Improper choice of advertising slogan

But the slogan of creating a city is hung in the streets and alleys.

Sentences have language defects such as improper word order, improper collocation, incomplete or redundant components, chaotic structure, unclear meaning and illogical.

1, incorrect word order.

Example 1: exhibit cultural relics unearthed thousands of years ago. (Move "thousands of years ago" to "cultural relics")

The news Exodus is very interesting to us. We are interested in news.

2. Improper collocation

Exodus 1: the flood of feelings is rolling in, and blood is roaring all over the body. ("Hot blood" can only "boil", not "roar")

Exodus 2: Now that you're here, I should go. (Incorrect collocation of related words: "Since" and "Ye" cannot be used together, and "Ye" should be changed to "Jiu")

3. Incomplete or redundant components

We should try our best to mechanize and collectivize our agriculture. It is appropriate to "take the road of …". )

Exodus 2: There are many comments about the TV series Peking Man in new york. (Delete "about" to make the subject of the sentence appear. )

4, the structure is chaotic

Example 1: The shepherd boy is eating grass with the cattle. (The sentence is mixed, it should be changed to "The shepherd boy leads the cow, and the cow is eating grass." )

Exodus 2: This method is sanitary and convenient, and is deeply loved by the masses. (or "deeply loved by the masses" or "deeply loved by the masses")

5. The ideographic meaning is unclear

Exodus 1: When buying apples, the younger children don't want them. (It can be understood as "a little apple" and "a child". )

Exodus 2: Boss Song and Qi San meet after a long separation, and they talk happily. He lit a cigarette for him ... (Who lit a cigarette for whom? I can't guess. )

6, illogical

Example 1: As long as you study hard, you can be admitted to a good university. "Study hard" is not a sufficient condition for "getting into a good university". )

"Exodus" He said: I saw him walk out of this factory twice, only to know that the old man who was enthusiastic about helping patients turned out to be a worker. Impose cause and effect: It is not enough to judge that the old man is a worker just by seeing him walk out of the factory twice. )