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When all the flowers wither, only plum blossoms are full of vitality. Facing the snowflakes flying all over the sky, standing proudly in the cold wind. In the middle of winter, the ground is frozen, the weather is cold, and the plum blossoms in the snow are so beautiful. Stock trading is fragrant and refreshing.

White flowers are red, and the petals are smooth and transparent, carved like platinum or jasper, which is somewhat elegant. Some are as bright as the morning glow, some are as white as snow, and some are as green as jasper. Plum blossoms bloom sooner or later. On the same plum tree, you can see all kinds of flowers. Some shy, pink buds are fresh and lovely; Some just bloomed, and a few little bees got in and greedily sucked pollen; Some bloom for a long time, and the pink petals make people love; Plum blossoms, which used to be bustling, now have withered petals. When the wind blows the flowers, don't worry that the petals will break. Plum blossoms are not delicate flowers. The colder the weather, the more snow, the more vitality and delicacy it will bloom. There is a saying in the ancients: "The sword front comes from sharpening, and the plum blossom fragrance comes from bitter cold." It is not the gentle spring breeze that blows it, but the cold wind; It is not the cool and sweet rain that moistens it, but the cold ice and snow; It is not the bright sunshine that shines on it, but a ray of setting sun in the cold. Only a challenging life is a good life. It was a proud fragrance in the cold, and she smiled more brightly in the face of fluttering snowflakes. It never competes with flowers for bright spring and never shows off its beauty. It has a pair of pride and is never arrogant. Every winter morning, a charming and elegant fragrance wafts from the window.

What makes poets and painters in ancient and modern times full of praise is not only elegant and graceful, but also regarded as the national essence for its ice muscle jade bone and sharp Liuxiang. Plum blossom, with its noble, strong and modest character, gives people the motivation to work hard.

The color of plum blossoms is gorgeous but not demon.

The fragrance of plum blossoms is elegant.

Meihua's posture is ancient and exquisite.

Isn't this our construction worker? Whether the weather is cold or hot, whether it is windy or rainy, whether it is cold or freezing, they all work hard in their jobs.

I want to learn plum blossom, and I want to be like plum blossom.

Comments:

The author used the noble and strong character of plum blossom, so praise also embodies the indomitable spirit of construction workers, which deserves our praise. This article is a good metaphor for people. It not only praises plum blossoms, but also makes us admire construction workers.

There is a lot of chalk on the table in front of the blackboard. These chalks are almost at the end of their lives, and some are even too small to mention. Ding Lingling, the bell rang, and the students rushed to their seats, straightened their chests and waited for the teacher to arrive. The teacher strode in, put the papers on the table and began the class. The teacher picked up a piece of chalk just enough to hold and turned to write for us from the blackboard. Sasha vujacic, sasha vujacic and chalk turned into white granular objects, left their marks on the blackboard, and then disappeared a little. "Borrowing things is better than people, supporting things to express our ambition", when this little piece of chalk wrote the last word for us, taught us the last knowledge and completed its last task, it disappeared. From this small piece of chalk, what a great quality is reflected. That is-dedication.

Dedication is a kind of selfless beauty, it is silent, but it is around us. Where cars honk, there are policemen. No matter the wind, frost, rain and snow, no matter the cold and hot summer, he (she) is sticking to his post, inhaling the exhaust gas of the car, hearing the horn and smelling the peculiar smell of the exhaust gas, but in exchange for the rapid and smooth traffic. Isn't this also a kind of dedication?

Chalk, your beauty is selfless, great beauty, dedicated to others, Tagore said: "The cause of fruit is lofty, the cause of flowers is sweet, but let me do the cause of leaves and contribute silently in the shadow." This is a tribute to you, how great you are, and I praise you, chalk!

Comments:

The author said that the selfless dedication and obscurity of chalk are worthy of our touch and compared it to a traffic policeman. Indeed, no matter whether it is windy or rainy, the traffic police are working around us, not seeking fame, just like chalk, which deserves our praise and touch.