Sixth grade narrative composition

In our daily study, work and life, we always have to touch or use writing. Writing is a transition from internal speech to external speech, that is, from a compressed, concise language that we can understand to a developed, standardized grammatical structure that can be understood by others. Then do you know how to write a good composition? The following are five essays I compiled for the sixth grade for your reference only, hoping to help you.

Editor's Note: "Planting the First" Ice Rose "is a composition about visiting the rose garden, with wonderful opening metaphor, which also plays a role in setting suspense. Obviously, this is a notebook, with six elements, detailed description in place, prominent theme, and the word "fun" in one go. With the advancement of the plot, the doubts in the readers' hearts are also solved.

If winter vacation is a rose garden, countless interesting things are gorgeous roses. Roses are "refreshing" and make people happy. However, if you want to pick the "rose" and enjoy the "fragrance" of the rose, it is not that simple. You must first undergo the "test" of "thorns". The first ice rose in my garden stabbed me.

After my holiday, I came to the People's Park to revisit it, because it bears my happy childhood memories. Stepping into the gate of the park, I found that the former amusement facilities have disappeared, and it has become a leisure place for the elderly. The only constant is that the river is still lying there quietly. "Draw water to float away! I picked up a small stone and walked quickly to the river. Wow, there is thick ice in the river. Shui Piao can't play, so he can play "skating".

I came to the stone steps on the edge of the river, and I was so happy that I couldn't wait for a close contact with the ice. My right foot stood firmly on the stone steps, and my left foot slowly stepped onto the ice-almost there, just a centimeter away! I only heard a slight "da" and my left foot touched the ice. I'm sweating profusely for fear of falling into the ice hole. I bit my lip to encourage myself: cut, it's just a piece of ice, so I'm not afraid to that extent! I put my right foot on the ice hard. Hoo-I patted my chest and looked down: Wow, this ice is really strong!

I strode forward, kicked on the ice, and kicked out the glittering ice residue, which shone in the sun and released endless charm: Hey, it was fun! My mouth can't help humming "Friction, friction, on this smooth ground ..." I am triumphant, as if I were in an ice rink ... underestimating my enemy is a taboo for military strategists. When I enjoy myself, I only listen to the crisp "Kaka" sound. "Ah! Not good! Run! " It was too late, and the biting ice water filled my feet, which really made me experience a "foot bath with ice water".

This winter vacation, I picked the first "ice rose" and planted it in the rose garden, which added interest to my winter vacation life and gave me a meaningful life lesson! In a blink of an eye, I am already a sixth-grade student. During these six years, the head teacher, Mr. Liu, has given me a lot of care and instruction. One thing haunts my mind, and one little thing is the most unforgettable.

That was an event in the second grade. Shortly after Mr. Liu taught us, we arrived at the traditional Mid-Autumn Festival in our country. After dinner this day, my mother urged me to do my homework quickly. I proudly said, "Teacher Liu didn't leave us any homework, just let us send her a congratulatory message." Next, I eat moon cakes, walk in the moonlight, watch TV and enjoy the Mid-Autumn Festival without homework. In the evening, I suddenly remembered to send a text message to Mr. Liu. What should I send? Hmm! Got it.

The next morning, Ms. Liu came into the classroom with her mobile phone. She wanted to read all the short messages we sent, and we all pricked up our ears. "Thank you, Ms. Liu, for leaving us such a simple homework. I can enjoy the moon while eating moon cakes. You are really a good man!" Teacher Liu read here and laughed. Isn't this from me? I was a little nervous. I didn't expect my short message to be awarded the Best Creative Award. Then Mr. Liu told us the essentials of writing a composition, and I realized that writing a composition is as simple as writing what you want to say on paper.

