Write a composition using the rhetorical technique of personification

1. Write a composition using rhetorical techniques such as association, metaphor, personification, etc.

Golden Autumn (scenery composition)

The autumn wind is like a magical paintbrush, In one night, the rippling forest belt was dyed golden.

When you climb to the top of the mountain and look down, you will see a patch of gold in front of you. If you look carefully, you will see patches of red and green mixed in with the gold. Red as agate, green as emerald. There is also a mirror-like pond at the foot of the mountain, which reflects the beautiful scenery in front of you and is particularly beautiful.

After going down the mountain, the original stalls selling watermelons on the roadside disappeared. They were replaced by fragrant and crisp big apples and the big red pomegranates with cracked mouths and shells ready to come out. , how endearing!

As the saying goes: "One autumn rain and one cold, you need to wear cotton for ten autumn rains." There is a hint of coolness in the rustling autumn wind. Look, the pedestrians on the road have inadvertently put on thick sweaters, jackets, and some even put on down jackets.

In the crop field, the golden corn is like a golden mallet. The red ears of sorghum are like a shy little girl, with a red face and lowered her head. The heads swayed in the breeze, the soybeans swayed and rustled in the wind, and the fields seemed to be playing a chorus of nature.

In the orchard, the bright red persimmons are like small lanterns, hanging high on the branches. The branches look like they are about to be broken. There are also the bunches of purple grapes, hanging with crystal Dewdrops, like crystals, shine with colorful light under the sunlight.

I was infected and intoxicated by this golden autumn, ah! I love this harvest, golden color 2. Write a composition using rhetorical techniques such as association, metaphor, personification, etc.

I am a dandelion

Spring is here, and the breeze blows on me My body is extremely warm.

As for me, I am an inconspicuous dandelion on a piece of grass that has just sprouted.

Today, a careful little girl discovered this dandelion, gently broke our stems, and happily ran to her mother and said, "What a beautiful dandelion!" After that, She blew hard on my body. We dandelion brothers and sisters all flew up, separated from our mother, and floated into our own future lives.

I floated and floated, and first I saw a forest. I said hello to the grandfather of a big tree. He smiled at me and said: "Little dandelion is so brave! Go traveling alone!" After listening My heart is sweeter than eating honey!

I floated again and again, and now I floated to the sea. I greeted Auntie Seagull excitedly. She said to me: "The little dandelion is so brave!" After hearing this, I was still so happy.

I floated again and again. It turned out that this time I floated to the golden beach and saw people playing beach volleyball happily. I also laughed when I saw everyone of them happy.

Now, it was dark, and I floated again and again, until I landed on a very fertile land. I finally landed. After a day of hard work, I fell asleep and entered a sweet world. Dreamland.

3. When writing about scenery, use metaphors and personification.

Everyone is familiar with grass. Whether it is on the dusty roadside, in the desolate and barren hills, or even in the narrow and damp fields. You can see its figure in the cracks of the rocks. It is the messenger of spring and a new beginning. I praise the grass, it is so extraordinary. The grass is very weak, even a small drop of dew can It is very low, it is not as tall as a big tree, not as colorful as flowers, but when the spring girl comes to this world, the grass breaks out of the ground, tender and green, spreading all over the earth .They are united. Countless grasses gather together and cover the earth with bright green clothes. They send away the dryness and monotony of winter and bring color and hope. I praise the grass, it is So extraordinary. Grass, it never asks for anything from people, but it contributes so much to people. In order to prevent the flooding of the Yellow River, the first step is to strengthen soil and water conservation work in the middle and upper reaches. In this In the work, the grass is the top hero. The roots of many grasses are connected in a network underground, forming a strong line of defense. I praise the grass, it is so extraordinary. The grass is weak, but when the summer comes, the storm comes. It can make branches scatter and flowers wither, but it has nothing to do with the grass. Even if it is washed away by the storm, it still stands upright. Thinking about the grass, I am suddenly shocked, that kind of unity and cohesion, that kind of willingness. Dedication, isn't that indomitable spirit possessed by the descendants of the Chinese nation? "How can we see the rainbow without experiencing wind and rain?" Let us strive for a better tomorrow like grass. The cold winter has passed quietly, The colorful spring comes unknowingly.

In the field, the hibernating grass woke up in the arms of Mother Earth. Its green body emerged from the earth. It stretched out and greedily sucked the breath of spring; the golden spring greeting The flowers, so petite and beautiful, so graceful and graceful, dance gracefully, as if showing off the beauty of spring; the willow trees by the river stretch their branches, and the spring girl is helping her comb her bright yellow braids, and the waterfall-like long hair reflects On the mirror made of river water, it is as beautiful as a fairy, and the willow tree bends over with a smile. The snow in the river melted, and the water was crystal clear, flowing forward happily.

Various unknown wild flowers bloom on the shore to welcome the spring, vying for beauty, and butterflies are flying among the flowers. I picked up a small stone and floated it into the river. Colorful ripples suddenly appeared on the river.

