Analysis of Qiu 20 13 Beijing College Entrance Examination Composition

20 13 Beijing college entrance examination composition topic is material composition;

A writer and a scientist had a discussion.

Scientists say that Edison's arrival in the 2 1 century is very novel. What novelty will he find?

The writer said: the mobile phone must make him feel incredible.

Scientist: I agree that the mobile phone is a symbol of the information age, just like a PDA, and its rich functions will definitely make him feel novel.

Literati: Mobile phones have influenced people's ways of communication, thoughts, feelings and concepts, and brought us many unexpected changes.

The articles about the two men are not limited to style, and there are no less than 800 words except poems.

20 13 comments on the topic of Chinese composition in Beijing college entrance examination;

This topic revolves around the discussion of mobile phones, which has always been the feature of Beijing Volume, so that all students have something to say, but you definitely need considerable skill to write it well. This skill is not only reflected in the accumulation of literature, but also in thinking, analyzing and paying attention to reality. Like Invisible Wings in 2009 and Starry Sky and Field in 20 10, "mobile phone" is a word with symbolic connotation. Candidates can first analyze whether "mobile phone" represents new media and technology in the information age, or a new era, a new way of communication and a new way of thinking.

However, please note that there are two people in the material who have great status, one is a writer and the other is a scientist. The relationship between science and technology and literature is a clever starting point, which allows students to analyze examples from the perspective of literature. Teacher Yang talked about the relationship between classic example literature and science in class-French writer Jules? Vaughn. Technology represented by mobile phones promotes the development of the times and will inevitably have a far-reaching impact on literature. The rise of the industrial revolution has brought a wave of democratic movement, romanticism and critical realism, which has given a strong impetus to western literature. Hugo's Notre Dame de Paris and Balzac's Human Comedy series are both representative works of this period. When I wrote this article, students kept calling me to send Weibo, saying that they had written about the relationship between literature and science and technology. When I talked about the topic of "innovation and individuality", I used a lot of materials, which were excellent choices.

Of course, as a kind of self-media, mobile phone shows the reappearance of the times. Sending a message to Weibo and writing about campus seems to be a personal behavior, but it is actually a microcosm of an era. Just like Bai Juyi's poems let us see the style of the middle Tang Dynasty, Lu Xun's letters let us read the character of literati in the Republic of China. Today, everything we write on mobile phones is a portrayal of the times. So at this time, we need to have a sense of responsibility for the times, express our true feelings in words, and respond to the call of the times.

In the part of combining social reality, we can start from the following angles:

(1) Make good use of technology and combine it with learning;

(2) As a kind of self-media, mobile phones should be brave enough to take responsibility and reproduce the spirit of the times;

(3) The technological innovation brought by mobile phones is the progress and innovative spirit of the times, and creativity is the driving force of national development;

(4) The innovation of communication methods brought by mobile phones strengthens/weakens the communication and feelings between people;

(5) The innovation of concept consciousness brought by mobile phones has opened our eyes to the world, from feeling novelty to self-growth.

In particular, the creativity and innovation brought by mobile phones are an excellent angle to combine current politics. In the late Qing Dynasty and the early Republic of China, we suffered from isolation, self-locking and arrogance. Today, media like mobile phones give us a chance to look around the world and get in touch with newer knowledge and ideas. This angle is similar to the topic of 20 13 dongcheng second mold. Please see this is an example of nation-state and self-reflection in Dongcheng Second Model that I wrote for students before the exam:

In fact, the Chinese nation is not lacking in creativity, and countless beautiful poems have shown me the wonderful scenery of classical aesthetics. Outstanding literati can create poems with far-reaching implications only by spring flowers, autumn moon, summer rain and winter frost. The phrase "a cock crows in a Maodian and a frost walks on a bridge" is timeless. It is not a disorderly patchwork of monotonous images, but a combination of distance and movement, as well as the clever use of the mutual feeling of hearing and vision, which creates a real and vivid picture for readers and makes them feel something when reading in a foreign land. As an ancient country with "four great inventions", today, we are constantly piecing together western technology and hardware on cottage phones, constantly copying and imitating foreign ideas on TV programs, and even many college students' academic papers come from piecing together or copying existing academic achievements in periodical libraries. Therefore, the 18th National Congress of the Communist Party of China put forward the slogan of "changing the mode of economic development, cultivating innovative talents and building an innovative country", reviving the creativity of the Chinese nation with cultural soft power and realizing the cultural rejuvenation of the nation. Individuals and countries that can only piece together the consciousness of others are likely to be mediocre. Only by inheriting the creative spirit of dragon totem can we transform from "Made in China" to "Made in China".

As "descendants of the dragon", we should inherit the spirit of the dragon, not be content with mediocre patchwork, but face the future study and life with creative spirit and become excellent talents. When we are about to leave the high school that pays more attention to the teaching of basic knowledge and step into a higher institution of learning. On the basis of fully inheriting the knowledge and experience of predecessors, we should focus on being a creative and imaginative researcher with independent spirit and free thinking, cherish our youth, work hard and do more independent thinking and practical research in my favorite academic major, as Mr. Chen Yinque said. I believe I can contribute my meager wisdom to the motherland on the road of cultural rejuvenation.

This year's topic about "mobile phone" can be said to be closely related to every student's life, but most students don't know that they must analyze it in combination with their own study and life. What does the mobile phone bring to students? It is a freer communication platform and an incomparably rich knowledge resource. Many students listen to songs and play games in class. Besides making boring phone calls and sending short messages, some students can use this medium to learn English at any time and download foreign teaching courses from the Internet. All these reflect the different changes brought about by different concepts and consciousness in the development of science and technology. If students can combine the influence of mobile phones on themselves and how to make good use of mobile phones during their four-year study and life in college, they will definitely give reviewers a good feeling of "a clean stream", with meticulous thinking and sincere feelings.

The essay topic about mobile phones in Beijing Volume 20 13 requires students to pay more attention to reality and see the world, which is also a problem that still needs attention when preparing for the exam on 20 14. Teacher Yang will lead students to write profound, logical and beautiful articles in this year's teaching.

20 13 comments on the topic of Chinese composition in Beijing college entrance examination;

The composition of 20 13 continues the style of 20 12, and it is still a material composition. However, unlike 20 12, the material of 13 gives an opinion. The "mobile phone" and "Edison" in the materials are used as media or introductions to guide scientists and writers to explain their views on mobile phones from their respective fields. Writers and scientists represent these two viewpoints, one is science and technology, and the other is humanities. Therefore, when reviewing the questions, we will seize these two angles for in-depth analysis and discussion.

From the perspective of science and technology, we can analyze the important contribution of scientific and technological development in 2 1 century and the important use of mobile phones in modern life. Then, the advantages and disadvantages of science and technology brought to modern society in 2 1 century are expounded in depth.

Humanistic perspective: through the analysis of the mobile phone has changed the lives of contemporary people and ancient people, comparative analysis, highlighting humanistic feelings. The emergence of mobile phones has changed the way people communicate, and letters and sit-down conversations have gradually separated from the present society. Mobile phone is slowly changing people's living habits and becoming an indispensable tool, but it also makes people lose some feelings. As Beijing 20 1 1 simulated reading Cui Soul said, "When the letter comes, stop at the door, and then lie peacefully in the mailbox waiting for you to pick it up; It's not like the phone is coming through the hall and hitting your heart. Really fast. "

Generally speaking, 20 13' s composition has the nature of criticism, which requires students not to lose the material itself when writing, and must be practical. Writing must be guided by 2 1 century, science and technology, and mobile phones, and the scope given by the materials cannot be ignored during discussion. Generally speaking, the material composition of 20 13 is not too out of line, but a little conventional. Writing training with the theme of "science and technology and humanistic feelings" has been tried in the preparation for the third year of senior high school, such as "Network, Virtual Society and Real Century". Therefore, as long as the students who take the exam have a calm mind and have certain adaptability, they can make good use of their preparation materials and complete an excellent composition.