The composition of the fifth grade

In study, work and life, many people have had the experience of writing a composition and are all familiar with it. The composition requires a complete text structure, and an endless composition should be avoided. There are many points for attention in composition. Are you sure you can write? The following are nine fifth-grade compositions I collected for you. Welcome to read the collection.

Every year, we always receive a lot of lucky money, including parents, grandparents and grandparents ... How to spend the lucky money is really a thought-provoking problem.

Wandering around the bookstore during the summer vacation, I stumbled across a special book, Lucky Money, a book about savings, so I turned it over and had an endless aftertaste. ...

I remember when I was a child, I always gave my parents the lucky money I received. If I want to buy something, let my father know and my father will agree to use it. Every time I get lucky money, I'm always ecstatic, and I can't wait to buy something, such as a computer, a mobile phone, an mp3…… player … Don't mention how happy I am!

After reading this book, the word "savings" appeared in my mind. I think I can manage and use the money myself when I grow up. So he applied to his parents. They agreed without saying anything, holding a stack of hundred-dollar bills in their hands, and their hearts were full of fantasies. ...

However, soon after the start of school, the school held a "show of love" activity-donating their pocket money to the disaster area or some people in need. After watching the scenes in the disaster area, do you save or donate? I thought about it for a long time. After returning home, I told my father about this "giving love" activity. Dad agreed and allowed me to donate to 200 yuan. Finally, I took out my 200 yuan from the lucky money and gave it to the teacher. The moment I handed it over, I thought it would be very painful, but I didn't expect it to be so easy!

A month later, the disaster area sent a message thanking all those who donated their love to the school. After hearing the news, I felt more happy than buying a computer, and this joy lasted for a long time. ...

It turns out that there are better things than money-books and more meaningful things than saving money-to help others. In the future, I will wander in the sea of books and accompany them. I will try my best to do something more meaningful-help others and make everyone laugh happily.

I remember last May Day holiday, I went for a spring outing with my parents.

"ah! I smell the smell of spring in nature. " I can't help shouting with open arms. Trees that used to be bare are now flourishing. The seeds buried in the ground also spread out and stood out from the ground. The withered grass in the past has now changed its appearance, laying a thick green carpet for Mother Earth. I saw it. It's a little red and yellow on the shady grass. What is that? Oh! It is a small colorful wild flower in full bloom. I think if we have a picnic on this grass at noon, it will be a veritable spring outing! "It's sunny, let's go fishing!" I reluctantly left the beautiful grassland and came to a clear river. The fragrance of the earth and the response of the river make you walk into a beautiful picture. I was holding a fishing rod (hanging a fishing net), and the fish smelled the smell of bait and rushed up to swim here. Small fish are also smart. First, they tried to see if there was a secret "weapon" lurking. When they weren't looking, I caught a group of small fish, and I danced with joy. Shouted loudly: "Dad, I caught a group of fish." I am already very excited to see these colorful fish. I'm really getting carried away. No matter what my parents ask me, I always say, "I'm great!" " "

Time flies. It's already noon 1 1 half past ten. We went back to our original place, took out our food and had a picnic with relish. Some little rabbits and wild pigeons ... are playing in this dense forest. Maybe they are having a dating party!

In the afternoon, we went to the safari park again and watched the little wild dogs dancing there. The wild duck is teaching its children to swim. I can't bear to leave, but I miss this beautiful scenery in my heart!

The way of nature can be seen everywhere in life, such as butterflies breaking out of cocoons, buds slowly opening, chickens breaking out of their shells and silkworms molting again and again. ......

