If you want to learn composition, kung fu is outside the composition.

If you want to learn composition, kung fu is outside the composition.

Friend: I'm Su Yan.

"If you want to learn poetry, kung fu is better than poetry" was originally a sentence written by Lu You, a great poet in the Song Dynasty, when he taught his son to write poems one year before his death. The main idea of the poem is that when he first wrote it, he only worked hard on rhetoric, skills and forms, and he didn't realize it was wrong until he was in middle age. Poetry should pay attention to content and artistic conception, and reflect people's demands and emotions. Lu You said in another poem: "It's too shallow to get it on paper. I don't know how." We can know that the so-called "kung fu is beyond poetry" means emphasizing "practice", dabbling in life extensively and broadening our horizons.

Here, as a teacher, I want to say that if you want to learn composition, you have to work hard outside it.

There is a boy who has been learning to write with me since the first grade. His temper is spoiled, and he can't get along with others. He often holds his shoulders with his hands in hatred and complains to me in a defensive manner: he scolds me.

It is not necessarily true that others scold him, but maybe a word will be misunderstood by him.

In the process of teaching, he has too many opinions. You teach him, and he will retort mercilessly and let you yell at him.

He is also anxious: please! Can you listen to me first?

All right! You say. I had to lose and wait for him to speak first.

His composition is like astronomy, unconstrained style painting, words scurrying around like ants, and strokes are useless to him. Writing is not writing, just drawing words. Write a circle from left to right. Write it out, write a 2, draw an X, and draw a vertical line. It's so creative that none of us thought of it.

When teaching him to write a composition, one sentence I say can be refuted by ten sentences, but I often sigh: OK, OK, it's up to you.

He likes coming to my place to study very much, so his mother threatened him with this: if he didn't do his homework well, he wouldn't study his composition.

Don't go to the hard-pen training class, and don't learn composition.

Little guy loves reading. When he comes to study, there are always some children's books in his schoolbag. He often climbs on the sofa and looks at them with relish. He would burst into laughter when he saw the intoxicated place.

Class is often absent-minded, addicted to their own world, or playing with toys, or holding a book to read.

There used to be a joke: someone asked why the students taught by the same teacher had such a big difference in grades. Teachers give lectures at 4G speed, attend lectures at Wifi speed and learn and remember at 3G speed.

Some students watch at the speed of 2G, some students are disconnected while listening, some children have no data connection at all, some children keep flying mode, and some children automatically turn off their phones as soon as class begins.

Children belong to the kind that automatically shuts down in class. He also likes telling this joke.

Well, I'm in grade three now, and I got 28 points in my composition at 30 points. My mother told me happily that all the teachers praised me and I was one of the good students.

It has always been thought that children with personality, who love reading, have independent thinking ability, have their own thinking, have eloquence and dare to speak, are not bad. Their attitude towards life and study is often unsatisfactory and unpopular. It will definitely be labeled as a poor child by everyone, and it is normal to get no appreciation education and get used to being criticized. Once a certain point is touched, it is normal. The high-quality flame hidden in the deep heart will burn fiercely, inspiring him to become an enterprising and outstanding person. Of course, it is not easy to touch this point, and it takes time and patience.

His mother bought him a composition book, which he never read, just comic books and fairy tales.

The clever mother readily promised: I will buy you any books you want, but you must read the old books before buying new ones.

This view won my heart, and the child's thinking was broadened, and his tone expression ability and imagination came from this.

It is always not recommended to read documents for writing, just like eating bones and meat for growing up. Understanding is too narrow!

Reading miscellaneous books, extra-curricular books, rough reading, intensive reading, free reading, sleeping reading, lying reading, crawling reading, reading whenever you want, and reading whenever you want are all called reading.

This is called learning, and sitting still reading is called reading textbooks. This kind of reading has too many utilitarian purposes and is a tool for survival and growth. It is a helpless choice, and few people are really interested.

Reading freely is a powerful step to improve writing ability.

Walking into life is even more indispensable. Lead children to participate in the fireworks life attentively, observe the present daily life, mobilize all senses to touch the colorful life with their eyes, nose, ears, mouth and limbs, and the imprint of life will become vivid and vivid materials in their minds. When writing, they will use their hands casually and flow freely without stopping.

On Friday night, he came to learn composition again, telling me to talk less, on the grounds that it was getting late, and if I wanted to talk more, I should write as late as possible.

That makes sense, so cut the crap and write quickly. After only a few words, he was confused again.

Where are my bows and arrows? After writing a few words, he put down his pen, anxiously rummaged through his schoolbag for a long time and found a bow and arrow made of waste oil core and adhesive tape. I tried to shoot an arrow, which was really good and creative.

At this time, he is telling me about his domestic cats, one is called "waiter", the other is called "dough" and the other is called "shrimp". He likes cats called "waiters" best.

Seeing the hotel guests crowded at the door, his cat was anxious and brought food to the guests.

The seriousness with which he told the story made people laugh.

A cat named Doudou is named after its love of dough. This cat named shrimp doesn't eat fish or other food, but only eats shrimp.

There is a chicken in my house, but it flies away.

Where did it fly? I asked on purpose.

Maybe it flew, who knows? His answer is very reasonable.

It's interesting to chat with children. They add wings of imagination to reality and are not bound by the framework. This kind of imaginative thinking is a rare writing talent. Unfortunately, adults who don't understand will uproot their children's talented seedlings.

Fortunately, I am a composition teacher and know the child's heart.