will perform a "Birth" play to show how Jesus was born in the stable.

On1February 24th, all the children were very excited. Usually they go to bed early so that their parents can prepare presents. The younger children thought they would come down from the chimney or fireplace next Christmas, so they hung a sock to give him a present. Greedy people even hang a pillowcase or a bag in an attempt to get more presents. Later that night, father or mother will put presents in socks and others by the bed.

On Christmas morning, children wake up early. Some people even turn on the light at eight o'clock, and most people wake up at six o'clock, although it is still an hour or one o'clock in Britain at this time of year. The children are looking for their parents. When dinner is ready, the young children are playing. At about one o'clock in the afternoon, Christmas dinner was brought in. Turkey or chicken is quickly eaten. The children searched for new coins hidden in the Christmas pudding. The rest of the time is full of games and eating until the happiest Christmas holiday is over.

3. Is there any good way to write a composition? 1. Be fluent, fluent, vivid and neatly written.

2, highlight the key points, clear theme, clear level.

3. Use more wonderful words and sentences.

4, need true feelings, write from the heart.

When describing a thing, we should observe and understand it from all aspects.

6. Add appropriate related words to the statement to make it more complete.

7. Dare to combine reality to imagine.

Writing skills and methods

1, good at grasping the little things around you to write.

Every time students write a composition, they always try their best to write those good things, such as helping the old lady get on the bus; The teacher helped us to correct our homework until late at night; Be brave in reporting bad people stealing wallets, etc. It is impossible for us to encounter such a thing every day in our life, which will stop our thinking and make us feel speechless.

2. The little things that are touched are the meaningful things.

What is "meaning"? Meaning is a kind of value and a kind of function. For example, a butterfly flies in and you think it's beautiful. Beauty is the value of this butterfly. That's what it means. There is no shortage of meaningful things in life, what is lacking is the idea to record when moving. So, be a conscientious person in life.

3. Add your own views and feelings about something.

For example, an essay wrote: On weekends, students go out for an outing, and everyone picks wild flowers to catch dragonflies. Some students even grilled fish to eat. You wanted to have dinner with your classmates, but you accidentally found a warning sign "No Fireworks" not far away. You tell everyone right away that everyone soon turned from excitement to worry, so they put out the fire together. Therefore, the level of perceptual ability (and cognitive ability) determines the quality of the composition.

4, don't always think about writing big things, don't talk like an adult.

Write if you can, and write in your own mind and language.

5, writing a composition "true" is the first move.

In addition to the vanity and timidity of some children, it is also one of the reasons why the composition is untrue. For example, because the teacher's misunderstanding severely criticized himself, I felt very wronged, but I still had to bite the bullet and write "the teacher is like a mother" in my composition, which is making things up.

6. Only write what you feel the most and have the most experience, so that you can have a focus.

For things that are deeply touched and impressed, we should describe them in detail, mobilize various rhetorical devices, vividly show them and be as close to reality as possible.

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First, I am interested in writing. Interest comes from other beautiful articles, and interest also comes from your sense of accomplishment. When you write a good composition and hear others' affirmation, you will be interested and write more good compositions.

Second, accumulate material. This is very important. From birth, there is no language accumulation, but from "ah, ah". . . . . . "Learn to speak slowly first, and then learn to read slowly. So people learned to speak and write the day after tomorrow! In the process of learning, gradually accumulate the language, and then feedback the language you have learned. Writing a composition is also a form of language feedback. So you feel that your writing level has not improved, just because you don't have much language accumulation and writing skills. There is still no language to give feedback when writing, let alone to express your meaning. I still feel the lack of language when writing. So I suggest you: read more books, read more beautiful articles, and see how people use language and write. At the same time, the most important thing is to accumulate language and use language in the process of reading.

Accumulation can come from: what you have experienced, seen, heard and thought in your life.

In the book, you can learn from.

You can see it on TV.

On the internet, you can see.

You can write your accumulated materials (events, good words, sentences, paragraphs and articles) in your diary for writing and application.