I bought seven baby silkworms last summer. They are milky white, soft to the touch and really pleasing. After feeding for a period of time, young silkworms will molt for the first time. I looked at them with a smile, with indescribable joy in my heart, just like in a honey pot. I thought: Silkworm, you must molt smoothly and grow up quickly! Come on! I stood quietly, my eyes fixed on me, never leaving. However, for an hour or two ... at first, the silkworm's head and chest were white, and the old skin behind it was like a yellow, wrinkled shell, tightly bound to the silkworm's body and unwilling to leave it. Silkworms just keep moving, and their limbs stretch and contract. It looks slow, but it implies fierce struggle. The fastest one only dropped a little. I was disappointed with anxiety and said softly, "Silkworm, why are you sloughing so slowly?" Let me help you! " "He said, putting his hand on it. I carefully put the little silkworm in the palm of my left hand, supported my head with my thumb, and gently pinched the skin that had fallen off with my other hand and pulled it down slowly. Then I crossed my waist and nodded with satisfaction. My mother who cooked dinner saw it and was shocked. She frowned and said to me, "Alas! How do you help it shed its skin? " I don't understand, "in order to make it grow up quickly! "My mother dragged me to the front of the computer. I finally took a look at the little silkworm. It seemed very uncomfortable and lay there motionless. My mother found me relevant information, and it dawned on me after reading it. Silkworm molting is difficult, just like a fat man wearing a pair of thin trousers, which is not easy to take off. Silkworms must keep twisting, stretching, crawling and crawling back and forth. Although it is very painful, it must be tempered to grow. It is my "kindness" that makes the silkworm baby lose valuable exercise and ruin its young life.

The way of nature is also the way of science, and we must follow the laws of nature. We should study hard, master more scientific knowledge, and avoid doing bad things because of ignorance and kindness like me, and regret it!

Teaching objectives of composition 4 in grade five

1. Guide students to appreciate cartoons and talk about the contents of cartoons in simple language.

2. Students can express their views on comics in combination with real life, understand the author's intentions, and make clear their views on comics.

3. Help students to open their minds and understand the disadvantages of doting.

4. Be able to write methodically in your own words.

Teaching preparation: text drawing

Teaching process:

First, appreciate comics and introduce themes.

Teacher: In this class, the teacher and his classmates have a composition class. As for the teacher, I'll bring you a question first. It's 8 pm in Beijing. Dad, mom and Xiaoming are preparing to watch TV together on the sofa. Dad wants to watch sports channels, mom wants to watch TV dramas, and Xiaoming likes cartoons. Three people argued endlessly about it. Students predict, who will win the final victory in this case? Teacher: If you agree that Xiaoming won, please raise your hand. If Xiaoming wins, why do you think it will be? Teacher: Indeed, parents' love sometimes inadvertently allows children to enjoy special treatment. Let's walk into a set of cartoons and look at this special child. Show (cartoons in textbooks). Teacher: The teacher saw some students laughing. So what do you understand? Who will tell you? (Blackboard: Look) 1. The child regards his father as a horse. In order to give the children more food, dad danced hard on the makeshift stage. 3. At the gate of the toy store, my son clamored to buy toys. The son shows his father his report card with a long pole. Teacher's random evaluation (although dad is willing to be a horse, it is obvious that education is illegal; This impromptu performance seems unsuccessful, and my son is still very unhappy after kicking over the food; Is the power of a son really that great? It is the heart that dotes on children that tilts dad's heavy heart. Look, the lampposts are bent for it; We often use the word prevention, so what do we usually prevent? What is the son guarding against? )

Teacher: Because of overindulgence, children have developed many bad habits. In desperation, parents may take drastic measures to make their children always get used to distancing themselves from their parents after making mistakes. The consequences are really serious! Teacher: The students have understood the cartoons well. The teacher knows that everyone likes reading comics at ordinary times, so who can tell me what characteristics do you think comics have? Teacher: Yes, the cartoon is like this. They use exaggerated methods to express themes or satirize some social phenomena, and everyone can taste them. (Blackboard: Pinpin) What are the ideas expressed in the simple outline of these cartoons we saw above? (spoil)

Second, connect with life and expound opinions.

Contact life and explain your point of view. Contact the life teacher: the students have grasped the meaning of cartoons-doting is not allowed. So in your life, have you seen the phenomenon of doting on children? Or you can experience it yourself. Who will tell you? Teacher: Actually, in comics, parents in life love their children. Love is the greatest and most eternal emotion in the world. But when this kind of love turns into doting, what consequences will it lead to? Students, have you thought about it? Students answer (partial eclipse, cowardice, selfishness, arrogance, deception, impatience and hardship. Lazy life, lack of self-motivation, no self-care ability. ) teacher: do you want to be such children? The word "drowning" means "drowning" A person who is drowned by water is called "drowning". If parents' love floods like a flood, they will also "drown" their children. This kind of doting is an irrational love, which directly destroys children's physical and mental health. What do you think parents should do to really love you? Teacher: If you love children, you should let them stand on their own feet. If you love children, you should make them respect themselves. If you love children, let them be full of the spirit of exploring the world.

