My composition is excellent.

No matter in study, work or life, everyone has the experience of writing a composition, so they are familiar with it. According to different genres, composition can be divided into narrative, expository, practical and argumentative. What kind of composition can be called an excellent composition? The following is my amazing composition for your reference only. Let's have a look.

I am an amazing composition 1 me, an ordinary primary school girl. However, I think I am an excellent girl. I think so because I have confidence in myself!

What gave me courage was the story-telling contest. The scene of the game reappeared in front of my eyes.

A girl stood nervously under the stage, looking at the students who came on stage and patting her heart. That girl is me, because I don't have much confidence in myself, so I dare not hold my head high and wait with confidence. It's my turn I walked nervously onto the stage and the music started slowly. I listened to the familiar music and thought to myself: What should I do? I have memorized the manuscript before, but I have forgotten it all at this time. The hand clenched behind him is already sweating. I quietly looked up and saw that the teachers and other students in the audience were watching me nervously, and their eyes kept showing concern. Somehow, my original blank brain slowly emerged at this time! It was the silent encouragement of my classmates and teachers that gave me courage and confidence! I gradually entered the role and began my speech with great emotion. Hehe, it's finally over. I ended this speech successfully. I did it! I did it! I deeply said to all the teachers and classmates in the audience: "Thank you, my story is over!" " "

What gave me encouragement and confidence was the story-telling competition, the concern and confidence given to me by teachers and classmates. I will show myself confidently in my later life!

Today is the Dragon Boat Festival. My family went to Dongtou to visit grandma and didn't return to Wenzhou until evening.

When I got on the bus, my mother brought me a bag of bayberry, which was originally given by my grandmother's aunt next door. Every Myrica rubra is covered with a purple coat, and a small protrusion appears shyly. Little Yangmei, you squeeze me, I fold you and sleep in the bag. I took a waxberry and put it in my mouth. I bit my teeth gently, and a sour and sweet juice flowed out. This is a fresh smell between my tongue and my teeth.

I was just about to spit out the bayberry kernel when I heard my mother say, "bayberry kernel can be swallowed." There are many fine hairs under it, which can discharge the poison from the body. " So as soon as my eyes closed, my throat opened and I swallowed hard, and the bayberry kernel also swallowed.

The car goes very fast. I'm eating bayberry and swallowing bayberry kernels with relish. I ate more than 30 bayberry and nuts in one breath. After a while, my stomach hurt, as if it were twisted into a ball, and I cried and said I had to go to the toilet.

Dad then "scolded" my mother for talking nonsense and "scolded" me for listening to my mother.

Mom said, "Where is it so fast?" Just finished eating, I have to go to the bathroom. People with constipation don't need to see a doctor. Just eat Yang Meiren! "

I pressed my stomach and said, "They have reached the large intestine!" " "

Mom and dad laughed.

Suddenly, the car stinks. So I farted a lot. My mother said, "Look, all the poison in my stomach is discharged!" " "

There was another burst of laughter in the car.

I think I'm really something. I can eat more than 30 bayberries and nuts, and I can detoxify immediately.

On Sunday, I watched my parents busy and tired, so I wanted to help them do some housework and try to be a parent for a day. I think the persimmon fried with Jixi red eggs eaten at school is delicious, so I will give them a taste.

Because I can't cook this dish at noon, I thought of my mother's usual cooking steps. First, I washed the tomatoes, then sliced them, and beat the eggs in a bowl and stirred them. I was so nervous when I beat eggs that I beat them outside. When I played the second one, I learned the previous lesson and played very smoothly. First turn on the fire, pour the oil into the pot, then pour the eggs into the pot, and stagger the eggs in the pot and they will soon become cakes. After turning over with a shovel, pour the tomatoes into the pot and stir fry. Fresh and delicious scrambled eggs with tomatoes are ready.

After my mother finished reading it, I was surprised by the scrambled eggs with tomatoes. I quickly let my mother taste my cooking with chopsticks. My mother said, "This is the best scrambled eggs with tomatoes I have ever eaten."

Finally, my mother praised me for being really good!

I am really amazing. In a physical education class class, I really thought it was amazing. Why are you? Let me tell you something!

That afternoon, the PE teacher took us to the wall and let us learn to climb on it. Everyone jumped and jumped with joy, and some boasted that they got up the fastest; Some people say you can climb with your eyes closed ... because this is the first time.

We started climbing. We climbed up one by one and walked along the wall for a long time. At first, everyone was full of confidence and got up the courage to climb, but most of them dared not climb halfway, so they had to jump down one by one. Only me and a group of bold boys came to the end. One by one jumped from a height of more than one meter. I was about to climb for the second time when suddenly a boy gave a cry and I ran first. It turned out that he was too timid to jump, and almost the whole class surrounded him, but no one carried him to the ground. At this time, the PE teacher is not here, so everyone goes to the teacher for help. At this time, I think it is better to find my own teacher. When everyone left, I tried my best to climb to the top, then I jumped to the lowest place, leaned against the wall, and let him step on my back, and I reached the ground in one step. After a while, the PE teacher came and saw that he had returned to the ground. He asked, What's the matter? So, I told the teacher what happened.

