What is the full score of the composition in the 6th Fengyang Cup Competition?

The first part (1 ~ 5 questions, 20 points)

1. Among the words listed below (original), a group of words with bullets that are not pronounced correctly is () (2 points).

A, shelter (b √) nurse (sh √) waiting for screen (píng) obstacle (w √ n) pity

B, martyrdom (xùn) hard to stay (dāi) stagnation (xěn) quietness (tián)

C, against (zhi) Sue (si)(zhàn) pollution peep (ku ○ and ○)

D according to SOB (yè), bud (lü i) is arrogant (chà) and antagonistic (Jie).

2. (Original) Among the following groups of words, there is no typo () (2 points)

A, flowers bloom and fall, make persistent efforts and flow endlessly. B, red makeup is white, and the flag is chaotic.

C, teaching people tirelessly, overlapping obstacles, tireless, D, cheerful improvisation.

3. The following two sentences are irrelevant, please make suggestions for revision. (4 points)

(1) The government has continuously increased financial input to solve the shortage of funds for compulsory education in rural areas.

Revised opinions:.

(2) The meeting stipulated that each speaker's speech time should not exceed 30 minutes at most.

Revised opinions:.

4. (Original) Fill in the blanks with the original sentences of the text. (6 points)

Now, homesickness means that I am here and the mainland is there. (Yu Guangzhong's homesickness)

The lonely birds sang their sadness.

(3) after the special experience of the first emperor. ("Zhuge Liang's Model")

4, turn into spring mud to protect flowers. (Gong Zizhen's Poems in the Sea)

⑤ , 。 The so-called Iraqis are on the water side, (Book of Songs)

Hebei is an outstanding place with elegant characters and romantic articles, which attracts worldwide attention. With rich cultural accumulation, the people of our province are committed to making Hebei a cultural province. The school also actively cooperated to fully mobilize students, launched a series of campus activities of "Culture into Campus" and devoted itself to the torrent of cultural construction. (6 points)

As a volunteer of this activity, please take part in the following work.

(1) In order to cooperate with the activity and encourage more students to participate, please write a slogan for this activity. The center is clear, the language is concise and inspiring. (2 points)

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(2) In order to cooperate with this activity, please help to make a brochure to promote "Cultural Hebei". Please draw up two columns according to the existing column names, which can be drawn up from the perspectives of history, art, places of interest and folk customs. Require the same structure and equal number of words. (2 points)

Column 1: Pursuing Historical Origin Column 2: Appreciating Local Art

Column 3: Column 4:

(3) In order to strengthen the study and promotion of traditional culture, the class will hold "Reading Week of China Literary Masterpieces". Everyone will make some bookmarks and recommend their favorite China literary masterpieces to other students. Please refer to the history to write the text of the bookmark you made. (2 points)

Example: Defoe's Robinson Crusoe-Robinson spent 28 years alone on a desert island! Perseverance and tenacity are commendable.

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The second part (50 points for questions 6-23)

Look at the following text first and answer question 6 ~ 10. (13)

When he was a teacher, he dragged himself into the deep mountains and valleys. In winter, the wind is fierce, the snow is several feet deep, and the skin is chapped. Give up, four people are too stiff to move. People hold soup and fill it with water, covered in it, but it is harmonious for a long time. If you stay with your host, you will eat it again every day, and it will not taste fresh and fat. All the students are all embroidered, wearing hats decorated with treasures, white jade rings on their waists, swords on their left and smelly faces on their right. In the meantime, I have no desire for beauty. I don't know if my mouth and body are not as good as people. Gaiyu works hard.

Fan Zhongyan is two years old, lonely, poor and helpless. I have little ambition, and I take the world as my responsibility every time. I either study hard or stay out at night and need to face the water. No food, just read with porridge. As an official, every passionate talk about what's going on in the world is desperate. Even after being slandered, Dengzhou was protected by the government. Zhong Yan is hardworking, self-motivated and doesn't care about meat. His wife can only support herself. I often say to myself: "A scholar worries about the world first, and then enjoys the world."

