Composition Title and Comments of Mianyang Senior High School Entrance Examination in Sichuan in 2022

In 2022, the Mianyang senior high school entrance examination language has ended. The following is a comment on the composition of Mianyang senior high school entrance examination for reference only.

Material of composition topic of Mianyang senior high school entrance examination in Sichuan in 2022: omitted

Please write a composition on the topic of "closeness".

Requirements: ① Except for poetry and drama, the style is not limited; ② No real place names, school names, names, etc. In the text, there is no plagiarism or plagiarism; (3) The handwriting is neat, and the roll surface is neat; (4) No less than 600 words.

The above content comes from candidates' memories and is for reference only!

Comments on the Composition of Mianyang Senior High School Entrance Examination in Sichuan in 2022 I. Ideas and solutions to solving problems

Look at the word "close", first of all, it is "close", that is to say, there is a gesture and willingness to actively approach or even blend in with the beautiful people and things in front of you. Secondly, we should be "near" and close to the people, things and things in front of us. Seek proximity with a sincere heart, and love will be born together and love will be close. Therefore, closeness is to show a true heart, express a true feeling and show a positive energy. The title of this composition corresponds to the writing requirements of the "new curriculum standard": to have true feelings and strive to express their unique feelings, experiences and thoughts on nature, society and life; Learn to observe life from multiple angles, discover the diversity of life, capture the characteristics of things, and strive for creative expression.

First make clear what to get close to, then solve how to get close, and finally present the result of getting close, and the influence and help that getting close brings to yourself. And "closeness" should be the core of this article. Mr. Ye Shengtao, a famous educator, once said that "writing is for being a man". Writing teaching in "New Curriculum Standard" first requires students to express their true feelings, that is, tell the truth, tell the truth, and truly express their feelings and thoughts.

Third, the selection of materials shows pride.

(a) close objects can refer to people, such as relatives who are full of care and love for themselves, teachers who help their classmates and friends with friendship, teachers who let them gain knowledge, strangers who enthusiastically help themselves or celebrities whom they worship; It can refer to concrete things that exist in real life, such as books and picturesque mountains and rivers that accompany a person to grow up; It can refer to some activities, such as flower arrangement, martial arts, chess, Shu embroidery, Sichuan opera and other traditional cultural activities. It can also refer to abstract concepts in spiritual life, such as the belief that leads people to the other side of success, the courage and belief that inspires people to overcome difficulties, and the will to support people to overcome difficulties ... The richness of writing objects determines the richness of writing topics in this paper.

(2) Two clues can go hand in hand in the intimate process. For example, when choosing a celebrity who has made outstanding contributions, we should pay attention to his suffering and his rise, portray his feat of pleading for the people and caring for the country, and feel that he can still be Do not forget your initiative mind and optimistic in adversity. When writing, you should combine the spiritual strength you learned from celebrities when you were depressed and confused, and show the influence of celebrities on yourself. When writing, you should have your own unique opinions and feelings. The full text shows your changes from ignorance to understanding, from immaturity to maturity, from dependence to independence.

(3) The close result is the highlight of the article. Close to your retired grandparents, you have learned the wisdom of life precipitated in your later years and felt the warmth and support from your loved ones; Being close to a like-minded mentor, you get a lot of happiness in the process of getting along with him, and you gain the beauty of growth and the motivation to forge ahead; Close to books, you can enjoy wonderful reading time, and you can also solve puzzles, gain knowledge, learn experiences, experience joys and sorrows, and even find your life goals through books; Close to the natural scenery, you feel the infinite beauty of nature. In picturesque mountains and rivers, you can experience the beauty of the world and the wonder of life, and feel the deep attachment to the mountains and rivers of the motherland. ...

Don't panic before you start writing, think about the topic and make an outline.

In the concrete operation, the outline is very important. For example, when writing a narrative, you should design the beginning and the end, and divide your narrative into several levels. A level is a paragraph, and it would be better if a transitional sentence or paragraph could be set in the middle.

When outlining, be sure to write the beginning and end in detail, and what quips, famous sayings, poems and allusions are interspersed in the middle paragraphs, so as to be accurate. A qualified student, make an outline, about 5 to 8 minutes. To master time, the outline should be concise.