How to modify sick sentences?

1. Dad sent a short message to 8858 with his mobile phone (to help me), asking to donate money to help the people in the disaster area.

Dad sent a short message to 8858 (Help me) with his mobile phone, saying that he would donate money to help blind children.

Sentence type: the composition is incomplete, the object of "donation and assistance" is missing, and the object of assistance is not.

To make a sick sentence and modify the topic, first read through the sentence, find out the type of the sick sentence, modify the sick sentence, read through it again after the modification, and check whether the sentence modification is correct.

Extended data:

Incomplete components and missing objects:

1. Although I am very busy at work every day, I still pay close attention to studying with my classmates or reading books by myself.

Although I am busy at work every day, I still take time out to study with my classmates or read books by myself.

We should make every effort to mechanize and collectivize agriculture.

("Go" needs a noun as an object. "Mechanization" and "collectivization" are verbs, and the sentence should be "Take the road of …". )?

3. Bian participated in 1983, an advanced individual from five good families. In September of the same year, he participated in the selection of five good families and advanced individuals of the All-China Women's Federation.

"Congress" should be added at the end of the two sentences respectively.

4. The county government severely dealt with the unauthorized price increase of cement plants.

"The mistake of" should be added at the end of the sentence.