Afterwards, my classmates and teachers praised me: you are really amazing! Since then, he and I have become good friends.

Everyone has something to be proud of, and I am no exception. What makes me proud is that I can play erhu.

When I first started learning erhu, erhu always made a "squeaky" sound, just like sawing wood, which was terrible. Just when I was about to give up, the teacher played a song "Jasmine" for me. I couldn't believe that such a beautiful sound came from the erhu, so I made up my mind: I must learn the erhu well and play a song as euphemistic as a teacher.

So, I made a good study plan, starting with the basic skills. It really pays off. Under my hard work and the teacher's earnest instruction, I slowly learned some simple songs. Listening to my own music, I am very excited.

I remember that at last year's international art festival, dozens of British friends came to our school to exchange their motherland's culture, folk customs and folk customs with our teachers and students. I was chosen by the school to perform erhu on stage. I strode onto the stage and played horse racing wholeheartedly. The music is sometimes loud and passionate, showing the momentum of galloping horses, sometimes cheerful and lively, showing the joyful mood of herders, and sometimes euphemistically melodious, showing the vast beauty of grasslands. When the rich and varied melody passed through my fingertips, my classmates in the audience gave me adoring eyes, and even my English friends couldn't help dancing. At the end of the song, thunderous applause rang out from the audience. At this time, a sense of pride arises spontaneously, and it feels really amazing.

I silently said to myself: I can perform on stage today, but I can't be proud. I must continue to work hard and play more beautiful music!

My amazing composition 6 In our life, everyone has something amazing, and so do I, that is, learning to dive.

During the summer vacation, my father said that my swimming level reached a standard and I could learn to dive. Although I didn't want to learn diving, I was dragged over.

Arriving at the swimming pool, there are countless people swimming and diving here. Dad taught me a few essentials of diving, let me warm up for a while, and then let me go. When I got on the platform and looked down, I thought it was too high. My head was a little dizzy, but I thought about it and had to learn. Then I went to the top, recalled the main points, kicked my legs hard, jumped in the air, leaned down and held my breath into the water, but at this moment I couldn't reach the end and couldn't pedal. When my father saw that I didn't surface, he immediately jumped down to save me. I couldn't hold my breath in the water, so I drank a lot of water. When I woke up, my father asked me if I wanted to have a rest. I said, "No, I must learn to dive." So I continued to practice. I practiced all morning, but I still can't practice well. All other problems have been overcome, but my feet still can't touch the ground. Suddenly I had a brainwave, put on slippers and fixed them, and put some hard sponges on the soles, which was much higher. I got on the platform again, jumped hard and plopped into the water. This time, my foot finally touched the ground. I landed on the pedal. At this time, I felt a sense of pride that I had never felt before, and I felt great.

This is my magic. It took me only one day to learn to dive. How do you feel after reading it?

My magic composition 7 "once, twice, three times ... fifty times." "ah! Another fifty. Is fifty my nemesis? " I said angrily, throw the rope on the ground, and then I sat on the lawn.

At this time, my mother came up to me and said, "Dance again and sing while dancing. Don't count. I'll count for you. Don't be nervous!" " Let's go ""well, I'll try again. "I reluctantly picked up the rope and sang while dancing. At this time, a spring breeze blew gently, blowing the leaves on the tree with the sound of "rustling sand", as if cheering for me.

Suddenly, my foot stepped on the rope, and I nervously asked my mother, "Is it fifty again?" "No, no, you are great. You beat yourself. You danced 75 times. You are too powerful, too powerful! " Mom said happily.

"Can't, mom, jump seventy-five times is great? Edison invented the electric light bulb, and Nobel invented high explosives. It's amazing. He can do great things! " I said.

"Great inventions are great things, but it is also great for everyone to overcome themselves. Good boy, you did a great job today. Let's go home. "

"No, mom, I don't want to go home. I am going to jump again! " I confidently picked up the rope and jumped up.

"One, two, three ... one hundred!" I can't believe I jumped a hundred times! The spring breeze is blowing head-on, and my mother and I are happy to go home hand in hand.

Along the way, my heart was filled with joy, because I understood that greatness not only means doing an earth-shattering event, but also means conquering myself! As long as we can work hard to overcome the inner obstacles and make ourselves better than before, it will be great! I secretly said to myself, "I'm amazing!" "

I learned to ride a bike in the summer vacation, and I think I am great.