The author of paragraph (a) is 6 (original). Ask Fan Zhongyan to write a famous poem.

. (2 points)

7 (original) Add some words to the following words. (2 points)

(1) Tangwo was irrigated: (2) Waist-girdled white jade:

(3) At the same time, (4) We should wash our faces with clean water:

Translate underlined sentences into modern Chinese. (4 points)

(1) People who have had enough fun in it don't know that their mouths and bodies are not as good as people.

(2) Scholars should worry about the world first, and then enjoy the world.

Both A and B have written sentences about difficult living conditions. Please extract a sentence from each sentence. 2 points

Wen Jia:

B text:

10 (original) What do A and B tell us? Talk about your understanding in combination with your own life. 3 points

Second, read the following text and answer the question 1 1 ~ 14. (10)

Red, green and green environmental protection bag

On the streets of Sydney and Melbourne, I often see people carrying a big rectangular bag with bright green or rose in it, and the color is very bright. My friend Arsene told me that this is a "reusable shopping bag", which is usually called an "environmental protection bag".

(2) Arsene's words solved the mystery of environmental protection bags for me. I graduated from the Chemistry Department of Peking University. As far as I know, transparent plastic bags supplied free of charge in supermarkets are usually made of polyethylene plastic or polychloroprene plastic. Polyethylene plastics and polychloroprene plastics are difficult to decompose after becoming garbage, which causes pollution to the environment. Because of this, Australia advocates replacing polyethylene plastic and neoprene plastic with environmental protection bags. This kind of environmental protection bag is made of non-woven fabric, which is easy to decompose after becoming garbage and will not cause environmental pollution.

(3) In the United States, the fashionable reusable shopping bag launched in 2007 is made of silk and calfskin by hand and can be folded to the size of a wallet. The price is as high as $960, and no one cares. "I'm not a plastic bag", a fashionable reusable shopping bag launched in Britain, costs 15 US dollars, so it can't be widely promoted. Australia's environmental protection bags are popular, and the price is less than $ 1, which has been widely promoted.

④ In fact, the cost of environmental protection bags is more than 90.9 Australian dollars. In order to promote the work of replacing plastic bags with environmental protection bags, the Australian government has deliberately lowered the price of environmental protection bags in order to make them acceptable to ordinary people. Considering the high cost of producing environmental protection bags in Australia, the Australian government entrusts China enterprises to produce environmental protection bags. Therefore, most of the environmentally-friendly bags popular on the streets of Australia are made in China. However, although China has produced a large number of environmental protection bags for Australia, environmental protection bags have not become a "fashion" in China.

⑤ The strong environmental awareness of the Sydney municipal government and the general public is worth learning from other cities. We should really strengthen the concept of environmental protection and care for our earth, because we only have one earth.

(Text/Ye Yonglie is selected from Xinmin Evening News on July 20, 2007, and has been changed)

1 1. This paper mainly introduces the environmental protection bags in Australia. Please summarize the characteristics of environmental protection bags according to the content of the article. (2 points)

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12 (original), what is the specific content of the word "like this" in the second paragraph of the article? (2 points)

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13 (original), what explanation method is used in the third paragraph of this article, and what is the function. (3 points)

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14 (original), read the following "related links" materials, and express your opinions in combination with this article (3 points).

The General Office of the State Council issued a notice that since June 1 2008, the system of paid use of plastic bags will be implemented in all supermarkets, shopping malls, bazaars and other retail places, and plastic shopping bags will no longer be provided free of charge.

Combined with the practices of the United States and Britain mentioned in the article, what does this passage show?

