12 adjustment for postgraduate entrance examination-the first choice score is not enough, but a university with 2 1 1 agreed to accept me, and I want to go. How to write an email to this tutor?

Hello, Teacher X, I graduated from XX Department of XX College of XX University with a bachelor's degree and my major is XXX. This year, I took the postgraduate entrance examination and applied for the XX major of XX University. My score is a few points lower than my major, and now I want to transfer to your school.

My exam results this year are: politics XX, English XX, mathematics XXX, specialized course (name of specialized course) XXX, with a total score of XXX.