One day in the summer vacation, my mother bought me a bike. I want to learn to ride a bike, so I have been practicing there. One moment I fell down, the other moment my foot touched the ground, and the other moment ..... I was very angry, and I felt that the birds on the roadside trees were singing all the time, which was really annoying. After a while, I went to consult my brother.

My brother said, "If you want to succeed at an early date, you should practice every day, and don't give up halfway." After a while, my brother said, "You ride and I'll hold the back seat." "Very good." I said. I rode my bike and my brother hugged me. After a while, I felt that there was no one behind me and my feet landed. The elder brother said, "What are you doing?" "Didn't you just help the back seat?" I said angrily. Thought: Isn't it just riding a bike? Why is it so difficult? My brother seemed to understand my mind and said, "No one is born with a lot to learn. They are all learned. " I nodded, and started riding again, ready to learn. My brother pretended to put his bike there. I always thought that my brother wouldn't let go, so he walked around the yard with his feet on the ground. When I looked back, it turned out that my brother had been walking and didn't help at all. I was angry, but my brother said, "Stop, did you find anything?" "What is it?" I asked frowning. Brother said, "You learned to ride a bike." He added: "You have been dependent on one thing or one person for too long, so I will do it." I thought: Yes, I learned to ride a bike. I should thank my brother for his kindness. I will get rid of this bad habit of dependence and confidence in the future.

Once, I went downstairs to ride a bike. I feel the birds singing for me, the leaves rustling, as if to accompany my song, and the wind blowing, as if to say in my ear, "Little girl, you are great!" " "The sky is exceptionally blue, and the flowers are dancing for me ... I am proud of learning to ride a bike.

My magic composition 9 begins, and I will be in the fifth grade of primary school soon. Sometimes, I am really proud of myself. Through continuous efforts and overcoming various difficulties, I learned a lot of skills at school. I quietly germinated the seeds of thought from the bottom of my heart!

I remember once, my parents took me skating in Zheng Da Square in the county. At first, I skated on roller skates, but I couldn't stand still. I often fall down and don't know how to start skating. At that time, I thought about what I should do ... I was a little discouraged and tears kept spinning in my eyes. At this time, I saw the eye-catching slogan "As long as you work hard, you will succeed" beside the square. Seeing this slogan, I stopped being discouraged and began to skate hard, once, twice and three times. .......................................................................................................................................................

After a few laps, you don't have to slide with the help of handrails, and you are not afraid of wrestling. I can slide to my mother quickly. At this time, my mother kindly said to me, "Don't be afraid of wrestling, just keep your balance." I nodded, understood the meaning, and slipped boldly with open arms. Although my movements are not particularly smooth, a bit like a penguin swaying, I gradually become more confident.

I insisted again and again, and finally I can skate freely on the ice! I am very happy. I always wave to my parents. My parents smiled and gave me a thumbs-up and praised me for being awesome!

I am really amazing composition 10 On a sunny afternoon, I became a "hero".

"ah!" Mother's screams came from the kitchen. I rushed over to ask about the situation. It turned out that when my mother was washing vegetables, a snail crawled out of the sewer. I volunteered: "I will eradicate it!" "However, I have been afraid of mollusks since I was a child. When I saw the snail, my hands trembled slightly, as if I were going to die as soon as I met it. I want to break my word, but I have to resign myself to fate. Like an injection, I closed my eyes, reached out, gently picked up the snail and threw it into the trash can. I almost threw up. The moment I threw it into the trash can, I couldn't help screaming. But I'm finally not afraid of snails. I challenged myself! I'm not the one who's afraid of mollusks anymore! My mother also praised me: "You are great! "Although it's just three simple words, it makes me very happy. In this way, I naturally became "Little Mulan" in my mother's mind.

However, the honor is only temporary, and the previous honor cannot always be proud. In that case, it will retreat.

My amazing composition 1 1 Chao Yitong is the monitor of our class. I don't have a good relationship with her, but I admire her.

She has black hair, small bright eyes and a small cherry mouth under her nose. She has a glib tongue like a little teacher. She is really good to our classmates, and we are all afraid of her.

I remember that once the teacher asked a question, and the teacher and everyone gathered together for a heated discussion. Suddenly, she raised her hand and said loudly, Teacher, I know the answer. Her voice immediately quieted the classroom, and the students all looked at her with their mouths wide open. She spoke the answer unhurriedly and analyzed the problem-solving process in an orderly way. The teacher gave her a thumbs-up and we applauded her, I think.

After class, the students gathered around her and asked her noisily: How did you come up with the answer? She just smiled.

I admire her very much, so I ran to ask her every problem I couldn't solve.

My amazing composition 12 Everyone in the world has his own bright spots, some of which are helpful; Some people don't hide money; Some honor the elderly; I also have my own bright spot, that is, I can make an electric boat.