Third, read more beautiful articles of others and learn other people's writing methods, such as how others use language and writing skills.

Fourth, you can imitate writing first, and then practice writing yourself. Ask others to revise the comments after writing. Know your own good and bad.

Fifth, we must have a strong will to write, not this time, and then write. I believe you will succeed!

All right, that's all. Good luck with your composition. I'm waiting to see.

4. What if I can't write a composition? Practicing martial arts pays attention to routines, and the moves are clearly superb; Writing a composition should also pay attention to routines, so as to be gradual and natural.

I summed up my writing routine into six tricks, hoping to play a role in attracting jade. The first trick: diligently collect and accumulate wonderful words, phrases, sentences and chapters to enrich your writing warehouse.

There are two ways to collect accumulated materials: one is from newspapers and books. You can circle the materials that are beneficial to you directly in newspapers and books, you can cut newspapers, extract them, or feel after reading them, take other people's things for yourself, just like bees make honey, and collect a certain amount of pollen first.

The second is from life. People who are willing to live and observe the world with a pair of discerning eyes will find that social life is rich and colorful, and all kinds of people and things in society are good writing materials: small to the people around them; Major events at home and abroad can be the content we collect and accumulate.

In order to achieve better writing effect, we need to devote ourselves to life, experience the ups and downs in study, life and work, and then let these ups and downs naturally flow into the pen and become real and touching articles. The second trick: strengthen writing practice.

Writing often begins with keeping a diary. If we regard the diary as a bosom friend, as an object to talk about, and tell our personal joys and sorrows in the diary to the fullest, over time, the diary will accumulate more and more thick, and before we know it, we will find that the length of the diary has become longer, the expression of words has become clever, and our observation and adaptability to life have also been enhanced.

Keep an army for a thousand days-keep a diary, use troops for a while-write a composition, and it will come naturally! The third measure: keep brewing-conceiving, looking for a breakthrough-inspiration, and then write it down. Collecting accumulated materials, such as a pile of dry wood, needs the spark of inspiration to ignite; Collecting accumulated substances, such as a lot of pollen, must be brewed by bees to become honey; The materials collected and accumulated are also like a bag of rice, which must be processed by a clever woman to become delicious rice.

Therefore, the process of brewing-conceiving is the process of sorting out, selecting and integrating materials. When the conception is mature, it will naturally generate inspiration-the feelings that have been accumulated in the chest for a long time urgently need to be vented, and the unpleasant instantaneous impulse will not be unpleasant. People who care seize this fleeting moment and write it down.

The fourth measure: humbly ask for advice and constantly revise. Good article revision.

After writing a good composition, you are not satisfied, but you can't see where there is a flaw. You must find someone else to guide you. After listening to praise, it should be regarded as encouragement to yourself; After listening to criticism, change it if you have it, and encourage it if you don't.

If you do this often, you will continue to improve your writing. However, it is not a long-term solution to completely rely on others to revise your composition. Learning to revise your own composition is the key to writing a good composition.

The fifth trick: the composition should learn to accumulate "reading thousands of books, writing like a god" and "a clever woman can't cook without rice", which explains the importance of accumulation in writing from both positive and negative aspects. "Usually rely on accumulation, the examination room depends on play", which is the same experience of the students in the examination room.

(A) language to establish a "vocabulary". Vocabulary is the cell of an article.

Vocabulary in a broad sense refers not only to the collection of words and phrases, but also to sentences and sentence groups. There are two ways to establish "vocabulary": the first is reading.

Usually, you should read books, newspapers and periodicals extensively, take reading notes, extract some beautiful words, sentences and paragraphs from a specific notebook, or make reading cards. The second is life.

At ordinary times, we should capture the fresh language in the popular spoken language and write it down in a small notebook or card that we carry with us. Over time, we can say it chapter by chapter and write it beautifully. (2) Strengthen the accumulation of materials.

Materials are the flesh and blood of the article. Because many students usually don't pay attention to accumulating materials, they are worried every time they write a composition, or edit or copy it.

