Writing in spatial order

1. Write a 400 essay in spatial order

1 A work of art that I like. Works of art refer to man-made products rather than natural objects, and are spiritual products rather than material products. , artworks are mainly the crystallization of imagery thinking, rather than the results of abstract thinking.

There is a striking orange pumpkin in the corner of our bedroom. This pumpkin was given to my grandma by my aunt, and she has always placed it in my home.

This is the kind of art I like. The pumpkin is about 36 centimeters in diameter and has a flower handle of about 4 centimeters at the top.

There is a small bit of green in a large area of ??orange. The whole combination is very coordinated. The more you look at it, the more it looks like the pumpkin carriage in "Cinderella"! This pumpkin is made of ceramic and weighs about 3 pounds. The surface is very smooth, icy, and hard, but it makes people put it down, like holding a cornucopia.

The dark green flower handle is a bit transparent, giving people room for imagination and adding a bit of vitality. A whole pumpkin is divided into 10 parts, it is really perfect! The structure of this pumpkin is relatively simple. It has the same appearance and structure as the pumpkin grown by the farmer's uncle. This pumpkin is not so bright and eye-catching, but an ordinary orange color, which makes people feel full of vitality and relaxed.

This simple and plain scenery is much better than the ceramic pumpkin inlaid with rare treasures. It is eye-catching for its simplicity and plainness. This pumpkin is very realistic, it really looks like a fresh pumpkin just picked from the vine! The surface of the glass pumpkin is glowing with light. If you put the glass pumpkin on the dining table without turning on the light, greedy people will definitely want to rush up and take a bite.

The simple color of the glass pumpkin makes me feel the hardships of the working people; its birth is inseparable from the hard-working hands of the glass pottery workers. This pumpkin adds a bit of color to my home.

Because of the rich imagination of glass pottery workers, more people will surely enjoy more beautiful art! 2 Handicrafts and Yachts There is a crafts and yacht on my desk. This yacht has a unique shape, exquisite structure, antique style, and the national style of Venice, Italy.

This magnificent yacht is made of plastic and is 40cm long, 10cm wide and 15cm high. It consists of two parts: hull and base.

The base is cone-shaped, red, and covered with exquisite patterns. The upper part is connected to the bottom of the ship.

The bottom of the boat is black, the hull is golden yellow, and the bow is pointed. There is a small light that can be loaded and unloaded in the section between the cabin and the bow.

This lamp is used for lighting at night. Because this is a craft, there are no actual light bulbs inside the lamp.

There is a bottom bracket in front of the cabin, and there is a little dancing figure in the small hole on the bottom bracket. Although this little person looks small, she is well made. She wears a silver-white short top, a red dance skirt, and a blue belt around her waist.

She raised her hands in a dancing pose. Her upper body and legs are connected by two copper rings.

The legs hang straight down, dangling in the air. The cabin is the main part of the ship. It is a three-dimensional trapezoid with a semicircular roof. The front, rear, left and right walls are empty, and the edges are carved with patterns of various sizes and shapes.

Some of them are fish-shaped, some are like flowers...the shapes are lifelike and lifelike. Just like fish playing in the water, horses galloping on the grassland, and flowers blooming among the flowers, this exquisite little cabin can still be opened! There is a movable screw at the base of each of the two rear edge frames, which can lift the entire lid of the cabin.

I think this is the device for the door in the cabin. After opening the cover, you can see a small box inside. There are rows of small chairs inside the box, so you can sit in the cabin and watch the appearance of the water city Venice.

There are eight small light bulbs hanging on the back of the hatch cover, like wine bottles hanging upside down, in four colors: red, yellow, blue, and green. There is also a boatman standing at the stern of the boat. He is wearing a yellow top hat, white clothes and pants, with a blue ribbon on his collar and a red belt around his waist. He is elegant and holds a paddle in both hands. This is the Venetian sailor. His characteristic is that he uses an oar to paddle the water. It seems that his rowing skills are very superb.

This magnificent boat can be used not only as a craft but also as a toy.

There is a plug connected to the base of the boat. After installing the boat body, the figures, etc., and turning on the power, the boat will spin in circles, and the dancing figures will also start to dance in circles.

The wall lights in the cabin also lit up, and beautiful music sounded again. Looking and listening, I seemed to have really arrived in Venice.

As a distinguished guest, I sit on this gorgeous and luxurious yacht. Some people are dancing for me, and the boatman is rowing for me. They take me to visit the magical water world of Venice; let me watch the rippling blue waterways. , a series of classical stone bridges; let me appreciate the ancient and splendid culture of Venice... This beautiful dance and beautiful music make people intoxicated, like a dream. This golden yacht is small, exquisite and unique. It is one of the treasures of my family. 2. Write me a composition in spatial order

The classroom is my paradise for learning knowledge; the classroom is my paradise for making friends; the classroom is also the "family paradise" where I spend the longest time in a day.

