Short message English about moving

Dear teachers and friends:

I am honored to recommend Li Hua, the monitor of our class, as a touching figure on campus at 20 1 1. Li Hua is a kind and hel

Dear teachers and friends:

I am honored to recommend Li Hua, the monitor of our class, as a touching figure on campus at 20 1 1. Li Hua is a kind and helpful person, and we can't praise him too much. Whenever there is trouble, his timely words of encouragement always push us forward.

However, what impressed us most was his unconditional love for those poor children. He knew that some children had little chance to read materials, so he began to donate books as early as junior high school. Two years ago, he volunteered to teach English and painting in a small village during the summer vacation, which inspired other students to join in and opened a new world for these children.

We are very proud to support Li Hua as a touching figure in 20 1 1, because his selfless love touched our hearts, his perseverance inspired us to keep moving forward, and his actions showed that even the smallest efforts can bring great changes to those in need.

Thank you for listening.

Test analysis: this is a semi-open composition, which requires candidates to master the ability to use English. Because few key points are given, candidates must give full play within the framework, especially in terms of reasons. We can start with his helpfulness and great contribution to the class. In specific writing, we should pay attention to the use of appropriate connectors to connect the whole article, and also use advanced sentence structures to diversify the article, but we should pay attention to the stacking of objects.

Comments: This article is a semi-open composition, which has high requirements for candidates. We should pay attention to proper play, recite a certain number of model essays at ordinary times, and improve the accumulation. When writing, improve the ability to plan the layout of the article.