At this time, a group of ducks jumped into the river and quacked. They play and chase happily, they are the "duck prophets of spring river water warmth"! There was a burst of laughter in the courtyard. It turned out that the children were flying kites on the lawn.

The children took the spools and dragged the kites and ran and laughed. Colorful kites fluttered in the wind, setting off the blue sky beautifully! At this time, a group of swallows flew from the west, seeming to be competing with the kites! "It's close, it's close, I hear the footsteps of spring."

"It's coming, it's coming, another spring full of vitality." Ah! Spring is full of vitality and colorful. I love spring.

4. Write a composition with profound meaning and use metaphors, personification and other rhetorical techniques to describe the natural world

Squirrel

Squirrel is a beautiful little animal and very lovable. .It has flexible limbs and moves quickly. Its exquisite little face is embedded with a pair of sparkling little eyes. The gray-brown fur on its body is as smooth as if it has been oiled. A big furry tail is always tilted upward, making it appear that Extraordinarily beautiful.

Squirrels like to jump around on the branches and are very clever. As long as someone touches the trunk, they will hide under several branches, or jump and jump to other trees. On clear summer nights, squirrels jump and scream happily on the trees, chasing each other and playing. They seem to be afraid of the strong sunlight, and often hide in their nests to cool off during the day; they only come out when the branches are swayed by the wind. Come to the ground, but never come close to people's houses.

Squirrels like to live in tall old trees, and often build their nests in the middle of the tree forks. When they build their nests, they first move in a few small branches. , staggered together, then find some dry moss to spread on top, then press the moss tightly and flatten it. After the nest is set up, add a cover on top to cover the entire nest, so that it is not afraid of wind and rain. They live there with their children, warm and safe.

Squirrels often eat pine nuts, hazelnuts and oak chestnuts, and sometimes bird eggs. When they eat, they often They bend themselves on the branches and hold them with their front paws to deliver them to their mouths. In autumn, squirrels store food for the winter and stuff it into the cracks of old trees. In winter, they sometimes use their paws to stuff it. Peeling through the thick snow to look for food under the snow. 5. A composition using metaphor, personification, exaggeration, etc.

Spring is here, and the breeze blows on me, which makes me feel particularly happy. Warmth. As for me, I am an inconspicuous dandelion on a piece of grass that has just sprouted buds. Today, a careful little girl discovered this dandelion, gently broke our stems, and ran to her mother happily. , said: "What a beautiful dandelion!" After saying that, she blew hard on my body. We dandelion brothers and sisters all flew up, separated from our mother, and floated to our own future lives. I floated, floated, First I saw a forest. I said hello to the grandfather of a big tree. He smiled and said to me: "Little Dandelion is so brave! Traveling alone!" After hearing this, my heart was sweeter than eating honey! I floated again and again, and now I floated to the sea. I greeted Auntie Seagull excitedly, and she said to me: "The little dandelion is so brave!" After hearing this, I was still so happy. I floated again, and it turned out that This time I floated to the golden beach and saw people happily playing beach volleyball. Seeing each of them happy, I also laughed. Now, it was dark, and I floated again, until I reached a very fertile area. I finally landed on the land. After a day of hard work, I fell asleep and entered a sweet dream. 6. Use the rhetorical technique of metaphor and personification to write a composition about the scene of setting off artillery

The Spring Festival is here, and my grandfather and I went to the street and bought a piece of artillery.

Opening point, full text of the General Leader As soon as I got home, I saw Brother Hu Xing and the others coming. I couldn't bear my temper, so I pulled him and said playfully: "Let's set off the artillery."

"Okay!" He replied cheerfully. So my brother Hu Xing and I went to my grandfather's vegetable field. He found an empty bottle and said, "Put the cannon in the bottle. It will be more fun."

I put "Thunder King" I took it out carefully, held the lighter with my trembling right hand, and as soon as I lit it, I quickly threw the "Thunder King" into the bottle, then covered my ears with both hands, and ran "thousands of miles away" in a flash. It's lively and interesting, reflecting the childlike innocence of children. Brother Hu Xing couldn't help laughing when he saw my exaggerated movements.

I closed my eyes, and Brother Hu Xing stared at the bottle nervously. I just heard a "bang" sound. I slowly opened my eyes and saw white smoke coming from there. I ran over to take a look. ——A hole was blown in the bottle! Brother Hu Xing picked up the bottle and saw that the bottle could no longer be exploded. Brother Hu Xing said: "Let's go to the vegetable field and fry the cesspit in the vegetable field!" When the prank started, I was very happy when I heard about exploding the cesspit - because I have never Never blew up a cesspool. I took out the football cannon. The football cannon is round in shape, about the size of a bottle cap. Even though it is small, it is very powerful! I fired the cannon, threw it into the pit, and then hid quickly.

Brother Hu Xing saw me dodge so fast and said, "I can really break the Guinness World Record!" When he was about to leave, he heard a "bang" and I ran over to take a look. , seeing Brother Hu Xing’s back half covered with feces made me laugh endlessly. Hilarious results Setting off cannons is so much fun.