Our classroom is located in Building 1, west of the teaching building. It's bright and clean.

As soon as we walked into our classroom, we saw an L-shaped podium with a computer inside and a projector next to the computer. There is a large blackboard behind the podium with a bright five-star red flag on it.

There are two blackboards on the walls on the left and right sides of the classroom, one is the Young Eagle Competition; the other is the honor column. In the center of the classroom are rows of desks and chairs, which are arranged neatly by our students on duty.

Behind them, there is another large blackboard newspaper, with a theme every month, which is used for publishing "blackboard newspapers". There is an electronic clock hanging on the wall above the blackboard newspaper. It was originally left to us by my brother's class 5 (8).

I am very happy because the big brothers and sisters really care about us. With it, we learn to hurry up when doing homework; with it, our monthly exercises and exams will not be delayed; with it, our sense of time is strengthened, and we can race against time! My classroom is located on Building A of the school.

It is spacious and bright. The teacher’s clear ideas are on the blackboard in front of the classroom. The reasonable blackboard design allows us to understand the content of the text at a glance. When we encounter an unsolvable puzzle, as long as the teacher writes a few strokes on the blackboard and touches it, we will be enlightened.

There is a podium in front of the blackboard, and a computer with complete functions, clear images, and bright colors is embedded in the podium. As long as we turn on the computer and operate the keyboard skillfully, we can see the world without leaving home.

In our spare time, we can also watch TV and listen to music, so as to combine work and rest, which is really pleasant! There are 5 rows of desks and chairs neatly arranged in front of the podium. We have classes here. Sometimes, we discuss with the classmates behind, brainstorm and speak freely. There are B windows and C doors embedded in the walls on the left and right of the classroom.

3. A 600-word essay describing my campus in spatial order

The campus is a place we are very familiar with; the campus is the place where we study together; the campus is the place where we study together; the campus is used The place where we live together; the campus is our second home. It shines on us like the fiery red sun and nourishes us like the spring rain. Let us never forget the heavy responsibilities on our shoulders. "Be kind and be kind, and be virtuous." Life". This eye-catching slogan is always imprinted in the hearts of each of us. Yes, this is the educational philosophy of our school. As soon as we step into the door, a playground appears in front of us, with a basketball on the left and right sides of the playground. They are like guards, not afraid of hardship or tiredness, guarding our campus day and night. Small-leaf banyan trees are planted around the playground. Every summer, you will see some students enjoying the shade under the trees, and some Some are reading under the tree, and some are playing games under the tree... In the middle of the playground is the sacred flag-raising platform. The bright five-star red flag is flying on the flagpole of the flag-raising platform, looking so peaceful. Every Monday, all teachers in the school Students came to the playground to participate in the solemn flag-raising ceremony. Along with the national anthem, the national flag rose rhythmically, and teachers and students also saluted. Go up the stairs on the left, and you will find that next to the stairs There is a small garden. At this time, you can't help but look to the right: It turns out that there is also a small garden on the right. Although this garden is not big, it has a unique flavor. In spring, wild flowers are in full bloom, and the scene is full of green. Butterflies are dancing in the grass. , the hard-working bees are collecting honey; in summer, the grass here is not to mention how green it is. If a sheep saw it, they would drool! In autumn, the leaves on the only tree in the garden turn yellow and fall from the branches, like yellow butterflies flying; in winter, it is covered with snow, as if the world has turned white. So , taking three steps and two steps at a time, we arrived at the learning paradise, quietly listening to the sound of reading, as if we were immersed in the scene; taking a closer look at the concentration of the students, and everyone was excited, and their voices resounded The entire campus is decorated with beautiful campus, which makes the infinite scenery of the campus even better. The atmosphere of learning is everywhere in Longhua Six Primary School, and it is decorated with poetry and painting everywhere... This is what carries countless joys, dreams, and tears in my elementary school years. With the sad campus, every tree, every step, and every corridor here is so familiar and cordial, and the two old teaching buildings have cultivated generations of students. Such a beautiful campus How can we not spread our wings and fly high? How can it not make us yearn for the future? . 4. Write a scenery composition in spatial order

I remember going to the beach during the holidays. In order to see the moment when the sun broke through the horizon, I got up early, went to the beach and sat on the beach to wait.

