A student was admitted to the university and sent a short message to his teacher who had been very helpful to him to express his gratitude. There are many inappropriate places, please correct me.

I can get your help in high school and change it to "teaching", which is more in line with students' respect for teachers. I deeply feel that it is more appropriate to change "pleasure" to "thank you". "Honor" means "glory and luck", which seems a bit excessive here. Moreover, the full text of this letter is in vernacular Chinese, while "honor" is in classical Chinese, which is suspected of mixing the two. I know I can be where I am today, so I'd better change your "all-out help" into "hard work". "Do your best to help" is a polite expression, but it gives people the feeling of being a stranger. Your teaching attainments have been changed to "level". "Achievement" refers to "the level and status achieved in learning and professional skills". This should refer to the high level of teachers' teaching, rather than evaluating the academic level of teachers, so that students can be "impressed" rather than "amazed". "Sit up and take notice" means to look at someone with new eyes instead of old ones. This sentence is used to praise people who were originally bad and later became better and faster. Obviously, the context is wrong. I will always remember your teaching, study hard after I go to college, and change "transformation" into "further study". "Transformation" refers to modifying or changing the original things to meet the needs and entering the university, but it does not mean that "hope" is changed to "expectation" to live up to your expectations. I'm determined to go back to my alma mater to teach and be a "learned man" like you instead of "educating people as my duty" because what I said earlier described the teacher's deeds of educating students, instead of his "learning" and "learning" being inconsistent with what I said earlier. "