Third, immediate, immediate, guiding writing methods.

Teacher: Just now, students and teachers watched a group of cartoons together. Through reading, we know the content of comics. After careful taste, we understand the author's point of view; Then the students thought deeply about this social phenomenon in combination with reality. (blackboard writing: content, viewpoint, reality. ) teacher: doting will do great harm to children's body and mind, but this phenomenon is extremely harmful and many parents don't realize it. Today, let's be a propagandist, write down what we have just seen and thought, write down the interests clearly in connection with reality, and then read them or listen to them. Teacher: Before we start writing, let's think about it. Where should this article be written? What should I pay attention to when writing? Any good suggestions? Teacher: Speaking of people who read comics and write compositions, the teacher has introduced them before. Generally speaking, there are two ways. One is to enter the picture, become a character inside, and write in the first person. As for the cartoons we learned today, we can-(student said) Teacher: We can also write as bystanders and see the examples the teacher brought to you. Teacher: Do you understand the problem of' people' in comic composition? Any other good ideas? (Students speak freely) Multimedia demonstration: (Content: cartoons themselves, phenomena in life, the harm caused by doting, and what parents and children should do. Skills: Give full play to the imagination-the environment in which the characters live and their actions, demeanor, expressions, psychology, etc. ) teacher: when writing, students must develop rich imagination to make the picture really move. Just choose the right point when writing, don't cover everything. There are four cartoons in this group. You can choose one or more cartoons to create. Ok, now the students are beginning to conceive. When they are ready, they will pick up a pen and start writing.

Fourth, independent writing, independent writing and writing.

1. Students' writing and teachers' patrol guidance.

2. Self-reading modification. Teacher: Students who have finished reading silently, try to revise it yourself first.

Fifth, appreciate communication.

Thanks for the exchange. 1. Show students' works and enjoy communication. Teacher: Which student wants to show his work? Don't forget to listen to other students at this time. At the same time, I picked up a pen and prepared to record the essence and improvement of this classmate's work with simple symbols. Next, we will judge him. Students exchange exercises. Evaluate each other. 2. The teacher's casual comments (this classmate is really insightful; The plot written by this classmate is compact and interlocking; If you see him, if you hear his voice; Let people know at a glance; I am deeply impressed by your thorough insights and profound thoughts ...)

Sixth, summarize and extend.

Teacher: In this class, students not only enjoy good-looking cartoons, but also learn good expressions. This is what comic composition is all about. You should be optimistic, kind, and think in connection with the reality of life, so that your talents will be vivid and distinct.

Design of blackboard writing: look-content-viewpoint thinking-there are "characters" in real painting

Example: Destruction

There are many kinds of feelings in the world, but one kind of love is selfless, and that is the love of parents for their children. Love can help children grow up healthily, but doting hinders their growth.

Children are parents' treasures, and loving children is parents' instinct. In our family education in China, China's parents are among the best in doting on their children. Spoiling is the abnormal psychology of human nature, a shackle, a trap, a rope and a signal of danger.

In our family in China, every parent dotes on their children. Children are really born in honeypots and grow in honeypots. It is parents' nature to love children. However, it is parents' dereliction of duty to spoil and indulge their children too much. Elders are always worried that their grandchildren will suffer, and they always refuse to let their children learn to walk and fall to the ground. Grandchildren are spoiled, their clothes are stretched and their mouths are full of food. Children can't do housework at all. The child does nothing at all. You see, even in the school mountaineering competition, parents followed, rented a sedan chair to carry their children up the mountain, fearing that something would happen to them, and people would take care of them everywhere. If this goes on, how can children grow up! When a child becomes an adult, it is easy to slide to the edge of crime.