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Third, read the following text and answer the question 16 ~ 19. ( 1 1)

Five tips of the article

(1) How to read an article? No matter what the content is, the skills must be changed. The most commonly used techniques are description, narration, lyricism and reasoning. As far as personal skills are concerned, the article will be written even if the description is not monotonous, the narrative is not procrastinating, the lyric is not artificial, and the reason is not boring. But what is more common is a combination of these technologies. No matter how many changes there are, there are only a few basic things, which can be summarized into five elements: form, matter, emotion, reason and canon, which we can call "five keys to writing"

(2) Just like an immortal can pop up a piece of music, just running and jumping can also organize a sports competition. But after all, it is a symphony of various musical instruments and sports meetings, which is rich in content, pleasant to hear and beautiful. Therefore, no matter what style, it is really difficult to impress by one technique. Generally, only the combination of "five strategies" can make a brilliant article. Try this formula to test famous books, all of which are effective. Fan Zhongyan's "The Story of Yueyang Tower" is a record, but except one or two words about Teng Shoulou, the rest of the "falling rain" and "beautiful spring scenery" are descriptions, and "feeling extremely sad" and "being happy" are emotional descriptions. Finally, a "Dali" that has shocked for thousands of years is introduced. Form, matter, emotion and reason are all used, and the article is vivid and meaningful, which has long gone beyond the scope of narrative. Mao Zedong's "Serving the People" was shaped from the scene of the memorial service; It is one thing to talk about burning charcoal around Zhang; Deep condolences are feelings; Serving the people is rational; Sima Qian's words are either more important than Mount Tai or lighter than a feather, which is a classic. The "five strategies" are all available, just like a mountain, calm and vigorous, full of vitality. Some people say that Marx's articles are difficult to read, but you see how vivid and thorough he is in analyzing the nature of labor being bought and sold as a commodity: "The original possessor of money, as a capitalist, held his head high; The labor possessor follows as his tool. One is smiling and ambitious; One is fear of timidity, just like selling your own skin in the market. There is only one future-let others get a tan. " The use of the word "shape" here is not simple, but a combined shape. It can be seen that good articles rarely use one tactic and one method to sing a monologue and play the piano.

People often complain that there are not many good-looking articles now, one of the reasons is that only a single method can be used. /kloc-you can barely use one of the 0/8 weapons, so how can you fight without panting? Don't talk about "capturing" readers. The reader will blow your little manuscript into the wastebasket in one breath. As mentioned earlier, form and things are true, emotion and reason are virtual, and special attention should be paid to the mutual borrowing of the virtual and the real when using the "five strategies". In this way, documentary literature can avoid its shallowness and reasoning literature can avoid its rigidity.

④ Although the "five writing strategies" are simple, they are based on the observation and refinement of form, matter, emotion and reason and the accumulation and application of knowledge classics. For example, the beating, caressing, squeezing and pressing of Taiji Chuan, and the singing, reading, doing and beating of Peking Opera are all improvisations and comprehensive applications. The master can write freely, and his strange tricks are repeated one after another. His articles are like lightning and peach blossoms.

15 what is the central argument of this article? (2 points)

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16 (original) Please fill in the following contents according to the idea in the second paragraph of the article. (2 points)

The first few sentences of the second paragraph summarize "",then demonstrate with three examples, and finally summarize with "".

17 (original) The first paragraph of the article "How can an article look good?" The role of? (3 points)

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18 (original) Please imitate the author's analysis of the story of Yueyang Tower in the second paragraph, and try to analyze how the Song of Snow in Farewell to Tian Shuji Wu's Home uses five strategies. (4 points)

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Read the following text and answer the questions 19 ~ 23. (16)

The Last Rose of Summer in Liu Jiming

The soprano was knocked down by a fatal disease in late spring.