I imagine how magnificent the landscape will be when the sun rises: the earth is covered with golden gauze; the trees are growing vigorously in the morning sun; the flowers are blooming; the birds are beginning to sing. ; I also lay on the soft beach in the soft morning glow, listening to the low hum of the sea, and enjoying the extraordinary feeling that the sea brought to me. In the distance, the sun rose, but I was a little disappointed. The scene in front of me was not as beautiful as I imagined. It was just a big round orange-red ball rising from the sea level, and everything did not change because of the beginning of the sun. Show a glimmer of light.

Just when I felt bored and stood up to leave, I accidentally saw a row of huge waves rushing over from the junction of the sea and the sky. They spanned the entire sea, and their momentum was like a row of shoulders. The heroic warriors marched side by side, singing war songs and rushing forward without a moment's pause. The waves surging on the top of the waves are like beating notes, making the raging waves appear a bit naughty.

They seemed to be chasing the same goal, and at the same time they made loud shouts. I was stunned by the sight in front of me, it made me feel shocked; an unprecedented experience was stimulating my soul; I was overwhelmed by this majestic landscape.

I walked towards the huge waves, but then hurriedly stepped back. I was so small at this time, and everything in front of me was so spectacular. I was deeply attracted by it.

Suddenly, I woke up. Isn’t all this in front of me exactly what I have been looking for and pursuing? . 5. How to write a composition in spatial order

Explanations must be in order, which is a necessary condition to organize the explanation content.

What order to adopt depends mainly on the characteristics of the object described by the author.

Commonly used explanation sequences include time sequence, spatial sequence, program sequence, logical sequence, etc. To explain the development process of things, it is appropriate to use chronological order; to explain the conditions of different parts of an object, it is appropriate to use spatial order; to explain the production process of objects, it is appropriate to use procedural order; to explain the internal connections of things, it is appropriate to use logical order. There is a certain degree of flexibility in both spatial and logical ordering. Talking about up and down first, then talking about the four sides, is the spatial order; talking about the four sides first, and then talking about the up and down, is also the spatial order. Talking about the reasons first and then the results is a logical sequence; talking about the results first and then the reasons is also a logical sequence. What kind of spatial order and what kind of logical order should be decided according to the process of observation and understanding, as well as the purpose and effect of the explanation.

1. Chronological order

Chronological order explains things according to the process of their occurrence and development. Expository texts that introduce the development and change process of things often use this order. It is generally explained in order of time and development stages. For example, when writing about living things, the process of reproduction and growth is used as the order, when writing about things, the process of formation and evolution is used as the order.

2. Spatial order

Spatial order explains things in order according to their orientation. This order is often used in descriptions of objects describing shapes and structures. - It is based on the spatial position or components of the physical object, in the order of up, down, left, right, front, back, inside, east, west, south, etc., and can be arranged flexibly according to the situation.

3. Logical sequence

Logical sequence is to arrange the sequence according to the relationship between things. This arrangement is in line with the laws of people's understanding of things. This order is often used in expository texts that introduce more complex things and phenomena, as well as introduce matters. Generally, explanations are given in order from the shallower to the deeper, from easy to difficult, from concrete to abstract, from simple to complex, and from primary to secondary.

4. Program sequence

Program sequence describes the production process of an item or the implementation process of a certain project, and explains things according to the process flow or implementation procedure. This sequence is often used to introduce craft production or technology project implementation.

5. How to clarify the order of explanation

When reading an explanatory text, how to specifically clarify the order of explanation? This requires analyzing the hierarchical structure of the article, accurately understanding and summarizing the meaning of the paragraph. First, we must understand what the article explains first, what it explains next, and what it explains next. Briefly summarize each part, and then start from the summary. Analyze the ideas explained by the author in the outline and clarify the order of the article.

Expository essays are divided into expository essays and expository essays. Explanatory articles about things generally use time order and spatial order. When we read such articles, we must grasp the key words indicating time and space in order to distinguish them. Explanatory essays generally use a logical sequence to explain the causes and consequences. For this reason, we must grasp the explanation content as a whole in order to understand the explanation order of the article.

6. How to identify the order of explanation

To identify the order of explanation, generally consider the following three aspects: ① Explain the hierarchical characteristics of the object itself. ② When writing about buildings (groups), they generally appear in spatial order; ③ When writing about the causes of things, they often go from essence to phenomenon or vice versa. Sometimes they also follow the order from primary to secondary or from cause to effect, and vice versa. To identify these sequences, one should read the original text carefully. 6. Write a 600-word essay about rooms in spatial order

Birds love the blue sky, fish love the sea, and horses love the grassland, just as I love my home.

This is a place full of love. In this place full of love, there lives a happy family of three.

The door of my house is unique. There is a pair of eye-catching couplets on both sides of the door. The upper couplet reads "Heshun has a hundred blessings", the second couplet reads "Peace is worth a thousand gold", and the horizontal scroll reads "Everything is renewed." ". This seemingly ordinary couplet was written by my father and I together. Every time I see it when I go home, I feel particularly comfortable.

