20 15 how to write the Chinese composition in the second volume of the national college entrance examination?

The second volume of 20 15 new curriculum standard is still in the form of material composition, which is less difficult than 20 14 in the context of bidding farewell to the national outline volume. This topic closely combines mainstream values to guide students to pay attention to and think about the spiritual realm of different characters.

"The selection of contemporary figures produced the last three candidates." -Building a scene can capture the characteristics of the candidate's "personable". Then three candidates were announced: Xiao Li, Lao Wang and Xiao Liu. Finally, I left a question: "Who do you think is more elegant among these three people? Please synthesize the content and meaning of the materials and reflect your thinking, trade-offs and choices. " Candidates must choose one of the three characters and explain the reason why they are most "elegant" and their thinking process.

The first person: "Xiao Li, keen on learning and thinking and determined to innovate, has made great contributions to solving the mystery of life science and led the team to become the international academic frontier."

Xiao Li is a leader of the times and a representative of outstanding intellectuals. His achievement lies in academic innovation. In addition, he also has the advantages of "keen on learning and keen on innovation", which respectively correspond to the four success factors of "accumulation", "thinking", "great ambition" and "innovation", and these four points are also common themes in the composition of college entrance examination.

Therefore, if you think Xiao Li is the most elegant, then your reason should be his achievements and success. Can be conceived from the following angles-

"I think the most elegant person is an innovative talent who can make a major breakthrough in a certain field. He is ambitious, willing to keep working hard, constantly thinking in long-term accumulation, and constantly innovating in a certain field. " Zhuang Xiaowei, a 34-year-old headmistress in China, has her own laboratory in the Harvard University that we introduced before, which fully meets this theme.

The second character: "Lao Wang, who loves his post and is dedicated to his work, has practiced his unique skills, turned ordinary technology into a perfect art, and embarked on a road from a vocational high school student to a welding master as a' great country craftsman'."

This is another life track. Unlike Xiao Li, Lao Wang has no new breakthrough in the industry. However, he is serious and dedicated, and he will do his work to the extreme in ordinary posts, so he has the characteristics of "love and dedication".

Therefore, if you think Lao Wang is the most elegant, then your reason is and should be his achievements and success. Can be conceived from the following angles-

"I think the most elegant characters are ordinary people who have made extraordinary deeds in ordinary posts. He loves his job and has devoted himself to it for decades, bringing his skills to the extreme. " The case of Yu Shangqing, which we introduced before, can be used as the material of this idea, thus writing a hymn to ordinary people.

The third person: "Xiao Liu, who loves photography and crosses mountains and rivers to capture the beauty of time, won the admiration of netizens:" You showed us the world "and" You helped us retain the beautiful homesickness ".

Xiao Liu symbolizes a spiritual pursuit. He is not the best person in a certain field, but his works have attracted the attention of countless people. Therefore, if you think Xiao Liu is the most elegant, then your reason should be his achievements and success. Can be conceived from the following angles-

"I think the most elegant figure is an artist who can bring spiritual food to people. He enriched people's inner world with his own strengths. " In the discussion, we can use examples of outstanding artists and writers at all times and in all countries.

In fact, this topic shows us three lifestyles, and the life track of the person we think is the most elegant is also what we yearn for. This topic meets the requirements of the college entrance examination composition for candidates' outlook on life and values. The college entrance examination composition not only examines the writing level, but also examines the examinee's humanistic spirit, social responsibility and civic awareness. In this issue, the thinking process of candidates is particularly important. Only by grasping the trajectory and highlights of the characters can we grasp the writing lifeline of this problem.

China Female "Schoolmaster" —— Zhuang Xiaowei's Harvard Story

Zhuang Xiaowei's parents are both professors at the University of Science and Technology of China. Influenced by his family environment, Zhuang Xiaowei was interested in science since he was a child, especially attracted by the beauty of rigorous reasoning in physics.

After graduating from the junior preparatory class of China University of Science and Technology, Zhuang Xiaowei was admitted to the Physics Department of China University of Science and Technology. After graduating from undergraduate course, I went to study in the United States and got a doctorate in physics from the University of California, Berkeley. Zhuang Xiaowei wanted to work in the Physics Department of Stanford University based on his research experience during his Ph.D., but was rejected by the school. She learned from a painful experience and summed up her research results, feeling that she was not suitable for teaching at present, because "I just wanted to be a professor at that time and didn't know what I was going to do." Since then, Zhuang Xiaowei has rejected many teaching posts in other schools, summed up his own advantages, set goals, and hoped to learn new knowledge. Therefore, she applied to the laboratory of Professor Steven Chu of Stanford University for research in the field of biology.

In the next three years, Zhuang Xiaowei went from being ignorant of biology to being proficient in various molecular biology experiments. During this period, she has no particularly outstanding research results, and has been working hard in obscurity.

After finishing her postdoctoral career, she received invitations from seven world-class universities, including Harvard, California Institute of Technology, Massachusetts Institute of Technology, Yale and Princeton. Finally, Zhuang Xiaowei chose Harvard University. Her basic knowledge of physics has brought new thinking angles and operating methods to her biological research. Finally, due to God's reward, Zhuang Xiaowei not only obtained the experimental results, but also won the MacArthur Genius Award, becoming the youngest winner of that year.

At the age of 34, Zhuang Xiaowei became a professor at Harvard University and owned his own laboratory. How did she do it? At Harvard, she works from 10 in the morning to 12 in the evening. There are never weekends and holidays all year round. She said, "I work all the time except eating and sleeping." At the age of 40, Zhuang Xiaowei was elected as a member of the American Academy of Sciences.

Zhuang Xiaowei's applied themes in college entrance examination composition are: the influence of environment on people, lofty aspirations, diligence, choice, self-cognition, evaluation by others, innovation and accumulation.

Yu Shangqing, a powerful song "hurt locker" with crystal clear and exclusive material.

In the late 1990s, Yu Shangqing transferred from the army to work in Qiqihar public security system. He offered to be in charge of dangerous goods in the public security department. The branch leader asked him to reconsider his choice. Yu Shangqing said that if you are afraid of danger, you will not choose the profession of police.

In the past eight years, Yu Shangqing has been on the verge of danger for many times and participated in explosive disposal for more than 30 times. He dug up more than 2000 dangerous goods such as bombs and gas bombs.

In 2003, at the opening ceremony of an important meeting, the Public Security Bureau received a report that a timed explosive device was found in a hotel in the city center. Yu Shangqing rushed to the scene with the fastest speed, and with courage and experience, he dismantled three explosive devices in succession.

Just as everyone was celebrating Shang Qing, eight explosive devices were found at the scene one after another. In the face of this sudden news, Yu Shangqing did not hesitate to throw himself into the scene full of explosive devices and successfully dismantled seven explosive devices. Just as he was transferring the last dismantled explosive device, suddenly, there was a loud bang and the bomb exploded, and Yu Shangqing fell in a pool of blood on the spot.

That failure caused his right thumb to be blown off, his index finger to be blown off, and the whole palm of his right hand to be blown off. His left eye was blind, his right ear was deaf, and his right leg was disabled. It was difficult to take out nearly 100 pieces deep in his body.

Later, Yu Shangqing said, "I have to go. This is my job." In fact, he is very aware of the consequences of dropping bombs one by one. He said, "It can't be so lucky, it can't be so lucky all the time." But he still performed his duties without hesitation.

20 1 1416 October, Yu Shangqing died in Beijing at the age of 58.

The theme of college entrance examination composition applied by Yu Shangqing's case: responsibility, courage, dedication and choice.