The seventh grade fairy tale composition "Kuxi" (note: the song of the stream continues, don't copy it) is urgent, urgent, urgent, urgent, urgent.

It is Dashan who is discouraging, singing songs characterized by optimism, firmness and enterprising.

The stream ran forward with a smile. There was a big stone in his way, so he jumped twice and rushed down. Nothing can stop him from running. His voice is clear, and the echo that keeps ringing in the valley is clear, which makes people forget fatigue and sadness.

The stream flowed in the narrow valley for a long time, and then it came to a corner. There is a dead stump and an orange meadow. The dead stump is very old, but the yellow grass is not young. They stay together every day, complaining. They feel that nothing is appropriate and nothing is interesting. There was no new complaint afterwards, only a sigh. They looked at the lively and pleasant stream and felt very strange. They asked him:

"Hey, little stream! So happy, where are you going? "

The stream replied:

"To the front, of course."

Dead stump said with a sigh:

"Alas, alas! What are you up to? Have a rest! "

Yellow grass also said with a sigh:

"Alas, alas! Exhausted is not fun. Stay here. Although it is not very good, it is not bad. "

The stream looked at them and smiled.

"Why? Don't! Can't stay! "

The stream rushed over the "boulder" and refused to be stopped by "dead tree stump" and "yellow grass"

In a blink of an eye, the stream left them behind and he continued to run forward. There is a village ahead. There is a water mill waiting for him in the village.

In this way, the small stream ran tirelessly, and gradually, other small streams joined him and grew up.

The stream grew up and became a small river.

Then, a small river, growing from a small stream, sang in the sand and ran forward in the morning and evening. He is full of energy and energy, cheering for the vast vilen on both sides of the strait. He stirred up the sediment deposited on the bottom of the water, rolled up the floating dead branches and spun violently. He happily pushed the raft and lifted the heavy wooden boat to sail forward. Nothing can stop him from moving forward. There was a stone beach ahead, so he roared and rushed over. The river flows like this and keeps flowing forward.

Small streams are more powerful than small streams.

A lonely crow followed him lazily for a while. Crow saw the river is always so active, so in a hurry, feel very strange, can not but ask:

"Hey, river! So busy, where are you going? "

The river replied:

"Go to the front."

The crow flew down, approached him and threatened him, saying, "Hey, don't be happy! Still think about it, there is nothing good in front. "

The river has not forgotten that it is a small stream. He smiled.

"Why? I don't listen to you! You can't stay! "

Crow angry, speechless, just let out a cry:

"ah! Ah! Ah! "

The river rejected the threat of crows.

The river soon left the crow behind and continued to run forward. There is a sluice ahead, waiting for him to push the generator. Xiaohei happily did all the work that should be done. There is another city ahead.

This river runs tirelessly, and in this way, some other rivers join him first, and then the river grows up.

The river grew up again and became a big river.

Then, a big river sang in a low voice and ran forward. He became very strong and accumulated great energy. He looked at the peaks hidden in the white clouds in the distance and greeted them with a loud and deep chest sound. He effortlessly set off stormy waves and calmly lifted the huge ship to help them sail quickly. He suffered a lot, but he didn't feel any burden. The river flows like this and keeps flowing forward.

The great river is stronger and has accumulated great strength.

Those who are swept up by the waves and follow the great river feel tired and ask:

"Hey, great river! Where are you going if you keep running like this? "

Great river replied:

"I have to go to the front."

Tired and panting sediment said angrily:

"'front',' front'! There are not so many' front desks'! It's almost time to go, let's take a break and run! "

DJI has a good memory. He didn't forget that he was a stream. He smiled gently:

"Why? No way! Can't stay! "

The sediment sinks secretly with resentment. But the river is still flowing. Many days are like one day, and many months are like January. He passed through countless prosperous cities and wealthy villages, did countless things for people, and finally reached Haikou.

DJI still doesn't know what fatigue is; He ran and ran and walked straight ahead.

The river refuses to stop the sediment and flows into the ocean.

Thus, the endless blue ocean surges with joy. The sea churned with white foam and gave a strong song in all directions. He is so complicated and so simple; So fierce and soft. He never stopped exercising for a moment.

At the bottom of the sea, a sunken ship full of shells and rotten to the point where only a rusty iron shell is left, has long been impatient with the endless shaking of the ocean and quietly asked:

"You can rest, you can rest!"

The ocean remembers everything, and he answers in a voice as clear as a stream:

"rest? Why? That won't do! " His endless waves fell together like this, without head or tail. The moon is out. Smile at him. The sun came out and the sun smiled at him. The ocean feels the whole world, and everything seems to be close to it. The ocean aroused his enthusiasm even more. He keeps going up, up, forward, in all directions. Countless small round water drops jumped up and left him, flying to the pure blue sky.

The vast ocean sings the song of the stream:

"Never rest, never rest!"

