I want to participate in the photography competition. The theme is caring for the elderly. Could you please help me provide a short essay with suitable paragraphs. Thank you for the generous reward!

Actually, the possibility of your painting winning an award is very small. Although the old man looks good, the background is not blurred enough, the character is too dark and the clothes have no details.

The table or something in the lower left corner is a failure and eye-catching.

There is also a problem with the composition. It is too empty and has many useless things. Crop it:

The most terrible thing is that the old man is smoking, which is incompatible with health. What we advocate is that the elderly should be healthy and live a long life.

Humble opinion for reference