As soon as you enter the front door of my house, you will find your living room. The most conspicuous thing in the living room is a plaque that is 1.2 meters long and 0.4 meters wide. It is carved from peach wood and reads "God rewards those who work hard." It means that God will realize the wishes of hard-working people. As long as they work unremittingly, the greatest success will be achieved. If you perfect and enrich yourself to the maximum extent and do everything possible to improve your competitive strength, you will have a beautiful and bright tomorrow.

Beside the living room, there is also my dad's "private garden".

Although the place is not big, the flowers planted inside are all my dad’s favorite flowers.

Dad takes care of them seriously every day, and they have become a beautiful scenery in our home. When I woke up in the morning, the flowers swayed in the wind, as if they were saying hello to me, and I felt particularly happy.

Across the hall is our dining room. Whenever we dine here, a lively discussion begins.

Whether it is national affairs or small things on the street, we all express our opinions. We can be warriors fighting to the death, but after eating, we are a family who live in harmony. Maybe this is the case. The atmosphere adds a lot of fun to my home. Along the left side of the corridor, you will enter my bedroom.

There are posters with photos of singers hanging everywhere in my bedroom, and there are two cute bears on the bed, which were my birthday gifts from my cousin. On the other side of my bed is my desk. There are many books on the desk, such as "Water Margin", "Journey to the West", "A Dream of Red Mansions", "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms" and "Youth Encyclopedia"! Among these books, "Journey to the West" is my favorite book! Opposite the bed, sit my violin.

When I am bored, I will play some happy songs, and when I am unhappy, I will play some sad songs. Therefore, the allusion of "hearing music and recognizing strange things" that my mother often said was born. 7. The composition about campus should be written in spatial order

The composition should be based on real things, and secondly, it should express true feelings. Just write about things in life with my heart. Of course, this First of all, you must learn to observe life carefully. You must also master some basic writing methods (arranging the beginning and end, clear details, highlighting the center...) This requires you to learn the good methods in the text and apply them to your own when studying Chinese classes. It is also a happy thing to write down your true feelings in the essay! —————————————————————— 1. My campus is very beautiful. As soon as you walk into the school gate, the first thing you see is our teaching building. The teaching building is four floors , the walls are orange, every window is shiny, and the south wall is inlaid with our school motto: Integrity, Learning, Harmony and Innovation. There are many classrooms in the teaching building, as well as computer rooms, laboratories, libraries, music classrooms, and language rooms. From time to time, the sound of teachers lecturing and students discussing, speaking, reading, and singing came from inside. To the south of the teaching building is a wide playground. There is artificial turf in the middle of the playground and a plastic track around it. After class, the students come to the playground. Some activities include playing football, basketball, volleyball or sandbags on the artificial lawn, and some running on the plastic track. At this time, the playground has become a sea of ??joy. To the north of the teaching building is a beautiful small garden. Small garden There are green grass inside, and many ornamental plants are planted, such as purple-leaf plums with purple leaves, wintersweets with proud snow and frost, cherry blossoms blooming in spring, and roses blooming in spring, summer and autumn. There is a curved path paved with cobblestones in the garden. The winding path. Students sometimes like to take a walk here. The beautiful campus grows happily with us. I love our campus! 2. My campus My campus is a beautiful campus. If you don’t believe me, please come and take a look. When you walk into the gate of the campus, you can see that there is a large lawn outside the teaching building surrounded by iron railings. There are flowers, grass, and There are trees and stone paths. Especially in spring and summer, the flowers on the lawn are in full bloom, the grass grows green and tall, and the trees are lush. It’s really beautiful! A few steps further is the teaching building. The teaching building is large and pink in color, but there are many small pictures on it. There are five floors in the teaching building, which is very spectacular. Once inside the campus, you can see it at once The flag stand has a national flag pole in the middle, and there are many flowers surrounding the flag stand. It’s so beautiful! In the center of the flowers, the national flag stand looks even more beautiful. The school playground is the most conspicuous. There are table tennis tables, basketball courts, runways, sandpits, flower beds, and trees in the playground. The school flower bed is in the playground. To the east, there are red, yellow, purple and orange flowers of various colors, which are very beautiful and bright. There are many sycamore trees on the school playground. These sycamore trees can shield us from the scorching sun in the summer, and we can sit under the shade of the trees. Read and play to your heart's content. I love my campus. No matter where I go or how old I grow, I will never forget my campus, my alma mater! If it is helpful, please click the Select Satisfactory Answer button under my answer. Don't waste Baidu resources by leaving the question unanswered. I hope you will give me a positive review.