Although this is only a trivial matter, I fell in love with not only Chinese class and composition class, but also my head teacher, Miss Liu! Teacher Liu educates us with love and influences us with talent. One by one, such past events have strung together my colorful primary school life. The sixth grade notes composition 3

This summer vacation, my mother didn't take me to a distant place to play because I was ill. So, my mother took me to the Wild Goose Pagoda, a scenic spot in Xi 'an near home. The Big Wild Goose Pagoda is located in Jionji, Xi 'an, with a height of 64. 5 meters existing tower seven floors. In 652 AD, Master Xuanzang, who returned from the Buddhist scriptures, built it to preserve the scroll Buddha statues that Tianzhu brought back to Chang 'an via the Silk Road. The Wild Goose Pagoda is the earliest and largest brick pagoda in existence.

We drove to the Big Wild Goose Pagoda. From a distance, I was shocked by its majestic appearance. Especially the music fountain attracted me deeply. It is the largest musical fountain in Asia, covering an area of 2, square meters. It can spray up to 6 meters. Fountain * * * has 136 pumps, 1124 frequency converters, more than 33 colored lights and more than 2xx nozzles. When the symphony rings, the lights are all on, and the fountains are changing in various shapes. This colorful scene has fascinated the citizens. Although it rained that day, I had a lot of fun. I played with my beloved bubble gun. Blow out a big bubble and a small bubble. This big and small bubble is like a mother holding her child's hand and walking around in the sky. There is a small Buddha statue in front of the music fountain. People seem to be afraid that it will catch cold and catch a cold, and they even put a layer of grass on it!

All kinds of snacks in Xi 'an are gathered around the Big Wild Goose Pagoda. Such as: mutton buns, Chinese buns, persimmon cakes and other snacks, you only need to take a bite, and it will be memorable.

it's time to go home, but I'm reluctant to part. I hope children from all over the world will visit the Big Wild Goose Pagoda.

Since we finished fishing last time, we have been obsessed with fishing all week. Finally, last Sunday, Bai Xiaoyi and I went together again.

Since fishing last time, we have been obsessed with fishing all week. Finally, last Sunday, Bai Xiaoyi and I went fishing in Chaihe again, and we gained a lot of experience and fun in this fishing.

After we arrived in Chaihe, we started the preparatory work happily. Just as I was about to hang the fishing line, the fishing line was tightly wound together like a ball of static wool, and we couldn't untie it. Alas, we met with difficulties at the beginning, and I didn't know how much "pit" we would fall when fishing.

After I untied the fishing line and made good preparations, I ran to the Chaihe River and began to catch fish. Minute by minute, my float remained motionless like a arhat, and my patience reached the limit. With a whoosh, the fishing rod came out of the water. "Huh? ！” The fish food hanging on the hook disappeared, and only two pairs of empty hooks turned in the air. Hearing my voice, my father came over. He looked at the fishing rod, threw a large piece of fish food into the river without hesitation, and then said to me, "Make a nest for the fish first and attract all the fish before fishing." Then he threw another piece in. As we expected, after a while, the water was rippling like a fish.

Seeing this situation, I gently pinched a piece of fish food and hung it on the hook. My left hand was holding the line, and my right hand was holding the rod. After a slight swing, the hook came out and gently entered the water. After about five seconds, the hook moved slightly, and suddenly the fish floated again. Good opportunity, I shouted loudly: "Strong, circuitous, straight, fast." As I said this, I quickly pulled the rod. As I expected, a crucian carp about six or seven centimeters was hung on the hook. I pulled the rod back with a smile, but the fish broke off its tail and fell into the water with a bang. Ah, is that ok? The first fish fell off. It's really bad today, but it's no big deal. There's still plenty of time!