The solution to this problem is to accumulate materials. Usually, you can take a video camera and tape recorder with you, observe life deeply, actively participate in life, and record your experiences in family life, campus life and social life in time in the form of sketching, keeping a diary and writing observation notes.

When recording, we should grasp the details and the characteristics of people, things, things and scenery. The article written in this way is flesh and blood.

(3) We should strengthen ideological accumulation. Opinion is the soul of an article.

The center of the article is not clear, or the thought is not profound, which often shows that the author's thought is superficial. Therefore, it is necessary to establish a "think tank".

There are two ways: first, be thoughtful. "One more miss, one more gain."

Think deeply at ordinary times and ask "why", "what" and "how" when something happens. So you can see the essence through the phenomenon.

It is also necessary to record the "sparks" of thinking and the conclusions of thinking at any time. The second is compilation, that is, extracting famous sayings and aphorisms.

In short, the composition should be accumulated, and the three writing warehouses of vocabulary, material and thought should be regularly counted, sorted and classified to continuously enrich and expand. The sixth trick: You should learn to accumulate "reading thousands of books, writing like a god" and "a clever woman can't cook without rice" in your composition, and explain the importance of "accumulation" in writing from both positive and negative aspects.

"Usually rely on accumulation, the examination room depends on play", which is the same experience of the students in the examination room. (A) language to establish a "vocabulary".

Vocabulary is the cell of an article. Vocabulary in a broad sense refers not only to the collection of words and phrases, but also to sentences and sentence groups.

There are two ways to establish "vocabulary": the first is reading. Usually, you should read books, newspapers and periodicals extensively, take reading notes, extract some beautiful words, sentences and paragraphs from a specific notebook, or make reading cards.

The second is life. At ordinary times, we should capture the fresh language in the popular spoken language and write it down in a small notebook or card that we carry with us. Over time, we can say it chapter by chapter and write it beautifully.

(2) Strengthen the accumulation of materials. Materials are the flesh and blood of the article.

Because many students usually don't pay attention to accumulating materials, they are worried every time they write a composition, or edit or copy it. The solution to this problem is to accumulate materials.

Usually, you can take a video camera and tape recorder, observe life deeply, actively participate in life, and record it in time in the form of sketching, keeping a diary and writing observation notes.

5. Anxious double-breasted hug, full of stains on the temples. For a lifetime, Hua Ze was delayed.

This is Confucius, a scholar-bureaucrat, a true scholar in China, and an eternal Homo sapiens in the minds of future generations.

Throughout the ages, literati military commanders have moved to the green forest, and they love fame and fortune. Utilitarianism comes to the place, and the heart follows nature.

Confucius, who was clever since childhood, wrote poems in pairs at the age of thirteen or fourteen. Read through, from 2000 to 15 years, and do not regret reading. In the long night, Wei created three unique works. Spring goes to winter, but I don't know the taste of meat in March. Happy rain outside the window, like a bosom friend. Take root and promote hair, and get corresponding comfort!

Although Confucius is thirty years old, he is well known. Poetry, books, rituals and music are carefully studied and pushed; Well informed, Chen Bowei. Happy disciples have only half a body as a medium. Teach by benevolence and righteousness, and change by feeling evil. Apprentice's doubts, bow to answer pro-teaching. Everyone's demeanor and history are green!

Well, although the apprentice is good, it's hard to understand what I mean. Born in troubled times, bad habits will collapse. When the country goes to war, the people suffer! How dare you wake up alone when everyone is drunk? Learn harmony, the world needs peace.

Then he drove the carriage out of the apricot altar and traveled around Liezong. With the bad king around, dancing with the wolf minister, humiliation! However, the treacherous court officials forced each other to rule the country and level the world, which had a negative impact on the people!

I am lucky to be back. My disciples are full of people, and my officials are all dignitaries. Sigh that life knows destiny. Therefore, the desire for education is stronger.

Children of bureaucrats, friends from all directions, mostly study here, as far away as Longzhong, and Kong Xuexing.