The ocean refused to stop sinking and continued to sing the song of the stream.

Xiaoxi's songs are endless, and his songs will never be endless.

What kind of song is the stream singing? Understand carefully from the stages of the development of small streams shown in the article.

Starting with the sound of a small stream and using anthropomorphic methods, it fully embodies the lively, naughty, lovely and optimistic characteristics of a small stream, which can make people like it quickly and be infected.

"Pat", "touch" and "scratch" all use overlapping words, which are closer to children's movements and highlight the naughty and lovely characteristics of small streams.

"Grass", "Little Leaf" and "Little Tadpole" all have children's colors, and their different reactions set off a happy and vivid fairy tale picture.

The stream was blocked by the "boulder", but it just jumped over and rushed down, reflecting the courage and confidence of the stream.

The stream met "dead stumps" and "yellow grass" to stop him. Here, through the description of dead stumps and hay and several short conversations, the question is raised, that is why the stream will move forward happily without rest.

Firstly, the reason why the stream runs forward is given. It will turn the waterwheel to serve the people in the village.

Pay attention to the usage of verbs such as cheering, rolling, rolling, beating, pushing, lifting and rushing. These verbs are vividly described, and it can be seen that after the small streams converge into small streams, their strength is enhanced and they can do more things, which is different from the verbs used to describe small streams at the beginning of the article.

The threat of crows can't scare the river. The sentence "The river has not forgotten that it is a small stream" gives the reason. The river knows that its strength is increasing, which is the result of its continuous running.

"Xiaohei happily did all the work that should be done" obviously gives another answer, that is, serving everyone and realizing his own value.

Pay attention to the differences between "singing in a low voice" and "loud and deep chest sound" and "humming" and "singing in the sand" in the sounds of small streams and rivers. These words describe the voices of adults and continue to describe the growing strength of small rivers after they converge into big rivers.

Understanding and describing the different development stages of the same thing should be carried out according to its characteristics, which is the most true and accurate.

"Dajiang has a good memory and has not forgotten that he was originally a stream". This sentence echoes the previous "a small river never forgets that it was a small stream", which plays a role in enhancing its appeal and points out the theme: only by persisting and bravely overcoming the difficulties in progress can we grow stronger and eventually mature.

"DJI still doesn't know what fatigue is." DJI is not tired, but his eagerness to do things for others makes him not feel tired.

The sea "sings in all directions" and pushes the article to a climax. Xiaoxi's songs can never be sung, and his songs will never be sung.

The sentence "the ocean remembers everything" echoes the above words over and over again, meaning that he didn't forget that he was just a stream at first, and then gradually became a small river and a big river, and finally merged into the sea.

"Countless round water droplets jump up and fly to the pure blue sky", although it doesn't last here, readers can continue to think that the water droplets must have turned into white clouds, sprinkled on the earth, then gathered into a stream and then flowed to the sea, and so on.

Third, the discussion of the problem

1. Song of the River is a fairy tale with a new theme during the socialist revolution and construction in China. When learning this article, we should analyze and read it from the perspective of showing the whole growth process of people or things. Please talk about your feelings after reading the text for the first time.

Yan Wenjing, the author, created an optimistic image of a stream with rich imagination, telling us that only by persevering and bravely overcoming difficulties in progress can we be stronger and mature. The song of Xiaoxi is a song that never ends, and it is a song that keeps growing and growing in progress. Completed the development track of "stream-river-river-ocean", reflecting the growing theme in progress.

2. Song of the Stream can be said to be a fairy tale of prose, with popular content, distinct theme and clear context. Try to analyze the author's ingenious ideas.

Part I: Asking questions. A song that emphasizes the stream will never be sung.

The second part: the small stream refuses the "dead stump" to discourage it from growing into a small river.

Part III: The river refused to stop the sediment and grew into a big river.

The fourth part: the great river continues to flow, getting stronger and stronger, and entering the sea more and more.

Part V: The sea never stops and contributes to the world.

Part VI: Echoing from beginning to end, emphasizing once again that Xiaoxi's songs can never be sung, and will never be sung.

3. Fairy tales are a literary style that shapes artistic images and reflects social life through rich imagination, fantasy, personification and exaggeration, and are deeply loved by children. In your study, what artistic features do you feel about this article?

Jiasheng: This fairy tale "socialized" natural things and described streams, dead tree stumps, crows, sand and so on. As people in society, giving them the thoughts, words and deeds, morality, love and hate of people in society is suitable for our children's physical and psychological characteristics and easy for us to accept and love. Adults are also interested in it.

B: In the course of the development of the text, similar sentences appear repeatedly at intervals, such as "A stream flows tirelessly", "A small river flows forward", "A big river flows forward" and "He flows forward forever". These sentences not only strongly connect the contents of each part, but also reflect the development of things, implying the theme of "growth".