The final exam is approaching, and everyone hopes that the extra-long class can give them extra points, and I am no exception. My special course is scientific and technological innovation. The teacher said, "You have to be a means of transportation. If you succeed, you can get full marks. " Some people make balloon cars, some people make rubber-band planes, some people buy things from the internet, and I personally created electric speedboats.

When I got home, my mother bought me a motor and an oar. I prepared our foam board, the windshield of the toy car and the tape of the knife. I first fixed the motor on the foam board. "ah! Posted backwards! " I'll tear off the motor and paste it again. "ah! How can I just focus on the motor? The order is wrong! " After a morning's hard work, the electric speedboat "unsinkable" was born with a five-star red flag on it. The first experiment began, and it sank before it set sail. It's really annoying The second refit was at noon, and the ship sank just after it started, but there was still progress ... At the beginning of the eleventh experiment, the ship ran very fast, and I paddled with my hands to make waves, but it still didn't sink, but went straight ahead and broke through one big wave after another. I jumped up happily.

When I came to school, all the students were holding their own works, and they all had answers. The water race began, and my "Never Sink" rushed to the first place. Others' boats were in poor condition, and some of them sank. Not only did everyone vote for me,

At that moment, I felt that I was really something.

My big composition 13 When I was a child, I was proud of one thing, and that was when I was seven years old.

I still remember that summer, I went to my grandmother's house. At that time, my four-year-old brother was there, very naughty and disobedient. My grandmother was worried when I walked into the house. I went up to her and asked her what was wrong. Oh, so she won't cook with her naughty brother. Seeing me coming, he asked me to take him to play, but my brother couldn't help thinking about grandma. Just when we were in a hurry, I had a brainwave and said confidently to my grandmother, "Grandma, I will make you a fruit salad today." "OK, OK, but be careful!" Grandma was so happy that she took her brother to play.

So I swaggered into the kitchen and took out all kinds of fruits, bananas, apples, oranges and watermelons from the refrigerator. Then "bathe" them, cut them into cubes and pour them into a bowl, add sugar and stir, add some cucumbers, and put a cherry in the middle for decoration. Wow! How beautiful! Just when I was secretly happy, a problem suddenly "fell from the sky": I haven't put the cream yet. So, I searched for a long time, but I still couldn't find the cream. Just when I was in a hurry, I suddenly remembered that there was still a bottle of yogurt in the refrigerator, so I took it out and poured it. In this way, a plate of delicious food is ready.

Just then, grandpa came back. I let everyone taste my cooking, and everyone was full of praise. Just when I was proud, my four-year-old brother said humorously, "Just so-so." I gave him a hard look, but he casually said, "I'm not finished yet, and you are just so-so, third in the world!" " "You listen to me, has been opposed to my brother, so praised me. My heart is sweeter than honey.

Kids, I'm great! Be praised by so many people. What about you? Like me?

My amazing composition 14 "The failure of millions of people is the failure of doing things incompletely, and it often ends when it is only one step away from success." This famous saying has always been engraved in my heart. ...

At that time, my mother took me to learn ballet, because I was a transfer student and I didn't know much about dance movements. When the teacher taught me to practice "opening word by word", I cried out in pain. At this time, the teacher came over, without any sympathy or comfort, and still solemnly held my leg with both hands, pressing it down bit by bit, and the whole leg seemed to split in half. But I dare not look at the teacher's livid face again.

Until the way home, I finally couldn't help it. I said to my mother in tears, "Mom … I don't want to learn to dance … It hurts!" " ""no, you must insist! " Mom's firm voice rang in my ear. Every time I want to give up, my parents always encourage me to say, "if you want to be a dancer, you have to endure the pain and pay more than others."

In this way, I crustily skin of head, endured the difficulty of learning dance, and finally survived three years!

Now I am an excellent student in the dance company. "Jiang Xinyi, let me show you!" "Look how beautiful her movements are." Similar words often ring in my ears, which are all my sweat and efforts in the past three years!

Students, am I great?

My amazing composition 15 Every time I recall the past, I will think of the scene where I won the "Shuanglong Cup" in the first day of junior high school.

That was in an art class. I bent over my desk and drew a picture of "Underwater World", which was composed of many small fish, aquatic plants and corals. I drew a lot of beautiful fish first, and then I drew some corals. I think: aquatic plants should be painted next to corals. In a short time, a painting was finished like this. Huh? Why is it not beautiful at all? Oh! It turns out that I forgot to draw this picture.

So, I brought a box of watercolor pens and painted each small fish with bright colors as soon as I opened it. In a short time, a painting was finished.

I handed in my homework to the teacher. On the way home, I thought: I wonder if I can win the prize for this painting?

In this way, some time has passed. One day, the art teacher came to me excitedly, told me the news of winning the prize, and awarded me the certificate of "Shuanglong Cup". I am ecstatic.

How's it going? I'm amazing!