However, not every parent knows how to educate their children and let them form the habit of doing it themselves from an early age, just like their previous parents. If the child falls, don't help him, let him stand up and solve the problem with his brain. This has cultivated their judgment, analytical ability and adaptability. Even if their parents are not around, they will do better, succeed step by step and become the pillars of society.

It is the wish of many parents that their children become dragons and their daughters become phoenixes. But if you want to realize these wishes, you can't spoil them too much. Young parents and respected elders, if you want to train your child into a useful talent, a healthy and beautiful person, please listen to my advice: please stop doting on your child!

As the old saying goes, there is a golden house in the book, a thousand catties of millet in the book and Yan Ruyu in the book.

Books are a treasure house of knowledge, and the key to open this treasure house is reading. Confucius forgot to eat and sleep when he was studying, but he forgot his worries when he was happy. There are countless spiritual food, new knowledge, interesting stories and beautiful poems in the book ... which can give us peace. When we are lonely, we can get comfort from books; It gives us answers when there are questions. It seems to be our best mentor and friend. It has always been with us on the road of my growth, encouraging us to move towards a better future. Reading is the best enjoyment for people!

Reading is the only thing I need every day after school, at home and on weekends. Whenever I am sad, it gives me comfort; Whenever I am sad, it gives me happiness; Whenever I am happy, it is happy with me; Like inseparable partners. We share joys and sorrows. Whenever I am bored, it gives me happiness. I would rather not watch TV or movies for a year than read books for a day. When I encounter setbacks, it is always by my side, and I will never abandon it. Over the years, we have shared weal and woe and will never part. It has long been my companion, and no one or anything can change the position of that book in my heart, and it will never erase our sweet or bitter memories. No one can separate us, because he is a necessity in my life and a part of my body. Whether it's science fiction books, comics, science books, history books ... I like reading books. I am a bookworm, a bookworm, a bookworm! So, we became compatriots, experienced ups and downs, and I grew up. I dedicate a song to you: You are the wind, I am the sand, and the ends of the earth are inseparable. ...

In short, reading is a part of life, and we can gain more knowledge in books and make life more colorful!

Fifth grade composition article 6 "Under the banyan tree by the pond, cicadas are calling for summer ..." Listening to this song, I can't help but think of the small pond at school.

Behind our teaching building, in the northeast corner, there is a small pond. It is oval with iron railings around it. There are several rockeries in the pool. The rockery is dark gray with some stripes on it. The top of the rockery is steep and high, standing there like a mighty soldier. At the foot of the rockery, there are water lilies, some flowers and bones, as if sleeping. The green lotus leaf is like its crib, on which you can sleep comfortably. Water lilies are pink. It is as clean and beautiful as a girl. There are two red-crowned cranes in the middle of the pond. Although the color is gone, my mother said that there were these two red-crowned cranes when I was a child. I didn't expect the small pond to be older than me!

It's raining and the pond is happy. The light rain bubbled on the river and made a "poop-poop" sound. The pond seems to be singing happily and the light rain is dancing heartily. Water lilies are happy, because they can bathe comfortably and make themselves cleaner and more beautiful. After the rain, the lake was calm and the water lilies were quiet, as if enjoying this wonderful moment.

In winter, I will never see such beautiful water lilies again. There is a layer of ice on the water, which feels thick and cold. However, we can play with ice. Some hold the ice tightly with their hands and watch it melt into water bit by bit. Some quietly put ice around their classmates' necks and laughed at their reaction. At this time, the pond is full of happiness.

This is the small pond in our school, which not only brings us beauty, but also brings us happiness.

The brightest star in the night sky, when people look up, can you hear clearly the loneliness and sigh in your heart? Can the stars in the night sky remember the figure that disappeared with me in the wind?

The girl's world is very simple, black and white ... an encounter, a faint smile, a hello. The boy flows into the girl's dry world like a clear spring.