When the thief knocked at the door, he saw a pair of suffocating eyes. Just as he asked, "Do you want flowers?" The bouquet in his hand was gently taken over. "What a sweet rose!" The thief heard her approaching the plastic flower and sniffed it carefully. The thief was a little confused at the moment. "Did you just pick it?" When she came in with plastic flowers, she smiled back. "Thank you very much." She put her face close to the plastic flower again and closed her eyes intoxicated. The thief sat on the sofa in the living room and looked very nervous. "Where do you think this flower should be put?" She walked around the room with a bunch of plastic flowers. "No one has sent me flowers for a long time. Which opera have you seen, Princess Durando, Carmen or vilen? Oh, you have heard my concert. " She finally found an empty jar and bottle. "What do you think this flower can be inserted in it? I have a lot of empty cans here, but there are not so many flowers. " She smiled breathlessly again. "Where did you know that I like roses? I have never told anyone. " Suddenly, she cocked her face and put her hand on her chest childishly. "Guess what I want to do most now." The thief shook his head.

"Play the piano." She gently spit out three words. She sat in front of the piano and muttered something to herself. The sound of the piano slipped from her fingers like silk and looked soft and weak. "Can you recognize which song it is?" She said. "My fingers are as weak as cotton wool. You can't imagine that I entered the Conservatory of Music with this song when I was fifteen. Have you ever heard of The Last Rose in Summer? Unfortunately, I can't sing it. I won the grand prize when I sang in college. " Her fingers hung feebly on the keys. "Are you listening?"

"I should go." The thief stood up from the sofa and said firmly. When he crossed the living room and walked quickly to the door, he heard an abnormal sound behind him. "Are you coming?" He stopped involuntarily. "This bunch of flowers will wither in a few days. If only I could smell fresh roses every day. " She put her face close to the bunch of plastic roses in the jar again and said to herself.

Three days later, he came again with a big bunch of flowers in his hand. This is a real rose full of fragrance. "Oh!" She kissed the enchanting flowers and said, "I have never seen so many roses." She was breathless with excitement. He helped her to lie on the bed and put the empty jar with roses around the bed. She watched him finish it silently. "You know, I thought you weren't coming." She said.

"I think so too." He said. "But you came anyway," she said. "You don't know how happy I am. It's a pity that I can't sing for you. You won't take it personally. " "How come!" He looked away. "I could have played the song" The Last Rose in Summer "for you, but my hands have lost control." She said, "What are you looking at?" "I'm looking at the picture on the wall." "Do you recognize me?" "I think so, too." "At that time, I just became famous. Look how sweet I smile. " "You laugh like one of my classmates. When we were in middle school, we always sat at the same table. "He looked at the photo on the wall with some gloomy eyes. "Later she went abroad." He asked, "May I smoke?" "Go ahead!"

Since then, the thief has sent a bouquet of fragrant roses every three days. It makes the room smell strange flowers for a long time. Her face was once rosy after a long illness. Once again, she had the idea of playing the last rose in summer, but this faint ruddy didn't last long. Until one day, she sat by the piano and waited for a whole afternoon, but she never heard the familiar knock on the door again. By this time, the roses in the jar had obviously withered. That night, her face became paler than usual. ...

At the end of summer, the thief was finally released from the detention center. His beard was pulled, and his eyes became more gloomy. That day, he traveled all over the city and bought a bunch of roses in a remote flower market. This may be the last rose in summer, he thought.

He knocked at the door again He knocked for a long time, but it was a strange old man who opened the door. The old man glanced at the roses in his hand and said indifferently, "Are you looking for that female singer? She left two months ago. " (Excerpted from Reading and Appreciation, 7-8, 2006, with deletion)

19 (original) The thief brought plastic flowers when he first came, but the soprano was "near", "sniffing", "near" and "drunk". Is she too sick to see? Please talk about the reason why the soprano did this. (3 points)

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20. What is the function of the title of the novel The Last Rose in Summer? (3 points)

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2 1 (original) "His beard was pulled and his eyes became more gloomy. On that day, he traveled all over the city and bought a bunch of roses in a remote flower market. This may be the last rose in summer, he thought. What descriptive methods are used in this article? What is its expressive function? (3 points)

Please appreciate the following sentences from a rhetorical point of view. (3 points)

The sound of the piano slipped from her fingers like silk and looked soft and weak.