This is Confucius, a real Confucius. Heroes have been lonely since ancient times, and only sages know heroes! It is better to be a saint than a hero.

He has no intention of striving for honor. He just wants to benefit the people with what he has learned and done.

Why do you need to leave a name? You just want to teach your disciples well and benefit all beings!

But since the Spring and Autumn Period, he has suffered too much criticism and ulterior motives. Confucius, I know you, and I am your forever friend! You represent grass roots and saints. You combine the advantages of this country. The vicissitudes of the world and the tempering of human nature can't make you depressed! In winter, you are like an ice sculpture, and you want to be crystal clear; In summer, you are like the root of everything, Yu Fapeng! Confucius, you are a symbol of the unity of heaven and man. You are not the golden mean, you advocate good health, and a gentleman should strive for self-improvement; You are not a god, you are not omnipotent. The people know you best, so we respect you as holy!

The real personality can make people move, guarding the tomb for six years;

The real idea is to travel through time and space, it is worth remembering people's right and wrong, and it can stand people's pointing and comments!

Some people say that you flew south. I think that's because you have crossed the national border. You belong to people all over the world. Feeling the teachings you have handed down to this day, I can't help bowing to you! Follow your example to realize your due value and work hard day and night!

Confucius, I cannot live in this world with you. I am willing to become a ghost and love and hate you again!

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Two thousand five hundred years ago, the north wind from Mount Tai blew the skirt of an old man who was sitting and meditating, while Lu lord protector was still meticulous in the wind. This solemn and adjacent Mount Tai shines in the windy sunset, and many stars move to meet the sunrise one by one. He is Confucius, a teacher, thinker and educator from China, China and the world.

The appearance of every great man is accompanied by tempering before a great task. Confucius was undoubtedly an ascetic monk all his life. He comes from a noble family, but he has to face the humble reality. He created profound and kind thoughts, but he had to deal with superficial and treacherous things. The loneliness of youth did not annihilate his lofty aspirations, the setbacks of middle age did not crush his unyielding fighting spirit, and the pain of bereavement in his later years did not disturb the sublimation of his thoughts! At the age of 30, I started an education, opened a private school, and worked as a pawn. Fishermen and firewood farmers can walk into the school with books. His thought of "teaching without distinction" made the Chinese nation's knowledge spread break through the class gap, and his way of "teaching students in accordance with their aptitude" gave knowledge wings to fly, making it enter the people and the public. He made the Chinese nation a "well-known" nation. His personal feat more than 2,500 years ago made our nation quickly surpass other nations whose knowledge direction was determined by class or caste at that time, and accumulated rich knowledge energy for the Chinese nation to take off in Han and Tang Dynasties several years later!

The kind old man not only told his students and hundreds of millions of Chinese children behind him the purpose of learning knowledge, but also gave the world a way to learn. The big aspect can rule the country and level the world, and the small aspect can cultivate self-cultivation. He enlightened the world with righteousness, expounded the idea of benevolence, and spread the idea of benevolence with wisdom and faith. Learning methods should be "reviewing the past and learning the new" and "drawing inferences from others", reflecting the immortal wisdom and brilliance of great men in details!

Immortal thoughts always keep pace with the times. Confucius, an old man in the state of Lu, who worked hard to promote education, spread benevolence and righteousness, and show the general plan of governing the country, is still shining today in the 2 1 century and has been given new significance by the times. In today's world, "clash of civilizations" can be seen everywhere, and local wars are filled with smoke, chaos and turmoil, and suffering is deep. The problems brought by social transformation in China also need to be solved urgently. What is most needed in today's era? Need "harmony"! Isn't Confucius' ideal a harmonious society that cares about people's livelihood and does its duty? Confucius said, "Don't be poor and suffer from inequality, and don't be poor and worry." This is in line with China's current pursuit of narrowing the gap between the rich and the poor and taking the road of socialist prosperity! More than 2500 years have passed, but Confucius' thoughts have always stood in the East and gone to the world!