After about twenty minutes, there are already five or seven fish in my fish basket. Hehe, the harvest is good. Just as I was watching the fish, Bai Xiaoyi on the other side said to me, "Come and see, your ears of wheat have been brightly killed." "Oh, no way." As he spoke, he ran over, and sure enough, my ears of wheat floated on the water on his back. It turned out that Liang Liang put my ears of wheat on the ground and the fish suffocated because of lack of oxygen. I looked at it and said, "What about this fish? I finally caught it." Before the words were finished, Xiong Wei grabbed my ears of wheat and threw them into the water with a whoosh. I said, half crying and half laughing, "You are really good, why throw dead fish into the water!" " Then he went back and said helplessly, "Be careful next time, I have only a few small fish, but they will be gone after killing." Besides, this is also a life. "

as soon as I got back, the float moved. I pulled it in a hurry and a lively crucian carp hung on the hook. I swung the hook around, but I couldn't get the fishing line. In a rage, I gave the dog a hard lift back. I brushed the hook behind me with the swinging tail. When I gently took off the fish, the struggling fish hit me and escaped from my hand, but it fell to the lawn by the river. After several tails, the crucian carp was covered with broken grass and dust.

In this way, one fish is hooked, and at the same time, one fish is falling. Some fish quickly fall out of the water because the speed of the pull rod is too fast. When fishing in a new location, no fish came to bite the hook for a long time, so I just waited and waited. Finally, a fish came up, and when the hook was pulled, the fish plunged like an arrow without a bow. Ah, it's even harder to fish when I'm in a good position, because I forgot an important thing-making a hole to attract fish. How can you catch fish if you forget something important? So, I grabbed a handful of fish food and imitated my father's appearance. With a whoosh, the fish food sank into the water. Sure enough, the effect of hitting me was good. Soon, a few small fish came. I changed a kind of fish food that would not melt and threw it in the water. After a long time, the fish that had not been at home for a long time finally came again. After pulling the hook and drinking, a small wheat ear came up. Although the harvest was not great, it has proved that the nest was successful!

I fished for a long time, but almost all of them fell out of the water, and time was running out. My father was going to close the rod and leave. Just as I was closing the rod, news came from Bai Ze-when his father told him to go home, he didn't hang any more bait, but he only took a little honey, but the fishing rod moved soon after being thrown, with a hook and a fish. What? I was suddenly surprised after listening to it. It's really a miracle, as the saying goes-Jiang Taigong's fishing wishes are hooked!

I have gained a lot from this fishing. First, I caught a lot of fish, with a total of more than 3 fish. Second, I learned a lot of fishing skills-the depth of the hook, how to quickly tie fish food and so on. In short, fishing is a technical activity. If you don't work hard, you will get nothing. The most important thing in fishing is patience. You can only catch fish with patience. That's exactly what I said-you can't eat hot tofu if you are impatient, and you can't catch fish if you can't catch it. Although this fishing is hard, it makes us very happy. This fishing is really fun! ! I love fishing! ! The sixth grade chronicle composition article 5

"Ding Rinrin, Ding Rinrin", the bell for class rang. Our whole class is solemnly seated. I saw Mr Yao, a Chinese teacher, come into the classroom and said to everyone, "In this class, I'm going to do an experiment for you. This experiment is called floating eggs." As soon as Mr. Yao's voice fell, the whole class immediately became a sensation. "What eggs are so magical!" "Yes, is Mr. Yao lying to us?" "Yes, yes, what medicine is sold in Teacher Yao's gourd!" "Don't worry," said Teacher Yao. "Let's start this experiment now."

I saw Mr Yao take out two cups, two eggs, a bag of salt and a pot of water from under the platform. "First of all, let's fill the cups with even water," Mr. Yao said, and then poured the level of the kettle into two cups. "Then put eggs in them," Mr. Yao put eggs in them again. "Finally, a miracle will happen. Open your eyes and see clearly!" Our eyes turned to the cup, but the eggs didn't change. "Gee, Mr. Yao lied to the children." Some people can't wait any longer and say loudly. "Don't jump to a conclusion in such a hurry, look," Mr. Yao put some salt in each cup where the eggs were put. A miracle happened: the egg first stood up slowly, and finally floated. "Wow!" "It's amazing!" The whole class was amazed.

what's going on? Teacher Yao told us with a smile: "It's not that I can change magic, it's just that the density of salt is relatively high, so the eggs can float." Oh, I see.

after this experiment, I understand that if you observe everything carefully, you will get different results.