Rhetorical sentences and appreciation

The following sentences are rhetorical and appreciative.

1 Nothing is more indifferent than a clock: at the moment you were born, at the moment you picked the flowers of your youth dreams, it kept ticking.

Appreciation: this sentence uses metaphor, symbol and personification to write the ruthlessness of the clock, reminding us to cherish time.

In autumn, people walk with their feet and wear their hair, which seems to fall on their shoulders intentionally or unintentionally. Is it bright gold and gold?

Appreciation: This sentence uses figurative rhetoric, comparing fallen leaves to gold, which is vivid.

Snow-white makes people illusory, cold makes people awake, endless momentum makes people hard to breathe, and cold makes people's eyes sour.

Appreciation: This sentence uses overlapping to express the phonological beauty of words and the Leng Yan and sadness of snow.

The petals are still bright and dazzling when they fall to the ground, like the feathers of a big bird offering altar, leaving with a heroic and sad song.

Appreciation: This sentence uses a figurative rhetorical device, comparing fallen flowers to feathers, which shows the outstanding charm of peony.

The orange-red house, like an old monk in a bright cassock, was baptized by the rain with his head down and his eyes closed.

Appreciation: this sentence compares the house to an old monk in figurative rhetoric, and writes about the calm and desolate house in the rain.

Time is like a sharp knife. If it is not used properly, it will carve deep lines on the beautiful face, so that the vigorous youth will be worn away month after month and year after year.

Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphor and symbolism to write his own view of time. Time is a knife, and life depends on how well you grasp it.

7 like a slap, bright red, bright red; Like a fan, flat; Like a blooming flower, it will never fade!

Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphor and parallelism to write the color, shape and posture of autumn leaves, showing the beauty of autumn leaves and autumn colors.

A few friends, drawing bamboo shadows by moonlight, one you draw, the other I draw, the parameters are different, bright and dark, a little Chinese painting.

Appreciation: a few strokes, writing scenes painted by several friends, humorous, concise and unique, full of the unique charm of Feng Zikai's works.

The sky is clear, the mountains stretch, and clusters of white flowers are like flowing rivers.

Appreciation: Use figurative rhetoric to compare flowers to rivers. The language is exquisite, beautiful and infectious, and the lines are full of love for tung flowers, which makes readers seem to see the beautiful scenery of tung flowers all over the mountains.

He raised his eyes sadly and looked at the sky. Stars float on the quiet lake like emerald lilies.

Appreciation: It is very vivid to write the stars by metaphor. Compare the stars to lilies to highlight their cleanliness and purity, and compare the night sky to lakes to write their calmness and beauty. However, under such beautiful scenery, I am going to die, which reflects my regret.