There are calligraphy manuscripts, please advise!

The handwriting is very small. If you look carefully, it looks very good.

Make two suggestions:

1, the line spacing is too wide, which is uncomfortable to look at;

2. Some lines are not straight, which destroys the overall aesthetic feeling;

3. China's calligraphy is printed, which enhances the beauty and elegance of his works. Moreover, the three chapters of this work are really ugly, which increases the sense of ugliness.

Why use those three chapters, especially the two chapters in the text? Two wide-spaced, inexplicable two generous leisure chapters have seriously damaged the aesthetic feeling! The purpose of stamping a leisure stamp is not to lack a picture, but to gild the lily and make it self-defeating.

According to the rules, the seal of the seal is smaller than the inscription, and the final seal of the work is as indecent as the previous official seal.

4, if it is for (copying) creation, the overall length and width layout is not good-looking, and there are many such pictures, it is better to have long scrolls (such as the original) or long strips. This standard four feet (length and width 2: 1) is not good-looking.

I like telling the truth. I think your handwriting is good, so say more. With all due respect.