Bing Sheng: "The great river has not forgotten that it is a small stream", "The great river has a good memory and has not forgotten that it is a small stream" and "The ocean remembers everything" appear one by one in the article, which shows that the motive force for the continuous running of the small stream is that he wants to grow and develop, and he has not forgotten his historical mission. Life is an endless rush and endless pursuit.

Teacher's comment: This fairy tale can be said to be a prose fairy tale with beautiful language, easy-to-understand content and distinct theme. "Stream", "river", "river" and "ocean" are like several stages of a person's life: children, teenagers, youth and middle age, and Song of the Stream can be said to be a growth history of the stream. We can experience the happiness of the growth of small streams by reading aloud or playing different roles. This paper takes the songs of streams as clues to connect the songs of streams, small rivers, big rivers and oceans into a string, which is coherent and smooth. At the beginning and the end, it is written that "his songs will never be finished", which first causes readers to think and then summarizes, thus making the structure of the article clear and compact.

Fourth, language analysis.

1. He let the floating leaves turn for a while and teased him to chase his tadpoles for a while. Small leaves are not afraid, gently turned twice, and then floated forward. Little tadpoles may be a little ticklish, so they swim to the shore quickly; Tadpoles with thighs also kick their legs in panic like mother frogs. Small leaves and tadpoles have their own characteristics. Try to find out the beauty of this article. )

Xiao Ye and Tadpole are like two children with different personalities. Xiao Ye is both brave and naughty. Tadpoles are like timid little girls.

2. They feel that nothing is appropriate and nothing is interesting. There was no new complaint afterwards, only a sigh. Pay attention to the function of adverbs "Du", "Ye" and "Zhi" in emphasizing mood. )

This passage has a strong tone, which fully shows the psychological characteristics of "dead stumps" and "yellow grass" coming to the end of their lives and completely losing confidence in the future.

3. The crow was angry, and suddenly he couldn't speak. He just let out a cry: "Ah! Ah! Ah! " What rhetoric is used in this sentence? )

This sentence uses anthropomorphic techniques, "ah! Ah! " Ah "is not only the crow's cry, but also vividly expresses the crow's complex emotions of anger and helplessness."

Carefully understand the different descriptions of small leaves and tadpoles. Do you think the author has grasped their characteristics?

Can you use adverbs properly in your writing?

How to interpret the crow's cry to express the crow's psychological activity?

Experience activities

1. Enter the situation through music appreciation and stimulate the imagination.

Self-made music appreciation tape: including four pieces of disordered music and four pieces of music recorded in normal order. According to sonata No.1 in D minor, Nutcracker March, Yellow River Boatman and Piano Concerto No.1, the first piece of music is usually intercepted for about one minute, and the first part is played for about five minutes. The second part starts with flowing water and ends with waves, and the playing time is about 6 minutes.

2. Role-playing

Performance headdress: the role headdress designed according to the content of the text is made with the help of students' manual interest groups.

Make comic books

Requirements: Choose topics according to your own abilities and hobbies, complete them in groups freely, and cartoons can be adapted.

The parody of the article: the song of a stream

A happy stream, meandering, gurgling, humming and smiling, runs forward. It goes through the Woods, bypasses obstacles, and rushes forward tirelessly, rushing forward. ...

In the golden sunshine, it beat the bank rhythmically, splashing a string of glittering and translucent water drops; Express condolences to the flowers and trees along the way with that crisp voice; With its vivid dance, it sets off a hot land that breeds spring flowers and autumn fruits. Like a beautiful girl who can sing and dance, she is so gentle and strong, and she is pursuing her own ideals every day. There is no burnout in every minute, only impact and progress. ...

Stream, you don't have majestic momentum, but you have indomitable spirit. You don't pursue the careful care of people, let alone the advantages and disadvantages of the environment. As long as you live for one day, you must keep moving forward-the wind will never beg for mercy, and showers will pour down in order to wash away the dust on your body. Some people just run, run ... you remember: rush, rush, run day and night. ...

Creek, you know that the course of life will not be Ma Pingchuan: along the way, there are mountains, valleys and roads, and sometimes you will be locked in a cage-like deep pool ... and you, full of energy, cheer for the vast distance and stir up sediment from time to time. Nothing can stop you from moving forward. If there is an obstacle ahead, you will rush at it with a loud roar, because you know that smooth sailing can't achieve great things. Only by struggling in adversity can life shine.

The stream is full of self-confidence. No matter how tortuous the road is, it always sings with a clear voice, and the valley keeps echoing, crisp and pleasant. This song is a contempt for difficulties, a longing for the future and a belief in victory. ...

You run around day and night with a firm belief. Many days are like one day, and many months are like January. After all the ups and downs, at last, you threw yourself into the embrace of the sea. ...

"Can we have a rest?" "rest? Why? That won't do! " "Never rest, never rest …" You sang, ran and ran. help me