It is the night that masks people's sadness. In this starry night sky, the girl remembered this sentence Looking up at the sky is really beautiful: is the moon getting married? All the stars are dotted with its wedding clothes, but I am shy to hide behind the clouds. The corners of the mouth rose slightly, and suddenly a loud cry broke the beautiful atmosphere. A boy appeared from the grass. He looks really funny. There are several weeds on his head! The boy smiled and scratched his head and said, "Hello, look at the stars? Well, me too, bring a companion. " "Are you sure you are looking at the stars? It turned out to be seen in this grass. " The girl pretended to be surprised. The boy climbed up the stalk carefully and gasped, "You are amazing, so tall." The girl was about to laugh at him, but she looked up and saw the boy immersed in the moonlight and looking at the starry sky with longing eyes. Suddenly, the boy turned his head and looked straight into the girl's eyes. The girl's face is as red as fire ... The boy pointed to the brightest star in the sky and said to the girl, "That's as bright and thorough as your eyes." "haven't you heard a legend ... the brightest star in the night sky is the dead old man and life. The old man will look at you in the sky and guide you forward. " The girl's eyes are full of sadness. "I didn't mean to ..." The girl asked herself, "Can you believe it, the brightest star in the night sky?" The wind blew gently across the girl's cheek, and the starry sky became more twinkling. It was very quiet around, and even the sigh in my heart gradually became lonely. "

I believe ... when I lose my way, I will look for the brightest star to guide me in the dark, girl. Your eyes are really like the brightest star in the night sky. Because your eyes are so clear and transparent without impurities ... "The boy jumped on the lawn and waved goodbye to her. In the moonlight, the figure of the boy looks more slender and lonely, and the direction is towards the brightest star. ...

Only the girl quietly watched the boy go away in the same place, leaving nothing as if nothing had happened, only the air was filled with faint fragrance.

Lu Yaping is the chairman of my mother's unit, and she was elected as one of the top ten women's reform news figures in the 30th anniversary of China's reform and opening up. Thirty years ago, an out-and-out peasant woman, relying on a pair of scissors, a ruler, a sewing machine and an old bicycle, carried clothes sewn by her own hands, and Dai Yue was full of ups and downs and expectations. Since then, she has forged a lifelong bond with all kinds of fabrics and clothes ... This person is none other than Lu Yaping.

On the 30th anniversary of China's reform and opening-up, she changed from a peasant woman to the first cloth distributor in tens of thousands of units in China Textile City, China. Later, he set foot in the home textile and department store retail industries, and became a leading figure in the home textile industry in China, leading the commercial aircraft carrier of Nantong industry. She is an outstanding model in the achievements of 30 years of reform and opening up. Lu Yaping is a dazzling star in the women's field in China. She has only been ranked among the top ten economic women in China twice, and has been awarded dozens of honors such as the national March 8th red flag bearer and pacesetter. She was elected as a deputy to the National People's Congress and was listed as a typical example of Jiangsu's spiritual propaganda.

This is the super girl I introduce to you-Lu Yaping.

It snowed all night yesterday, and it was shining outside. I just finished today's task, and then I went out to play in the snow.

My sister made a snowman beside the old iron cabinet in the yard. I pinched a snowball and threw it at the snowman. I hit the snowman's nose at once. It doesn't matter, but it angered my sister. She grabbed the snow and rolled it into a ball and threw it at me. I ran away with my head in my arms, shouting, "Help, help, help!" " I can only break the snowman, but I won't be torn to pieces, will I? "I don't know, but my sister didn't hear it, but she didn't want to hear it. She still chased me and hit me. Then when I got angry, I grabbed a snowball and threw it out like something. My sister didn't react and hit her. She was reckless and threw a lot of snowballs at me behind the old tin cabinet. Haha, my sister is very proud. I am not easy to mess with. I grabbed a big snowball with my teeth and hit her. The snowball hit the old tin cabinet. Then when I was in a daze, my sister took the opportunity to hit the snowball on my face and neck. My clothes are covered with snow, and I dance and cramp in the cold. She quickly helped me with the snow on my neck and body. My sister was so happy that I smiled happily.

Although it was very cold, we played in full swing and didn't feel cold at all. We had such a good time that it was time for lunch before we knew it. We were all hungry, so we went into the house for dinner, and after dinner, we went into the house to discuss the war.

Snowball fights are fun and can exercise, and enhance immunity so that you won't catch a cold. Students will have a snowball fight outdoors soon!