500-word composition in the fifth grade of primary school: sloppy

Keywords: 500 words in grade five of Xiaomahu Primary School

Words: 500 words composition

This article is suitable for: the fifth grade of primary school.

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This composition is about 500 words in the fifth grade of primary school. The title is "Little Carelessness". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. Our class is a little careless. His homework is either too big or too adult, so his classmates gave him a nickname. Once, the teacher asked everyone to make a piece of paper with a question on it, that is, look at the picture and write a sentence. The picture shows a child helping an old woman cross the road. Xiao Ma wrote to Xiao Ming and asked him to help his mother cross the street. Xiao Mahu found that the first word "mom" was wrongly written, so he changed the first word "mom" to "milk" and gave it to the teacher. The teacher found this mistake. In order to help Xiao Ma get rid of this bad habit, the teacher asked Xiao Ma to read the words by herself. Xiao careless blushed and whispered, "Xiaoming helped the wet nurse cross the road." The student laughed and the teacher said "Don't laugh". The students immediately quieted down. Since then, it has been said that Xiao Mahu has a wet nurse, but Xiao Mahu is no longer Xiao Mahu. Teacher's comment: The story told by the little author is so vivid that readers can't help laughing. The little carelessness in the story doesn't know how many jokes he made because of carelessness, but one joke corrected his bad habit of carelessness. It turned out that Xiao Mahu wrote "Children Help Old Women Cross the Road" as "Xiao Ming Help Mom Cross the Road", and he was not careful when correcting his mistakes. As a result, he was not only criticized by the teacher, but also teased by his classmates all the time. So Xiao Ma learned a lesson and tried to correct his shortcomings. The story is vivid, the language is humorous, and the little author is very thoughtful. The last sentence of the second paragraph of the article suggests that the other paragraph should be the end of the article, so that the level will be clearer. "So the students gave him a nickname" and changed the word "go" to "take". (China famous teacher: Teacher Wang) 2009-12-1719: 29: 00