Read the following materials and write an essay as required (60 points). Human life is very limited. If a person cannot give up frequently and decisively in his life,

Sample essay:? Take inventory of life and beautify life

If you want to live a refined life, you must be diligent in taking inventory. Calculate that we spend one-third of our life sleeping, so during the day, we become stingy and make careful calculations in front of life. Because life is only short, and no one wants to waste their time looking at beautiful women in the mirror.

Life does require an inventory. This is probably human instinct. I still remember how to bargain with my mother when I was very young. I don’t want the doll and the train, I want the electronic keyboard. Although some children have xinxing inside, at my age, I have begun to understand the choice. We always hope that in life, there will be more surprises and less dullness; more perfection and less regrets; more rewards and less effort. These do not come from God’s arrangements, but mostly from our choices. Life is ever-changing, and we will face one hurdle after another. If you don’t break through any of them, you will just try everything. When you regret it, you want to say let me start over, but where can you find the time that has passed. Therefore, when we have the opportunity to choose, we must choose resolutely. Once we make a choice, we must be loyal to our choice. Life will naturally become less disappointing.

Life requires courage to take inventory. It's like cleaning a room, sitting among a pile of old things, rummaging through them, maybe everything has its own origin and story, but you have to bite the bullet and throw it out, and the room will look brand new. In this throw and throw, you need the courage to give up. Life should be persistent, but not everywhere. The inventory requires clearing up some misconceptions. Regularly and decisively taking inventory and giving up some things does not mean giving up lightly. It’s wise to take a decisive inventory and let go of too many unrealistic goals. If you cannot have both the fish and the bear's paw, you will naturally give up the fish and take the bear's paw. People often praise that success is due to perseverance. In fact, it is more than that. Before he persevered, he had given up the comfortable and leisurely life of ordinary people and the elegance of shopping and gardening. If you want something valuable, you must give up something almost as valuable. Although it is a bit helpless, this is the original flavor of life. When life does not give you the best of both worlds, you must think carefully before making a choice. Don't end up like Chang'e regretting stealing the elixir, and the blue sea and blue sky every night. Don’t follow blindly, don’t be impulsive, life needs careful inventory. For those long-lasting abandonments in our hearts, just smile lightly, because that is the price of life.

The more burdens, the less relaxation; the more desires, the less happiness. Endless desires always make people exhausted. How can people face difficulties with too heavy a burden? There is only a limited space in your heart. Don't put everything in it. You must know what to give up and what to treasure.

Smart people will not let the past hinder their progress. Only fools will be obsessed with the past because they do not know how to take stock of their souls.

In fact, the heart also has a pair of wings. The less burden you have on your shoulders, the better you can fly.

Only by being satisfied with life can you enjoy life; by taking stock of life can you beautify your life. Life belongs to you, so be diligent in taking inventory.

Comments: This is an examination essay and scored 57 points. The author tightly grasps the word "inventory" to write. In life, we often ignore "inventory" and focus too much on pursuit; in life, we often wander on the edge of giving up and not giving up. Our lives are limited, our energy is limited, and our hearts are even more limited, so we must give up decisively, take stock of life, and beautify life. The full text is eloquently told, with fresh techniques and clear themes. The language of the full text is sophisticated, beautiful and concise. Especially the sentence at the end of the article sublimates the main idea of ??the whole article. ?

Test question analysis: To write this article well, you must first clarify the scope of writing, that is, what is "inventory".

It should be said that "inventory" is indispensable for everyone living in modern society. Everyone should learn to inventory in life. In life, we must not only inventory items in time, but also inventory things and thoughts. Human life and energy are limited. Only by investing limited time and energy relatively concentratedly on a specific life goal can it be achieved. Desiring for everything may result in getting nothing. Therefore, in life, when we are very tired, we should give up some things, and we should promptly count out the things that should not be invested in. When writing, as long as what you write must fit within the scope of the "inventory".

Secondly, you must choose a good angle, that is, choose a small angle that you have a deep understanding of and a rich reserve of materials to write. Only when the angle is small can the excavation be deep. From a broad perspective, our country or collective is bound to have deficiencies of one kind or another when operating certain events, so our policies and guidelines need to be reviewed; in the cultural world, there are some wrong or inappropriate views on literature and art. It is necessary to take stock; in the process of education and teaching, if certain teaching reforms or teaching methods violate the laws of education, we must also take stock in time... From a small perspective, our life goals are slightly ambitious, which is not in line with our own reality. Goals need to be counted; if there are some errors in our thoughts or understandings, they need to be counted and discarded frequently and decisively. Nine times out of ten, life is unsatisfactory. These worries and complaints need to be thrown into the dustbin of time and thoroughly counted; endless desires in life always make people exhausted, and overly heavy burdens make it difficult for people to face difficulties. ? Therefore, we must also promptly take inventory of the limited space of the heart, so that the heart also has a pair of wings. The less burden on the shoulders, the better it can fly. ...

Thirdly, it is necessary to engage in divergent thinking, open up ideas, and extract as many novel viewpoints or centers as possible.