At the end of the novel, it describes that after the thief got out of prison, he took pains to buy roses for the soprano, but the result failed. Some people think this ending is too sad, and deleting it will not affect the expression of the article. what do you think? (4 points)

The third part (24 questions and 50 points)

24. writing. (50 points)

Title: I deeply felt _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Requirements: ① Finish the topic first, and then write the composition. Words that can be filled in, such as "the preciousness of youth", "the greatness of teachers' love" and "the preciousness of friendship", can also be filled in by yourself; 2 Except for poetry, the style is not limited, about 600 words; (3) The real school name and name shall not appear in the text.

answer

After the sentence of 1 C 2 D 3 (1), add "problem" (2) and delete "most".

4 the answer is abbreviated

5 (1) Carry forward Hebei culture and strive to be civilized students. (2) Click on places of interest in Hebei to learn about folk customs (3).

A glass of Song Lian's turbid wine is Wan Li's home, but Ran Yan hasn't lost his mind.

7 (1) Hot water (2) Waist (3) Wash yourself (4).

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9 10 short answer

1 1 and (1) are non-woven fabrics. (2) After turning into garbage, it is easy to decompose and will not cause environmental pollution.

12. Transparent plastic bags provided free of charge in supermarkets are generally polyethylene plastic or neoprene plastic. Polyethylene plastics and polychloroprene plastics are difficult to decompose after becoming garbage, which causes pollution to the environment.

13 can't be deleted, because this paragraph mainly adopts the explanation method of column number and comparison, which highlights the characteristics of Australian environmental protection bags more accurately, with novel style and low price.

14. The environmental pollution caused by plastic shopping bags is worldwide, and governments all over the world are taking measures. China also controls the use of plastic shopping bags by limiting plastics, and the environmental pollution caused by plastic shopping bags will be effectively controlled.

15 If an article wants to be a good article, it must be rich and varied.

16.( 1) Only by combining the "five tricks" can you make a brilliant article.

(2) Good articles rarely use one tactic and one method, singing a monologue and playing the piano solo.

17 leads to the argument of this article with questions, which attracts readers and makes them think.

18( 1) "But let's drink to the guest who came home from the camp and play the barbarian lute, guitar and harp for him." This is a narrative;

(2) "Like spring breeze, night comes, blowing open the petals of ten thousand pear trees", white pear flowers are used to compare the snow falling on the trees, vividly sketching the wonders of snow flying in August outside the Great Wall. This is to write a shape and draw a scene;

"Until dusk, when the snow collapses our tent, our frozen red flag cannot fly in the wind", a bright red flag in a silvery white world. Beautiful and harmonious.

(3) "Then he disappeared at the corner of the mountain pass, leaving only his hoofprint" is to say goodbye. (4) Through the three strategies of form, event and emotion, the whole poem vividly shows a colorful, strange and magnificent frontier fortress picture.

19. This soprano can't go unnoticed.

The soprano who is seriously ill is eager to get in touch with the outside world. In her eyes, plastic roses gave her the desire to live and the support of life. She communicates with thieves through plastic roses, which is her kindness.

20 [Answer for example] (1) The Last Rose in Summer, as a song that has never been sung in the novel, plays the role of a clue and runs through the whole text. (2) Being attached to thieves and sopranos is a kind of concern and gratitude. (3) Show female artists' persistence in youth, life and art ... (4) Show the thief's soul and love feelings.

2 1 vividly depicts the thief coming out of prison, traveling all over the city to buy roses, and eager to visit the soprano, showing the thief's serious, positive and caring ideological quality.

Through the use of figurative rhetoric, this paper vividly shows the soprano's psychology of being tortured by illness, exhausted and dying, but still loving art and longing for survival.

You can agree or disagree, and you can get full marks by explaining the reasons.

24 the answer to the composition is abbreviated.

I have written down your serial number, and I will make it for you when it is adopted.